课件39张PPT。 2006年浙江省英语高考 目标与复习教学 杭州市教育局教研室
周瑜1．??考试背景 新课程改革的进一步深入??
?减轻学生过重的学业负担
英语要真正成为交流的工具
浙江省2005年高考英语取消听力部分
2????? 命题思路 保稳定， 讲发展， 求创新
试卷要讲究具有时代性，实用性，创造性和开放性
05浙江试卷难度系数：0.62
全省平均分：93.41分，
（文）89.81分，
(理) 95.40分。
杭州市平均分：(文)98.9分，
(理)102分。
05浙江卷学生得分情况：05浙江卷各部分答题情况统计 3 2005年浙江省英语高考考试今年考试中值得特别重视的几个变化
1）单项填空增加了5题
20小题中有7题考词和短语，2题考交际
用语。
2）增加了阅读理解第二节
3）增加了单词拼写题
4）书面表达题的分值增加了5分What is the writer trying to do in the text?
What can the reader learn from the text?
How do you think the writer might describe her weekend?
What do we learn about the group?
Which of the following advertisements describe the Activity Center? 阅读理解第二节第二节：在第61至65题中，Susan, Mike, Jane, George 和Tom正计划参加一个夏令营。阅读下面六个夏令营的介绍选项（A、B、C、D、E和F），选出符合各人需求的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。选项中有一项是多余选项。
61. Susan, a biology student, has a particular interest in wildlife. She is curious about how people and wildlife can co-exist peacefully in an area. She would like to study the environment and wild animals. With information she gathers in the camp she hopes to complete her project on wildlife.
62. Mike is eager to stay away from the busy city life for a while. He and his classmates have decided to join a summer camp where they can learn outdoor skills and learn to solve problems all by themselves.
63. Jane is longing for a break from school life. She wants to try something different and exciting. She is especially interested in mountain biking and water sports.
64. George is a born leader and is popular among his classmates. As a chairman of the Student Club, he often organizes activities and games. He’d like to attend wilderness courses which offer youth a chance to learn, lead and succeed.
65. Tom is a sports fan and a lover of the outdoors. Besides water sports, he enjoys horse-racing and hiking. He would like to go to a camp which offers a great variety of sports. A
☆ CALIFORNIA: Log Cabin Wilderness Camp Getaway (L. A. Area Council, 233 Scout Way, Los Angeles, CA 90026; [213] 413-4400): Backpacking (背包徒步旅行) is the top activity at this camp, including classes in backpacking stove (火炉) operation, back country first aid, water purification (净化) , and map and compass skills. Summer’s almost here, and a summer camp near you provides piles of summer fun
Hot PlacesB
☆ WISCONSIN: Gardner Dam Scout Camp (Bay-Lakes Council, P. O. Box 267, Appleton, WI 54912; [920] 734-5705): Whitewater canoeing (激流独木舟运动) is offered if you want to have fun on the river. A 35-mile overnight mountain biking trip is for those who prefer to stay on dry land. The camp is for boys and girls 12-18. C
☆ KANSAS: Spanish Peaks Scout Camp (Santa Fe Trail Council, 1513 E. Fulton Terrace, Garden City, KS 67846; [620]275-51620): Rock climbing around the camp and mountain climbing, including an attempt of topping East Spanish Peak. Join us and meet new friends and learn new activities. D
☆ IDAHO: Camp Aspen Ridge (Trapper Paths Council, 1200 East 5400 South, South Ogden, UT 84403; [801] 479-5460): Horseback riding and hillwalking are popular on the paths. Swimming, canoeing, rowing and fishing activities are offered on the lake. Learn about the culture and have fun! E
☆ MORTH CAROLINA: Camp Bud Schiele (Piedmont Council, 1222 E. Franklin Blvd., Gastonia, NC 28053; [704]864-2694): Learn about the environment of the area while taking trips deep into the woods. Then spend Friday testing what you’ve learned against other groups. Activities are in some of the most untouched wilderness areas across the state.
