广东省惠州市2026届高三第二次调研考试英语作文讲义学案（含答案）（英文卡片+读后续写之曲奇面团化解邻里矛盾）

广东省惠州市2026届高三第二次调研考试英语训练（英文卡片+读后续写之曲奇面团化解邻里矛盾）
一、应用文写作（书法赠外教英文卡片，满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文卡片，核心考查“礼物简介+新年祝福”的清晰表达，兼顾真诚、得体的交际语气（面向外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（作品简介+新年祝福）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性，同时体现对中国传统文化的简单渗透。
（二）写作任务
假定你是李华，你准备赠送一幅中国书法作品给外教Peter作为新年礼物，请你附上一张英文卡片，
内容包括：（1）作品简介；（2）新年祝福。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
To Peter,
As the New Year approaches I’d like to give you a piece of Chinese calligraphy as a gift.
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From Li Hua
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
非谓语动词：用于补充作品细节，如“Written in a graceful running script, the work carries the charm of traditional Chinese art.”
定语从句：介绍作品含义，如“It features the phrase ‘Jixiang Ruyi’, which is a beloved Chinese blessing meaning ‘good fortune abounds’.”
并列结构：表达新年祝福，如“May the New Year bring you sound health, endless joy and smooth progress in everything.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 这幅作品写着“吉祥如意”四个字，这是一句深受喜爱的中国祝福，意为好运连连、万事顺遂，采用优美的行书书写而成。________________________________________________________________
2. 流畅的笔触不仅展现了中国传统艺术的魅力，也承载着我对你最真挚的关怀和祝福。________________________________________________________________
3. 愿新的一年里，你喜乐无忧、身体健康，在工作和生活中一切顺利、万事如意。________________________________________________________________
4. 希望这幅书法作品能装饰你的空间，也让你感受到中国文化的温暖，祝你新年快乐、前程似锦。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
赠送：give = _______ = _______
祝福：blessing = _______ = _______
展现：show = _______ = _______
真挚的：heartfelt = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（曲奇面团化解邻里矛盾主题，满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：愤怒的自我管控、真诚道歉的力量、邻里间的包容与和解，从“冲动暴怒”到“反思道歉”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文“用食物修复伤害”（自制汤、面包等）、“冰箱里的冷冻曲奇面团”、“对噪音的阴影”、“向年轻人暴怒后感到羞愧”，为续写“用曲奇面团道歉、达成和解”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（想起冰箱里的冷冻曲奇面团）：描写“我”的反思与决心→取出曲奇面团、简单处理（准备作为道歉礼物）→内心的忐忑与愧疚→带着曲奇面团前往邻居家。
Paragraph 2（年轻人开门）：“我”主动坦诚错误、道歉→解释暴怒的原因（噪音阴影）→年轻人的反应（惊讶、理解）→两人和解，化解矛盾，凸显包容与善意的主题。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last week, frozen cookie dough (面团) helped me to repair a neighborhood conflict.
It all began when a new neighbor, a college student, moved in across the street. He unloaded a set of cornhole boards (袋板球游戏) from a truck and placed them in his front yard. I knew those boards were for “cornhole,” an outdoor game where you throw bags at a hole on the opposite boards. But the sight of the boards brought back bad memories for me. Years ago, my husband and I lived near the university, where the sounds of cheering crowds and loud music lasted late into the night and early morning. We finally moved to a quieter part of town at great expense to escape the noise.
I had inherited rage (暴怒) and struggled to change. I went to the doctor, which helped soften it, but it was still inside me like a volcano. Occasionally, it explodes, and I say things I regret. The best way I repair damage is with food — gifting homemade soup, bread, or treats. I had seen how this could open a hurt heart. Of course, I’d rather not hurt anyone.
Now, seeing those boards through my kitchen window, those frustrating memories and anger rushed back. I marched over, knocked, and demanded their removal due to the noise the game would create. I expected an apology. Instead, he met my anger with his own: “Who are you What gives you the right to make such a ridiculous demand ” His refusal to apologize angered me more. I yelled things that shocked me. My husband, seeing the cornhole boards and predicting my reaction, pulled me away as I told the young man it wasn’t over.
The rest of the day, I still felt angry. However, the next morning, I awoke ashamed. I questioned why I messed things up again, and why I couldn’t control my anger. I recalled how I’d hurt others before — like a friend and my son — and how I’d used food to apologize.
注意:（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I remembered the frozen cookie dough I’d saved in the fridge.
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A few seconds later, the student opened the door.
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（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“take out the dough gently”）、神态（如“eyes filled with guilt”）、心理（如“my heart beating fast”）凸显愧疚与忐忑。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作伴随状语、状语从句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：从“反思愧疚”到“主动道歉”，呼应前文“用食物道歉”“噪音阴影”的细节，升华自我救赎、邻里包容的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. 我立刻起身走进厨房，小心翼翼地取出冷冻曲奇面团，快速解冻后，简单整理成小块，装进一个干净的盘子里，心里满是愧疚和忐忑。________________________________________________________________
2. 我深吸一口气，握紧盘子，慢慢穿过街道，走到邻居家门口，犹豫了几秒后，轻轻敲响了房门。________________________________________________________________
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 我低着头，语气诚恳地向他道歉，解释我昨日的暴怒并非针对他，而是源于过去被噪音困扰的糟糕回忆，以及我难以控制的坏脾气。________________________________________________________________
2. 那一刻，我明白真诚的道歉和一点点包容，就能化解不必要的矛盾，而小小的曲奇面团，不仅承载着我的歉意，更成为了连接邻里间善意的桥梁。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、应用文写作（书法赠外教英文卡片，满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文卡片，核心考查“礼物简介+新年祝福”的清晰表达，兼顾真诚、得体的交际语气（面向外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（作品简介+新年祝福）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性，同时体现对中国传统文化的简单渗透。
（二）高分范文（80词）
To Peter,
As the New Year approaches, I’d like to give you a piece of Chinese calligraphy as a gift. The work features the phrase “Jixiang Ruyi”, a beloved Chinese blessing that translates to “good fortune abounds and all wishes are fulfilled”. Written in a graceful running script, its flowing brush strokes carry both the charm of traditional Chinese art and my heartfelt care for you.
