2007高三短文改错复习[下学期]
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课件31张PPT。高考英语复习改错英语专题复习 制作人：周小清
五月六日英语专项复习一 改错专题1 题型特点A .B.一行至多一错，且每一行考察的内容都不一样。C.6211，5221，为主要的改正方式。D.短文中单词拼写，词序，大小写，标点，地名，人名，专有名词和注有中文的词语一般不设考点。文章多以学生角度来写，题材均与学生生活密切相关。下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
muchwaswatchingUnfortunately
in
one
was
of
everyone
下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
much（多用）was（多用）watchingUnfortunately（误用）
In（误用）
one(误用）
was（误用）
of（漏用）
（正确）
everyone（误用）
错误分析:1.副词的多用2.动词的多用3.非谓语动词的误用 4.形容词副词的误用 5.介词的误用6.冠词的误用7.时态的误用8.介词的漏用9.正确10.代词的误用[6211式]例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____my
schoolmatesthatthataandcalmedareoften例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____my(漏用）
Schoolmates（误用）whether（误用)that（误用） a(多用)and(误用）calmed（误用）are(误用）Often(多用)错误分析:1.代词的漏用2.名词的单复数的误用3.连接词的误用4.正确5.连词的错用6.冠词的误用(固定搭配的错用)7.连词的误用 8.时态的误用 9.主谓一致的误用10.副词的多用[6211式]例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder. 例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder.
any
to
do
home
subjects
the
about
or
how例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder.
any（多）
to（漏）
do（误）
home（误）
subjects（误）
the（误）
about（多）
or（误）
how（误）错误分析:1.正确2.副词的多用3.不定式的漏用4.时态的误用5.名词的误用6.名词的单复数不一致7.冠词的误用8.介词的多用9.连词的误用 10.关联词的误用[6211式]例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.awhenusvisitedpicturespasseddownbutat例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.a(漏）when（漏）us（误）visited（误）pictures（误）passed（误）down（多）but（误）at（多）错误分析:1.冠词的漏用2.正确3.关联词的漏用4.代词的误用5.非谓语和动词的误用 6,名词的单复数的误用7.时态的误用8.副词的多用9.连词的误用10.介词的多用[5221式]例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary/O followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day.5.____
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day .5.____ Soon I.began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____ineverythingatalkingmyselfitreadwordsshould例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day .5.____ Soon I.began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____in (多用)everything(误用)a(误用)talking(误用)myself(误用)It(漏用)read(误用)words(误用)should(多用)错误分析:1.正确(放在最前)2.介词的多用3.不定代词的误用4.人称代词与冠词的误用 5.情态动词的多用6.非谓语形式的误用7.固定短语的误用8.动词的误用9.时态的误用10.名词的单复数的误用[6211]
二，改错常考的考点归纳：
1.动词时态
2.主谓语是否一致
3.名词的数与格是否正确
4.非谓语动词的语态与时态形式是否正确
5.各种代词及it,one,that 等在指代关系上的使用是否正确
6.It作形式主语或形式宾语时是否有遗漏,在定语从句中it是否与关系代词重复
7.受母语影响,because和so,although和but,return和back,repeat和again 是否并用
8.表示转折、并列等关系的but,and,or以及therefore,however等词的使用是否合理
9.固定短语和搭配结构是否完整、正确
10.冠词的使用是否恰当、有遗漏
三.短文改错试题精选.Our school invited a foreign teacher who is working in 1.____
a college in our city give a class to the students of Senior 2.___
Grade Two.The class was very interested.I have learned a3.___
lot of from him.The teacher had a free talk with us in easy4.____
English.He spoke slow so that we could understand him5.____
well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand.6.____
My classmates were all active in the class.To his joy,I 7.____
understood about everything the teacher said.But I was 8____
able to ask question in English.This class encouraged me 9.____
very much.I’m sure we keep on practising,it will be easy 10._____
for us to learn spoken English well.1.三.短文改错试题精选.Our school invited a foreign teacher who is working in 1.____
a college in our city give a class to the students of Senior 2.___
Grade Two.The class was very interested.I have learned a3.___
lot of from him.The teacher had a free talk with us in easy4.____
English.He spoke clear so that we could understand him5.____
well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand.6.____
My classmates were all active in the class.To his joy,I 7.____
understood about everything the teacher said.But I was 8____
able to ask question in English.This class encouraged me 9.____
very much.I’m sure we keep on practising,it will be easy 10._____
for us to learn spoken English well.tointerestingofclearlydidn’tmyAndquestionsif1.错误分析:1.正确(放在最前)2.非谓语的漏用3.ed形式和ing形式的误用4.介词的多用.5.形容词的和副词的误用6.时态的误用 7.代词的误用(指代错误)8.连词的误用9.名词的单复数的错用10.连接词的漏用2.
