泸州 短文改错[下学期]
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课件32张PPT。 短文改错Error Correction1、文章内容多涉及中学生日常生活和学习,且多为第一人称的记叙文。词数在120左右，句数在8—10之间。怎样做好短文改错一.试题特征2.设错方式有：正确，多词，缺词，
错词。
词法
句法
行文逻辑命
题
考
点 二.连词介词42002—2006高考考点分布5错误类型例析(1) 名词错误确定名词单复数的方法：①看修饰语。可数名词前若有数词及many, a lot of, quite a few, one of…, all the …等修饰时，要用复数。②主谓的一致。名词错误主要考查名词单复数错误。61. Is it true that some Germen will come to visit our school next week?
2. All the woman doctors in the hospital got a present on the eighth of March.
3.(05全国) But one and a half year
later, I now think English is fun to learn.
Germanswomenyears___7错误类型例析(2) 冠词错误短文改错对冠词的考查几乎年年都有，但多是基本用法如：不可数名词表泛指，前面多冠词；专有名词前多冠词；单数可数名词前缺冠词;不定冠词a, an与定冠词the的误用以及固定搭配中的冠词错误等。
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1. Many people agree that the knowledge of English is a must in international trade.
2. He failed but he wanted to try the second time.
3. How beautifully she sings! I’ve never heard the better voice. aaa9错误类型例析(3) 代词错误代词错误主要有人称代词格的误用，不定代词使用错误，作形式主语与形式宾语it的遗漏或误用以及代词所指代的内容与先行词在性和数方面不一致等。
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1. Mr. Johnson gave his friends, Mary and I, a tea party.
2. I have the same idea as his.
3. We got on the school bus and which took us straight to the People’s Park.
mehe/himit11错误类型例析(4) 形容词 副词错误包括形容词副词误用,如连系动词后或名词前应用形容词而用成了副词；修饰动词、形容词或副词、过去分词或整个句子时应用副词而却用成了形容词。其次就是他们的级的误用.
12I’m sure your illness is caused by something more seriously than overwork.
2. The mixture of coffee, milk, and sugar tastes differently from tea.
3. My hometown has taken on a new look. How great it has changed!
4. He listened to his heart and said there was nothing serious wrong with him. seriousdifferentgreatlyseriously13错误类型例析(5) 时态与语态错误时态错误：根据语境用错时态; 根据句子结构用错时态; 根据连词对称性原则用错时态.语态错误：是该用被动语态却用了主动语态或不能用于被动语态的词如 take place ,happen, occur, sell well, belong to, break out 等却用了被动语态。
141. Do you know what subjects they study while they were at college?
2. It was a long time since I saw Tom at my uncle’s and I don’t know where he’s been these months.
3. The ship hardly left the port when a terrible storm came.
studiedishad____kept4.(05江苏) My sister found a bird
on the roadside. We named him
Jack and keep him.5.(05安徽) After the drive,it was cost just over $2 to put the car back into perfect condition.foundnamed16错误类型例析(6) 非谓语动词错误主要是不定式符号to的多余与遗漏，动名词作主语和介词宾语时误用原形动词，现在分词与过去分词的误用等。
171. We must do everything we can help Lin Ping in his first year of teaching.
2. She did nothing but cried all day.
3. Jack was said to be made stay behind by his teacher after school yesterday. to(cry)to4.(05福建) I am looking forward to see you again in the near future.5.(04全国) I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.seeing_____given18错误类型例析(7) 连词错误 连词(conjunction)错误主要有并列连词and, ,or ,but, so的误用、固定搭配中的连词使用错误以及根据上下文的关系连词使用错误等。191. It is a very important examination but I can’t afford to fail it.
2. In some places you can borrow many books as you want.
3.(04辽宁) At first, I was worried
about my poor English. And when I
saw your smiling face, I felt better.
soas___but20错误类型例析(8) 冗言错误冗言错误是指受汉语的影响，句中用了多余的词，造成语义重复。21受汉语影响而产生的错误last night, next month, this year, one day, yesterday morning, tomorrow afternoon, three times ,etc.serve for the people, marry with him, make him as our monitor, follow after the teacher, return to home, on her way to there, go to upstairs ,enter into the room…
e.g. I won’t be able to come in this time.
221. I never knew that a ride down a river could be so much exciting.
3. I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.
4. Today I visited the Smiths ----- my first time visit to an American family. 9.惯用法主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配；一些固定句型及习惯搭配等。1.(04福建）We have a lot on common
and have a lot to talk about.__in2.(05江苏) We often played tricks on him.
