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课件28张PPT。Tiantai High School Wang RuochenA Sacrifice for LoveUnit 10 American literatureLet’s recite wonderful sentencesWonderful sentences:
The place was shabby. In the hall below was a mailbox into which no letter would go. There was an electric bell that did not work,… She stood by the window and looked out at a grey cat walking along a grey fence in a grey backyard. ……The description is vivid so it seems as if we could see the scene really.Three adjectives show that she was upset and depressed at that time.Why do we say it is a good article?Theme:
2. Writing skills:
an article that appeals to readers’ emotionUse exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases.
Use some effective conjunctions.
Use different sentence structures.
Writing Twice as hard or twice as easy?Common mistakes tips & StrategiesExercises for WritingWriting Secure code Common mistakes 假设你是李平，最近参加了某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见，请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信的形式给予答复。
活动时间 7月15—22 或8 月15—22
参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲
活动内容 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧
看英语电影 教外宾学中文
对活动内容的建议或要求Situational writing: (20%)注意： 1.词数：100左右 2.选出你喜欢的时间及两项活动并提一项建议Situational writing: (20%)Dear Sir or Madame,
Thank you for invite me to the English summer camp.
I think you can hold it in June so that our students can have time to ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to listen the English lectures. Do that will enlarge our knowlege. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. And I think you can have some sports games, such as play valleyball, go swimming. I very like sports. I hope you to agree my advices.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
(106 words)A student’s composition:weto get readyDoing thatknowledgethe foreign teacherspeakmy spoken Englishcommunicatingnativeplaying volleyball, goingyou canadviceattendjoin in adoptorganizeinvitingJuly15Sample:Dear Sir or Madame,
I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li PingDear Sir or Madame,
I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li pingDear Sir or Madame,
Thank you for inviting me to the English summer camp. I think you can hold it in July so that we can have time to get ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. I also hope I can join in the English corner so I and the foreign teacher can speak English with each other I think can improve my spoken English by communicating with him because my English teacher is not a native Englishman. And I think you can organize some sports games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice.
Yours truly,
Li ping SampleCommon problems:1. The passage is wordy. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. ( 40 words) I’d like to attend the English Corner so I can communicate with others in English. In this way, I hope to improve my spoken English. ( 25words)Common problems:2.Thinking in Chinese and writing in Chinglish
eg: As to me,I’d like to attend the English lectures because it can enlarge our knowledge by listening to more lectures. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge.(no effective conjunctions)I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice.I like sports very much, so I hope you can adopt my advice.Tips and strategiesTip 1:
Words:
Sentences:
On words and sentencesNever make up new words on your own.Never translate word by wordUse fewer words to express clearly
Do use some conjunctions 表示顺序, 动作过程：first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next．
表示转折: but, yet, or, however, nevertheless, although,
表示结果: thus, therefore, so, as a result…
表示并列: and, also, as well as, and then
表示递进: besides, what’s more, moreover,
in addition, what is worse, worse still… 表列举: for example/for instance, that is to say,…
表原因: because of, thanks to, due to, owing to,…
表示比较:on (the) one hand,…on the other hand,…
表示总结: in short, in a word, in general, useful expressionsTip 2:Remember useful expressions:Write a passage about my view on…… We had a heated discussion about/on ...…. Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that… However, others hold the view that……
As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to ….The reasons are as follows.
First, …… Secondly,……
In conclusion / In a word ,……Tip 3: Follow typical patternsExercises for writing (I) Improve the wordy sentence1.I like to learn to sing English songs better.
2. We also help people from other countries to learn Chinese.
3.In the not too far future, our dreams will come true.
4.We will have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building.
5.I also like to go to places where we can learn more about culture of old China in Beijing.(prefer)foreigners(near)(We will have the party in the garden on the top of the main building.)I also like to go to more places of interest in Beijing.6. The gifts should be wrapped up and a few words of best wishes should be written on them by you.
7. Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found. Next, let’s go through the text and find the main idea. You should wrap up the gifts and write a few words of best wishes on themSummary :Change phrases into single wordsChange unnecessary clauses into phrasesChange useless passive into active(II)Improve the sentence in Chinglish1. In my opinion, we should communicate in English. In order that, we should invite some foreigner students joining us. ?
2.You can let some foreigners with us. We can learn something from each other.
?
3. Because we are learning of English, English knowledge is the more the better for us.
You can invite some foreigners so we can learn something from each other. In my opinion, we should invite some foreigners so that we can communicate with them in English. The more we learn, the better we will be in learning English.(III)Improve the passage: Tom is four years old and he is energetic. One day a bike was given to him. The bike is new and it is light blue in color. Tom received the bike for his birthday. He struggled to ride his bike. He struggled for two hours. However, he was unsuccessful in riding the bike. Four-year-old Tom is energetic. One day, he got a light blue bike for his birthday. Though he struggled for two hours to ride it, he was unsuccessful. 毕业前夕，你班讨论给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：
（1）送影集 ( album ), 里面有每一位同学的照片；
（2）送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福.
请写短文简述班级的讨论，然后表明你自己的意见，并说明理由。
注意：1. 100 字左右
2. 用第一人称写Writing:2005（重庆卷） What kind of gift shall we give to our teachers before our graduation? Why? Discussion: an album
Gift Reasonsthe report of enrollment
(录取通知书)express thanks to
show our love for the teacherin memory of the happy time remember all of the studentsa tapewith a tape-recording sending our wishes to ……other useful giftspractical … ………Homework
1.Write the passage
2.Remember useful
expressions and
typical patterns.