F
☆ MAINE: Camp Roosevelt (Katahdin Area Council, Bangor, ME 04402; [207]866-2241): The log cabin dining house was built in 1929 and offers good camp food. Once you get your fill, take on the camp’s Leaders Today program, which will have you climbing, jumping and working your way to better leadership skills. 解题思路抓住主题
收集主要信息
鉴别信息?
61. wildlife; environment;
62. outdoor skills; solve problems by themselves;
63. mountain biking; water sports
64. leader; offer youth a chance to learn, lead and succeed
65. horse-racing and hiking; a variety of sports
Key: 61. E 62. A 63. B 64. F 65. D
第一节??????? 单词拼写 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
66. The telephone rang, and he answered it i_________ .
67. Zhejiang is f_________ for tea and silk.
68. Cabbage, carrots, and tomatoes are my favorite v_________.
69. Pauline had a ring on her f_________, so I guessed she was married.
70. The article was w_________ in German and translated into Chinese.
71. Martin i_________ me to the New Year’s party and introduced me to his friends.
72. The rain c_________ for days, so we could not go out to play.
73. Fill in the form with your name, home a_________, and phone number.
74. Modern m_________ has cured many diseases that used to kill many people.
75. Our next-door n_________ says she’ll look after out cat while we’re away.mmediatelyamousPart 1 informative words
1.It is going to rain. You'd better take an u__________ with you.
2.At the 14th Asian Games, Wang Nan was so c_________ that she was sure she would win.
3.Everyone knows b__________ is the panda's favorite food.
4. This digital camera is too expensive, and I can't a______ to buy it.
5.My f__________ subject is English. I like it very much.
6.Man-made s__________ have been sent up into space by many countries. mbrellaonfidentambooffordavoriteatellitesPart 2 phrase
I beg your p__________ , I can't agree with you.
Jim made up his m__________ to stay with his parents.
To my s__________ , he finished the work in only one hour.
I u_________ to go the cinema, but I never have the time now.
ardonindurprisesedPart 3 structure words
1.The work is very difficult. H__________, he will never give it up.
2. I love sports, e__________ playing basketball.
3.I don’t want to go, b , I’m tired.
4.E you must improve your work or I shall dismiss you.
5. I’m a student w he is a worker.
oweverspeciallyesidesitherhile 正确变形
1.I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(having) 动词的各种变化形式
2.They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (questions)?考查名词的单复数变化
3.And I can’t forget the good food you asked for I. (me)?
考查代词的各种形式
4.Police cars hurried to the taller building in New York.
(tallest) 考查形容词、副词的各种用法
5.A player’s native language is not importance.（important） 名词 ←→ 形容词 形容词 ←→ 副词考查词性的变化
Part 5
1.The earth is one of the p______.
2.My teacher has a lot of e__________ of teaching, and teaches us so well.
名词的单复数lanetsxperience
1.The injured men were sent to a n ___ hospital.
There was a restaurant n ____ the cinema.
2.His uncle was an o in the army.
His o is on the second floor.
The president and the secretary of state are government o .
In Zaire there are four o languages.
Part 6相近相似词的词性词义earbyearfficerfficefficialsfficialPart 7
1.A_________ comes after summer.
2.Some American children posted some C______ cards to us.
3.She joined the Young P_______at the age of eight.
首字母大写utumnhristmasioneerPart 8
1.Our teacher has o_______ a class trip to the Great Wall.
2.President Lincoln was m________ in a theatre in 1865.
3.Old people even die from p______ air.
