课件41张PPT。Specialized Revisionon Proof-reading会考英语专题复习之短文改错Task 1: Warming upGolden Eyes火眼金睛Round 1第一关 One day, when I entered the
classroom, I saw a notice written
on the blackboard. It said …… There will have an English speaking competition in Nov. 5
in the school lecture hall.
Topic: I’m crazy about English. If you are interesting in it,
please sign up (报名) as
quickly as possible.beoninterestedRound 2第二关When we go shopping or go traveling,
we always come across a variety of
signs. But not all the signs present
correct English. For example……tidyevery dayRound 3第三关“Take Me To Your Heart ” is a popular
song by “Michael Learns To Rock ”. In
order to learn to sing this song, Sam
writes some of the words down ……hiding from the rain and snow
trying to forget but I won't let it go
looking at a crowded street
listening to my own heart strike
such many people
all around the world
tell me where do I find
someone like you girl beatsoRound 4第四关Sending mobile phone messages has
become a popular way of communication.
One day, when I was in low spirits(情绪
低落), I received one from my friend
Monica. It said…… Don’t be afraid of
failure. It does not
matter how many
times you fall down.
All what matters is
how many times you
get up.thatMistakeshideConclusionat every cornerin lifein seven sentencesin proof-readingGolden Eyes Task 3: Focus on how to
make progress in proof-reading
近五年浙江省会考短文改错测试内容一览表 改错类型统计表从该表得知，8行中有一行是正确的，其余7行
中，多词1个，缺词1个，错词最多，占改错题
的62.5%。Analyze the sorts of mistakes错误类型分析1. 多词例1 If you will study hard, you will succeed.例2 A few years ago, I was used to watch TV
every night. 例3 The pictures made me to think of my
childhood. 2. 缺词例1 Something must be done stop the waste
of energy.例2 So far, I have in the American system
for nearly five years. 例3 She has good knowledge of English and
computer.∧to∧been∧a3. 错词①. 名词的误用（单复数名词的错用）例1 Father asked his doctor for advices
about his heart trouble.advice例2 There are advantage for students to
work while studying at school.advantages例3 Whenever you are in troubles, I will
give you a hand.trouble3. 错词②. 代词的误用（主要考指代是否一致，
it用法，人称代词及反身代词作宾语的误用，
定语从句中关系代词的误用等）例1 I was learning to express me in English.myself例2 Tom told a lie, that made his father
angry.which例3 The foreign teachers work hard and try
his best to make the class lively.their3. 错词③. 动词的误用（时态、语态的误用）⑴. 一般过去时与一般现在时错用⑵. 第三人称单数形式错用⑶. And 前后动词时态不一致⑷.主谓不一致⑸.缺少谓语动词（尤其缺be动词）⑹.主动语态与被动语态错用例1 He not only came to see me, but also
tell me the news.told例2 Last Sunday, he went to the library,
borrowing two books and then left. borrowed例3 Today it is much easier to be healthy
than it is in the past.was例4 My favorite subjects is Chinese, English and maths.are例5 More stadiums are being building for the
2008 Beijing Olympic Games.built例6 John always take exercise in the morning.takes例7 They eager to know everything about
China and asked me a lot of questions.were∧3. 错词④. 形容词、副词及其比较级的误用（修饰系动词及名词用形容词；修饰实义动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词）例1 She looked at me serious and said, “It’s
bad to tell lies.”seriously例2 After two days he arrived at last, tired
and hungrily.hungry例3 I’m feeling a little good today.better3. 错词⑤. 连词的误用例1 We were having classes while someone
knocked at the door.when例2 I took the doctor’s advice, so it did not
work.but例3 Though it’s hard work, but I enjoy it.3. 错词⑥. 介词的误用（主要涉及到是否多用介词和固定短语搭配中的介词）例1 An increasing number of people are
paying attention on this serious problem.to例2 I’m looking forward to hear from you.hearing例3 We can call at Mary tomorrow.on3. 错词⑦. 思维定势的干扰例1 I’m such frightened that I can’t say a
single word. so例2 The box is so heavy to carry.too例3 I will do everything I can help you.to∧Task 4: Competition比一比 Rules: Each group has the right to
choose a set of exercises. The group
who can correct all the mistakes within
the shortest time will be the winner and
get a little prize. As a team member,
if you know the answer, just speak it
out as aloud as possible.Which one would you like to choose?多词1. Great changes have been taken place in
our hometown.2. My first one job was to clean the tables
in a small restaurant.3. He has made a great progress
in his English study.4. Now let me to introduce our
school to you.缺词Our flight to Paris was delayed because
the heavy frog. 2. The press conference is be held
tomorrow. 3. I’ll unable to control myself
and forget all about my study.4. His daughter plays piano very
well.∧of∧to∧be∧theYou are lucky- 5 seconds1. I’m terrible sorry to hurt you.terribly2. She said that her son worked happy
there every day.happily4. Unfortunate, the tickets have
been sold out.形容词/副词exciting3. The news was so excited that
we all burst into cheers.unfortunately Nowadays, more and more rain forests
are being destroying.destroyed2. Last Sunday I spend lots of time
playing computer games.spent4. In his spare time, he like to
play football very much.动词is3. There are a book and some
pencils on the desk.likesI'm sorry+ 5 secondsTask 5: Challenge yourself实战演练 Last week my parents and I took a two-
day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.
As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain 1.______
with all kinds of plants and animals. The
weather was fine. It was about noon when 2.______
we arrived at the foot of the mountain.
The three of them were very excited. As we 3.______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples and told stories. On the 4.______
way up I was busy taking picture since the 5.______
scenery was so beautiful. ∧a√us2007年 会考visitedpicturesThe time passed quick. Evening came. 6.______
We spent the night in a hotel at the top
of the mountain. The food was expensive
and the service was good. I was so 7.______
tired that I fell into asleep the moment 8.______
my head touched the pillow. quicklybut2007年 会考intoHow many points have you got?Task 6: Pay attention锦囊妙计1. 整句理解，分行搜索 2. 复读检查，前后贯通 3. 注意五个不改 单词拼写不改；大小写不改；次序错误不改（应从错词或少词方面去考虑）；标点符号不改；可改可不改的不改。4.注意解题规范 要严格按照示范规定的符号改错，切勿离开文后的8道横线在原文的字里行间勾勾划划、涂涂改改。要记住，“√”、“—”、“∧”、“”、分别代表正确无误、错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除，切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。4. Many people are like sports all over the
world.去掉areYou must have a passport if you want to
go abroad.正确√X2. The work will be finished after 2 hours.after改为inXin3. It is pleasure to help others when they are
in trouble.在pleasure前加aX a ∧areX我只身前往I came. I saw.
I conquered.
我明察秋毫我所向披靡 ---CaesarConquer English征服改错Conquer Proof-reading征服英语Thank You
