山西长治 2007中考写作[下学期]

课件34张PPT。Compositions 1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；
2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教
师的指导下进行修改；
3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻
辑关系；
4、能简单描述人物或事件；
5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的
段落或操作说明。《英语课程标准》对写作的要求 1、思想性：文章的中心思想、主要内容、
主题以及丰 富和阐述这一主
题的具体细节。
2、条理性：写作的内在结构、中心大意的
线索与段落布局合乎逻辑。
3、用词：丰富多样或精确的语言使人印象
深刻。
4、流畅性：语言的节奏和流畅性，语句结
构安排合理。
5、个人风格：字里行间透露出的个人
写作风格。
6、写作常规：文章的常规格式准确－
拼写、语法和用法、段落、
大小写、标点符号。优秀英语作文六要素 Rules mean loves, we have some sules at school and at home, because teachers and parents love us very much. They wish us have a healthy life and succeed in the future. For example, I’m not allowed to go out at night, because parents think that it’s really dangerous outside at night and they think I should have a good rest .We must wear uniforms at school, because teachers believe that if we are allowed to wear our own clothes, we will pay more attention to our clothes and we can’t study as hard as before.
I like rules, because rules are made of loves.
With the developing of the world, society needs more excellent people. For schools, they have to make some rules to limit their students
At our school, we have a lot of rules, I think they are great. For example,“Don’t eat in class.”, I think this is good for students. Because
if students always eat in class, they won’t liten to teachers enough carefully.
Another is “Don’t fight with your classmates.”It’s also great. Because class is like a big family, we all like peace instead of war.
So, rules are good for students, we need rules.
There’re many rules in my family.
I have to get up at six o’clock every morning. Then I have breakfast and take shower. I think it is good for my healthy. I am not allowed to meet my friends after school.I have to go home and do my homework first. On the weekends, I have to take piano lessons. And I have to clean my room. I hate it .After supper. I can play computers and watch TV. I like it very much.
I like some rules,and I hate a few rules in my family.中考英语常见的作文类型一、描写或记述 二、书信五、 通知六、日记三、请假条、便条四、讲稿（发言稿、自我介绍)中考英语作文常见的题型1、看图作文：根据给出的一幅或
多幅画面（或有文字提示）写作。　4、看图（或材料）填词（或给首字母）2、材料作文：根据给出的书面
（中、英文）材料写作。 3、命题作文:（多为描写、记事或叙述)英语写作常见的典型错误单词拼写错误时态、语态错误：用错时态或语态，拼错动词形式，如过去式、现在、过去分词等词组、短语、句型搭配与使用错误,　或不符合
英语表达习惯人称代词的主、宾格不分，不注意大小写、标点、单复数、冠词的使用修饰关系错误：代词关系；名词当动词用或动词（或形容词）当名词用；副词与形容词（等级）使用错误句子结构错误或成分残缺，如缺主、谓语一、名词的单复数问题：1. We study Chinese, maths, English and other subject.2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.3.Many place are very dry.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.Many places are very dry.We study Chinese, maths, English and other subjects.
典型错误例举二、主谓一致问题1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.2. Everything are going very well.3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday.4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. And now many rivers become very dirty. Everything is going very well. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.三、时态和语态问题1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Danghu Park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Danghu Park. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.四、Chinglish 现象Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a beautiful lake.2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a beautiful lake in the park. My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School with my classamates.五、行文的逻辑性问题1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help.2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.As she wasn’t careful, she fell into the river.…六、词类错用1.When I was sadly, I played with it. 　When I was happily, I played with it.
2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. When I was sad, I played with it.
