2026届内蒙古鄂尔多斯市高三下学期一模英语写作训练导学案（含答案）（短文投稿+读后续写之劝父戒烟）
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2026届内蒙古鄂尔多斯市高三下学期一模英语写作训练（短文投稿+读后续写之劝父戒烟）
第一部分 短文投稿（How to Make Our Community Better）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之投稿短文，核心考查“方案内容+理由说明”的清晰表达，兼顾正式、有条理的书面语气（给英语报投稿）。评分重点：内容完整性（方案+理由）、行文逻辑、语法多样性及表达流畅度。
（二）写作任务
你校英语报正在开展以 How to Make Our Community Better为题的方案征集，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）你的方案；（2）说明理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
不定式：用于说明方案目的，如“To make our community better, I propose we launch a voluntary cleaning and greening activity every weekend.”
并列结构：阐述方案或理由，如“We can clean up the public areas, plant more trees and set up recycling bins to protect the environment.”
原因状语从句：说明方案理由，如“This activity is necessary because a clean and green environment can make residents feel comfortable and strengthen our sense of belonging.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 为了让我们的社区变得更好，我建议我们每周组织一次志愿活动，包括清理公共区域和种植绿植。________________________________________________________________
2. 我们还可以设立分类回收箱，鼓励居民养成环保习惯，减少环境污染。________________________________________________________________
3. 这个方案很有必要，因为干净、绿色的社区能提升居民的幸福感，增进邻里之间的联系。________________________________________________________________
4. 只要我们共同努力，从小事做起，我们的社区一定会变得更美好、更和谐。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
建议：propose = _______ = _______
改善：make...better = _______ = _______
必要的：necessary = _______ = _______
共同努力：work together = _______ = _______
第二部分 读后续写（劝父戒烟主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：亲情守护、成长与理解，从“担忧困惑”到“主动行动”的情感与行动递进，凸显马克的懂事、孝顺以及父子间的温情。
伏笔呼应：前文父亲的咳嗽、马克的担忧、母亲的恳求与无奈、蒂姆父亲成功戒烟的经历，为续写“马克采取行动、父亲回应”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（马克决定采取行动）：描写马克的具体行动（如写一封信、准备戒烟相关物品）→ 表达自己的担忧与期盼→ 小心翼翼将信/物品交给父亲，内心忐忑。
Paragraph 2（马克看到父亲的回信）：描写马克读信的心情→ 父亲的回应（理解、愧疚与改变的决心）→ 父子温情互动，凸显主题。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the family watched their favorite TV show together, they heard Mark’s dad’s trademark cough. Every time he heard that sound, Mark’s heart felt heavy. He shifted uncomfortably in his seat, trying to focus on the show, but his mind continued to drift to thoughts of all the damage his dad was doing to his lungs by smoking.
Mark just didn’t understand. His dad was a great dad — he spent a lot of his spare time with him playing outside and watching TV. Plus, he was really smart, so why would he be so stupid as to risk his health by smoking so much What if it caused a serious disease Had he ever considered how heartbroken it would make him and his mom
Mark’s mind wandered back to a conversation he had overheard between his parents. His mom had been pleading (恳求) with his dad, her voice full of worry. “You need to think about your health, for Mark’s sake if not for your own,” she had said. But his dad just brushed her off, saying he was too stressed to quit.
One evening, Mark approached his mom to discuss the issue. “I’ve tried to persuade him to quit,” Mark’s mom expressed with a sigh. “But he always gets annoyed whenever I bring up the subject.” She looked tired and defeated. “At least your dad is considerate with his smoking; he never does it indoors or around others. He even changes his clothes when coming home to prevent us from smelling the smoke. Despite that, it’s still so hard on him, on us…”
The next day at school, Mark was playing basketball with his classmate Tim on the court. “Hey, does either of your parents smoke ” he asked. “Yeah, my dad smokes, but he’s cut down in the past year,” replied Tim. “Oh, how did he do that ” Mark asked curiously. “I don’ t really know what happened. I guess he just realized it was time for a change,” said Tim, as he threw the ball back to Mark. This gave Mark a ray of hope and an idea.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mark decided to take action, hoping to encourage his dad to change.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The next day, Mark found a reply from his dad on his bed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“sat down quietly”“wrote carefully”“held the letter tightly”）、神态（如“eyes filled with worry”“smiled with relief”）、心理（如“nervous and hopeful”）凸显情感与场景。
语法结构：分词作伴随状语、宾语从句、定语从句，提升句式复杂度，使行文更流畅自然。
情感连贯：从“担忧父亲健康”到“主动采取行动”，呼应前文母亲的无奈与蒂姆父亲的经历，升华父子温情与成长的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. 马克回到家，安静地坐下，拿起笔和纸，认真地写了一封信，向父亲表达自己的担忧和希望他戒烟的期盼。________________________________________________________________
2. 他把信小心翼翼地放在父亲的书桌前，心里既紧张又期待，希望父亲能看到并理解他的心意。________________________________________________________________
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 当马克读到父亲的回信时，他的眼睛里充满了泪水，父亲的愧疚与改变的决心，让他知道自己的努力没有白费。________________________________________________________________
2. 这次经历让马克明白，真诚的沟通和满满的爱意，总能打动人心，也让他学会了用更成熟的方式守护自己的家人。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
第一部分 短文投稿（How to Make Our Community Better）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之投稿短文，核心考查“方案内容+理由说明”的清晰表达，兼顾正式、有条理的书面语气（给英语报投稿）。评分重点：内容完整性（方案+理由）、行文逻辑、语法多样性及表达流畅度。
（二）高分范文（80词）
How to Make Our Community Better
To make our community better, I propose we organize voluntary activities every weekend. We can clean up public areas, plant more green plants and set up classified recycling bins to protect the environment.