When the red sun raised in the east this morning.my 1.____
classmates and I left for Mengla Farm.On the way to2.____
there,we marched in line.Every one of us were very3._____
happy.One hour late,we arrived at the gate of the farm,4.___
There we were warmly welcomed.Uncle Tang,the head5.____
of the farm took us to see the whole farms .There we saw6.___
many people work hard in the fields and learned a lot about7.____
vegetables and other crops. Around twelve o’clock,we offered8.___
a good lunch.After having it on the grass,we had a great fun .9.___
Some danced,some sang songs and others talked excitedly10.____2.
When the red sun raised in the east this morning.my 1.____
classmates and I left for Mengla Farm.On the way to2.____
there,we marched in line.Every one of us were very3._____
happy.One hour late,we arrived at the gate of the farm,4.___
There we were warmly welcomed.Uncle Tang,the head5.____
of the farm took us to see the whole farms .There we saw6.___
many people work hard in the fields and learned a lot about7.____
vegetables and other crops. Around twelve o’clock,we offered8.___
a good lunch.After having it on the grass,we had a great fun .9.___
Some danced,some sang songs and others talked excitedly10.____rosetowaslaterwherefarmworkingwerea错误分析：1.动词词性误用2.介词误用3.主谓一致4.形容词副词误用5.副词与关系副词的误用6.名词的单复的误用7.非谓语动词的误用8.语态的误用 9冠词的多用10.正确(放在最后)3.
Last month we went to the work at our school’s factory.The1.____
factory makes all kinds of clothes of new style.We worked2._____
there for a week and learned a lot from the workers there .I’ll3.____
never forget the first day at the factory.We arrived here early4._____
in the morning .The workers welcome us warmly.The factory5._____
director showed us the workshop and told us a lot about the6.____
machine and production.The workers taught us how to use sewing 7._____
machine.At first we were very slow but couldn’t run the machine8._____
very well.Very soon we were wet in sweat.The workers gave us 9._____
a great deal of help.That afternoon we worked more better.The10._____
dirctor said it was not bad for the first day.We felt happy at this.
3.
Last month we went to the work at our school’s factory.The1.____
factory makes all kinds of clothes of new style.We worked2._____
there for a week and learned a lot from the workers there .I’ll3.____
never forget the first day at the factory.We arrived here early4._____
in the morning .The workers welcome us warmly.The factory5._____
director showed us the workshop and told us a lot about the6.____
machine and production.The workers taught us how to use sewing 7.__
machine.At first we were very slow but couldn’t run the machine8._____
very well.Very soon we were wet in sweat.The workers gave us 9._____
a great deal of help.That afternoon we worked more better.The10._____
dirctor said it was not bad for the first day.We felt happy at this.
thetheretherewelcomedaroundmachinesandwithmuch错误分析：1.冠词的多用2.正确3.副词的多用4.副词的误用5.时态误用6.介词的漏用7.名词的单复数的误用8.连词的误用9.介词的误用10.形容词比较级修饰成份的误用4.
Nowadays it is not unusual for many students to find
part — time job. In the past winter holiday,I worked as a 1.____
waitress at a McDonald’s for a week. I used to keeping2._____
on asking parents for money.It was the first time that3._____
I have earned money,so I was quite excited.Now I can buy 4____
whichever I need without asking others for money.From my5._____
working experience.I found it’s a good preparation for the world6____
outside schools.Before this part—time job,I know little about7._____
the things out of the class.I’ve got some working and social8._____
experience.l learn the value of money and the way getting9.______
on with others.It’s good for my future work .In one word,I’ve10.____
had a wonderful holiday.
4.