When I was happy, I played with it. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us
happy and healthy.Saturday Mar3,2005 Sunny
　　Today is Saturday. I get up at 6:45 this morning. I had a quickly breakfast and then went to school in a hurry, but we no classes on Saturday. Then I telephoned some classmate and ask them to have a picnic. They were very pleasing. We were got to the park and enjoyed ourselves. At about 5:00 in the afternoon, we by bus to home. I am too tired, but I’ll go to bed early. Let's have a try!Can you find the mistakes in the composition?Saturday Mar3,2005 Sunny
Today is Saturday. I got up at 6:45 this morning. I had a quick breakfast and then went to school in a hurry, but we don’t have classes on Saturday. Then I telephoned some classmates and asked them to have a picnic. They were very pleased. We got to the park and enjoyed ourselves. At about 5:00 in the afternoon, we went home by bus. I am too tired, so I’ll go to bed early. Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plans to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our healthy. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, but energy can be save. Because ride bikes will always make we happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.Competition !Find the mistakes as soon as quickly. Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike. 1、掌握多种变通方式，
可以用一句多译的练习来达成。 (1).I spent twenty yuan on my new watch.
(2).The new watch cost me twenty yuan.
(3).I paid twenty yuan for the new watch.
如“我花二十元买了块新手表”可以译为：其它注意事项2、书写规范, 卷面整洁。英语五步作文法 仔细阅读写作素材和要求，准确解读相关信息，明确中心内容，把握材料主题，确定文体和格式。
（应用文或记叙文）
第一步、阅读材料，把握主题 仔细阅读写作素材和要求，准确解读相关信息，明确中心内容，把握材料主题，确定文体和格式。
（应用文、记叙文、说明文、议论文、看图作文）
依据材料的中心内容和相关提示，完成文章构思，并拟好提纲，列出关键词、短语和中心句，不要遗漏要点。
第二步、理清思路，列出要点示例一 请你以学校学生会主席的身分，写一份有关即将在本校举办2007年英语夏令营活动的书面通知，内容如下：注意：1、词数在80至100左右。
　　　2、意思连贯，语句通顺，避免逐句翻译。
　　　3、开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。What? The English Summer CampWhat to do？ give a lecture/make a speech/have a debate/talk about the experience of learning English/have a party/visit some places ointerest/write a diary Who? the students in our schoolWhere? in the school hallWhen? from July 29th to August 1stWhy? improve English How? take an active part in it 要 点（5W+1H）
第三步、连词成句，连句成文
连词成句，连句成段，连段成文，添加必要的过渡和连接，使内容完整，语义连贯，时态、人称基本正确。
Pay attention to these wordsWords & phrasesfirstly, secondly, thirdly, next, then, finally, first of all,---
for example, such as, in other words, that is to say---but, however, though, on the other hand, in the same way---
so, as a result, because of, thanks to, since, in a word---
first, then, after that, at last,while, at present---
I think, I’m sure, in my opinion---第四步、修饰润色，查错补缺

检查草稿，看句子结构是否正确、连贯、通顺，长句、短句相结合，并适当使用复合句使文章结构紧凑、富有逻辑性，开头、结尾要生动精彩，以增强可读性；并对时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致等方面进行详细检查，。
第五步、规范格式，誊写到位
检查文章格式是否符合要求，注意单词拼写、标点符号以及大小写的正确；誊写至答题卷，注意书写端正，卷面整洁，增加印象分。
范 文 Dear students,
The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from July 29 to August 1. Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in.
During the camp, you can give a lecture and have a debate. Besides, some students who do well in English study will talk about their experience. There is also an English party between teachers and students. In the end, you will have a chance to visit some great places of interest in our hometown.
Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. Don’t forget to tell us what you think of the camp in your diary.
Students’ Union 现在上网已成为许多学生的主要娱乐方式之一。假如你叫小明，你最近对所在学校的60名学生（30名男生、30名女生）进行上网目的(purpose)调查，以下是你的调查结果，请根据其内容写一封信给校报主编，报告自己的调查结果。
1、报告应包括图表所示内容；
2、叙述调查结果时要避免重复使用百分比；
3、其中要有表明自己观点的句子；
4、报告应在100词左右，生词：chat 聊天。模拟训练范 文　
Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our school about their purpose of getting on the Internet. Both the boys and the girls like chatting very much. What the boys like most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both the boys and the girls like to read news or send e-mail through the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends. For studying, boys and girls are equal in the number, but only several of them will use Internet as a tool to study. So I think we should guide the students to use the Internet better.
Yours,
Xiao Ming仔细检查，认真抄写抓住主题，描写细节开门见山发表己见，画龙点睛收集信息，列出提纲结尾有力