We’d throw a coin as far as possibly._______possible3.The weather was so hot and we could not read much. __ that 1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；
2）以句为单位，细查语法;
3）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配；
4）由易到难, 各个击破;
5）验证答案，规范答题；
6）注意“三不改”：A、标点
B、纲外词（汉字注释词）
C、词序 . 解题步骤与方法答题要规范1、无错，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。2、多词：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。3、缺词：在缺词处加漏字符号（∧ ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。4、错词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正 后的词。There are advantage for students to work while 76. ________
studying at school. One of them was that 77. ________
they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ________
students working to earn money for their own 79. ________
use.Earning their own money allow them 80. ________
to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ________
money or for permission to do things by 83._________
the money.Some students may also to save 84.________
up for our college or future use. 85.________advantagesisworkallows^not√withtheir2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷）27 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 1._______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _____
was fine . It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3.______
the mountain . The three of them were very excited . As we 4.______
climbed the mountain , we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5._______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6.______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7.______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 8.______
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 9.______
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.______
head touched the pillow.
^a^when√usvisitedpicturespasseddownbutatHomeworkDo other exercises of
error correction.THANK YOUBye-bye2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（湖北卷）
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play . 76._____
All over the world men and woman , boys and girls 77._____
enjoy sports . Since long ago , many adults and
children called their friends together to spend hours , 78._____
even days play games.One of the reasons why people like 79._____
to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other 80._____
words , they help to keep people strong and feel good . 81._____
When people are playing games , they move a lot .
That is how sports are good activities for their 82._____
health .Having fun with their friends make them 83._____
happy .Many people enjoy sports by watching the 84._____
others play . In American big cities ,
thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball 85. _____
Games.______^_____________butwomenhaveplaying√feelingwhymakesbuy31
There was once a farmer worked very hard 1._____ every day. One day when he was hoeing in the 2._____ sunshine, he suddenly listened a low sound 3._____ “Peng!”. He turned and hurried to the tree. He found a rabbit dying. He took held of the 4._____ rabbit and was exciting. “What a rabbit! I’ll 5._____ have it to dinner!” Then he had a good idea, 6._____ “Why can’t I wait for more rabbits here? It’s cool under the tree.” So he dropped off his hoe and wait there. But day after day, there 7._______ had no more rabbits coming. What was worse, 8 _____ all the his crops were dead.The story tells 9._______ us that you want to get something, you must 10.____ work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”^who√ heardholdexcitedforwaitedwerethe^if2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(重庆卷)
It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our 76
neighbor had written, or try to see what mark he has 77
received without being permitted. It is good manners for 78
them to help each other if we have the same desire and 79
the teacher allows to it. In examinations and in certain 80
kinds of written work, it is dishonest and foolishly to 81
help or to ask help from others. When one student
does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not 82
agree to examination system, but at present 83
it is basically the only measure that the
teacher and the rest of the world can depend to 84
decide if or not each of us meets the requirement 85
____________________^_^
错词。
词法
句法
行文逻辑命
题
考
点 二.连词介词42002—2006高考考点分布5错误类型例析(1) 名词错误确定名词单复数的方法：①看修饰语。可数名词前若有数词及many, a lot of, quite a few, one of…, all the …等修饰时，要用复数。②主谓的一致。名词错误主要考查名词单复数错误。61. Is it true that some Germen will come to visit our school next week?
2. All the woman doctors in the hospital got a present on the eighth of March.
3.(05全国) But one and a half year
later, I now think English is fun to learn.
Germanswomenyears___7错误类型例析(2) 冠词错误短文改错对冠词的考查几乎年年都有，但多是基本用法如：不可数名词表泛指，前面多冠词；专有名词前多冠词；单数可数名词前缺冠词;不定冠词a, an与定冠词the的误用以及固定搭配中的冠词错误等。
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1. Many people agree that the knowledge of English is a must in international trade.
2. He failed but he wanted to try the second time.
3. How beautifully she sings! I’ve never heard the better voice. aaa9错误类型例析(3) 代词错误代词错误主要有人称代词格的误用，不定代词使用错误，作形式主语与形式宾语it的遗漏或误用以及代词所指代的内容与先行词在性和数方面不一致等。
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1. Mr. Johnson gave his friends, Mary and I, a tea party.
2. I have the same idea as his.
3. We got on the school bus and which took us straight to the People’s Park.
mehe/himit11错误类型例析(4) 形容词 副词错误包括形容词副词误用,如连系动词后或名词前应用形容词而用成了副词；修饰动词、形容词或副词、过去分词或整个句子时应用副词而却用成了形容词。其次就是他们的级的误用.
12I’m sure your illness is caused by something more seriously than overwork.