动词的时态语态rganisedurderedollutedPROOF-READING (1)05年高考卷的改错题是一篇有关看球赛的短文，话题贴近考生的生活，考题涉及到6项语法点，要求考生从篇章着手，把握文章内容，着重看句子的结构是否完整、统一，习惯用法、固定搭配是否正确，上下文逻辑是否合理等。
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and
watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just 76. __watch__
checked the results because I thought that was dull 77. ____it___
to watch a game in which players kicked a ball ∧each 78.___to____
other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the 79. _However
World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch 80. __stayed__
his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this 81. ____√___
game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down 82. _running_
to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my 83. __exciting_
dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football 84. ____for___
is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! 85. ___bad___PROOF-READING (2)这一大题历来是考生感到困难重重，今年的题目于去年相比，难度有所下降。
PROOF-READING (4) 注意点
1. 熟悉、掌握最基本的语法
2. 熟悉、掌握最基本的句型
3. 熟悉、掌握最基本的词语
4. 调整答题的心理
5. 严格答题的规矩WRITING (1)05年写作题改变了过去试卷看图写作或仅按拟定提纲写作的形式，要求考生按照拟定提纲向外国友人介绍中国学生过生日的通常方式；除此之外，还要求考生发表对过生日其他有意义方式的建议与看法。这样做使考题具有一定的开放性，优秀考生有了发挥的余地；同时，也使考生产出语篇的语言功能和句式更具多样性，从而增强了试题的区分度。
第三节：书面表达 （满分30分）
你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：
一、通常方式
1. 生日聚会
2. 生日礼物
3. 生日祝福
二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由
﹡词数：100-120
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
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注意点
词汇
语法
语篇
文化 复习教学中应该注意的几个问题a.?课堂教学中教学目标要明确，教学过程要有层次。
b.?课堂教学中要注重培养学生的听说读 写的综合能力。
c.? 精选试题，集体备课，教师讲解要到位。
课件20张PPT。高考英语基础知识复习
高一部分（Unit18~Unit22）
主讲人：杨克富
一、单词拼写：
1. My brother enjoys c__________ stamps.
2. There is a saying that ten minutes’ performance on the s_______ needs ten years’ hard work.
3. China has abolished the a___________ tax, which dates back to 600 BC.
4. I don’t want to d_______ too much on my parents.
5. Shanghai is preparing to build a Disneyland, which will greatly improve the city’s a_________ to domestic (国内的) travelers.
ollectingtagegriculturalependttraction 6. — Would you like me to help you with the box?
— No, thanks. I can m________ it myself.
7. The c_________ government has approved the project that is to build a maglev railway between Hangzhou and Shanghai.
8. The boy has a good sense of h_________, so he is popular with his companions.
9. To build harmonious society is the main f______ of attention at the annual NPC session concluded last week.
10. Nowadays, mainland consumers can enjoy different kinds of fruits i_________ from Taiwan Island.
anageentralumourocusmported二、语法复习（it 的用法；V. ing 的用法）
1. The doctor advised Vera strongly that she should take a holiday, but ________ didn’t help.(05全国卷)
A. it B. she C. which D. he
2. The Foreign Minister said, “______our hope that the two sides will work towards peace.”(04北京卷)
A. This is B. There is
C. That is D. It is
3. I like ________ in the autumn when the weather is clear and bright. (04全国卷)
A. this B. that C. it D. one
4. It is what you do rather than what you say _______ matters. (05天津卷)
A. that B. what C. which D. this
课堂练习（一）
① We need a new cupboard for the kitchen. So Peter made ________ from some wood we had. (04全国卷)
A. it B. one C. himself D. another
② — Did Jack come back early last night?
— Yes, it was not yet eight o’clock _________ he arrived home. (05福建卷)
A. before B. when C. that D. until
③ It was some time _______ we realized the truth.
(05山东卷)
A. when B. until C. since D. before
④ It is near the place _______ there is a tower _______ we flew kites last week.
A. where; where B. where; that
C. that; where D. that; that
5. _______ is a good form of exercise for both young and old. (92全国卷)
A. The walk B. Walking
C. To walk D. Walk
6. __________ the meeting himself gave them a great deal of encouragement. (03上海卷)
A. The president will attend
B.The president to attend
C. The president attend
D. The president’s attending
7. I really appreciate ___________ to relax with you on this nice island.
A. to have had time B. having time C. to have time D. to having time
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类似于appreciate用法的动词：
课堂练习（二）
2?????? Which do you enjoy _______ your weekend, swimming or fishing?
