短文改错[下学期]

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课件55张PPT。高三英语专题复习之四短文改错软件用途高考复习制作平台PowerPoint制 作 人汝州市一高 叶金山制作日期2006.2考 查 目 标1)识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力
2)综合运用英语知识的能力
3)准确理解语篇,掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力考 查 内 容1)主谓一致
2)时态一致
3)名词的数与格的一致
4)代词中指代关系的一致
5)句式结构与语意的一致
6)行文逻辑关系的一致1)词的分类知识:
2)构词法知识:
3)词的惯用法1)错词更正
2)多词删除
3)缺词补漏1.一致性问题2.词的用法3.改错项目表1 NMET 错 误 内 容表2 NMET改错类型统计解题思路 谓语动词 ---名词 ,(非)谓语动词,介词-----形容词(副词),连词,冠词。
从表2看,只有1行是正确的,其余9行中,要么错词,要么多词或缺词。而错误类型中错词最多,占改错题的60%。这就提示我们:首先要看句中“(非)谓语动词是否用错”,然后再考虑有无多词,缺词。对名词 ,(非)谓语动词,介词以及代词,形容词(副词),连词,冠词的错误也应如此来考虑问题。解题思路分三级定位如下:动词常见错误1) 一般过去时与一般 现在时错用。 2) 第三人称单数形式错用。 3) And 前后动词时态不一致。 4) 主谓不一致。 5) 缺少谓语动词(尤其缺be动词) 6) Use to do错用 7)主动与态与被动语态错用Examples:1. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing. (99)2. They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.(NMET2001)3.Last Sunday, police cars hurry to the tallest building in New York. (NMET92)4.Today it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.(NMET93)5.Hello,I learn about you from my English teacher,Miss Fang. (NMET97)6. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(NMET97) 7.He not only came to see me but also tell me the news. 8.I remembered her words and calm down.(NMET2000) 9.We fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.(NMET2002) 10.Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.(NMET92)11.The librarian will write to you, and let you know when the book you want has returned.(NMET94)12.Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them.13.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.(NMET2000)14.What your favourite sport? ( NMET97)15.By the way when you come, please take your sister here.16.The time passes quickly. Evening came down.(NMET2002)非谓语动词常见的错误1)不定式 2)动名词作主语、宾语 3)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时) 4)现在分词和过去分词的区别等。1.They will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (NMET2001) 2.Play football makes us grow up tall and strong.(NMET1998)3.It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. (NMET96)名词的常见错误1.单复数名词错用
2.形容词错用为名词,如: important—importance,different—difference,difficult---difficulty,interesting (interested)---interest,surprised (surprising)---surprise1.We often watch football match on TV together.(NMET97)2.I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(NMET2001)3.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (NMET2002)介词的错误1.We practise for three times every week.(NMET98)2.There are too many people among my family.(NMET99)3.And I can’t forget the food you cooked for I.(NMET95)4.I look forward to hear from you soon. (NMET94)5.I want to thank you for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(NMET95)6.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.(NMET02)形容词、副词的错误1)修饰名词、用形容词;
2)在系动词后作表语,说明主语的性质用形容词;
3)修饰实义动词,形容词,过去分词及整个句子用副词;
4)比较等级问题。1.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(NMET99)2.Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(NMET99)3.Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (NMET00)代词的错误1.人称代词的偷换错误2. 缺少人称代词的错误3. 人称代词数的一致问题4. 人称代词格的一致问题1.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(NMET96)2.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(NMET98)3.The day before the speech contest, English teacher talked to me.(NMET2000)3.It was about noon (when) we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited.(NMET2002)连词,冠词的错误1.Today I visited the Smiths –my first visit to a American family. (NMET96)2.It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.(NMET2001)3.Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(NMET97)4.Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. (NMET95)6.We may be one family and live under a same roof.(NMET2001)5.Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher.(NMET2000)7.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(NMET2002)语境(句意,文意)及逻辑错误1.…but it didn’t matter that I would win or not.(NMET2000)2.When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf.(NMET2000)3.…she was smiling but nodding at me.(NMET2000)4.Now, I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I used to watch it every night. (NMET99)5.The food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET2002)解题技巧1.No context, no text. 通读全文,掌握大意;2.眼观六路,联系上下文;3.先易后难,正确的句子放在最后改;4.不能改动两个地方(词);5.正确、规范使用批改符号。1.Don’t lose hearts, you’ll be successful巩固练习一.名词和数词2.I need some more informations.3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind. 3________4.People remember him for his contribution to the country. 4___________in time. 1_______heart2___________informationkindscontributions1.At a very beginning, I choose a巩固练习二.冠 词2.You can’t consider him a honest