Nowadays it is not unusual for many students to find
part — time job. In the past winter holiday,I worked as a 1.____
waitress at a McDonald’s for a week. I used to keeping2_____
on asking parents for money, It was the first time that3.____
I have earned money,so I was quite excited.Now I can buy 4____
whichever I need without asking others for money.From my5._____
working experience.I found it’s a good preparation for the world6____
outside schools.Before this part—time job,I knew few about7._____
the things out of the class.I’ve got some working and social8._____
experience.l learn the value of money and the way getting9.______
on with others.It’s good for my future work .In one word,I’ve10.____
had a wonderful holiday.
jobskeepmyhadwhateverlittlethe ofa错误分析:1.名词的单复数的误用2.非谓语动词的误用3.代词的漏用4.时态的误用5.关联词的误用6,正确7.形容词的误用8.冠词的多用9.介词的漏用10.固定短语误用[6211]5.
Dear David,
I was so pleased to hear from you and was writing to tell1.___
you everything about my village.Quite a few changes have 2.___
taken place in my village,which runs a small river with3.____
a stone bridge over it .There are new _built houses along 4.___
the southern banks of the river.Beside the houses there is a 5.____
playground where the villagers often play the ball games6._____
after farm work .There is a new school is to the south of 7.____
the playground and a library to the east of the school. Also8.____
there are rice fields near the houses.A toy factory lie on the9.____
northern bank of the river.Over it is an orchard where all10.____
kinds of fruit trees are growing.5.
Dear David,
I was so pleased to hear from you and was writing to tell1.___
you everything about my village.Quite a few changes have 2.___
taken place in my village,which runs a small river with3.____
a stone bridge over it .There are new _built houses along 4.___
the southern banks of the river.Beside the houses there is a 5.____
playground where the villagers often play the ball games6._____
after farm work .There is a new school is to the south of 7.____
the playground and a library to the east of the school. Also8.____
there are rice fields near the houses.A toy factory lie on the9.____
northern bank of the river.Over it is an orchard where all10.____
kinds of fruit trees are growing.amsomethingthroughnewly-builtbankthethatwhichliesAbove错误分析:1.时态误用2.不定代词的误用3.介词的漏用4.形容词的误用5.名词的单复数的误用6.冠词的多用7.关联词的漏用8.正确9.主谓一致10.介词的误用6.
Dear John,
I know you want to find a work in Beijing.I read an 1.___
advertisement in today’s‘China Daily’,the biggest English2.____
newspaper in our country.The Beijing information corporation3.__
has an English course for children and adult.And they4.___
need native—English spoken teachers.What they prefer5.___
is an university degree in education or another related field,6.___
which you have.And a foreign expert certificate is also 7.___
required,too.I think you are the right person they want you8.___
If you are interesting, please call or write to the corporation9.___
direct or send you application to him through internet.10.____6.
Dear John,
I know you want to find a work in Beijing.I read an 1.___
advertisement in today’s‘China Daily’,the biggest English2.____
newspaper in our country.The Beijing information corporation3.__
has an English course for children and adult.And they4.___
need native—English spoken teachers.What they prefer5.___
is a university degree on education or another related field,6.___
which you have.And a foreign expert certificate is also 7.___
required,too.I think you are the right person they want you8.___
If you are interested, please call and write to the corporation9.___
direct or send you application to him through internet.10.____jobAadultsspeakinginalsoyouorthem错误分析:1.名词误用2.正确3.冠词的误用4.名词的单复数的误用5.非谓语动词的误用6.介词的误用 7.副词的多用8.代词的多用.9.连词的误用10.代词的误用
五月六日英语专项复习一 改错专题1 题型特点A .B.一行至多一错，且每一行考察的内容都不一样。C.6211，5221，为主要的改正方式。D.短文中单词拼写，词序，大小写，标点，地名，人名，专有名词和注有中文的词语一般不设考点。文章多以学生角度来写，题材均与学生生活密切相关。下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
muchwaswatchingUnfortunately
in
one
was
of
everyone
下面以99—2003年的高考题为例来说明。例1.（99年高考改错题）The problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
I was used to watch it every night.I was often
a little tired after a day’s work and watch Tv
demands very little effort.Unfortunate ,there are
too many people among my family .Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred
another.I am happy with any programme but
the others spent a lot time arguing and there
was no way of settling the matter except by
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.1.___
2.___
3.___
4.___
5.___
6.___
7.___
8.___
9.___
10.____
much（多用）was（多用）watchingUnfortunately（误用）
In（误用）
one(误用）
was（误用）
of（漏用）
（正确）
everyone（误用）
错误分析:1.副词的多用2.动词的多用3.非谓语动词的误用 4.形容词副词的误用 5.介词的误用6.冠词的误用7.时态的误用8.介词的漏用9.正确10.代词的误用[6211式]例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____my
schoolmatesthatthataandcalmedareoften例2：（2000年高考题）
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1.____
talked to me .She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.___
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.____
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.____
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.___
present!Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.___
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me .I remembered 7.___
her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the 8.___
prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9.____
Whenever I see them I ‘ll often think of my English teacher .10.____my(漏用）
Schoolmates（误用）whether（误用)that（误用） a(多用)and(误用）calmed（误用）are(误用）Often(多用)错误分析:1.代词的漏用2.名词的单复数的误用3.连接词的误用4.正确5.连词的错用6.冠词的误用(固定搭配的错用)7.连词的误用 8.时态的误用 9.主谓一致的误用10.副词的多用[6211式]例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder. 例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder.
