试卷讲评[下学期]
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课件17张PPT。试卷讲评—— 阅读填空和书面表达（郴州市第四次质检）一、 英语阅读填空题型及解题指导1、题型概述/要求2、考查能力1） 获取信息的能力 2） 处理信息的能力
3） 加工信息的能 4） 运用信息的能力
= 》阅读理解+ 书面表达3、题目类型（以05湖南高考为例） 1） 直接信息题：77,83,84,85
2 ) 加工信息题：79,81,82
3 ) 归纳信息题：76,78,80
4、解题方法指导（郴州市第四次质检阅读填空题）（1）理解1）理解表格结构2）理解项目要求3）理解文章大意4）理解短文结构
（2）表达1）语言的规范性2）表达的对称性3）表达的简洁性4）表达的概括性How to76 _________________
?
Using
poison To kill
miceHow to76__________________________________________
?
kill/deal with/prevent miceKill /Prevent/Deal with MicePurposes (Two)
General
ways special
grain
store keep
mice
outCostly
and
dangerous mousetraps simple and
effectiveGrain
wastes on the water Using poison To kill mice总结试卷阅读填空题目类型1）直接信息题：80: keep mice out
82: kind of mousetrap = > mousetraps
84:small pieces of grain wastes=>Grain wastes
85: on the water
2 ) 加工信息题：78: There are some ways that farmers generally
use…=> (Two) General ways
79: use grain storage buildings specially
=> special grain store
81: can be costly+ can also be dangerous=>
Costly and dangerous
83: simple but effective=> simple and effective
3 ) 归纳信息题： 76: 全文概括标题
77: 对该列综合概括
VV
V
V
二、书面表达1）认真审题,明确要求。
2）紧扣文意,组织要点。
3）选词造句,准确表达。
4）整理成篇,注意行文连贯。
5）合理安排时间,认真检查复核。
1、解题步骤和方法
2、注意事项
1）篇章结构合理。
2）要点齐全。
3）题中注意部分一定要重视。
4）体裁，时态，人称要正确。
5）避免语法词汇错误。
6）注意书面整洁。
I 、认真审题,明确要求。
1、体裁：2、人称：3、时态：图表加文字说明作文写作一人称（主体人称）
一般过去时 和 一般现在时（主体时态）4、要点：A.介绍情况：1）每年植树100棵
2）2001 年有200 株树
3）2005年已有600株树
B.谈谈看法：4 -6）谈植树造林，绿化校园
的看法。II、本次书面表达出现的一些错误。
1、要点不全。2、时态错误。3、词数不够。4、语法错误多。1) 主谓一致
2）中式表达
3）主从句混淆
学生作品1：This graph shows …… .From 2001 to 2005, our school plant more than 100 trees every years. In 2001 there were 200 trees. But in 2005, there were 600 trees. From 2001 to 2004, it increased slowly. But From 2004 to 2005, it increased quickly. I believed our school will plant more trees. Our school will become green.
Plant trees benefit us.
At first, trees give us sightseeing, we can feel comfortable in our school. Also, we can take some photos. Second, trees provide some Oxygen to us, so the air is clean. We can study happily,
we will be health. Third, when we plant trees,
we can exercise us. It’s a practice for us. Our students do it together, so that we will be strong. Fourth,. It can prevent loud noise, so that we can study quietly.
In a word. It’s good for our study.
点评：
亮点：1:要点较全面
2:结构分明
3:体裁，时态，人称基本使用得当。
1) would2) planting trees3) and不足之处：2、语法词汇错误。1、全文简单句居多。1)2)3)∧4)______4) healthy5) which can make us学生作品2：This graph shows trees planted in our school over the past five years are increasing rapidly.
The number of trees in 2001 was only around 200, which seemed the environment in our school wasn’t positive. By planting more than 100 trees every year, the environment gets improved with the number of trees growing. In 2005, the total of reaches 600, which is three times as many as that in 2001.the success achieved is pretty good. The increasing is obvious over the past five year.In a word, the school turnsgreener than what it is used to be.
Planting trees can make our environment more beautiful, and we should carry it out more successfully. After all, the earth is our home. We should care more about it. Planting in school is important too. We should also try ?
点评：
亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用
比较灵活
2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。
未看清楚已给开头
2) 从句使用不准确3) 时态/词组错误不足之处：个别地方的表达需
要改进。1)2)and it∧that3)our best to make our
school greener,
because it’s the place
where we study.
4、小结：写好高分作文的要求熟练五种基本句型，
活用高级表达，
巧用过渡性词汇。表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say，etc
表补充：besides、in addition、moreover，etc表对比：on the one hand…on the other hand、in spite of，etc
表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to，etc
表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so，etc表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up，etc
表转折：however、nevertheless、yet，etc
常见的过渡性词语有：5、书面表达备考策略1）注重基础知识
2）注重质量
3）注重速度
4）注重背记典型的范文
5）注重熟悉高考的命题思路
Thank you !See you !
