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课件25张PPT。06年高考专项复习系列短 文 改 错 -----By shenyanhuaAnhui Langxi Middle School1、此行无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。答题要规范2、此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉，在该行右边
横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。I’d rather you went there with me. 1. ______The book which he asked me to read it is really worth
reading. 2. _______it√4、此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上
写出改正后的词。3、此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），在该行
右边横线上写出该加的词。I sure I can learn English well. 3. ______∧amI’ll never forget the days when we spent together.
4. _____which
词法
句法
行文逻辑
命
题
考
点 1. One and a half year later, I now think English is fun to learn.(NMET2005)(years)1.名词错误2 I need some informations on
the college (information)单复数互改是高考英语改错题的基本题型之一，
改动的依据有：一是根据名词前的修饰限定成份；
二是根据上下文的逻辑关系 错误类型
1. I hope you have pleasant journey home
(NMET2005)
2. The computer is an useful machine that can do many things for us. aa2.冠词错误英语中冠词只有三个，从高考英语改错题的角度
来看，只能从以下几个方向出题：1）不定冠词a
和an互改；2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；
3）根据需要增删冠词。 1.I controlled me at my best till the dinner started. (04’ 江苏卷 No. 84)
myself3.代词错误2. And they mustn’t break the rules too often if we want to win the game. they代词不仅要与其所指代对象一致，其运用还要
符合上下文的语气及逻辑关系。 5.介词的错误 There are too many people among my family. (NMET 99)
Who is the man you were talking.
3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. to/with词组中的介词误用，介词意思理解偏差，介词的多用，介词的宾语形式混淆。in at 6.动词错误1)考点1) 时态错误
2)语态错误
3)搭配错误
4)主谓不一致
5) 虚拟语气错误
6)动词形式变化错误
7)缺少谓语动词（尤其缺be动词）2).(05江苏) Shake her head,she said ”It isn’t a good time to do that.” _____Shaking1).(02春季）He did not want share things with other people.^to3).Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (NMET 2003）talking1)考点：
a.不定式，动名词作主语，宾语
b.现在分词和过去分词的区别。
c. to do sth与do sth. 的选用
d.非谓语的否定、完成、被动式
e. and前后非谓语的一致（尤其距离较远时）
错误类型例析(7) 非谓语错误类型例析(8) 连词错误1. When I was on the stage the next day, I was so nervous as I shook like a leaf. that3. It was not until 1979 when he got
happily back to work.thatwhether4.This is the very book which I’m looking
for that2. It didn’t matter that I would win or not. 1. One day, ……She liked it very much and reads it to the class. (NMET 2003)
2. I remembered her words and calm down. (NMET 2000)readcalmed错误类型例析(9) 平行结构错误 错误类型例析(10) 行文逻辑错误 1. (2002) The food was expensive and the service was good. but2. (2000) She was smiling but nodding at me.
and11.句法 (从句子结构去把握）1).(03全国)The main problem was in
that we didn’t have enough money.2).(04福建) Clever as she is, but she
works very hard.3).(04广东) Why you think so many
people still suffer from poverty now?^do思路要清楚, 步骤要恰当1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；
2）以句为单位，细查语法;
3）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配；
4）由易到难, 各个击破;
5）验证答案，规范答题；
6）注意“三不改”：A、标点
B、纲外词（汉字注释词）
C、词序 . Summary 2005年高考分析卷Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small
town, It was very kind for them to meet me
at the railway station and drove me to their home.
The Smiths did his best to make me feel
at home. They offered me coffee and other
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing
together. They were eager know everything about
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,
they are planning to visit China in next year.
1.______
2.______
3.______
4.______
5.______
6.______
7.______
8.______
9.______
10._____Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small
town, It was very kind for them to meet me
at the railway station and drove me to their home.
