English writing[下学期]

课件16张PPT。English writingSix steps’ writing method

What can you see in the picture?（审）
Write down the answers.（抓）
确定主要行为be good at chemistrydo tests/ say to grow bigger plantsa scientistStep3: Try to improve the paragraph.Once upon a time there was a scientist. He was ______good at chemistry. He wanted to________________ grow bigger plants. He did _________ tests. _____ one day, he discovered the answer. He said ______, “ This must be it!”veryhelp the farmerslots ofThenhappilyJointing into sentences (扩) Use the words to make sentences.Joint the sentences into a paragraph.（连） 连句成段，注意人称、时态、大小写等
Writing According
to the Given Pictures
请根据下列4幅图画，写一篇80个单词左右的短文，开头已给出，不算入总词数。
Tom’s Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday.______________Step 1: Observation（审）:
Find important information
5 “W”s and 1 “H”:W1. When W2. Where W3. Who W4. What W5. WhyW6. HowWrite down the key words and verbs of each picturesPic 1. Mar.8th Yesterday
Women’s Day. Pic 2. buy food, after
schoolPic 3 help, clean , houseworkPic 4. cook, meal, happyStep 2 and Step 3Joint the verbs to make sentences.Step 4Link the sentences into a paragraph.连句成段.适当使用过渡词：
1.列举:first, second, then, at last,finally.
2.转折/并列:but, however,and.
3. 强调:really, at all.人称/时态/语态/主谓一致/词语搭配/单词拼写/标点符号 Step 5—Revision(修改)between teammates. Underline the wrong words or wrong sentences. Assessment:根据评价表给分Step 6:Let’s enjoy our writings.让我们一起分享大家的作品．写作评分标准1. Complete information(信息完整)2. Full expression（表达充分）3. Clear structure(结构清楚)4. Actual language (语言准确)5. Few mistakes and beautiful
handwriting（书写整洁漂亮）Six steps of English writing Step 6--Rewriting （抄）
Good handwriting;
Clear and clean the whole composition.Revise and rewrite your composition,
then hand in as homework.HomeworkGoodbye