This plan is necessary because a clean and green environment can improve residents’ happiness and strengthen our sense of belonging. Besides, it can help us get along better with neighbors. Let’s work together to build a more beautiful and harmonious community.
（三）语法亮点解析
不定式作目的状语：To make our community better...（明确短文核心目的，开篇点题，逻辑清晰）。
并列结构：clean up public areas, plant more green plants and set up classified recycling bins（清晰呈现方案内容，句式工整，条理分明）。
原因状语从句：because a clean and green environment can improve...（充分说明方案理由，语气正式，符合投稿场景）。
（四）高分句子默写
1. To make our community better, I propose we organize a voluntary activity every week, including cleaning public areas and planting green plants.
2. We can also set up classified recycling bins to encourage residents to develop environmental habits and reduce environmental pollution.
3. This plan is necessary because a clean and green community can enhance residents’ happiness and promote connections between neighbors.
4. As long as we work together and start from small things, our community will surely become better and more harmonious.
（五）拓展表达练习
建议：propose = suggest = advise
改善：make...better = improve = better
必要的：necessary = essential = vital
共同努力：work together = make joint efforts = cooperate
第二部分读后续写（劝父戒烟主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：亲情守护、成长与理解，从“担忧困惑”到“主动行动”的情感与行动递进，凸显马克的懂事、孝顺以及父子间的温情。
伏笔呼应：前文父亲的咳嗽、马克的担忧、母亲的恳求与无奈、蒂姆父亲成功戒烟的经历，为续写“马克采取行动、父亲回应”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（马克决定采取行动）：描写马克的具体行动（如写一封信、准备戒烟相关物品）→ 表达自己的担忧与期盼→ 小心翼翼将信/物品交给父亲，内心忐忑。
Paragraph 2（马克看到父亲的回信）：描写马克读信的心情→ 父亲的回应（理解、愧疚与改变的决心）→ 父子温情互动，凸显主题。
（二）高分范文（149词）
Mark decided to take action, hoping to encourage his dad to change. He sat down quietly at his desk, took out a piece of paper and a pen, and wrote a sincere letter. In the letter, he expressed his deep worry about his dad’s health, mentioned how heartbroken he and mom would be if something happened to him, and shared Tim’s dad’s story. He also put a small box of sugar-free gum in the envelope, hoping it could help his dad when he felt like smoking. Finally, he placed the envelope on his dad’s pillow, nervous but full of hope.
The next day, Mark found a reply from his dad on his bed. He opened it quickly, his hands trembling slightly. His dad wrote that he was sorry for making them worry and that he had no idea his smoking caused so much pain to his family. He promised to try his best to quit smoking, starting that day. When Mark saw his dad throw away his cigarettes, he rushed over and hugged him tightly. At that moment, Mark knew that love and understanding could always bring warmth and change.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：sat down quietly, wrote a sincere letter, hands trembling slightly, hugged him tightly 等动作、神态描写，让场景更真实，情感更真挚。
分词作伴随状语：hoping to encourage his dad to change, hoping it could help his dad...（替代简单句，提升语法层次，使行文更流畅）。
伏笔呼应：描写马克分享蒂姆父亲的故事，呼应前文蒂姆的话；准备无糖口香糖帮助父亲戒烟，呼应父亲戒烟的需求，情节连贯，凸显主题。
主题升华：以“love and understanding could always bring warmth and change”总结，凸显父子温情与沟通的力量，符合积极价值观导向。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. Mark went home, sat down quietly, picked up a pen and paper, and wrote a letter carefully, expressing his worry and hope that his dad would quit smoking.
2. He put the letter on his dad’s desk carefully, feeling nervous and hopeful, hoping his dad would read it and understand his feelings.
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. When Mark read his dad’s reply, his eyes were filled with tears. His dad’s guilt and determination to change made him know that his efforts were not in vain.