The place was shabby. In the hall below was a mailbox into which no letter would go. There was an electric bell that did not work,… She stood by the window and looked out at a grey cat walking along a grey fence in a grey backyard. ……The description is vivid so it seems as if we could see the scene really.Three adjectives show that she was upset and depressed at that time.Why do we say it is a good article?Theme:
2. Writing skills:
an article that appeals to readers’ emotionUse exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases.
Use some effective conjunctions.
Use different sentence structures.
Writing Twice as hard or twice as easy?Common mistakes tips & StrategiesExercises for WritingWriting Secure code Common mistakes 假设你是李平，最近参加了某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见，请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信的形式给予答复。
活动时间 7月15—22 或8 月15—22
参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲
活动内容 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧
看英语电影 教外宾学中文
对活动内容的建议或要求Situational writing: (20%)注意： 1.词数：100左右 2.选出你喜欢的时间及两项活动并提一项建议Situational writing: (20%)Dear Sir or Madame,
Thank you for invite me to the English summer camp.
I think you can hold it in June so that our students can have time to ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to listen the English lectures. Do that will enlarge our knowlege. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. And I think you can have some sports games, such as play valleyball, go swimming. I very like sports. I hope you to agree my advices.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
(106 words)A student’s composition:weto get readyDoing thatknowledgethe foreign teacherspeakmy spoken Englishcommunicatingnativeplaying volleyball, goingyou canadviceattendjoin in adoptorganizeinvitingJuly15Sample:Dear Sir or Madame,
I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li PingDear Sir or Madame,
I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li pingDear Sir or Madame,
Thank you for inviting me to the English summer camp. I think you can hold it in July so that we can have time to get ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. I also hope I can join in the English corner so I and the foreign teacher can speak English with each other I think can improve my spoken English by communicating with him because my English teacher is not a native Englishman. And I think you can organize some sports games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice.
Yours truly,
Li ping SampleCommon problems:1. The passage is wordy. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. ( 40 words) I’d like to attend the English Corner so I can communicate with others in English. In this way, I hope to improve my spoken English. ( 25words)Common problems:2.Thinking in Chinese and writing in Chinglish
eg: As to me,I’d like to attend the English lectures because it can enlarge our knowledge by listening to more lectures. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge.(no effective conjunctions)I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice.I like sports very much, so I hope you can adopt my advice.Tips and strategiesTip 1:
Words:
Sentences:
On words and sentencesNever make up new words on your own.Never translate word by wordUse fewer words to express clearly
Do use some conjunctions 表示顺序, 动作过程：first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next．
表示转折: but, yet, or, however, nevertheless, although,
表示结果: thus, therefore, so, as a result…
表示并列: and, also, as well as, and then
表示递进: besides, what’s more, moreover,
in addition, what is worse, worse still… 表列举: for example/for instance, that is to say,…
表原因: because of, thanks to, due to, owing to,…
表示比较:on (the) one hand,…on the other hand,…
表示总结: in short, in a word, in general, useful expressionsTip 2:Remember useful expressions:Write a passage about my view on…… We had a heated discussion about/on ...…. Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that… However, others hold the view that……
As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to ….The reasons are as follows.
First, …… Secondly,……
In conclusion / In a word ,……Tip 3: Follow typical patternsExercises for writing (I) Improve the wordy sentence1.I like to learn to sing English songs better.
2. We also help people from other countries to learn Chinese.
3.In the not too far future, our dreams will come true.
4.We will have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building.
5.I also like to go to places where we can learn more about culture of old China in Beijing.(prefer)foreigners(near)(We will have the party in the garden on the top of the main building.)I also like to go to more places of interest in Beijing.6. The gifts should be wrapped up and a few words of best wishes should be written on them by you.
7. Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found. Next, let’s go through the text and find the main idea. You should wrap up the gifts and write a few words of best wishes on themSummary :Change phrases into single wordsChange unnecessary clauses into phrasesChange useless passive into active(II)Improve the sentence in Chinglish1. In my opinion, we should communicate in English. In order that, we should invite some foreigner students joining us. ?
2.You can let some foreigners with us. We can learn something from each other.
?
3. Because we are learning of English, English knowledge is the more the better for us.
You can invite some foreigners so we can learn something from each other. In my opinion, we should invite some foreigners so that we can communicate with them in English. The more we learn, the better we will be in learning English.(III)Improve the passage: Tom is four years old and he is energetic. One day a bike was given to him. The bike is new and it is light blue in color. Tom received the bike for his birthday. He struggled to ride his bike. He struggled for two hours. However, he was unsuccessful in riding the bike. Four-year-old Tom is energetic. One day, he got a light blue bike for his birthday. Though he struggled for two hours to ride it, he was unsuccessful. 毕业前夕，你班讨论给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：
（1）送影集 ( album ), 里面有每一位同学的照片；
（2）送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福.
请写短文简述班级的讨论，然后表明你自己的意见，并说明理由。
注意：1. 100 字左右
2. 用第一人称写Writing:2005（重庆卷） What kind of gift shall we give to our teachers before our graduation? Why? Discussion: an album
Gift Reasonsthe report of enrollment
(录取通知书)express thanks to
show our love for the teacherin memory of the happy time remember all of the studentsa tapewith a tape-recording sending our wishes to ……other useful giftspractical … ………Homework
1.Write the passage
2.Remember useful
expressions and
typical patterns.