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课件28张PPT。Writing Some days ago is Tree Planting Day. I and My classmates go planting tree in Qinghuai River. We plant a lot of trees that day. Everyone has a space for his tree and they use spades to dig a big hole for tree. Then they put the tree into the hole, put the earth on the tree .Finally they put the water into it and droped it on the tree. Then we go home.Describe ideal things Diet and lifestyle 7A Unit 4Schools 8A Unit 2Space life 9B Unit1Homes/houses 7B Unit 1Pets 7B Unit 6Robots 9B Unit 2What topics have we learnt to write about?Describe an activityCelebrating festivals 7A Unit 3Outdoor activity 8A Unit 3Charities 8B Unit4 and Unit 6Class speechWriting a letter An invitation letter 7B Unit 3
A thank-you letter 7B Unit 4
A recommendation letter
7B Unit 5, 9A Unit 1
An application letter 8A Unit 5
An ask-for-help letter 9A Unit 3
A complaint letter 9B Unit 2
Travelling A trip to a place 8A Unit 3
Plan a day out 8A Unit 3Online travel 8B Unit 3
A trip to a country 8B Unit 2Other topicsGo shopping 7A Unit 5 Wild animals 8A Unit 4
Natural disasters 8A Unit 6Fashion 7A Unit 6Introduce oneself 7A Unit 1Amazing things 7B Unit 4Changes to … 8B Unit 1 How to write a letter? Room 402
38 Hill Road
Sunshine Town
Beijing 100000
17th December
Mr Fan
Chairperson
Birdwatching Club
15 Sun Road
Sunshine Town
Dear Mr Fan
…
Yours sincerely
Zhao Aijia
Do you know the most useful
sentences in each kind of letters ?An application letterI would like to become a member of…
I’m a student at … and I’m very interested in …
I think it’s important to …
I can come to club activities from … to …
I will be very happy if I can become a member of …
You can call me on …
A recommendation letterWe are writing to recommend … as …
David is a … person and he often …
He is also a … person …
We think that David has all the qualities to be …
We hope that you agree with us.for this year’s Youth AwardWe all think that … should get an award.An invitation letter:We are happy to invite you to a …
We will hold the party at …
We will meet at …
We would like everybody to bring …
We will also do …
Please complete the note on the next page to tell us if you can come.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.An ask-for-help letterHow are you?
I am in Grade 9 now and I’m always very busy.
I usually cannot find enough time to …
In fact, many of us feel stressed.
One major cause of stress is … We …
Can you offer me some suggestions?
I hope to hear from you soon.A complaint letterRobot model no. HUGO123BB
Two weeks ago, I bought a … from your company.
However, I am not at all satisfied with it.
First, I am unhappy with its …
I am also not happy with …
So I would like to get my money back or change ...Homework Please try to write one of
these letters
Do you know how to describe an activity?策略指导与写作技巧1.文章类型:
此类文章主要有四种, 包括节日庆祝、
户外活动、班级演讲、慈善活动等．
2．文章的体裁：
这一类型的文章以记叙文为主．
文章的要素:
活动的名称,活动的目的,活动的过程,
活动的意义及自己对这次活动的看法.
注意:
记叙时要按照活动的进展或事情发展的
顺序,将文章的要素有机的结合起来.
例一 : 庆祝节日
写节日庆祝的文章应包括以下要点 :
节日的时间,庆祝这个节日的国家等.
人们如何庆祝这个节日(各种庆祝活动)
3. 活动中人们的感受常用的短语和句型: It is an important festival for …
get together to have a big dinner
let off fireworks
give their grandchildren money in red packets
in preparation for
例二 : 户外活动写外出活动的的文章一般包括以下要点:
列出要去的地点.
行程的安排 (时间、交通工具)
介绍使用何种交通工具时可以参考以
下短语和句型:
在每个地点的活动
可以参考的短语有:take the underground to …, go to … by …, We’d like to take …等．
visit places of interest, go shopping in the afternoon , have a good/great time 等.例三:慈善活动写此类活动时,一般包含以下几点:
1. 活动的名称
2.活动的目的
可参考的短语有:
3. 活动的过程(时间、地点、人物、 事件等)
4. 活动中自己的感受
这部分 起着体现作者思想,深化文章主题的作用,是文章的灵魂, 并不是可有可无的.
参考的句型有:We have done something useful to …, It was very kind of our
friends to support us .We have learned a lot about teamwork.等．
make a contribution to …,
raise money for charity, donate money to sb.等．Have a try三月十二日是植树节,你们班全体同学参加了绿色工程活动,全班去秦淮河植树,请描述当天的经历和感受.
词数80词左右.参考词汇: spade(铁锹) , rope(绳子), barrel ( 桶 ).分析这是一篇记叙文,要写清楚起因,经过和结果。根据试题文字表述，文章应首先介绍参加此活动的大致情况，如活动的时间、名称等。然后介绍参加此活动需要注意的事项，如集合地点，着装，携带的工具。接下来就是介绍活动的内容和活动的进程。这部分要想写出条理，可以用first…second…的结构，也可以用“some…others…”的句式．最后要写出自己对此活动的看法和感受，比如，We are all very happy, because we have done something good to the environment .或者Plant more trees ! Then we can make the world more beautiful.注意文章时态用过去时.范文 March 12th is Tree Planting Day. Our class took part in the Green Project on that day. We went to Qinghuai River to plant trees. We met at the school gate at 8 in the morning. Everybody was wearing strong shoes and old clothes. We took spades, barrels and some ropes with us. After we got there, some students dug holes, some put the trees into the holes, and some watered the trees. It was hard work, but nobody complained. In fact, we all had a good time. We planted about 300 trees on that day. We were very happy because we had done something useful to improve the environment. If everyone makes a contribution to the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.中考写作注意事项一．命题作文
　1.　认真审题,明确写作要求和文体格式,然后确立好文章的中心思想和使用的人称、时态和语态等,如:写日记、描写事件等用一般过去时,写通知用将来时，写使用说明常用被动语态.
　2.　在初中阶段,我们使用语言的能力还很不强,达不到随心所欲的程度,所以我们在写作时不能想什么写什么，而是会什么写什么．选材、造句尽量使用我们在课文中学过的、见过的语言材料．切记根据汉语的思维方式表达英语．
二．提示作文
　必须按照提示的范围和要求，用好、用对所给的提示词进行表达，但也不要把提示词逐词逐句地进行翻译．我们应在提示的范围内进行构思想象.但不要妄加联想,添枝加叶,这样容易跑题或出现表达上的错误.
三.看图作文
1.认真读图，充分理解图画大意,确定画面上的人物、时间、地点，人物在干什么,背景与人物间的联系,然后开始构思出事情的开始发展和结局.
2. 描写的顺序是先介绍人物,再描述他干什么,并说明在什么时间、什么地方干,怎么干的.同时还要依据图画提示拓展自己的思维,使作文语言丰富,内容饱满.千万不要根据中文的思维方式进行描写,那会出现语言上的结构错误或用词不当等错误.
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