课件33张PPT。Welcome to This Class!NMET Specialized Revision on Proof-reading
高考英语专题复习之
短文改错
一 考点分布1.词法: 动词的时态、语态、非谓语动词及情态动词的用法(尤其是时态与非谓语动词);名词、代词的数和格;冠词的基本用法;形容词、副词的比较等级;主谓一致和其它的一致关系;连词、关系词的使用等。2.句法:简单句、复合句、否定句、疑问句、省略、替代等;转折、时间的顺序、数量的增减以及因果的倒置等。二 错误类型分析1. 漏词例1 I looked at the orange drink and decided I couldn’t face it, so I hid the glass behind a pile magazines. (NMET 2005 天津) 例2 The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me. (NMET 2000) of 二 错误类型分析1. 漏词例3 I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and…. (NMET 2005 全国卷III)
例4 My parents love me dearly of course and will do what they can make sure that I get a good education. (NMET 2001)
二 错误类型分析2.多词 例1 Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. (NMET 2000) 例2 But we don’t seem to get much time to talk about together. (NMET 2001) 二 错误类型分析2.多词 例3 I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (NMET 2000春) 例4 In some places you may borrow as many books as you want; in other places where you are limited to a certain number, of which some may be novels. 例5 Some students may also to save up for their college or future use. (NMET2005全国)
二 错误类型分析3.错词 1) 时态、语态误用 例1 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei…The time passes quickly.(NMET2002)
passed例2 I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door….
(NMET 2005 江西)
delighted二 错误类型分析3.错词
2)非谓语动词误用
例 I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. (NMET 2002)
watching二 错误类型分析3.错词3)主谓是否一致、主语和代词是否一致 例1 Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. (NMET 2000)
are例2 The Smiths did his best to make me at home. their二 错误类型分析3.错词
4)形容词和副词(比较等级)的误用
例1 We hope you’ll teach us a lot many songs in the future. (NMET 2005 山东)
例2 After learning the basic of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me (NMET 2000春)
practicalmore二 错误类型分析3.错词
5)连接词的误用 例1 The food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET 2002)
but例2 I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends that a great time I had. what二 错误类型分析3.错词
6) 思维定势的干扰
例 I also enjoyed the evening when we spent together
thatI also enjoyed the evening when we spent together
二 错误类型分析3.错词
7)句式结构中平行、并列关系混乱
例1 I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. (NMET 2005 辽宁)
feeling例2 As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(NMET2002)
visited二 错误类型分析3.错词
8)行文逻辑错误 例 …by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.
everyone三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
三 解题思路点拨1.注意语篇环境,侧重语法分析 三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
notwork三 解题思路点拨1.注意语篇环境,侧重语法分析 2. 注意若干一致性问题
Between the two buildings stand a hospital.
standsBoth of his parents were ill, so he sent for a doctor to see him. them三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
notworkadvantagesallowsistheir三 解题思路点拨3. 注意词的形式的误用
She looked angrily at the news on the radio. angry A 18-meter-long bridge will be built here.
an三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
notworkadvantagesallowsistheir三 解题思路点拨3. 注意词的形式的误用
She looked angrily at the news on the radio. angry A 18-meter-long bridge will be built here.
an4.注意从(分)句的连接是否恰当
He knows a lot about radio, and he is young. though三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
notworkadvantagesallowsistheir三 解题思路点拨5.注意行文逻辑、一般常识及固定搭配He hardly did physical exercise, so he became as strong as a horse. butIt’s two years since his husband died. her三 解题思路点拨 There are advantage for students to work 76. ____________
while studying at school. One of them was 77. ____________
that they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ____________
students working to earn money for their 79. ____________
own use. Earning their own money allow 80. ____________
them to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ____________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ____________
money or for permission to do things by 83 .____________
the money. Some students may also to save 84. ____________
up for our college or future use. 85. _____________
notworkadvantagesallowsistheirwith三 解题思路点拨5.注意行文逻辑、一般常识及固定搭配He hardly did physical exercise, so he became as strong as a horse. butIt’s two years since his husband died. her四 真题训练2004年高考浙江卷
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1. ________
hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2. ________
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3. ________
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4. ________
your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 5. ________
Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6. ________
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7. ________
the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8. ________
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9. ________
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10. _______
agesinterestingtheiraiswithButexists四 真题训练2005高考浙江卷
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and
watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just 1. __________
checked the results because I thought that was dull 2. __________
to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each 3. __________
other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the 4. __________
World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch 5. __________
his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this 6. __________
game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down 7. __________
to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my 8. __________
dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football 9. __________
is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! 10. _________
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watchittoHoweverstayedrunningexcitingbad 五 短文改错应注意的问题 1. 整句理解,分行搜索 2. 复读检查,前后贯通 3. 注意五个不改 单词拼写不改;大小写不改;次序错误不改(应从错词或少词方面去考虑);标点符号不改;可改可不改的不改。
五 短文改错应注意的问题4.注意解题规范 要严格按照示范规定的符号改错,切勿离开文后的10道横线在原文的字里行间勾勾划划、涂涂改改。要记住,“√”、“—”、“∧”、“”、分别代表正确无误、错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除,切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。如以下做法是错误的,在高考中是要扣分的:
Many people are like sports all over the world. 去掉are
Therefore, there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. Therefore 改为However
I got lost and had to ask a policeman for help. 正确
But how sleep do we actually need? 在sleep 前加much4.注意解题规范五 短文改错应注意的问题Wish You Success
in the Coming
Examinations!ByeBye!