五句话作文的写作技巧(广东省东莞市)

课件20张PPT。Paragraph WritingCarnation Nie
聂春燕Goals today:
Try to write a beautiful passage !Step1. Pre-writingThey are different styles of houses but have the same process(程序) of building. How?First, let’s look at some pictures.Put them in order:__ designing the house
__ decorating
__ material collecting
__ buildingBuilding a house:1423Step1. Pre-writing__ outline-drawing of an article
__ beautifying
__ material collecting
__ writing1234Writing an article:Writing articles is just like building houses.Write a passage entitled: “The Spring Outing” 描写春天的美景(图见后)
写一个小故事（可选择描写多个图片）
使用第一人称（选用）Step2. DesignTopic sentence
A story (Who? What? When? Where? How?)Step2. DesignoutlineStep3. Material collectingUse some words or sentences to describe:What are there? n. flowers, spring,
children, students How do you
describe them?adj. green, yellow,
beautiful, happy,
splendid(壮丽)What are they doing? v. smile, run, wave, enjoy Ways to enrich(丰富) our paragraphs:Give examples
Make comparison
Explain in another wayStep4. WritingStep3. Material collectingUse some words or sentences to describe:What are the there? n. flowers, spring,
children, students How do you
describe them?adj. green, yellow,
beautiful, happy,
splendid(壮丽)What are they doing? v. smile, run, wave, enjoy Check in pairs!Checklist:
Spelling(拼写)
Sentence structure
Tense and voice（时态，语态等）
Choice of words（词的意思、词性）step4. Writing and check1. 主谓宾是否准确？2.是否长短结合？What makes the passage more beautiful?variety (句式多样化)
fullness（内容充实完整）
conciseness （简洁）
elegance （优雅）Step5. Beautifying How to make our language beautiful?Use fixed sentence patterns or phrases
Use different clauses
Use “V.-ing” form and “V.-ed” form
Use reversed or emphasized sentences.
Use prepositions
Combine short sentences with longer onesSo…that…, too…too…,etc. When…where…because… while…Looking at this picture, I feel excited and….With the help of…, without music, …Only after I finish it, can I ….Yes! I began my searching for the most delicate rose.Step5. Beautifying Writing “Spring Is Everywhere”: mainly(主要)describe one picture, use others to help Step6. PracticeExample: Spring is everywhere. Spring is everywhere -- in the garden, in the trees, in the lake, and in the hearts of ours. You see, flowers are in their blossom. Larks are singing their favorite tunes. What makes the spring more special is the smiling faces of the children learning to draw the beauty of nature. The seas of flowers are calling us: Let’s go for a trip! OK! But after I finish my reading –- I can’t waste either the spring or the spring of my life!Step7. AppreciationMake your article more beautiful.
Write another piece of writing about autumn.Step8. AssignmentThanks for your patience!简单句：只含一个主谓结构的句子。
主语：n. 谓语：v. 宾语：n.
并列句：主谓结构＋主谓结构（或更多主谓结构…)并列并列（之间用and, but, or等词连接）复合句：主谓结构＋主谓结构（或更多主谓结构…)
有主从之分从句做句子的某一（些）成分Sentence patternsLet’s play a game !Make it longer!
The children are running.step4. WritingHow do we enrich(丰富) our paragraph?Give examples
Make comparison
Explain in another way
Take … as an example, such as, for example on the other hand, while, compared with/to,
in comparison, similarly, not…but…That is to say， In other words，Step4. WritingHow to make our language beautiful?Use fixed sentence patterns or phrases
Use different clauses
Use “V.-ing” form and “V.-ed” form
Use reversed or emphasized sentences.
Use prepositions
Combine short sentences with longer onesSo…that…, too…too…,etc. When…where…because… while…Looking at this picture, I feel excited and….With the help of…, without music, …Only after I finish it, can I ….Yes! I began my searching for the most delicate rose.Step5. Beautifying