课件21张PPT。writingBasic Writing
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Task WritingMore people buy car mean that people become wealther.
A lack of energy can’t offer enough gas to the car’s owner to use.
Have a car is benefit of our life. It’s bring us convenient and save time.
We wouldn’t worry about miss the bus. But have more car is bad for our body.1.Summary 太多原句。
2.整体意思把握不好。
3.低级错误太多。(简单的单词拼写、句子结构等。)
4.结构较好,但每段句首缺主题句和关联句。
5.字数合适,够长,但论据不多。
6.写完后要检查。 In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing an important part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.
2007年广东省高考英语科考试试卷题型结构 笔试部分共4大道题,其中客观题90分,主观题60分.内容,题量,计分和时间安排如下:Basic WritingTranslate the following Chinese into English:
1. 今天早上花了我四十分钟去上班。
(it takes sb. st. to do sth.)
2. 有一些疾病是与交通污染有关。
(be related to)
3. 汽车可以为我们阻挡狂风暴雨。
(protect…from…)
4. 大量的土地被高速公路和停车场占据。
(be occupied by)It took me forty minutes to get to work this morning.Some illnesses are related to traffic pollution.Cars can protect us from strong wind and heavy rain.A lot of land is occupied by highways and parking lots.2. 请根据以下的情景说明,使用5个规范的英语
句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
[情景说明]
给某电视台写一封信,反映东华市场门口交通乱
的状况。
1.每天上下班高峰时人多车多,因无人管理,
常造成交通堵塞(traffic jam).
2.建议政府修建一座人行天桥(crossover),
保护公众安全。
写作要求:
1.信的格式已经给出;
2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。StepsⅠ. 划分句子
Ⅱ. 翻译句子
Ⅲ. 连句成文 2. 请根据以下的情景说明,使用5个规范的英语
句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
[情景说明]
给某电视台写一封信,反映东华市场门口交通乱
的状况。
1.每天上下班高峰时人多车多,因无人管理,
常造成交通堵塞(traffic jam).
2.建议政府修建一座人行天桥(crossover),
保护公众安全。
写作要求:
1.信的格式已经给出;
2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you something about
what I saw at the gate of Dong Hua Market.
At the rush hour there are a lot of cars
and trucks at the crossing of Dong Hua
Market and the main road. However, nobody
controls the traffic, so traffic jam often
happens. I suggest that the government
should build a crossover to reduce the
traffic accidents. I hope the government
pays great attention to the safety of the
public.
Task WritingRead the passage to find out the main idea and write it down. (30 words)
5 minutes onlyReadingTip: Try to find out the topic sentences. Traffic problems are easy to be reminded when talking about private cars. As the economy develops so fast, the quality of life has been greatly improved. More and more people, especially white-collars, can afford private cars and also have the desire to have a car of their own. So the amount of private cars increases in a great increasing rate.
Nowadays, in big cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Shenzhen, there may be traffic jam at anywhere and anytime, especially in the center of the city. On some roads, the average speed a car can reach is no more than walking speed. Of course, the cars that are jammed are not only private cars, but also public buses. So both the private car owners and the bus passengers complain about the traffic condition wasting their time. The private car owners argue that the highway should be broadened and a lot more crossroads should be built, which also benefit the bus passengers; a higher voice, however, coming from the bus passengers, suggests that the private cars should be banned at the city center, which upsets the private car owners. Both of the two solutions can solve the traffic problem to some extend, but the former is limited by the finance of the government, while the latter is held up by the car industry and the people already have private cars. The passage points out that traffic problems are always related to the increasing private cars. Two solutions have been put forward to solve them, but there are a lot of difficulties. (31 words)要求用30个字来概括,那就应该是点到为止的高度概括,不需要再展开。Brainstorm Have a debate on the advantages and disadvantages of private cars.Congratulations!SummaryBasic Writing:
Ⅰ. Divide the information into five sentences (划分句子).
Ⅱ. Translate the five sentences (翻译句子).
Ⅲ. To form a passage (连句成文).
Task Writing:
Find out the topic sentences.Homework:读写任务
阅读短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
[写作内容]
1.概括短文的内容要点,该部分的字数大约30词左右;
2.就“是否鼓励拥有私人小汽车?”这一主题谈谈你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约120词左右。
(1)车给人们带来的好处;
(2)车给人们带来的坏处;
(3)你对越来越多的人买车这一现象的看法。
[写作要求]
你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。