any
to
do
home
subjects
the
about
or
how例3（2001年）
Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brother nor 1.___
sister — in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 2.___
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure3.___
that I get a good education .They did not want me to do 4.____
any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to 5.___
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.____
may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 7.____
not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 8.____
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.____
really understand their own daughter?What things are in 10.____
other homes,I wonder.
any（多）
to（漏）
do（误）
home（误）
subjects（误）
the（误）
about（多）
or（误）
how（误）错误分析:1.正确2.副词的多用3.不定式的漏用4.时态的误用5.名词的误用6.名词的单复数不一致7.冠词的误用8.介词的多用9.连词的误用 10.关联词的误用[6211式]例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.awhenusvisitedpicturespasseddownbutat例4、（2002年）
Last week my parents and I took a two –day trip
to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows.It’s famous 1.____
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals .The weather was fine2.___
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 3.___
The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain .4.____
we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way 5.___
up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was 6.____
so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7._____
Evening came down .We spent the might on a hotel 8.____
at the top of mountain.The food was expensive and the service 9.___
was good .I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.____
head touched the pillow.a(漏）when（漏）us（误）visited（误）pictures（误）passed（误）down（多）but（误）at（多）错误分析:1.冠词的漏用2.正确3.关联词的漏用4.代词的误用5.非谓语和动词的误用 6,名词的单复数的误用7.时态的误用8.副词的多用9.连词的误用10.介词的多用[5221式]例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary/O followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day.5.____
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day .5.____ Soon I.began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____ineverythingatalkingmyselfitreadwordsshould例5(2003年高考题)
When I first learned to write in English,I ran into many 1.___
difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought 2.___
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3.____
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her4.___
advice and should put down 100words or so each day .5.____ Soon I.began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6.____
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7.____
a little story and showed to my teacher.She liked it 8._____
very much and reads it to the class.All said the story was 9.____
a good one.Their word were a great encouragement to me.10._____in (多用)everything(误用)a(误用)talking(误用)myself(误用)It(漏用)read(误用)words(误用)should(多用)错误分析:1.正确(放在最前)2.介词的多用3.不定代词的误用4.人称代词与冠词的误用 5.情态动词的多用6.非谓语形式的误用7.固定短语的误用8.动词的误用9.时态的误用10.名词的单复数的误用[6211]
二，改错常考的考点归纳：
1.动词时态
2.主谓语是否一致
3.名词的数与格是否正确
4.非谓语动词的语态与时态形式是否正确
5.各种代词及it,one,that 等在指代关系上的使用是否正确
6.It作形式主语或形式宾语时是否有遗漏,在定语从句中it是否与关系代词重复
7.受母语影响,because和so,although和but,return和back,repeat和again 是否并用
8.表示转折、并列等关系的but,and,or以及therefore,however等词的使用是否合理
9.固定短语和搭配结构是否完整、正确
10.冠词的使用是否恰当、有遗漏
三.短文改错试题精选.Our school invited a foreign teacher who is working in 1.____
a college in our city give a class to the students of Senior 2.___
Grade Two.The class was very interested.I have learned a3.___
lot of from him.The teacher had a free talk with us in easy4.____
English.He spoke slow so that we could understand him5.____
well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand.6.____
My classmates were all active in the class.To his joy,I 7.____
understood about everything the teacher said.But I was 8____
able to ask question in English.This class encouraged me 9.____