2. This experience made Mark understand that sincere communication and full love can always touch people’s hearts, and it also made him learn to protect his family in a more mature way.
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第一部分 短文投稿（How to Make Our Community Better）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之投稿短文，核心考查“方案内容+理由说明”的清晰表达，兼顾正式、有条理的书面语气（给英语报投稿）。评分重点：内容完整性（方案+理由）、行文逻辑、语法多样性及表达流畅度。
（二）写作任务
你校英语报正在开展以 How to Make Our Community Better为题的方案征集，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）你的方案；（2）说明理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
不定式：用于说明方案目的，如“To make our community better, I propose we launch a voluntary cleaning and greening activity every weekend.”
并列结构：阐述方案或理由，如“We can clean up the public areas, plant more trees and set up recycling bins to protect the environment.”
原因状语从句：说明方案理由，如“This activity is necessary because a clean and green environment can make residents feel comfortable and strengthen our sense of belonging.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 为了让我们的社区变得更好，我建议我们每周组织一次志愿活动，包括清理公共区域和种植绿植。________________________________________________________________
2. 我们还可以设立分类回收箱，鼓励居民养成环保习惯，减少环境污染。________________________________________________________________
3. 这个方案很有必要，因为干净、绿色的社区能提升居民的幸福感，增进邻里之间的联系。________________________________________________________________
4. 只要我们共同努力，从小事做起，我们的社区一定会变得更美好、更和谐。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
建议：propose = _______ = _______
改善：make...better = _______ = _______
必要的：necessary = _______ = _______
共同努力：work together = _______ = _______
第二部分 读后续写（劝父戒烟主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：亲情守护、成长与理解，从“担忧困惑”到“主动行动”的情感与行动递进，凸显马克的懂事、孝顺以及父子间的温情。
伏笔呼应：前文父亲的咳嗽、马克的担忧、母亲的恳求与无奈、蒂姆父亲成功戒烟的经历，为续写“马克采取行动、父亲回应”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（马克决定采取行动）：描写马克的具体行动（如写一封信、准备戒烟相关物品）→ 表达自己的担忧与期盼→ 小心翼翼将信/物品交给父亲，内心忐忑。
Paragraph 2（马克看到父亲的回信）：描写马克读信的心情→ 父亲的回应（理解、愧疚与改变的决心）→ 父子温情互动，凸显主题。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the family watched their favorite TV show together, they heard Mark’s dad’s trademark cough. Every time he heard that sound, Mark’s heart felt heavy. He shifted uncomfortably in his seat, trying to focus on the show, but his mind continued to drift to thoughts of all the damage his dad was doing to his lungs by smoking.
Mark just didn’t understand. His dad was a great dad — he spent a lot of his spare time with him playing outside and watching TV. Plus, he was really smart, so why would he be so stupid as to risk his health by smoking so much What if it caused a serious disease Had he ever considered how heartbroken it would make him and his mom
Mark’s mind wandered back to a conversation he had overheard between his parents. His mom had been pleading (恳求) with his dad, her voice full of worry. “You need to think about your health, for Mark’s sake if not for your own,” she had said. But his dad just brushed her off, saying he was too stressed to quit.
One evening, Mark approached his mom to discuss the issue. “I’ve tried to persuade him to quit,” Mark’s mom expressed with a sigh. “But he always gets annoyed whenever I bring up the subject.” She looked tired and defeated. “At least your dad is considerate with his smoking; he never does it indoors or around others. He even changes his clothes when coming home to prevent us from smelling the smoke. Despite that, it’s still so hard on him, on us…”
The next day at school, Mark was playing basketball with his classmate Tim on the court. “Hey, does either of your parents smoke ” he asked. “Yeah, my dad smokes, but he’s cut down in the past year,” replied Tim. “Oh, how did he do that ” Mark asked curiously. “I don’ t really know what happened. I guess he just realized it was time for a change,” said Tim, as he threw the ball back to Mark. This gave Mark a ray of hope and an idea.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mark decided to take action, hoping to encourage his dad to change.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The next day, Mark found a reply from his dad on his bed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“sat down quietly”“wrote carefully”“held the letter tightly”）、神态（如“eyes filled with worry”“smiled with relief”）、心理（如“nervous and hopeful”）凸显情感与场景。
语法结构：分词作伴随状语、宾语从句、定语从句，提升句式复杂度，使行文更流畅自然。
情感连贯：从“担忧父亲健康”到“主动采取行动”，呼应前文母亲的无奈与蒂姆父亲的经历，升华父子温情与成长的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. 马克回到家，安静地坐下，拿起笔和纸，认真地写了一封信，向父亲表达自己的担忧和希望他戒烟的期盼。________________________________________________________________
2. 他把信小心翼翼地放在父亲的书桌前，心里既紧张又期待，希望父亲能看到并理解他的心意。________________________________________________________________
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 当马克读到父亲的回信时，他的眼睛里充满了泪水，父亲的愧疚与改变的决心，让他知道自己的努力没有白费。________________________________________________________________
2. 这次经历让马克明白，真诚的沟通和满满的爱意，总能打动人心，也让他学会了用更成熟的方式守护自己的家人。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
第一部分 短文投稿（How to Make Our Community Better）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之投稿短文，核心考查“方案内容+理由说明”的清晰表达，兼顾正式、有条理的书面语气（给英语报投稿）。评分重点：内容完整性（方案+理由）、行文逻辑、语法多样性及表达流畅度。
（二）高分范文（80词）
How to Make Our Community Better
To make our community better, I propose we organize voluntary activities every weekend. We can clean up public areas, plant more green plants and set up classified recycling bins to protect the environment.
