河南中原名校联盟2025-2026学年高三年级2月期末检测英语写作训练学案（含答案）（邮件写作+读后续写之职场温情）学案

河南中原名校联盟2025-2026学年高三年级2月期末检测英语写作训练（邮件写作+读后续写之职场温情）
一、邮件写作（感谢外教帮助宣传家乡旅游视频）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之感谢类邮件，核心考查“告知信息+表达感谢”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（视频影响+真挚感谢）、行文逻辑、格式规范、语气恰当及词数控制（80左右）。
（二）写作任务
第一节（满分 15 分）假定你是李华，你制作的宣传家乡旅游的英文视频在网上走红。外教Mark此前提供了一些帮助，请你给他写封邮件。
内容包括：1．告知视频的影响；2．表达真挚的感谢。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark，
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
宾语从句：用于告知信息，如“I’m writing to tell you that the English video I made to promote my hometown’s tourism has become popular online.”
定语从句：用于补充细节，如“The video, which you helped me polish, has attracted thousands of views on the Internet.”
感谢句式：用于表达心意，如“I really appreciate your help, without which I couldn’t have made such a wonderful video.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 我写这封邮件是想告诉你，我制作的宣传家乡旅游的英文视频在网上走红了，吸引了很多网友的关注。________________________________________________________________
2. 非常感谢你的帮助，你帮我校正了视频里的英文表达，还给出了很多宝贵的建议。________________________________________________________________
3. 很多网友通过我的视频了解了我的家乡，纷纷表示想来旅游，这都离不开你的支持。________________________________________________________________
4. 再次向你表达我最真挚的感谢，希望未来还能得到你的指导和帮助。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
走红：become popular = _______ = _______
感谢：appreciate = _______ = _______
帮助：help = _______ = _______
宝贵的：precious = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（职场温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：职场中的善意与温情、感恩与陪伴，从“困惑不解”到“理解共情”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文老板对Gary的特殊关照、同事们对Gary的耐心对待、Gary是老板第一位员工、妻子离世独居的背景，为续写“Gary的过往、众人关照的原因”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（Lisa讲述完整故事）：Lisa介绍Gary的过往（帮助老板创业、默默付出）→ 老板与Gary的深厚情谊→ 众人关照Gary的原因（慰藉孤独、感恩付出），解开“我”的困惑。
Paragraph 2（“我”改变对Gary的态度）：描写“我”主动关心Gary的举动→ Gary的反应→ 凸显职场温情，升华“陪伴与感恩”的主题。
（二）写作任务
第二节（满分 25 分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On my first day at the new company，the boss introduced Gary，an elderly “archive（档案）specialist” working at a corner desk with an old computer，to me．In his office，the boss explained，“We have thousands of paper records from the 70s to the 90s．If you need anything from the older records，you can email Gary，but it may take him a day or two to locate specific files．For anything urgent，please come directly to me．”
In the following weeks，I sent occasional emails to Gary with archive requests，as I noticed my co-workers doing．Yet，I also observed how they would often stop by his desk for a brief，warm word in person after hitting “send”．Though Gary’s replies were always courteous（礼貌的），they were often delayed by days．The work progressed at a pace that seemed at odds with any business urgency．Most tellingly，I observed the boss would stop by his desk every single day—not to check work，but to share a quiet chat or simply place a fresh cup of tea beside him．
Why would the boss，a busy businessman，entrust such a position to a man who worked so slowly Why did he—and indeed，the entire office—treat Gary with such consistent，personal care that went far beyond professional courtesy
One Friday afternoon，my curiosity finally overflowed．I cautiously voiced my confusion to a senior co-worker，Lisa，during a coffee break．“I don’t fully understand，” I began．“The archive task doesn’t seem to have any deadline．And everyone’s patience with Gary is remarkable．” Upon hearing my tentative words，she glanced toward Gary，then back at me，and said gently，“Gary was the boss’s first employee．He retired from our company two years ago．Unfortunately，he lost his wife last year and now lives alone．” My eyes were wide open，and I whispered，“But why ... ”
注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sensing my confusion and curiosity，Lisa decided to tell the whole story．
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From that day on，I approached Gary with the same thoughtful care as others．
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（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“pat my shoulder softly”）、神态（如“eyes filled with gratitude”）、语气（如“in a low voice”）凸显情感。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作伴随状语、状语从句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：从“我”的困惑到理解，再到主动付出善意，呼应前文众人对Gary的关照，升华职场温情与感恩的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. Lisa轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，压低声音，缓缓讲述起Gary和老板之间的故事，眼神里满是动容。________________________________________________________________
2. 我走到Gary的办公桌前，给他递了一杯热咖啡，轻声和他聊起家常，他的脸上渐渐露出了久违的笑容。________________________________________________________________
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 听完Lisa的讲述，我终于明白，职场不只有忙碌的工作，还有人与人之间最真挚的陪伴与感恩。________________________________________________________________
2. 一句简单的问候，一个温暖的举动，就能驱散孤独，这份善意，不仅温暖了Gary，也让我感受到了职场的温度。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、邮件写作（感谢外教帮助宣传家乡旅游视频）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之感谢类邮件，核心考查“告知信息+表达感谢”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（视频影响+真挚感谢）、行文逻辑、格式规范、语气恰当及词数控制（80左右）。
（二）高分范文（80词）
Dear Mark，
I’m writing to tell you that the English video I made to promote my hometown’s tourism has become popular online. It has attracted thousands of views, and many netizens have got to know my hometown through it and expressed their desire to visit.