very much.I’m sure we keep on practising,it will be easy 10._____
for us to learn spoken English well.1.三.短文改错试题精选.Our school invited a foreign teacher who is working in 1.____
a college in our city give a class to the students of Senior 2.___
Grade Two.The class was very interested.I have learned a3.___
lot of from him.The teacher had a free talk with us in easy4.____
English.He spoke clear so that we could understand him5.____
well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand.6.____
My classmates were all active in the class.To his joy,I 7.____
understood about everything the teacher said.But I was 8____
able to ask question in English.This class encouraged me 9.____
very much.I’m sure we keep on practising,it will be easy 10._____
for us to learn spoken English well.tointerestingofclearlydidn’tmyAndquestionsif1.错误分析:1.正确(放在最前)2.非谓语的漏用3.ed形式和ing形式的误用4.介词的多用.5.形容词的和副词的误用6.时态的误用 7.代词的误用(指代错误)8.连词的误用9.名词的单复数的错用10.连接词的漏用2.
When the red sun raised in the east this morning.my 1.____
classmates and I left for Mengla Farm.On the way to2.____
there,we marched in line.Every one of us were very3._____
happy.One hour late,we arrived at the gate of the farm,4.___
There we were warmly welcomed.Uncle Tang,the head5.____
of the farm took us to see the whole farms .There we saw6.___
many people work hard in the fields and learned a lot about7.____
vegetables and other crops. Around twelve o’clock,we offered8.___
a good lunch.After having it on the grass,we had a great fun .9.___
Some danced,some sang songs and others talked excitedly10.____2.
When the red sun raised in the east this morning.my 1.____
classmates and I left for Mengla Farm.On the way to2.____
there,we marched in line.Every one of us were very3._____
happy.One hour late,we arrived at the gate of the farm,4.___
There we were warmly welcomed.Uncle Tang,the head5.____
of the farm took us to see the whole farms .There we saw6.___
many people work hard in the fields and learned a lot about7.____
vegetables and other crops. Around twelve o’clock,we offered8.___
a good lunch.After having it on the grass,we had a great fun .9.___
Some danced,some sang songs and others talked excitedly10.____rosetowaslaterwherefarmworkingwerea错误分析：1.动词词性误用2.介词误用3.主谓一致4.形容词副词误用5.副词与关系副词的误用6.名词的单复的误用7.非谓语动词的误用8.语态的误用 9冠词的多用10.正确(放在最后)3.
Last month we went to the work at our school’s factory.The1.____
factory makes all kinds of clothes of new style.We worked2._____
there for a week and learned a lot from the workers there .I’ll3.____
never forget the first day at the factory.We arrived here early4._____
in the morning .The workers welcome us warmly.The factory5._____
director showed us the workshop and told us a lot about the6.____
machine and production.The workers taught us how to use sewing 7._____
machine.At first we were very slow but couldn’t run the machine8._____
very well.Very soon we were wet in sweat.The workers gave us 9._____
a great deal of help.That afternoon we worked more better.The10._____
dirctor said it was not bad for the first day.We felt happy at this.
3.
Last month we went to the work at our school’s factory.The1.____
factory makes all kinds of clothes of new style.We worked2._____
there for a week and learned a lot from the workers there .I’ll3.____
never forget the first day at the factory.We arrived here early4._____
in the morning .The workers welcome us warmly.The factory5._____
director showed us the workshop and told us a lot about the6.____
machine and production.The workers taught us how to use sewing 7.__
machine.At first we were very slow but couldn’t run the machine8._____
very well.Very soon we were wet in sweat.The workers gave us 9._____
a great deal of help.That afternoon we worked more better.The10._____
dirctor said it was not bad for the first day.We felt happy at this.
thetheretherewelcomedaroundmachinesandwithmuch错误分析：1.冠词的多用2.正确3.副词的多用4.副词的误用5.时态误用6.介词的漏用7.名词的单复数的误用8.连词的误用9.介词的误用10.形容词比较级修饰成份的误用4.