A. spending B. being spent
C. spend D.to spend
voiddmitcknowledgedvocatenjoyinishindenyesistisk8. He got up early, ___________ to catch the train.
A. to hope B. hoping
C. hope D. hoped
9. _________ in the queue for half an hour, Tom suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home. (04北京卷)
A. To wait B. Have waited
C. Having waited D. To have waited
课堂练习（三）
Goodbye _______, the little boy as well as his classmates left school and went home happily.
A. said B. saying
C. to be said D. to say
10. ____________ straight on and you’ll see a church. You won’t miss it. (04湖北卷)
A. Go B. Going
C. If you go D. When going
11. __________ again and again, but he didn’t tell us the truth.
A. He was asked B. Having been asked C. Asking D. Though he was asked
12. Finding her car stolen, ______________.
A. a policeman was asked to help
B. the area was searching completely
C. it was hooked for everywhere
D. she hurried to a policeman for help 13. ________ you the truth, I don’t like the way you speak to me. A. Tell B. To tell C. Told D. Telling 常见的插入语tell the truthbegin withmake matters
worsebe honestspeakingjudging三、语言点复习
1. I couldn’t ____________. The line was busy. (05浙江卷)
A. go by B. go around
C. get in D. get through
2. Most people __________ a TV set as essential piece of furniture.
A. look at B. look on
C. look over D. look about词组归纳：把……看作（称作）
regard…as… treat…as…
think of…as… consider…as …
refer to…as…(高三Unit 2)
count…as…(高三Unit 11)3. Your performance in the driving test didn’t reach the required standard —________, you failed.
A. in the end B. after all
C. in other words D. at the same time
4. High technology __________ traditional methods helps the future agriculture.
A. and B. as well as C. or D. but also
5. social attention should be paid ________ our earth from _________.
A. to prevent; being polluted
B. to prevent; polluting
C. to preventing; being polluted
D. to preventing ; polluted类似于pay attention to 的短语（to 为介词）pay attention tolook forward todevote… tobe used tolead toturn to
课堂练习（四）
① The boy devoted all his free time he had __________ others.
A. to help B. helped
C. to helping D. help
② Every minute is made full ________ of ________ our lessons well.
A. used ; studying B. use ; studying C. use ; to study D. used ; to study
③ The country life he was used to __________ greatly in the past two decades.
A. change B. has changed C. changing D. having changed
6. ___________ I agree with you, I don’t believe that your way is the best.
A. Once B. While C. When D. As
7. — Do you mind if I __________ the mistakes in your composition?
— No, of course not.
A. pick up B. pick out
C. point out D. put out
Pick up
Would you please pick up the book on the floor?
2. We’re able to pick up the BBC World Service?
3. She picked up the Wenzhou dialect(方言) when she was working in Wenzhou.
4. I’ll pick you up at five o’clock.捡起接收 无意中学会开车接人Pick out
1. She was picked out from dozens of applicants for the job.
2. See if you can pick me out in the photo
Put out
1.The factory puts out 20 cars a day .
2.Firefighter quickly put the fire out.
3.Her new book will be put out next month.扑灭认出来生产精心挑选出版8. You’d better take something to read when you go to see the doctor _________ you have to wait.
A. even if B. in case
C. as if D. in order
9. You’ll find the wine of high _________. It tastes good and sells well.
A. quality B. wealth C. value D. price
10. The meeting ____________ a few weeks after he had arrived from America.
A. occurred B. was happened C. was taken place D. was occurred
课堂练习（五）
① The pencil _________ well.
A. writes B. is written C. writing D. write
② The bike requires ___________.
A. being repaired B. repairing C. to repair D. repaired
③ — What do you think of the book?
— Oh, excellent. It’s worth _________ a second time.
A. to read B. to be read
C. reading D. being read
④ — Do you like the material?
— Yes, it _______ very soft.
A. is feeling B. felt C. feels D. is felt
⑤ ___________ nice, the food was sold out soon.
