课件25张PPT。 Welcome to my class!短文改错专题复习***中学 杨永慧Work in pairs and discuss these questions1、Have you ever made any mistakes in your everyday life?
2、What will you do if you make some mistakes in your life? In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, then we are still a good fellow.
——Chairman Mao’s words Discuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs. 1、I met student yesterday. _______ 2、He is looking a missing book. _______3、He wants have a rest. _______ a^ for4、 He praised by the teacher several times. ______ ^ to was^^5、 I’m looking forward your letter. ______ to^总 结 1、名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。 2、 不及物动词是否缺介词。 3、不定式是否漏了to. 4、被动语态是否缺少了助动词be. 5、惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。 一、缺词1、We are going to have a meeting on next week. _______4、The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day. _______moreDiscuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs. on3、He is fond of like English. _______2、He is more taller than me. _______5、He married with a beautiful girl. _______ like towith总 结 1、时间状语前是否多了介词。 2、 形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。 3、固定搭配中是否多了词。 4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。 5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。二、多词1、 It is time of me to take my dog. _______ forDiscuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs. 2、 I had knew him before he lived here. _______3、To pass the book store, he stopped to buy a book. ______4、 He as well as his sister are a League Member. _______ knownPassing is总 结 1、在固定用法中介词是否误用。 2、 动词的时态、语态、主谓是否一致。 3、非谓语动词是否误用。 4、从句中关系词是否误用。 5、判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。三、错词 6、判断句子中并列连词、从属连词是否误用。做题要求此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。Passage 1:During weekend I traveled by air 1. ______
at the first time in my life. I usually 2. ______
travel by train or by bus. It’s all cheaper 3. ______
and safe. But to fly in the sky was 4. ______
something new to me. At the beginning I 5. ______
felt a little of nervous. But very soon I 6.______
become excited when I found myself high 7. ______
up in the sky among the cloud. I also 8. ______
found that the mountains, fields or rivers 9. ______
were interesting small. I enjoyed the 10. ______
journey very much. During weekend I traveled by air 1. ______at the first time in my life. I usually 2. ______travel by train or by bus. It’s all cheaper 3. ______something new to me. At the beginning I 5. ______and safe. But to fly in the sky was 4. ______^theforbothsafer √Passage 1:
felt a little of nervous. But very soon I 6._________
become excited when I found myself high 7. _________
up in the sky among the cloud. I also 8. _________
found that the mountains, fields or rivers 9. _________
were interesting small. I enjoyed the 10. _________becamecloudsandinterestinglyofPassage 1:短文改错的解题方法与技巧 1.首先要细读全文,弄懂全篇的意思。在读的过程可把初步确认的错误标出。
2.然后再从以下几个方面仔细推敲。
(1)动词→查时态,第三人称单数、非谓语动词、语态、主复句时态是否一致。
(2)代词→查前后是否一致。it的用法,以及指示代词、人称代词、不定代词、关系代词的用法是否有误。
(3)介词→查搭配及容易误用的介词。 短文改错的解题方法与技巧 (4)形容词副词→查词性有否混淆,形容词与副词的比较级、最高级的用法,修饰比较级的副词等。
(5)名词→查单复数,可数不可数,是否加冠词,the,a还是an,主谓一致问题。
(6)连词→查上下文之间的逻辑关系。是否误用。
3.重读全文,仔细推敲改正后的短文。读起来是否通顺,逻辑思维与短文脉络是否合理,词汇的用法、句子结构是否合理。 Passage 2Many people were not satisfied with the manager of the
cinema, for some ladies saw films with their hats on 1._____
blocked their view. They suggested the manager put on 2. _____
a notice asking the ladies to take off their hats when 3. _____
seeing films. The manager said that it would not polite 4. _____
to ask ladies to take off their hats and ladies would 5. _____
protect their rights to wear their hats. And the 6. _____
next day, the following words were appeared on the 7. _____
screen before the film on:” Considering the old ladies’ 8. _____
advanced age, this cinema allows them wear 9. _____
their hats when seeing films.” All ladies took their 10._____
hats off after they saw the notice. Passage 2 Many people were not satisfied with the manager of the
cinema, for some ladies saw films with their hats on 1._______
blocked their view. They suggested the manager put on 2. _______
a notice asking the ladies to take off their hats when 3. _______
seeing films. The manager said that it would not polite 4. _______
to ask ladies to take off their hats and ladies would 5. _______seeingup √^be^thatPassage 2protect their rights to wear their hats. And the 6. _____
next day, the following words were appeared on the 7. _____
screen before the film on:“ Considering the old ladies’ 8. _____
advanced age, this cinema allows them wear 9. _____
their hats when seeing films.” All ladies took their 10._____
hats off after they saw the notice. But^was^to^thewere短文改错应注意的问题 ㈠.四不改。即:
①标点符号不改。
②大小不改。
③词序错误不改(不是不改,而是按错词或少词来改)。
④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词,在句中不可能用错。
㈡.规范做题方法。
①要严格按照示范,即用规定的符号去改错。不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。
②换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。 可不要忘记哦! Passage 3 In a small town where there lived two brothers 1. ________
they were very lazy. One day, before the mother 2. ________
went out to an evening party, she told about her 3.________
two sons give the house a good cleaning. But 4.________
before the mother left the room, the big brother said 5. _______
to his younger brother, “Tom, when mother came 6.________
back, you will say I have been ill and I can get 7.________
out of bed.” the younger brother agreed. “OK, 8.________
and when mother turns back you will say 9.________
I have gone to call for a doctor for me.” 10.________towho/thatabout^whereaftercomescan’t/cannot √butyou短文改错歌诀 短文改错要做好,常见类型应记牢。
名词爱考“数”与“格”,冠词在前“错”“多”“少”。
动词时态和语态,非谓语搭配莫错了。
连代形副错一样,多是故意来混淆。
介词多半考搭配,多漏误用想周到。
句法涉及到“一致”,从句多考关系词。
词法句法均未错,逻辑推理去寻找。
“1126”惯常比,回读复查敲定稿。Homework
Finish the mistake correcting exercises in the papers.Thanks to my class!Good bye