写作部分(浙江省宁波市鄞县)

课件23张PPT。If it were my birthday today,do you have any suggestions how I celebrate it?Do you have any suggestions how he / she should celebrate the birthday?你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你写一篇相关短文给他。Make an outline of the writing1. How do we often celebrate the birthday:Birthday party
Birthday presents
Birthday wishes…2. My own opinions about a better way of celebrating the birthday and the reasons.Select appropriate words and sentence patternsWe often have a birthday party to celebrate it.We get some gifts and best wishes from our friends . We often have a big meal during the party.We can do something more meaningful to celebrate our birthday.We often wish something nice would come true in real life.Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in various ways.Do you still remember how to make a passage read well to get a high score in an exam?第五档（很好）
-----覆盖所有内容要点。
-----应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
-----语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
-----有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。have a party :hold / give / arrange a partyplay happily:enjoy oneself / have a good( wonderful ) time / have fun / good wish:best / nice / sincere wisheshave a big meal:enjoy a delicious meal,
feast sb. on …I have a good idea that we can celebrate the birthday….A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me that...A good idea leaped into my mind that...I came up with a good idea that...Because of … it is good to our growing up.Owing to … it does a great deal of good to our growing up.Due to … we do benefit a lot from it. Thanks to … it has a positive effect on our growing up.We should try to make the birthday….we should make greatest efforts /
do our best / try every means to / do as much as we can to... I chat with my friends happily and I have a wonderful time.I have a wonderful time chatting with my friends. My friends often send me some good wishes and they will give me some nice gifts.I can receive not only good wishes but also nice gifts from my friends..I can receive good wishes as well as nice gifts from my friends.Not only can I receive good wishes but also nice gifts from my friends. I am happy to get together with my friends and we chat, sing and dance.I am happy to get together with my friends, chatting, singing and dancing. Birthday is an important day in our life and we often celebrate it in various ways.As an important day in our life, birthday is often celebrated in various ways.Birthday is an important day in our life, which is often celebrated in various ways.Birthday is such an important day in our life that we often celebrate it in various ways.Make changes about the details and combine themWe often have a birthday party .
We invite some friends to share the happiness with us together.We can get many beautiful birthday presents from our friends. Our friends will send us their best wishes.Our parents will often make a special meal for us.We sing and dance at the party .We will enjoy ourselves very much on our birthday.The party often gives us a good memory.We can celebrate our birthday in a more meaningful way.We can cook a big meal for our parents..We can show thanks to them.In order to share the happiness with our friends, we often hold a birthday party to celebrate it, at which we get together to have fun, drinking, singing and dancing.We usually receive nice gifts as well as sincere wishes from our friends, and our parents often feast us on a big meal , all of which leaves us a good memory.Birthday can be celebrated in a more meaningful way. We can cook a delicious meal for our parents to express our thanks to them in return for their love. And only in this way can we have a really wonderful and meaningful birthday.make a complete passageChinese students celebrate their birthdays in a variety of ways, __________ the most common one is to hold a birthday, during which many friends will be invited to get together to have fun, drinking, singing and dancing. __________, we usually receive nice gifts as well as sincere wishes from our friends. _________ our parents often prepare a big meal for us to show their love. ____________ birthday celebration is one of the important activities in our life, it can be done in a more meaningful way. ____________, we can cook a delicious meal for our parents to express our thanks in return for their love. whileBesidesWhileSinceFor exampleHave a careful check to avoid mistakesChinese students celebrate the birthday by different ways. In order to have a wonderful birthday, a party will often hold. And we will welcome some of the best friends to go to the party. And then, they will dance and sing together so that they all have a great fun. At the same time, our parents will provide us a delicious meal to show us their love. And we can also accept some nice wish from all of them. But have a more meaningful birthday is that I want to do now. It is often a big waste to buy some gifts to friends. It also made our parents boring. So why not to celebrate our birthday by sending some beautiful flowers to our parents to show them our love? We must have a better birthday by doing so.Have a careful check to avoid mistakesChinese students celebrate the birthday by different ways. In order to have a wonderful birthday, a party will often hold. And we will welcome some of the best friends to go to the party. And then, they will dance and sing together so that they all have a great fun. At the same time, our parents will provide us a delicious meal to show us their love. And we can also accept some nice wish from all of them.
But have a more meaningful birthday is that I want to do now. It is often a big waste to buy some gifts to friends. And it also made our parents boring. So why not to celebrate our birthday by sending some beautiful flowers to our parents to show them our love? We must have a better birthday by doing so.Keep in mind the following steps:Make an outline of the writing.Select appropriate words and sentence patterns.Make changes about the details and combine them .make a complete passage.Have a careful check to avoid mistakes.老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。 随着社会的进步与发展，越来越多的人开始拥有了轿车，但是对此，人们看法各异。请你谈谈你对这一现象的看法。I. My feelings about accepting the new task.II. The right fun_ction of the wallpaper and how it can attract the others’ attention.III. My detailed plans to reach the goal.A possible outlineI. Raise the question.II. Arguments : pros and consIII. My own opinion and suggestionsA possible outlineTHANKS