This plan is necessary because a clean and green environment can improve residents’ happiness and strengthen our sense of belonging. Besides, it can help us get along better with neighbors. Let’s work together to build a more beautiful and harmonious community.
（三）语法亮点解析
不定式作目的状语：To make our community better...（明确短文核心目的，开篇点题，逻辑清晰）。
并列结构：clean up public areas, plant more green plants and set up classified recycling bins（清晰呈现方案内容，句式工整，条理分明）。
原因状语从句：because a clean and green environment can improve...（充分说明方案理由，语气正式，符合投稿场景）。
（四）高分句子默写
1. To make our community better, I propose we organize a voluntary activity every week, including cleaning public areas and planting green plants.
2. We can also set up classified recycling bins to encourage residents to develop environmental habits and reduce environmental pollution.
3. This plan is necessary because a clean and green community can enhance residents’ happiness and promote connections between neighbors.
4. As long as we work together and start from small things, our community will surely become better and more harmonious.
（五）拓展表达练习
建议：propose = suggest = advise
改善：make...better = improve = better
必要的：necessary = essential = vital
共同努力：work together = make joint efforts = cooperate
第二部分读后续写（劝父戒烟主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：亲情守护、成长与理解，从“担忧困惑”到“主动行动”的情感与行动递进，凸显马克的懂事、孝顺以及父子间的温情。
伏笔呼应：前文父亲的咳嗽、马克的担忧、母亲的恳求与无奈、蒂姆父亲成功戒烟的经历，为续写“马克采取行动、父亲回应”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（马克决定采取行动）：描写马克的具体行动（如写一封信、准备戒烟相关物品）→ 表达自己的担忧与期盼→ 小心翼翼将信/物品交给父亲，内心忐忑。
Paragraph 2（马克看到父亲的回信）：描写马克读信的心情→ 父亲的回应（理解、愧疚与改变的决心）→ 父子温情互动，凸显主题。
（二）高分范文（149词）
Mark decided to take action, hoping to encourage his dad to change. He sat down quietly at his desk, took out a piece of paper and a pen, and wrote a sincere letter. In the letter, he expressed his deep worry about his dad’s health, mentioned how heartbroken he and mom would be if something happened to him, and shared Tim’s dad’s story. He also put a small box of sugar-free gum in the envelope, hoping it could help his dad when he felt like smoking. Finally, he placed the envelope on his dad’s pillow, nervous but full of hope.
The next day, Mark found a reply from his dad on his bed. He opened it quickly, his hands trembling slightly. His dad wrote that he was sorry for making them worry and that he had no idea his smoking caused so much pain to his family. He promised to try his best to quit smoking, starting that day. When Mark saw his dad throw away his cigarettes, he rushed over and hugged him tightly. At that moment, Mark knew that love and understanding could always bring warmth and change.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：sat down quietly, wrote a sincere letter, hands trembling slightly, hugged him tightly 等动作、神态描写，让场景更真实，情感更真挚。
分词作伴随状语：hoping to encourage his dad to change, hoping it could help his dad...（替代简单句，提升语法层次，使行文更流畅）。
伏笔呼应：描写马克分享蒂姆父亲的故事，呼应前文蒂姆的话；准备无糖口香糖帮助父亲戒烟，呼应父亲戒烟的需求，情节连贯，凸显主题。
主题升华：以“love and understanding could always bring warmth and change”总结，凸显父子温情与沟通的力量，符合积极价值观导向。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. Mark went home, sat down quietly, picked up a pen and paper, and wrote a letter carefully, expressing his worry and hope that his dad would quit smoking.
2. He put the letter on his dad’s desk carefully, feeling nervous and hopeful, hoping his dad would read it and understand his feelings.
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. When Mark read his dad’s reply, his eyes were filled with tears. His dad’s guilt and determination to change made him know that his efforts were not in vain.
2. This experience made Mark understand that sincere communication and full love can always touch people’s hearts, and it also made him learn to protect his family in a more mature way.
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