英语写作[下学期]

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课件47张PPT。English WritingtigerWhat animals are
in danger?golden monkeyelephantpandaWhy are animals dying out?for fur/meat/ body partsfor funfor moneycut downenvironment pollution (water,land,air)disappearfarmlandWhat can we do
to help them?savestop … from…wildlife zoo (野生动物园)be friendly to …protect the environmentpass laws to punish(惩罚) the people who kill animals.love them, understand themprotect the environmentWorld Wildlife Fund(基金会)If you are one of the following animals,
now write a letter to the Wildlife Fund(野生动物基金会)to call on(号召) more people to love and help animals. A letter to Wildlife Fund
(野生动物基金会)Introduce yourself
Explain your problems
What’s your worry and hope .
In your letter, you must include the following parts:If you like,you may enjoy these sentences:
1. My peaceful(和平的)life has gone/ is over.
2.A lot of people kill us in order to(为了) ……
3.We don’t know what will happen to us tomorrow. alive or dead?
4.It’s impossble for us to run away.
5.How I wish……Dear Sir,
I’m a tiger ________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第六档:(18-20分)包含全部要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。
第五档:(14-17分)基本包含要点,遗漏少量次要点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。
第四档:(10-13分)包含部分要点;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。
第三档:(6-9分)要点不明确;语言错误多,影响意思表达
第二档:(3-5分)只抄写了提示词;错误百出,不知所云。
第一档:(0-2 分)白卷或文不对题。中考作文评分细则根据下列要求写一篇短文,词数60—80词。
提示:现在大多数学生是独生子女,有些学生从小娇生惯养,做事时往往考虑自己多,顾及别人的感受少,与家长、老师、同学相处得不太融洽。针对上述现象,请你谈谈:
你的表现;
你的想法(观点);
你的建议
提示词(仅供参考):selfish (自私的); have a good relationship with (与…关系融洽);respect (尊敬);communicate with (与…交流)HomeworkGoodbyeGoodbyeNorth China Tigerdolphingorillaplant more treesDear Sir,
First I want to introduce myself. I am a gorilla. I enjoyed my life very much in the past. However my happiness was gone when people came to me.
One day, I was playing with my sisters and brothers as usual_____ some people came to us. We felt happy because we thought men are our best friends. ____ to our surprise, they just took out their guns, shot us and cut down the forest. Lots of my brothers and sisters were shot dead _______ we knew what on earth had happened. I was really lucky to escape. _____________, I followed them home. Oh, my god. You will never believe it! They were laughing, and shouting with great joy _______ my sisters and brothers were on the fire, being cooked just for food and fun.whenButbeforeStealthilywhile We, gorillas, are now coming to disappear from the world. We are homeless and helpless.
I wonder _______ you, human beings, can do something. Why don’t you build some special places like Nature Parks for us to live in? Why not adopt(认养) the homeless of my brothers and sisters? Why not make people know more about us and understand us better?
At last, I want to say: Please! Stop killing us! If not, I dare say: If we, animals, come to an end, then you will too!
Yours
GorillaifDear Sir,
I’m a tiger. My name is Sally. I had a charming family. Years before, my peaceful life has gone. There are a lot of people looking for us in order to kill us for something valuable. So we have to move from place to place.
Yesterday, one of my friend died. Oh, my god! We don’t know what will happen to us tomorrow. Alive or dead? That’s a problem. Why are people so cruel? We are friends, aren’t we?Stop killing, please. Let’s live in peace. Yours,
…We must live in harmony(和谐)and in peace(和平). Dear Sir,
When you received my letter you may feel
surprised. I’m a tiger. A tiger? Yes!
I used to be king of the forest, but nowadays I have serious problems. That’s because I can’t get a Queen and have a family of my own. I’m so old, nearly thirty years old. Are you surprised that I have been single for such a long time? That’s all because people have robbed away my sweetie. They kill us day and night. It’s just impossible for us to run away. Please give back my sweeties. I need them just like man needs woman.
Yours,
… Dear Sir,
I’m now in your body. You had just eaten me and you said I’m so delicious. You and your family enjoyed yourselves very much. I could hear your children singing. I could feel your wife dancing. But can you hear I am crying?
Yesterday, I was still a happy tiger. I played with my dear friends, and stayed with my family. I also had a girl friend. She is a pretty girl, and she had agreed to marry me. I was so happy to hear that. But suddenly, all that was over. I was caught by something and only one day, I was eaten. How I miss my family members and my girl friend! Are they missing me? I’m crying.
Yours,
… Dear sir,
We are tigers,. We are king of the animal world.
We look like big cats. We live in the forest.. WE live a happy and
peaceful life. But now the number of us is getting smaller and smaller,
there are no more than 500 tigers living in the world. First,
People kill us for our fur and body parts to make clothes and medicine.
Second, our living areas are becoming farmlands.
people kill them for meatfor moneyfor fur(皮毛)for funtrees are cut downEnvironment is seriously polluted