写作指导与训练[上学期]
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课件17张PPT。泗阳县人民中学 马广帮写作指导与训练注意审题 确定要点
扩展要点 连句成篇I.写英语书面表达首先要注意以下几点：1. 标题 title
2. 主题句 topic sentence
3. 扩展句 develop sentences
4. 总结句（作者态度） conclusionII.步骤1.仔细阅读写作要求及注意事项
2.确定格式题材及基本要求
3.列出要点 列出重要词组及句型
4.丰富要点,将句子补充完整,打好草稿
5.检查草稿，认真写到试卷上（横三齐，竖平行）并且复查一遍
III.Writing suggestions1. main idea
2. the tense
3. the person
4. key points
5. sentence structures
6. a passage基本句子结构1.主系表
They are busy.
2.主+V.
She cried.
3.主+动+宾
She studies English.
4.主+动+宾+宾补
We asked her to come back.
5.主+动+间宾+直宾
Mum bought me a new MP4.
要领主系表
主谓（宾）
主语加谓语
加上间直宾
若有宾语补足语
紧把宾语跟Practise下面六幅图描述了你班一月五日去河上滑冰的情况。请根据图中的内容用英语写一篇以an unforgettable experience 为 题的短文。
要求：
1.短文要包括所有图画的内容，可稍增减细节，使短文通顺连贯。
2.词数100字左右。
老师，快！我小明小心张老师，您12 012 0审 图1.go skating
2.warn Xiao Ming to take care
3.slip into the river
call teacher for help
4. jump into the river to save Xiao Ming
5.be saved and be sent to hospital
6.express their thanks to Mr.Zhang扩词成句1.go skating
All my classmates went skating on the river.Mr.Zhang told us to be careful.
2. warn Xiao Ming to take care
While skating,I suddenly noticed something unusual.The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care,the ice broke and he slipped into the water.
3. call teacher for help I called my teacher for help4. jump into the river to save Xiao Ming
He heared my cry and Mr. Zhang rushed over and jumped into the water to save Xiao Ming,who was struggling.
5.be saved and be sent to hospital
Xiao Ming was saved and the doctors arrived and he was sent to hospital.
6.express their thanks to Mr.Zhang
Xiao Ming’s parents came and expressed their thanks to Mr. Zhang正确使用连接词1.表时间顺序
First/firstly ,second/secondly…
then,after that,meanwhile,later ,
in the end,finally
2.表递进
Besides ,also ,what’s more
3.表因果
Because,therefore,so,as a result, thanks to4.表转折
But ,yet,however,while,on the contrary
5.表条件
If, unless,as long as ,so long as,on condition that
6.过渡性插入语
Generally speaking,I think,in other words,in a word,in short
One possible version An Unforgettable Experience
It was cold and froze.All my classmates went skating on the river.Mr.Zhang told us to be careful.While skating,I suddenly noticed something unusual.The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care,the ice broke and he slipped into the water.
Not knowing what to do,I anxiously called my teacher for help . Hearing my cry and Mr. Zhang rushed over and jumped into the water to save Xiao Ming,who was struggling in the river.At last,he was saved and no sooner had the doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital.It was not long before Xiao Ming’s parents came .They expressed their thanks to Mr. Zhang.
What a respectable teacher he is!
Thanks a lot!Welcome to our school!
扩展要点 连句成篇I.写英语书面表达首先要注意以下几点：1. 标题 title
2. 主题句 topic sentence
3. 扩展句 develop sentences
4. 总结句（作者态度） conclusionII.步骤1.仔细阅读写作要求及注意事项
2.确定格式题材及基本要求
3.列出要点 列出重要词组及句型
4.丰富要点,将句子补充完整,打好草稿
5.检查草稿，认真写到试卷上（横三齐，竖平行）并且复查一遍
III.Writing suggestions1. main idea
2. the tense
3. the person
4. key points
5. sentence structures
6. a passage基本句子结构1.主系表
They are busy.
2.主+V.
She cried.
3.主+动+宾
She studies English.
4.主+动+宾+宾补
We asked her to come back.
5.主+动+间宾+直宾
Mum bought me a new MP4.
要领主系表
主谓（宾）
主语加谓语
加上间直宾
若有宾语补足语
紧把宾语跟Practise下面六幅图描述了你班一月五日去河上滑冰的情况。请根据图中的内容用英语写一篇以an unforgettable experience 为 题的短文。
要求：
1.短文要包括所有图画的内容，可稍增减细节，使短文通顺连贯。
2.词数100字左右。
老师，快！我小明小心张老师，您12 012 0审 图1.go skating
2.warn Xiao Ming to take care
3.slip into the river
call teacher for help
4. jump into the river to save Xiao Ming
5.be saved and be sent to hospital
6.express their thanks to Mr.Zhang扩词成句1.go skating
All my classmates went skating on the river.Mr.Zhang told us to be careful.
2. warn Xiao Ming to take care
While skating,I suddenly noticed something unusual.The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care,the ice broke and he slipped into the water.
3. call teacher for help I called my teacher for help4. jump into the river to save Xiao Ming
He heared my cry and Mr. Zhang rushed over and jumped into the water to save Xiao Ming,who was struggling.
5.be saved and be sent to hospital
Xiao Ming was saved and the doctors arrived and he was sent to hospital.
6.express their thanks to Mr.Zhang
Xiao Ming’s parents came and expressed their thanks to Mr. Zhang正确使用连接词1.表时间顺序
First/firstly ,second/secondly…
then,after that,meanwhile,later ,
in the end,finally
2.表递进
Besides ,also ,what’s more
3.表因果
Because,therefore,so,as a result, thanks to4.表转折
But ,yet,however,while,on the contrary
5.表条件
If, unless,as long as ,so long as,on condition that
6.过渡性插入语
Generally speaking,I think,in other words,in a word,in short
One possible version An Unforgettable Experience
It was cold and froze.All my classmates went skating on the river.Mr.Zhang told us to be careful.While skating,I suddenly noticed something unusual.The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care,the ice broke and he slipped into the water.
Not knowing what to do,I anxiously called my teacher for help . Hearing my cry and Mr. Zhang rushed over and jumped into the water to save Xiao Ming,who was struggling in the river.At last,he was saved and no sooner had the doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital.It was not long before Xiao Ming’s parents came .They expressed their thanks to Mr. Zhang.
What a respectable teacher he is!
Thanks a lot!Welcome to our school!