Nowadays it is not unusual for many students to find
part — time job. In the past winter holiday,I worked as a 1.____
waitress at a McDonald’s for a week. I used to keeping2._____
on asking parents for money.It was the first time that3._____
I have earned money,so I was quite excited.Now I can buy 4____
whichever I need without asking others for money.From my5._____
working experience.I found it’s a good preparation for the world6____
outside schools.Before this part—time job,I know little about7._____
the things out of the class.I’ve got some working and social8._____
experience.l learn the value of money and the way getting9.______
on with others.It’s good for my future work .In one word,I’ve10.____
had a wonderful holiday.
4.
Nowadays it is not unusual for many students to find
part — time job. In the past winter holiday,I worked as a 1.____
waitress at a McDonald’s for a week. I used to keeping2_____
on asking parents for money, It was the first time that3.____
I have earned money,so I was quite excited.Now I can buy 4____
whichever I need without asking others for money.From my5._____
working experience.I found it’s a good preparation for the world6____
outside schools.Before this part—time job,I knew few about7._____
the things out of the class.I’ve got some working and social8._____
experience.l learn the value of money and the way getting9.______
on with others.It’s good for my future work .In one word,I’ve10.____
had a wonderful holiday.
jobskeepmyhadwhateverlittlethe ofa错误分析:1.名词的单复数的误用2.非谓语动词的误用3.代词的漏用4.时态的误用5.关联词的误用6,正确7.形容词的误用8.冠词的多用9.介词的漏用10.固定短语误用[6211]5.
Dear David,
I was so pleased to hear from you and was writing to tell1.___
you everything about my village.Quite a few changes have 2.___
taken place in my village,which runs a small river with3.____
a stone bridge over it .There are new _built houses along 4.___
the southern banks of the river.Beside the houses there is a 5.____
playground where the villagers often play the ball games6._____
after farm work .There is a new school is to the south of 7.____
the playground and a library to the east of the school. Also8.____
there are rice fields near the houses.A toy factory lie on the9.____
northern bank of the river.Over it is an orchard where all10.____
kinds of fruit trees are growing.5.
Dear David,
I was so pleased to hear from you and was writing to tell1.___
you everything about my village.Quite a few changes have 2.___
taken place in my village,which runs a small river with3.____
a stone bridge over it .There are new _built houses along 4.___
the southern banks of the river.Beside the houses there is a 5.____
playground where the villagers often play the ball games6._____
after farm work .There is a new school is to the south of 7.____
the playground and a library to the east of the school. Also8.____
there are rice fields near the houses.A toy factory lie on the9.____
northern bank of the river.Over it is an orchard where all10.____
kinds of fruit trees are growing.amsomethingthroughnewly-builtbankthethatwhichliesAbove错误分析:1.时态误用2.不定代词的误用3.介词的漏用4.形容词的误用5.名词的单复数的误用6.冠词的多用7.关联词的漏用8.正确9.主谓一致10.介词的误用6.
Dear John,
I know you want to find a work in Beijing.I read an 1.___
advertisement in today’s‘China Daily’,the biggest English2.____
newspaper in our country.The Beijing information corporation3.__
has an English course for children and adult.And they4.___
need native—English spoken teachers.What they prefer5.___
is an university degree in education or another related field,6.___
which you have.And a foreign expert certificate is also 7.___
required,too.I think you are the right person they want you8.___
If you are interesting, please call or write to the corporation9.___
direct or send you application to him through internet.10.____6.
Dear John,
I know you want to find a work in Beijing.I read an 1.___
advertisement in today’s‘China Daily’,the biggest English2.____
newspaper in our country.The Beijing information corporation3.__
has an English course for children and adult.And they4.___
need native—English spoken teachers.What they prefer5.___
is a university degree on education or another related field,6.___
which you have.And a foreign expert certificate is also 7.___
required,too.I think you are the right person they want you8.___
If you are interested, please call and write to the corporation9.___
direct or send you application to him through internet.10.____jobAadultsspeakinginalsoyouorthem错误分析:1.名词误用2.正确3.冠词的误用4.名词的单复数的误用5.非谓语动词的误用6.介词的误用 7.副词的多用8.代词的多用.9.连词的误用10.代词的误用