May the coming year bring you endless joy, sound health and smooth progress in everything. I hope this calligraphy not only decorates your space but also lets you feel the warmth of Chinese culture. Wishing you a wonderful and prosperous New Year!
From Li Hua
（三）语法亮点
非谓语动词（过去分词作状语）：Written in a graceful running script, its flowing brush strokes carry... （替代定语从句，简洁紧凑，既补充作品细节，又提升句式复杂度。）
定语从句：a beloved Chinese blessing that translates to... （清晰解释书法文字的含义，衔接自然，符合卡片真诚的语气。）
并列结构：May the coming year bring you endless joy, sound health and smooth progress... （三个名词短语并列，使祝福内容丰富饱满，语气真挚有力。）
（四）高分句子默写
1. The work features the phrase “Jixiang Ruyi”, a beloved Chinese blessing that means good fortune abounds and all wishes are fulfilled, written in a graceful running script.
2. The flowing brush strokes not only show the charm of traditional Chinese art but also carry my sincere care and blessings for you.
3. May the coming year bring you joy without sorrow, good health, and smooth progress in both work and life.
4. I hope this calligraphy can decorate your space and let you feel the warmth of Chinese culture. Wishing you a happy New Year and a prosperous future!
（五）拓展表达练习
赠送：give = present = offer
祝福：blessing = wish = greeting
展现：show = display = reflect
真挚的：heartfelt = sincere = genuine
二、读后续写（曲奇面团化解邻里矛盾主题，满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：愤怒的自我管控、真诚道歉的力量、邻里间的包容与和解，从“冲动暴怒”到“反思道歉”的情感递进。
伏笔呼应：前文“用食物修复伤害”（自制汤、面包等）、“冰箱里的冷冻曲奇面团”、“对噪音的阴影”、“向年轻人暴怒后感到羞愧”，为续写“用曲奇面团道歉、达成和解”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（想起冰箱里的冷冻曲奇面团）：描写“我”的反思与决心→取出曲奇面团、简单处理（准备作为道歉礼物）→内心的忐忑与愧疚→带着曲奇面团前往邻居家。
Paragraph 2（年轻人开门）：“我”主动坦诚错误、道歉→解释暴怒的原因（噪音阴影）→年轻人的反应（惊讶、理解）→两人和解，化解矛盾，凸显包容与善意的主题。
（二）高分范文（149词）
I remembered the frozen cookie dough I’d saved in the fridge. Immediately, I got up and walked into the kitchen, taking out the dough gently. After thawing it quickly, I shaped it into small pieces and put them on a clean plate, my heart filled with guilt and nervousness. I took a deep breath, held the plate tightly, and slowly crossed the street to my neighbor’s house. Hesitating for a few seconds, I knocked on the door softly, praying he would forgive my rudeness the day before.
A few seconds later, the student opened the door. Seeing me with the cookie dough, he looked surprised. I lowered my head and apologized sincerely, explaining that my anger yesterday was not aimed at him, but at the bad memories of being disturbed by noise and my uncontrollable temper. To my relief, he smiled and said he understood. We chatted for a while, and he accepted my apology and the cookie dough. It was then that I realized a sincere apology and a little tolerance could easily resolve conflicts.
（三）高分亮点
细节描写：taking out the dough gently, held the plate tightly, lowered my head 等动作、神态描写，生动展现“我”的愧疚与忐忑，让情节更真实可感。
非谓语动词：my heart filled with guilt and nervousness（独立主格结构）、taking out the dough gently（现在分词作伴随状语），替代简单句堆砌，提升句式复杂度和书面表达水平。
伏笔呼应：续写中“用曲奇面团道歉”呼应前文“用食物修复伤害”的细节；“解释噪音阴影”呼应前文“被噪音困扰的过往”，情节连贯，情感递进自然。
主题升华：以“a sincere apology and a little tolerance could easily resolve conflicts”总结，点明真诚与包容的力量，符合积极价值观导向，凸显邻里和解的核心主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. I got up immediately, walked into the kitchen, took out the frozen cookie dough carefully, thawed it quickly, shaped it into small pieces simply, put it on a clean plate, and my heart was full of guilt and nervousness.
2. I took a deep breath, held the plate tightly, walked slowly across the street to my neighbor’s door, hesitated for a few seconds, and then knocked gently.
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
3. I lowered my head and apologized to him sincerely, explaining that my anger yesterday was not directed at him, but came from the terrible memories of being disturbed by noise in the past and my uncontrollable bad temper.
4. At that moment, I realized that a sincere apology and a little tolerance could resolve unnecessary conflicts easily, and the small piece of cookie dough not only carried my apology but also became a bridge connecting the kindness between neighbors.
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