I really appreciate your great help. You corrected the English expressions in the video and gave me many precious suggestions. Without your help, I couldn’t have made such a successful video. Thank you again for your kindness.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点解析
定语从句：the English video I made to promote my hometown’s tourism（修饰先行词video，补充视频的用途，句式简洁，细节完整。）
虚拟语气：Without your help, I couldn’t have made such a successful video.（表达“没有你的帮助就不会有这样的成果”，语气真挚，凸显感谢之情，提升句式难度。）
并列结构：You corrected the English expressions in the video and gave me many precious suggestions.（两个谓语动词并列，逻辑清晰，简洁明了地说明帮助的具体内容。）
（四）高分句子默写
1. I’m writing to tell you that the English video I made to promote my hometown’s tourism has become popular online, attracting the attention of many netizens.
2. Thank you very much for your help. You corrected the English expressions in the video and gave me many precious suggestions.
3. Many netizens have got to know my hometown through my video and expressed their desire to visit, which is inseparable from your support.
4. I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you again and hope I can get your guidance and help in the future.
（五）拓展表达练习
走红：become popular = become viral = gain popularity
感谢：appreciate = be grateful for = thank ... sincerely
帮助：help = assistance = support
宝贵的：precious = valuable = priceless
二、读后续写（职场温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：职场中的善意与温情、感恩与陪伴，从“困惑不解”到“理解共情”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文老板对Gary的特殊关照、同事们对Gary的耐心对待、Gary是老板第一位员工、妻子离世独居的背景，为续写“Gary的过往、众人关照的原因”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（Lisa讲述完整故事）：Lisa介绍Gary的过往（帮助老板创业、默默付出）→ 老板与Gary的深厚情谊→ 众人关照Gary的原因（慰藉孤独、感恩付出），解开“我”的困惑。
Paragraph 2（“我”改变对Gary的态度）：描写“我”主动关心Gary的举动→ Gary的反应→ 凸显职场温情，升华“陪伴与感恩”的主题。
（二）高分范文（149词）
Sensing my confusion and curiosity，Lisa decided to tell the whole story．She said Gary had helped the boss start the company from scratch decades ago，working day and night without complaint. He had always been loyal and dedicated，supporting the boss through the hardest times. After retiring，he felt lonely，so the boss invited him back to work at the archive desk to give him a sense of belonging. Everyone in the office knew this and treated him with care to comfort his loneliness and repay his past efforts. Tears filled my eyes as I finally understood the deep friendship and gratitude behind the care.
From that day on，I approached Gary with the same thoughtful care as others．Every morning，I would greet him warmly and bring him a cup of hot tea. When I had archive requests，I would chat with him for a while after asking for help. Gradually，Gary became more cheerful and would take the initiative to share interesting stories about the company’s past. It made me realize that a little kindness can go a long way，and the warmth between people is the most precious thing in the workplace.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：working day and night without complaint, greet him warmly, bring him a cup of hot tea 等动作、状态细节，生动展现Gary的付出与“我”的善意，场景真实温暖。
分词作状语：After retiring，he felt lonely，so the boss invited him back to work at the archive desk to give him a sense of belonging.（时间状语简化，句式紧凑，提升语法层次。）
伏笔呼应：描写Gary帮助老板创业、众人 repay其付出，呼应前文老板和同事对Gary的特殊关照，情节连贯，逻辑清晰。
主题升华：以“a little kindness can go a long way，and the warmth between people is the most precious thing in the workplace”总结，凸显职场温情与善意的力量，符合积极价值观导向。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. Lisa patted my shoulder softly, spoke in a low voice, and slowly told the story between Gary and the boss, her eyes filled with emotion.
2. I walked to Gary’s desk, handed him a cup of hot coffee, chatted with him about daily life gently, and a long-lost smile gradually appeared on his face.
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. After hearing Lisa’s story, I finally realized that the workplace is not only about busy work, but also about the most sincere companionship and gratitude between people.
2. A simple greeting and a warm move can dispel loneliness. This kindness not only warmed Gary, but also made me feel the warmth of the workplace.
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