The Smiths did his best to make me feel
at home. They offered me coffee and other
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing
together. They were eager∧ know everything about
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,
they are planning to visit China in next year.1.time
2.an
3.of
4.drive
5.their
6.√
7.had
8.to
9.questions
10.in2005年高考分析卷I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our 76 _______
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. 77 _______
Clever as she is, but she works very hard. We have a 78 _______
lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she 79 _______
told me that something happened when her parents was out. 80 _______
She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81 _______
she smelt something burning. She stopped look out 82 _______
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 83 _______
of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten 84 _______
minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor85 _______
was very thankful for her help.2005高考（福建卷）whose√ butinwerehomework∧tofoundimmediately∧theSuccess belongs
to you!It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much 76. _____
I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my 77. _____
first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my 78. _____
poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for 79. _____
me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew 80. _____
that everything would be all right. There are many more happy 81. _____
memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly 82. _____
enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the 83. _____
changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the 84. _____
fishing trip. It was such much fun. 85. _____2005高考（辽宁卷）∧youwithanBut / Yetsmiles more√seeinglikedsoWhen I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing
in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 1 ________
at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 2 ________
I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 3 ________
three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 4 ________
the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 5 ________
and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 6 ________
looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 7 ________
on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 8 ________
know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for 9 ________
cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 10 ________2005高考（湖南卷）out∧ an for ofopenedanswers so didn’t∧ me√Though great progress has been made in science these years, there 1________ are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives 2 ________ by collecting and selling used thing. Their children can't go to school 3 ________
because they have not enough money to send their children to there. 4 ________ Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? 5 ________
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president 6 ________
of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for 7 ________
the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.” 8 ________
Although this few words sound simple enough, they have 9 ________
clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. 10 ________2005高考（广东卷）√livingthings to∧ do inwechildrentheseclearlyNowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 76.—————
hobby which is both interested and funny. And every year 77. —————
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 78. —————
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime . Starting 79. —————
your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 80. —————
Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 81. —————
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 82. —————
the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 83. —————
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 84. —————
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 85. —————2005高考（浙江卷）agesinterestingtheir∧ a is√with But inexists During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 76. ________
words from these books, but I had terribly problems 77. ________
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 78. ________
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 79. ________
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 80. ________
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 81. ________
words from books that I read. I would come back from 82. ________
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 83. ________
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 84. ________
of last year，my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 85. ________ √terrible to fordid me∧ the or them had2004高考（江苏卷）
横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。I’d rather you went there with me. 1. ______The book which he asked me to read it is really worth
reading. 2. _______it√4、此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上
写出改正后的词。3、此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），在该行
右边横线上写出该加的词。I sure I can learn English well. 3. ______∧amI’ll never forget the days when we spent together.
4. _____which
词法
句法
行文逻辑
命
题
考
点 1. One and a half year later, I now think English is fun to learn.(NMET2005)(years)1.名词错误2 I need some informations on
the college (information)单复数互改是高考英语改错题的基本题型之一，
改动的依据有：一是根据名词前的修饰限定成份；
二是根据上下文的逻辑关系 错误类型
1. I hope you have pleasant journey home
(NMET2005)
2. The computer is an useful machine that can do many things for us. aa2.冠词错误英语中冠词只有三个，从高考英语改错题的角度
来看，只能从以下几个方向出题：1）不定冠词a
和an互改；2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；
3）根据需要增删冠词。 1.I controlled me at my best till the dinner started. (04’ 江苏卷 No. 84)
myself3.代词错误2. And they mustn’t break the rules too often if we want to win the game. they代词不仅要与其所指代对象一致，其运用还要
符合上下文的语气及逻辑关系。 5.介词的错误 There are too many people among my family. (NMET 99)
Who is the man you were talking.
