How to make your writing attractive[下学期]
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课件22张PPT。How to make your
writing attractive?By zhang xiao fangFeatures of Good English EssaysHeading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；
2. Body
3. Ending 小结；呼应主题
Linking wordsDiverse
sentencesAdvanced
vocabulary准确为先流畅为好有文采为妙ChinglishHeading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；
2. Body
3. Ending 小结；呼应主题
准确为先流畅为好有文采为妙Chinglish2. I think they should not charge people , because it is a public park.I don’t think they should charge people , because it is a public park .1.I very like studying English.I like studying English very much.3.There are 5 people sit
in the classroom. sitting4. I sometimes forgot my
English book at home. left5.Come and see me whenever you are convenient. it is convenient for you.She likes music.She has a passion for music.Advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）She is fond of music.She is into music.She is crazy about music.She is keen on music.2.It’s been a long time since I last saw you.ages1. We are having supper.dinner3.He is a young teacher with a good future.promising4.It is a hard job.challenging/ demanding5.We will try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.We will spare no efforts to develop …We will do everything we can to develop …We will do as much as we can to develop ..感叹句 (exclamatory sentence)
e.g. What a kind boy he is!
2.简单句(simple sentence)
Hurry up , or you will be late.
3. 复合句(compound sentence)
e.g. That’s what I should do. Diverse sentences e.g. So long as we work harder at our lessons ,we’ll catch up sooner or later.
Do call me in advance so that I can meet you at the airport.
e.g. In my opinion, net bar should be a place where we can find much useful information.
4.倒装句(inversion)
e.g. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.5.主动句与被动句
(active/passive voice)
6. 强调句 (emphasis sentence)
e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 7. With结构
e.g. I saw a young lady walking in the street with a handbag in her hands
8. 分词（doing /done）
Frightened by the snake, the boy cried.Express the same meaning in different ways as possible as you can.1.You gave me a pleasant surprise.What a pleasant surprise you gave me!It is you who gave me a pleasant surprise.What you gave me is a pleasant surprise.2.We must take measures to stop pollution.Measures must be taken to …We must stop pollution with some measures.It is necessary for us to take measures to stop pollution .
If we want to stop pollution ,we must take measures.3. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
4. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
She walked out of the lab, followed by many students, Singing and laughing, they went back
to school.5.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
6.You can solve this problem only in this way .Study hard, and you will make progress.Only in this way can you solve this problem.Fluency（流畅） Fill in the blanks with the following linking words.Besides , on the contrary, what’s more, as well, Some of us think that it is better to see the film . The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. ， the film is more interesting. ， it is easier to follow . , some others have the opposite opinion. They think they can get more information. The language is possibly lively and beautiful.What’s moreas wellOn the contraryBesides Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party,
at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday,
one usually receive nice gifts as well as
pure-hearted wishes. Besides,
parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the most important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For instance, we can buy a bunch of flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that very day, with which to express our thanks to our dear parents. Dear Lucy,
You will come to Hangzhou and visit it. I’m very glad. Hangzhou is a beautiful city. It lies in the east China. It is next to the Qiantang river. People said an Italian visitor Marco Pole once visited Hangzhou. He thought Hangzhou was beautiful. It was the capital of China in the past. It has a long history.There are many towers and temples around it.Hills surround the West Lake, and there are many parks too. Every year a lot of visitors from china and other countries come here. I hope you can have a good time. Some students think: we should learn English from childhood. Because of we have a good memory in childhood, it helps us remember lots of words. It is help me that learning English stich to strongly foundation. Other students think we should not learn English from childhood. In childhood, not only does we learn Chinese pinyin, but also does we learn English. Otherahile, we are easily by mistakes it has effects on Chinese study and future English study. Most of students disagreed with each other. I think it that we should accord to some condition, then we decide our chooses.Homework: make it better with the above skills.
writing attractive?By zhang xiao fangFeatures of Good English EssaysHeading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；
2. Body
3. Ending 小结；呼应主题
Linking wordsDiverse
sentencesAdvanced
vocabulary准确为先流畅为好有文采为妙ChinglishHeading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；
2. Body
3. Ending 小结；呼应主题
准确为先流畅为好有文采为妙Chinglish2. I think they should not charge people , because it is a public park.I don’t think they should charge people , because it is a public park .1.I very like studying English.I like studying English very much.3.There are 5 people sit
in the classroom. sitting4. I sometimes forgot my
English book at home. left5.Come and see me whenever you are convenient. it is convenient for you.She likes music.She has a passion for music.Advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）She is fond of music.She is into music.She is crazy about music.She is keen on music.2.It’s been a long time since I last saw you.ages1. We are having supper.dinner3.He is a young teacher with a good future.promising4.It is a hard job.challenging/ demanding5.We will try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.We will spare no efforts to develop …We will do everything we can to develop …We will do as much as we can to develop ..感叹句 (exclamatory sentence)
e.g. What a kind boy he is!
2.简单句(simple sentence)
Hurry up , or you will be late.
3. 复合句(compound sentence)
e.g. That’s what I should do. Diverse sentences e.g. So long as we work harder at our lessons ,we’ll catch up sooner or later.
Do call me in advance so that I can meet you at the airport.
e.g. In my opinion, net bar should be a place where we can find much useful information.
4.倒装句(inversion)
e.g. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.5.主动句与被动句
(active/passive voice)
6. 强调句 (emphasis sentence)
e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 7. With结构
e.g. I saw a young lady walking in the street with a handbag in her hands
8. 分词（doing /done）
Frightened by the snake, the boy cried.Express the same meaning in different ways as possible as you can.1.You gave me a pleasant surprise.What a pleasant surprise you gave me!It is you who gave me a pleasant surprise.What you gave me is a pleasant surprise.2.We must take measures to stop pollution.Measures must be taken to …We must stop pollution with some measures.It is necessary for us to take measures to stop pollution .
If we want to stop pollution ,we must take measures.3. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
4. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
She walked out of the lab, followed by many students, Singing and laughing, they went back
to school.5.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
6.You can solve this problem only in this way .Study hard, and you will make progress.Only in this way can you solve this problem.Fluency（流畅） Fill in the blanks with the following linking words.Besides , on the contrary, what’s more, as well, Some of us think that it is better to see the film . The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. ， the film is more interesting. ， it is easier to follow . , some others have the opposite opinion. They think they can get more information. The language is possibly lively and beautiful.What’s moreas wellOn the contraryBesides Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party,
at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday,
one usually receive nice gifts as well as
pure-hearted wishes. Besides,
parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the most important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For instance, we can buy a bunch of flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that very day, with which to express our thanks to our dear parents. Dear Lucy,
You will come to Hangzhou and visit it. I’m very glad. Hangzhou is a beautiful city. It lies in the east China. It is next to the Qiantang river. People said an Italian visitor Marco Pole once visited Hangzhou. He thought Hangzhou was beautiful. It was the capital of China in the past. It has a long history.There are many towers and temples around it.Hills surround the West Lake, and there are many parks too. Every year a lot of visitors from china and other countries come here. I hope you can have a good time. Some students think: we should learn English from childhood. Because of we have a good memory in childhood, it helps us remember lots of words. It is help me that learning English stich to strongly foundation. Other students think we should not learn English from childhood. In childhood, not only does we learn Chinese pinyin, but also does we learn English. Otherahile, we are easily by mistakes it has effects on Chinese study and future English study. Most of students disagreed with each other. I think it that we should accord to some condition, then we decide our chooses.Homework: make it better with the above skills.