man. 2____3.In China,children usually start
school at an age of seven. 3____ play and actors. 1____theanthe4.The play is set in the Paris.4___5.It is necessary for the teachersto add the art to their teachings. 5___6.I can’t stop because I’m in hurry. 6___thethea1.Knowing is one thing; doing is other. 1_______巩固练习三.代 词2.This is the best film which I have ever seen. 2_______3.I also enjoyed the days when we spent together. 3________ anotherthatthat/which/X4.The ones what you decide not to keep can be traded with other people. 4_______ 5.He drove too fast, and the police stopped her and handed him a ticket. 5_______ that/which/Xhim巩固练习四.形容词和副词1.By the time when he was 15,he had had
his own lab. 1____
2.The bad news made us feel sadly.2____
3.Are you certainly that he will help us
check the information? 3____ 4.The children learn to read and write,
they play games as good. 4____whensadcertainwell5.He set off for work an hour before.
5____
6.I hate him as many as you do.6____
7.he was caught in a heavily rain.
7____ 8.It’s not good to keep children busily with their studies all day long. 8______agomuchheavybusy巩固练习五.介 词1.Don’t get into the habit of smoke.
1______ 2.Waving one’s hand can be accepted for crying for help. 2___ 3.He called on Jenny on the hope of getting help from her. 3____ 4.Both Mary and her mother were pleased at the girl. 4____smokingasinwith5.They will start working after an hour. 5____
6.He is the very person that set the theater in fire. 6_____ 7.I persuaded him to reduce the price at $1,500. 7______ 8.Your words encourage me to go on my study. 8______inontowith9.A great many of students would like give up drinking. 9______ 10.China daily is also popular to students of English. 10_____ 11.Class three intends to put in a dance. 11______ 12.I want to see it by my own eyes.
12 ______towithonwith巩固练习六.动 词1.She look like enjoying the concert the other day. 1________ 2.Water pollution often bring on disease. 2_______ 3.The students watches the teacher doing the experiment. 3________ 4.He care for collecting coins. 4________ 5.So far, he made a living by picking up wastes. 5_______ lookedbringswatchcareshas6.The young man dressed in blue are my brother. 6_______ 7.The church burned down yesterday date from the 18th century. 7________ 8.He is said saving money to buy a bicycle. 8_______ 9.Money is spent to look after people with illnesses. 9_______ 10.She was persuaded taking the job. 10_______isdatesto savelookingto take11.Compare to 1992, the price of grain was increased about 50%. 11________ 12.Judge From his accent, he is a southerner. 12_______ 13.She is used to live in the country at present. 13_______ 14.We should stop the children from play fire. 14_______ 15.With a boy led the way,they started towards the village. 15_______comparedJudginglivingplayingleading巩固练习六.连 词1.Though it was cold, but he wentout without a cat. 1______2.He likes sports, but I like music. 2______3.Pick out the wrong sentencesbut correct them. 3_____whileandbut4.Work hard, or you’ll succeed sooner and later. 4___5.Whatever you do, and I’ll beright here waiting for you.5____6.This kind of car costs a lot ofmoney, and he can afford it. 6___andandbut小 结做短文该错应采取三个步骤1.通读短文,掌握大意2.细读全文,逐一作答3.复读全文,验证答案巩固练习.综合Another problem is that good soil is gradual lost.1_______ When trees is cut down,there is nothing to hold 2_______ the soil in the place on the hillside. So when it 3_______ rained,the soil is washed down the hills and into 4_______ the rivers.Strong winds can also blow out the 5_______ valuable soil lies on the top of the fields. 6_______graduallyaretherainsawaywhic/ thatThank you!Your suggestion
may
be quite precious!Assignments1.NMET1996Today I visited the Smiths—my first time visit  86.   to a American family. They live in a small    87.   town. It was very kind for them to meet me   88.   at the railway station and drove me to their home. 89.   The Smiths did his best to make me feel     90.   at home. They offered me coffee and other    91.   drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing92.   together. They eager to know everything about  93.   China and asked me lots of question. In fact,   94.   they are planning to visit China in next year.   95.  答案2.NMET1997Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 86.____
Miss Fang. I'd like to your penfriend, and get to 87. ____ know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself 88_____ My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 89. ____
capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. 90. ___
We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese91. ___ English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot 92. ___
in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.93.___ Do you play any ball games? What your favourite94.__ sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. 95. ___ Yours,
Li Hua答案3.NMET1998My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of 1____ our school football team. We practise for three times 2___ every week and often watch football match on TV 3___ together. Play football not only makes us grow up 4____ tall and strong but also give us a senes of fair play and 5__ team spirit. We must keep in mind ghat we play 6____ for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7____ teaches us the important of obedience(服从). Each 8____ player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9____ the team. And they must not break the rules too 10____ often if we want to the game答案4.NMET1999??? Now I can't watch much television but a few years ago 86._____
I was used to watch it every night. I was often 87._____
a little tired after a day's work and watch TV 88._____
demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are89._____
too many people among my family. Some wanted90._____
to see the programme while others preferred 91._____
another. I am happy with any programme but 92._____
the others spent a lot time arguing and there 93._____
was no way of settling the matter except by 94._____
selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 95.___答案5.NMET2000They day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher 86.____ talked to me . She said that she and my schoolmate all 87.___ wished me success , but it didn't matter that I would 88.____ win or not . When I was on the stage the next day , I felt so 89.____ nervous as I shook like a leaf . There were so many people 90.____ present! Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in91.___ the crowd . She was smiling but nodding at me . I remembered92.___ her words and calm down . I did a good job and won the first93.___ prize . Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 94.___ Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.95.___答案6.NMET2001Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 76____
sisters---in any other words,I am a only child . My parents 77____
love me clearly of course and will do all they can make sure78___
that I got a good education. They did not want me to do 79___
any work at family .They want me to devote all my time to 80 ___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We81___
may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 82____
not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 83____
as if my parents treat me as a visit and a guest .Do they 84____
really understand their own daughter ? What things are in other homes ,I wonder. 85____答案Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei 76.__
Mountain in Sichuan. As Everyone knows, it’s famous 77. __
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather78.
was fine It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 79.__ the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 80. _
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 81. _
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 82. _
since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.83. _
Evening came down.We spent the night in a hotel at the top84.
of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85.__
head touched the pillow. 7.NMET2002答案Reference Answers1996. 86.time 87.a→an 88.for →of 89.drove →drive 90.his →their 91.√ 92.have →had 93. were 94.question →questions 95.in1997. 86.learn →learned 87. Be/become 88.more 89.where →which 90. √ 91. subject →subjects 92.use →used 93.interesting →interested 94. is 或 what→ what’s 95.hear →hearing1998. 86.was →am 87.for 88.match →matches 89.Play →Playing 90.give →gives 91. √ 92. of 93.important→importance 94. the 95.they →we1999. 86.much 87.was 88.watch →watching 89.Unfortunate →Unfortunately 90. among →in 91.the →one 92.am →was 93. of 94. √95→ everyone/everybody2000. 86. my 87. → schoolmates 88.that →whether 89. √90.as →that 91. a 92. but →and 93. →calmed 94.is →are 95. often2001. 76. √ 77.any 78. to make 79.did →do 80.family →home 81. →subjects 82. a →the 83.about 84. and →or 85.What →How2002. 76. a famous 77. √ 78. when we 79.them →us 80. →visited 81. →pictures 82. →passed 83.down 84.and →but 85.at96979899000102Wish you a good luck!