A. Tasted B. Tasting C. To taste D. Being tastedThank you!
Goodbye !课件10张PPT。Welcome to my classBy Spring in Wenzhou No.21 Middle SchoolReading comprehension1、直接信息题(questions of details)
2、猜测词义题(words in context)
3、主旨归纳题(main idea)
4、推理判断题(questions of inference)
Reading ComprehensionHow to deal with
Questions of inference1. We can infer(推断）from the passage that _ .
2.The story suggests(暗示）that _______ .
3.We can conclude(得出结论）from the passage that ____ .
4.Which of the following might / probably happened later ?
5.From the passage we can tell / learn ______ .
6.The writer of the passage considers it _______ .
7. Which of the following indicates / implies____?Question forms:1. Did you ever hear a strange sound coming from the wall? Did it sound like a clock? If so, it may have been made by a beetle. Long ago people thought the ticking meant that someone was about to die. Thus the beetle is called "the deathwatch beetle."
The sound of this beetle ________.
A. pleased people. B. surprised people. C. frightened people. D. excited people.Practice:2. It is said that people should take a lesson from the clock. The clock passes the time by keeping its hands busy. People who do what the clock does also pass the time by keeping their hands busy and not by sleeping the time away.
You can tell that busy people:______
A. act like clocks. B. sleep the time away. C. don't do what clocks do. D. don't have hands.3. It is fun to turn over a big rock on the beach. Make sure you turn the rock back to the position it was in after you moved it. If you don’t turn it back over, all the sea animals under it or clinging to（依附）the underside will die.
You can tell that rocks ________.
A. hurt sea animals B. protect sea animals
C. won’t be found on beaches D. can’t be found on beachesSteps:
1. Study the questions & understand them.
2. Find out key words or sentences according to them & analyse them carefully.
3. Delete the impossible choices if necessary.
4. Judge the remaining choices & make a choice that you think is the best.Homework:
Do other four passages on P.3-4 on the paper.Welcome to our classThank you for your attention
good-bye!课件44张PPT。2006年高考复习漫谈
----温州中学
王缪田06年浙江省考试说明：考试内容与要求：
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，第一节：语法和词汇知识，共20小题； 每小题1分，满分20分（新增5分）；第二节：完形填空，共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）第二部分：阅读理解（共25小题，每小题2分，满分50分。这部分分两个小节，第一小节：传统的阅读理解题，第二小节任务型阅读。（新增10分））
第三部分：写作，满分50分（共三节，第一节：单词拼写，共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分（新增10分）；第二节：短文改错，共10小题， 每小题1分，满分10分；第三节：书面表达，满分30分（新增5分）；）
词汇表中只列出英语单词，而没有汉语和词性的注解（只注明了：标*的词仅需要知道其汉语意思。），说明词汇将比较灵活的出现在试卷中。分析04、05浙江卷的各大题型
2005年高考英语试题的总体特征
1）紧扣考试大纲，稳中求变，继续坚持英语高考改革的总体方向。
文章C
52. How is the text organized?
A. Topic－Argument－Explanation
B. Opinion－Discussion－Description
C. Main idea―Comparison―Supporting examples
D. Introduction―Supporting examples―Conclusion 2）考查知识的同时，注重考查能力，基础知识与应用能力相辅相成。
12. —Are you still busy?
—Yes , I my work , and it won’t take long .