2. The mixture of coffee, milk, and sugar tastes differently from tea.
3. My hometown has taken on a new look. How great it has changed!
4. He listened to his heart and said there was nothing serious wrong with him. seriousdifferentgreatlyseriously13错误类型例析(5) 时态与语态错误时态错误：根据语境用错时态; 根据句子结构用错时态; 根据连词对称性原则用错时态.语态错误：是该用被动语态却用了主动语态或不能用于被动语态的词如 take place ,happen, occur, sell well, belong to, break out 等却用了被动语态。
141. Do you know what subjects they study while they were at college?
2. It was a long time since I saw Tom at my uncle’s and I don’t know where he’s been these months.
3. The ship hardly left the port when a terrible storm came.
studiedishad____kept4.(05江苏) My sister found a bird
on the roadside. We named him
Jack and keep him.5.(05安徽) After the drive,it was cost just over $2 to put the car back into perfect condition.foundnamed16错误类型例析(6) 非谓语动词错误主要是不定式符号to的多余与遗漏，动名词作主语和介词宾语时误用原形动词，现在分词与过去分词的误用等。
171. We must do everything we can help Lin Ping in his first year of teaching.
2. She did nothing but cried all day.
3. Jack was said to be made stay behind by his teacher after school yesterday. to(cry)to4.(05福建) I am looking forward to see you again in the near future.5.(04全国) I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.seeing_____given18错误类型例析(7) 连词错误 连词(conjunction)错误主要有并列连词and, ,or ,but, so的误用、固定搭配中的连词使用错误以及根据上下文的关系连词使用错误等。191. It is a very important examination but I can’t afford to fail it.
2. In some places you can borrow many books as you want.
3.(04辽宁) At first, I was worried
about my poor English. And when I
saw your smiling face, I felt better.
soas___but20错误类型例析(8) 冗言错误冗言错误是指受汉语的影响，句中用了多余的词，造成语义重复。21受汉语影响而产生的错误last night, next month, this year, one day, yesterday morning, tomorrow afternoon, three times ,etc.serve for the people, marry with him, make him as our monitor, follow after the teacher, return to home, on her way to there, go to upstairs ,enter into the room…
e.g. I won’t be able to come in this time.
221. I never knew that a ride down a river could be so much exciting.
3. I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.
4. Today I visited the Smiths ----- my first time visit to an American family. 9.惯用法主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配；一些固定句型及习惯搭配等。1.(04福建）We have a lot on common
and have a lot to talk about.__in2.(05江苏) We often played tricks on him.
We’d throw a coin as far as possibly._______possible3.The weather was so hot and we could not read much. __ that 1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；
2）以句为单位，细查语法;
3）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配；
4）由易到难, 各个击破;
5）验证答案，规范答题；
6）注意“三不改”：A、标点
B、纲外词（汉字注释词）
C、词序 . 解题步骤与方法答题要规范1、无错，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。2、多词：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。3、缺词：在缺词处加漏字符号（∧ ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。4、错词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正 后的词。There are advantage for students to work while 76. ________
studying at school. One of them was that 77. ________
they can earn money. For the most part, 78. ________
students working to earn money for their own 79. ________
use.Earning their own money allow them 80. ________
to spend on anything as if they please. 81. ________
They would have to ask their parents for 82. ________
money or for permission to do things by 83._________
the money.Some students may also to save 84.________
up for our college or future use. 85.________advantagesisworkallows^not√withtheir2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷）27 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 1._______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _____
was fine . It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3.______
the mountain . The three of them were very excited . As we 4.______
climbed the mountain , we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5._______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6.______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7.______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 8.______
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 9.______
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10.______
head touched the pillow.
^a^when√usvisitedpicturespasseddownbutatHomeworkDo other exercises of
error correction.THANK YOUBye-bye2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（湖北卷）
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play . 76._____
All over the world men and woman , boys and girls 77._____
enjoy sports . Since long ago , many adults and
children called their friends together to spend hours , 78._____
even days play games.One of the reasons why people like 79._____
to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other 80._____
words , they help to keep people strong and feel good . 81._____
When people are playing games , they move a lot .
That is how sports are good activities for their 82._____
health .Having fun with their friends make them 83._____
happy .Many people enjoy sports by watching the 84._____
others play . In American big cities ,
thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball 85. _____
Games.______^_____________butwomenhaveplaying√feelingwhymakesbuy31
There was once a farmer worked very hard 1._____ every day. One day when he was hoeing in the 2._____ sunshine, he suddenly listened a low sound 3._____ “Peng!”. He turned and hurried to the tree. He found a rabbit dying. He took held of the 4._____ rabbit and was exciting. “What a rabbit! I’ll 5._____ have it to dinner!” Then he had a good idea, 6._____ “Why can’t I wait for more rabbits here? It’s cool under the tree.” So he dropped off his hoe and wait there. But day after day, there 7._______ had no more rabbits coming. What was worse, 8 _____ all the his crops were dead.The story tells 9._______ us that you want to get something, you must 10.____ work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”^who√ heardholdexcitedforwaitedwerethe^if2005年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(重庆卷)
It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our 76
neighbor had written, or try to see what mark he has 77
received without being permitted. It is good manners for 78
them to help each other if we have the same desire and 79
the teacher allows to it. In examinations and in certain 80
kinds of written work, it is dishonest and foolishly to 81
help or to ask help from others. When one student
does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not 82
agree to examination system, but at present 83
it is basically the only measure that the
teacher and the rest of the world can depend to 84
decide if or not each of us meets the requirement 85
____________________^_^