module 4 unit 1 women of achievement reading 2[下学期]

课件23张PPT。NSEFC BOOK 4Unit 1 Women of achievementPeriod 3
Using languageBy Cai Xiaojia
from Hui Pu High School of Linhai 1PredictingA GOOD EXAMPLE
FOR MEWhat writing style?
Argumentative.
B. Descriptive.
C. Explanative.2BrainstormingA descriptive passage of a personappearancepersonal informationcharacterpersonalityachievementshobbieshabitsimportant storiescareermarriagefamilyeducation…3Skimmingappearancepersonal informationcharacter & personalityachievementshobbies & habitscareereducation4Scanningpersonal informationcareereducationLin Qiaozhi lived in the early 20th century.She had chosen not to have a family of her own.She had become a specialist in women’s diseases. It struck me like lightning how difficult it must have been for a woman to get a medical training so long ago when women’s education was always placed second to men’s.5Scanning It seemed that … traveling abroad to study and writing books and articles. One of them caught my eye. It was a small book explaining ... Three of Lin Qiaozhi’s achievements6Scanning writing books and articlesThree of Lin Qiaozhi’s achievements It was hard work and determination as well as her good nature that had got her into medical school. But it was not her success at university that had made her famous. It was her kindness and the consideration she showed to all he patients. 7Scanning writing books and articlesThree of Lin Qiaozhi’s achievements … got her into medical school … her success at university … famous She devoted her whole life to her patients. She made sure that about 50,000 babies were safely delivered to their mothers. hardworking, determined, kind, considerate, devoted, … 8RetellingA profile of Lin Qiaozhi9Name: Lin Qiaozhi (1901 --- 1983)
Career: A specialist in women’s diseases
Education: Medical school
(Beijing Union Medical College北京协和医学院)
Marriage status: Not have a family of her own
Achievements:
writing books and articles
hard work and determination got her into medical school; her kindness and the consideration made her famous
about 50,000 safely-delivered babies Sharing ideas10Is it worthwhile for her to give up her own life? Why or why not?
In addition, Thomas was kind and polite to everyone. He always tried to help people. …Writing strategy IWriting strategy I:
A good organization will make your writing clear and attractive. sociablepolite11Paragraph 1
Appearance
AppearanceCharacter / personalityWriting strategy IThe dominant impression means the main effect a person has on our feelings or senses.
整体印象, 主要的印象Thomas was very friendly and sociable. He smiled at every person who ….In addition, Thomas was kind and polite to everyone. He always tried to help when ….Supporting details Supporting details The dominant impressionsupporting details.12Writing strategy IIWriting strategy II: Also you’d better to try to use proper and impressive words to describe a person. Describing physical appearance:
Hair: long, short, loose, straight, curly, dark, grey
Face: round, square, pale, lovely
Forehead: high, low, wide, narrow, broad, bright
Eye: brown, blue, big, round, staring, sleepy
Nose: small, broad, wide, flat
Lip: thin, thick, red, pale
Build: skinny, slim, thin, fat, well-built, overweight, plump, chubby, frail
Describing character and personality:
friendly, sociable, humorous, kind, polite, hard-working, worried, cheerful, considerate, modest13Practice14curlystraightPracticeMr Bean is overweight, Mrs Bean is plump丰满的, and their son, Little Bean, is chubby小孩或年轻人圆圆胖胖的. However, all of them are energetic.Some supermodels eat so little that they are far too .
A. skinny B. frail C. fat D. plump
overweightplump丰满的151. He is a child who will talk to anyone.
A. polite B. modest C. worried D. sociable
2. It strikes me like a lightning that a great person indeed is always so that he won’t show off炫耀 their achievements.
A. kind B. modest C. friendly D. cheerful
3. He is of others’ feelings and tries his best not to break their hearts.
A. helpful B. lively C. determined D. consideratePractice16PracticePair work Describe one of your classmates, teachers or the persons you admire.
17Practice18 Useful expressions:
concern oneself with sth
devote one’s whole life to sth/doing spend … in doing
be determined to do
become a specialist in …
make … all worthwhile
inspire sb to do
It seems(ed) that …
It struck me like lightning …
… catch one’s eye
Try my best
to use them!?HomeworkWriting assignment1920Practice15A good example for me
Lin Qiaozhi, who lived in the early 20th century, was a specialist in women’s diseases. She was a short and skinny lady with grey hair, a bright forehead and beautiful staring eyes. Some Chinese-style clothes were what she always wore.
1.A. writer B. specialist
2.A. skinny B. plump
3.A. dark B. greyspecialistskinnygreyPractice16 Lin was devoted hardworking and determined. It was just hard work and determination that had got her into medical school. It struck me like lightning how difficult it must have been for her when women’s education was always placed second to men’s. After graduation, she devoted her whole life to her patients. Indeed, she led a very busy life.
determinationdevoted tostruck me like lightning placed
second toPractice17 In addition, Lin was kind and considerate. She always tried to help when her patients came to her. Besides, there was story after story of how Lin, tired after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family without pay. So it was her kindness and the consideration she showed to all her patients that made her famous. In additionconsideration story
after storykindness