A. just finish
B. am just finishing
C. have just finished
D. am just going to finish
3）试卷选材贴近生活，贴近时代，贴近考生 。 4）试卷难度降低，突出“减负”导向。
浙江省近年高考英语的难度系数应对策略
紧抓基础不可动摇，模糊概念及时澄清。
科学安排合理复习，足量训练不可缺少。
解题策略适时点拨，树立信心分分必争。单选题解题技巧一、命题特点：
综观近几年的高考英语试题，单项填空题的命题有如下特点：
1．进一步强化语境因素，增加了语法知识与语言环境的综合运用，体现了高考试题“注重语境，强调运用”的指导思想。2．涉及知识面广，涵盖了交际、时态、语态、冠词、形容词、副词、动词（词组）、非谓语动词、定语从句以及状语从句等。其中动词一直是单项填空题考查的重点。
3．总体难度略有下降，基本剔除了以前的偏题、怪题。
4．语境设置更为真实、自然、巧妙。词汇、语法知识越考越活。 二、解题技巧：
1．注意分析句子结构，确定选择方向。
一个句子所使用的标点符号、有无连词，往往起着决定性的作用；而插入语、省略语等，在一定程度上干扰考生的思维。请比较以下各题：1.George Orwell, _______ was Eric Arthur, wrote many political novels and essays. （2004北京第26题）
A. the real name
B. what his real name
C. his real name
D. whose real name 2.The largest collection ever found in England was one of about 200,000 silver pennies, all of ________ over 600 years old.
A. them B. which
C. it D. that3.If you are planning to spend your money having fun this week, better ______ it—you’ve got some big bills coming. A. forget B. forgot
C. forgetting D. to forget 4. Try hard to make what the teachers teach _______, and you will make rapid progress in your study.
A. you B. yours
C. yourself D. yourselves2．认真分析语境，准确理解和把握信息。
在单项填空中，一些词或词组常常含有某个
特定的信息，而这些信息往往对分析问题、
解决问题起着暗示作用。1.---- You haven't lost the ticket, have you?
---- _______. I know it's not easy to get another one at the moment.
I hope not B. Yes, I have
C. I hope so D. Yes, I’m afraid so2.Everyone was on time for the meeting -- Chris, who's usually ten minutes late for everything.
A. but B. only
C. even D. yet3. --- Sorry to have interrupted you. Please go on.
---- Where was I?
--- You ______ you didn't like your father's job.
had said B. said
C. were saying D. had been saying
4.–He proved himself a true gentleman and the beauty of his _____ was seen as its best when he worked with others.
A. temper B. appearance
C. talent D. character
5.---Father, you promised!
---Well. _____. But it was you who didn’t keep your word first.
A. so was I B. so did I
C. so I was D. so I did 3．正确理解句意，避免定势思维。
在学习过程中，尤其是复习阶段，教师往往就一些常见的、重要的词、词组及句型加以反复强调，以加深学生的印象，学生因此而可能形成思维的定势。1.We're going to ______ with some friends for a picnic. Would you like to join us?
（2004北京春季第27题）
get in B. get over
C. get along D. get together2. ---I can't find Mr. Smith. Where did you meet him this morning?
---- It was in the hotel ______ he stayed.
where B. which
C. the one D. that3. --Do you smoke?
--______. It is 2 years since I smoked.
No, I don’t. B. Yes, I do.
C. Only a little. D. Not too much4. ______ more about university courses,
call 0577-88229988.
A. To find out B. Find out
C. Finding out D. Having found out 4．排除母语干扰，规范英语表达。
英汉两种语言在表达上存在很大的差异，考生很可能会用汉语的思维方式去认识和解决英语中的问题，掉入命题人设置的陷阱。1.—Were all the three people in the car injured in the accident?
—No,_ only the two passengers who got hurt.
A. it was B. there was
C. there were D. there had2.---- Excuse me, ________?
---- That's $35.76 altogether , madam.
how much is the meal we've had
B. but can I take your order
C. could I have the bill, please
D. would you please take the money3._________, tears came to his eyes.
Reading the letter
B. He was reading the letter
C. When he was reading the letter
D. The letter was being read总之，高考单项填空题虽说只有20个小题，但是考查内容涉及面广，并突出了综合性和语境化的特点。解题时，应结合语境，灵活使用语法、词汇知识，透过现象看本质，从而达到分析问题和解决问题的最终目的。高考阅读理解
In the course of working my way through school,
I took many jobs I would rather forget……The
work was hard; the pay was poor, and most of all,
the working conditions were terrible.
First of all, the job made huge demands of my
strength. For ten hours a night, I took boxes that
rolled down a metal track and piled them onto a
truck…….