3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. to/with词组中的介词误用，介词意思理解偏差，介词的多用，介词的宾语形式混淆。in at 6.动词错误1)考点1) 时态错误
2)语态错误
3)搭配错误
4)主谓不一致
5) 虚拟语气错误
6)动词形式变化错误
7)缺少谓语动词（尤其缺be动词）2).(05江苏) Shake her head,she said ”It isn’t a good time to do that.” _____Shaking1).(02春季）He did not want share things with other people.^to3).Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (NMET 2003）talking1)考点：
a.不定式，动名词作主语，宾语
b.现在分词和过去分词的区别。
c. to do sth与do sth. 的选用
d.非谓语的否定、完成、被动式
e. and前后非谓语的一致（尤其距离较远时）
错误类型例析(7) 非谓语错误类型例析(8) 连词错误1. When I was on the stage the next day, I was so nervous as I shook like a leaf. that3. It was not until 1979 when he got
happily back to work.thatwhether4.This is the very book which I’m looking
for that2. It didn’t matter that I would win or not. 1. One day, ……She liked it very much and reads it to the class. (NMET 2003)
2. I remembered her words and calm down. (NMET 2000)readcalmed错误类型例析(9) 平行结构错误 错误类型例析(10) 行文逻辑错误 1. (2002) The food was expensive and the service was good. but2. (2000) She was smiling but nodding at me.
and11.句法 (从句子结构去把握）1).(03全国)The main problem was in
that we didn’t have enough money.2).(04福建) Clever as she is, but she
works very hard.3).(04广东) Why you think so many
people still suffer from poverty now?^do思路要清楚, 步骤要恰当1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；
2）以句为单位，细查语法;
3）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配；
4）由易到难, 各个击破;
5）验证答案，规范答题；
6）注意“三不改”：A、标点
B、纲外词（汉字注释词）
C、词序 . Summary 2005年高考分析卷Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small
town, It was very kind for them to meet me
at the railway station and drove me to their home.
The Smiths did his best to make me feel
at home. They offered me coffee and other
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing
together. They were eager know everything about
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,
they are planning to visit China in next year.
1.______
2.______
3.______
4.______
5.______
6.______
7.______
8.______
9.______
10._____Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small
town, It was very kind for them to meet me
at the railway station and drove me to their home.
The Smiths did his best to make me feel
at home. They offered me coffee and other
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing
together. They were eager∧ know everything about
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,
they are planning to visit China in next year.1.time
2.an
3.of
4.drive
5.their
6.√
7.had
8.to
9.questions
10.in2005年高考分析卷I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our 76 _______
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. 77 _______
Clever as she is, but she works very hard. We have a 78 _______
lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she 79 _______
told me that something happened when her parents was out. 80 _______
She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81 _______
she smelt something burning. She stopped look out 82 _______
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 83 _______
of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten 84 _______
minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor85 _______
was very thankful for her help.2005高考（福建卷）whose√ butinwerehomework∧tofoundimmediately∧theSuccess belongs
to you!It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much 76. _____
I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my 77. _____
first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my 78. _____
poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for 79. _____
me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew 80. _____
that everything would be all right. There are many more happy 81. _____
memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly 82. _____
enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the 83. _____
changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the 84. _____
fishing trip. It was such much fun. 85. _____2005高考（辽宁卷）∧youwithanBut / Yetsmiles more√seeinglikedsoWhen I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing
in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 1 ________
at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 2 ________
I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 3 ________
three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 4 ________
the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 5 ________
and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 6 ________
looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 7 ________
on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 8 ________
know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for 9 ________
cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 10 ________2005高考（湖南卷）out∧ an for ofopenedanswers so didn’t∧ me√Though great progress has been made in science these years, there 1________ are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives 2 ________ by collecting and selling used thing. Their children can't go to school 3 ________
because they have not enough money to send their children to there. 4 ________ Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? 5 ________
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president 6 ________
of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for 7 ________
the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.” 8 ________
Although this few words sound simple enough, they have 9 ________
clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. 10 ________2005高考（广东卷）√livingthings to∧ do inwechildrentheseclearlyNowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 76.—————
hobby which is both interested and funny. And every year 77. —————
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 78. —————
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime . Starting 79. —————
your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 80. —————
Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 81. —————
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 82. —————
the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 83. —————
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 84. —————
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 85. —————2005高考（浙江卷）agesinterestingtheir∧ a is√with But inexists During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 76. ________
words from these books, but I had terribly problems 77. ________
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 78. ________
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 79. ________
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 80. ________
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 81. ________
words from books that I read. I would come back from 82. ________
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 83. ________
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 84. ________
of last year，my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 85. ________ √terrible to fordid me∧ the or them had2004高考（江苏卷）