Unit 5 writing[上学期]

课件21张PPT。Writing 人教修订版
高中一年级(上)
Unit 5Pre-writing The film is about a
13-year-old girl,
called Wei Minzhi,
who takes care of
the village school
when the teacher Mr. Gao, is away for
a month. She has to
make sure that all the
students stay in the
school. When one of
them runs away to the
big city, she follows him
and brings him back.The film has a
happy ending.
Minzhi finds Huike
and brings him
back to school,
together with the
people from the TV
station.I think the story gives us
hope. The film shows us
that people care for each
other. Even people in the
city will take care of
people in the village
when they know about
their problems.I like this film
because it is so
moving. I think
the ending of the
film is happy, but
you almost have
to cry.Explanation 1. Many people like this film not just
because the story itself is moving, but
also because most of the people in the
film use their real names and play
themselves．
许多人喜欢这部电影不仅因为故事本
身感人，而且因为电影中的人物用他们自己真名而且表演他们自己。
not just (only)...but also...并列连词，
意思是“不但……而且……”，连接两个
相同成分，也可连接两个分句。
e. g.
He likes not only English but also
maths．
他不仅喜欢英语，而且喜欢数学。 Not only you but also I am a teacher．
不仅你而且我是一名老师。
Not only does he work hard，but also
he is very clever．
他不仅学习认真，而且很聪明。
[注意]
①not only...but also...连接两个并列主
语，谓语动词和后面主语保持一致。 ②not only...but also...连接两个并列分
句，not only置于句首，通常用倒装结
构，也就是说，把not only引导的分句
中的助动词或be提到主语前面。
2. She gets the job because there is
nobody else in the village who can take it.
她获得这份工作是因为村子里没有其
他的人能胜任这份工作。 (1) who can take it 是一个定语从句，
修饰nobody else, 而且被in the village把
先行词和定语从句分开，who在这里引
导的是一个分隔定语从句。
e. g.
Do you remember the day ten years
ago when I visited you?
你记得十年前我来看你的那一天吗? 上句中的when I visited you就是一个分
隔定语从句，修饰先行词the day。
(2) else是个形容词, 意思是“其他的”，
通常放在疑问代词或不定代词之后。
e. g.
What else do you want?
你还要其他什么吗? Nobody else can do it．
没有其他的人能做这件事。
[注意] else放在不定代词之后，它们的
所有格，通常在else后加’s。
e. g.
My house is more expensive than
anyone else’s．
我的房子比其他任何人的房子贵。TipsThe story Comments on
different things
about the film Tell
the
story Tell the
actors
/actresses The ending
of the film
Opinion About
the whole filmDiscussionSentence patterns:
The film... is about...
I like / don’t like this film because...
The five heroes
I thought that the five heroes in the
play were worth us respecting. They led the Japanese enemies to the top of the wolf mountain. They helped the main army went away. Only the five heroes fight with the enemy, they used their local weapon to go against the enemy the modern weapon. But the five heroes didn’t be afraid of the Japanese soldiers. Enemy is very smart. They caught up with the five heroes very quickly; the five heroes was turned around by enemy, but all of them was so brave that they can fight with them for a long time. But a moment later, was died dawn. Though they also used the sharp stone to kill the soldier. So, the soldier went up step by step, at last, five heroes killed himself, the ending of story is very sad. They were exactly heroes. All in all, it’s worth us to learn.
Pride and Prejudice
Pride and Prejudice is the story of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, their five daughters, and the various romantic adventures
at their Hertfordshire residence of longbourn. Maybe, It has a good ending. Because Elizabeth Bennet. Jane Bennet who I liked in the story are had a happy life. The story of the film is good, like the clothes are beautiful, and the actors are good at acting, and has a lot of things. They are good in the film. The ending
of the film is like the story, it’s good.