3） 加工信息的能 4） 运用信息的能力
= 》阅读理解+ 书面表达3、题目类型（以05湖南高考为例） 1） 直接信息题：77,83,84,85
2 ) 加工信息题：79,81,82
3 ) 归纳信息题：76,78,80
4、解题方法指导（郴州市第四次质检阅读填空题）（1）理解1）理解表格结构2）理解项目要求3）理解文章大意4）理解短文结构
（2）表达1）语言的规范性2）表达的对称性3）表达的简洁性4）表达的概括性How to76 _________________
?
Using
poison To kill
miceHow to76__________________________________________
?
kill/deal with/prevent miceKill /Prevent/Deal with MicePurposes (Two)
General
ways special
grain
store keep
mice
outCostly
and
dangerous mousetraps simple and
effectiveGrain
wastes on the water Using poison To kill mice总结试卷阅读填空题目类型1）直接信息题：80: keep mice out
82: kind of mousetrap = > mousetraps
84:small pieces of grain wastes=>Grain wastes
85: on the water
2 ) 加工信息题：78: There are some ways that farmers generally
use…=> (Two) General ways
79: use grain storage buildings specially
=> special grain store
81: can be costly+ can also be dangerous=>
Costly and dangerous
83: simple but effective=> simple and effective
3 ) 归纳信息题： 76: 全文概括标题
77: 对该列综合概括
VV
V
V
二、书面表达1）认真审题,明确要求。
2）紧扣文意,组织要点。
3）选词造句,准确表达。
4）整理成篇,注意行文连贯。
5）合理安排时间,认真检查复核。
1、解题步骤和方法
2、注意事项
1）篇章结构合理。
2）要点齐全。
3）题中注意部分一定要重视。
4）体裁，时态，人称要正确。
5）避免语法词汇错误。
6）注意书面整洁。
I 、认真审题,明确要求。
1、体裁：2、人称：3、时态：图表加文字说明作文写作一人称（主体人称）
一般过去时 和 一般现在时（主体时态）4、要点：A.介绍情况：1）每年植树100棵
2）2001 年有200 株树
3）2005年已有600株树
B.谈谈看法：4 -6）谈植树造林，绿化校园
的看法。II、本次书面表达出现的一些错误。
1、要点不全。2、时态错误。3、词数不够。4、语法错误多。1) 主谓一致
2）中式表达
3）主从句混淆
学生作品1：This graph shows …… .From 2001 to 2005, our school plant more than 100 trees every years. In 2001 there were 200 trees. But in 2005, there were 600 trees. From 2001 to 2004, it increased slowly. But From 2004 to 2005, it increased quickly. I believed our school will plant more trees. Our school will become green.
Plant trees benefit us.
At first, trees give us sightseeing, we can feel comfortable in our school. Also, we can take some photos. Second, trees provide some Oxygen to us, so the air is clean. We can study happily,
we will be health. Third, when we plant trees,
we can exercise us. It’s a practice for us. Our students do it together, so that we will be strong. Fourth,. It can prevent loud noise, so that we can study quietly.
In a word. It’s good for our study.
点评：
亮点：1:要点较全面
2:结构分明
3:体裁，时态，人称基本使用得当。
1) would2) planting trees3) and不足之处：2、语法词汇错误。1、全文简单句居多。1)2)3)∧4)______4) healthy5) which can make us学生作品2：This graph shows trees planted in our school over the past five years are increasing rapidly.
The number of trees in 2001 was only around 200, which seemed the environment in our school wasn’t positive. By planting more than 100 trees every year, the environment gets improved with the number of trees growing. In 2005, the total of reaches 600, which is three times as many as that in 2001.the success achieved is pretty good. The increasing is obvious over the past five year.In a word, the school turnsgreener than what it is used to be.
Planting trees can make our environment more beautiful, and we should carry it out more successfully. After all, the earth is our home. We should care more about it. Planting in school is important too. We should also try ?
点评：
亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用
比较灵活
2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。
未看清楚已给开头
2) 从句使用不准确3) 时态/词组错误不足之处：个别地方的表达需
要改进。1)2)and it∧that3)our best to make our
school greener,
because it’s the place
where we study.
4、小结：写好高分作文的要求熟练五种基本句型，
活用高级表达，
巧用过渡性词汇。表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say，etc
表补充：besides、in addition、moreover，etc表对比：on the one hand…on the other hand、in spite of，etc
表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to，etc
表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so，etc表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up，etc
表转折：however、nevertheless、yet，etc
常见的过渡性词语有：5、书面表达备考策略1）注重基础知识
2）注重质量
3）注重速度
4）注重背记典型的范文
5）注重熟悉高考的命题思路
Thank you !See you !