I would not have minded the difficulty of the
work so much if the pay had not been so poor……
But even more than the low pay, what made me
unhappy was the working conditions……I stayed on the job for 5 months, all the while
hating the difficulties of the work, the poor money
and the conditions under which I worked….
51. What is the subject discussed in the text?
A. The writer’s unhappy school life.
B. The writer’s eagerness to earn money.
C. The worker’s experience as a full-time worker.
D. The writer’s hard work in an apple plant.
52. How is the text organized?
A. Topic-Argument-Explanation
B. Opinion-Discussion-Description
C. Main idea-Comparison-Supporting examples
D. Introduction-Supporting examples-Conclusion高考书面表达分析05浙江卷高考英语书面表达区间得分率高考书面表达学生写作实例及专家评分
Sample One
5 points
Dear bill:
I hear to you we are want know Chinese Students’ birthday about tings. I am very happy to tell you, Chinese students can hold a birstday party for yourself. Your classmates buy some parsents to you while they say: “Happy bristday to you.” You say, “Thank you!” You and your friend sing the song, play games on the your party, you can feel very happy at today, because you have one year and your age, you have many friends.
I think Chinese Students bristday party is very interesting, I hope you like it.
Your friend
2005.6.8Sample Two
12 points
Chinese people have kinds of way for congratulation birthday. Usually, they have a party and invent their friends. They are very happy in this party. Then, these friends send them somethings for birthday. These things with some best wish from those friends to them. For example, a friends send a song of “happy birthday to you”.
But I think this way is not best. I have a batter way for congratulation. I think we should not congratulation birthday with friends, we should congratulation birthday with may parents are better then friends. Sample Three
17 points
Chinese Birsday
First let me show you something about the Chinese birsday. Usually it included three parts; party, gift and good regards. On the birsday. We often wear our favorite clothes, which make us very happy. We also will orgnise a birsday party, in the evening. At the party, we’ll prepare a lots of delicious foods, especially the birsday cake. Then we will eat the cake. We sing and dance together. At last, we’ll take the gift to the person who born on that day. In the gift there will be a card, on which including our best wishes. Sample Four
24 points
We Chinese students usually celebrate our birthdays by having parties, sending birthday gifts as will as sending good regards.
We think those can express our wishes properly. What’s more, they are good methods which can let us get along well with each other.
Of course, there are more meaningful ways for us to celebrate our birthdays. Take sports for example , we can get together to climb hill, go swimming and so on to enjoy ourselves during our birthdays with our best friends. In our opinions, doing sports not only can bring us valuable memories, but can be good for our health. Sample Five
29 points
In China, the most common way to celebrate a birthday is to hold party. The birthday person usually invites some classmates and other friends to the party in which his family members and friends will get together and have a good time. A big cake with candles on it is often seen and the birthday song is sung on the occasion. People who are invited will bring a gift as well as their best wishes.
However, I think there is another way to make a birthday celebration more meaningful, to do a good deed for mothers. We can help them cooking or cleaning. Although this won’t help them much, we at least show our love for them. If a small action will make them happy, why not do it? 反思高中英语写作教学的弊端 重“成品”轻“过程”
重“准确性”轻“流利性”
重“应试”轻“技能”
重“数量”轻“质量”提高写作教学成效的应对策略 写作技能的提高
一、加强平时“书面表达”的训练力度 ,培养写作中的步骤意识、思考意识和提高意识 。
二、采用灵活多样的形式加强对自己写作的基本知识和基本技能的训练。 具体的操作规程 ---学生集体或小组讨论（Brainstorming）
---写段落提纲（Planning）
---写出初稿（Writing the first draft）
---小组合作讨论（Peer writing）
---修改文稿（Proof writing）
----教师反馈（Teacher’s comment）
----完成定稿（Publishing） 三、切实加强对写作的总结，通过模仿提高写作质量。 四、学生要养成有意识积累一些非常地道、非常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型并有意识地用于自己的习作中。
