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English writing
Lin Wensong
Tengjiao No.2 Middle School
It’s famous in China.
It is near the sea.
It isn’t a big city.
It is called “leather city of China”
It’s famous for its leather(皮革).
Guess
In the southeast of Zhejiang
100,000
It has a population of 100,000
name Leather city of China
location southeast... near the sea
population 100,000
people friendly, rich, work hard
famous leather
others
tall buildings ,hotels, clothing stores …
and, also, because, so, but, although, in a word …
20 years ago old houses
now tall buildings
Used to be/do…
It’s easy for to do
people the shopping here
farm work tired money
People used to do farm work .
They felt tired.
They got little money.
different jobs factories
Now there are many factories here.
People can find different jobs in the factories.
People farmwork.
they worked hard and felt tired,
they got little money.
Although
had a hard time doing
(but)
They felt tired.
They got little money.
Now there are many factories here.
People can find different jobs in the factories.
Now there are many factories here,
People can find different jobs easily.
because
Some people are very rich .
They have their own cars.
by bike
rich
People used to go to work by bike
take bikes to work
Some people are rich to have their own cars.
rich they have their own cars.
enough
so that
Because
Some people are very rich .
They have their own cars.
people work very hard, some of them are very rich . They have their own cars.
The water is dirty, people can’t swim or fish in it.
We could see fish. They were swimming in the water.
We can’t see anything in the water now.
We could see fish. They were swimming in the water.
We could in
the clear water.
different kinds of fish
see swimming
The water is dirty for people swim or fish in.
too to
so that
The water is dirty, people can’t swim or fish in it.
The water is dirty people can’t swim or fish in it.
We can’t see any living things in so dirty water any longer.
We can’t see anything in the water now.
Great Changes in My Hometown
1 2 3 4
Great changes have taken place these years in Shuitou.
20 years ago , Shuitou was only a small town. Most people used to lived in old houses. And they did farmwork . Although they felt tired, but they got little money . Students used to walk go to school or ride bikes. There was also a river outside the town. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. But now, you can see more and more tall buildings, factories and companies here. Shuitou People work so hard that make a lot of money. Many people are enough rich to have their own cars.
In a word, people in Shuitou live much better than before. Unluckily, there is also a great problem here,That’s the environment pollution.
Another way of writing
1.Most people used to live in old houses.
2.Although they felt tired, they got little money.
3.People in Shuitou work so hard that they make a lot of money.
4.Many people are rich enough to have their own cars.
3.Students used to walk or ride bikes to school.
They felt tired, but they got little money.
Great changes have taken place these years in Shuitou.
20 years ago , Shuitou was only a small town. Most people
used to live in old houses. And they did farmwork . Although
they felt tired, they got little money . Students used to walk or
ride bikes to school. There was also a river outside the town. You
can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. But now, people’s life is not what it used to be. You can see more and more tall buildings, factories and companies here. People in Shuitou work so hard that they make a lot of money. So many people are rich enough to have their own cars.
In a word, people in Shuitou live much better than before.
Unluckily, there is also a great problem here, That’s the environment pollution. What a pity!
Good Words Expressions and Sentences
And
Although
also
But
So
In a word
Unluckily
What problems are there in Shuitou
How to make our hometown cleaner
and more beautiful
I think the best way is by doing…
we should…
we’d better…
Let’s…
倒 pour
再利用reuse
一次性的 one-off
少/多用use… less/more
阻止stop…from doing…
The water /the air/the street …
It is … for … to do / It makes people ... /…
so that /too … to…/…
Stop the factory from pouring the
waste into the river
Help the factories do better
Move the factories to …
Try to pick up litter whenever you see
Plant more trees
Reuse the wastes
Recycle(回收) …
Drive cars less , ride bikes more
Use one-off things less
A letter
请给你们的镇长Mr.Bai写一封信.谈谈关于水头的环境污染问题，并谈谈你的建议。要求：表达清楚语句通顺达意。词数在80 个左右。
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Dear Mr. Bai，
I’m .... I’ve been in Shuitou for … years. I like Shuitou, but there is a great problem here, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope__________________________
Thanks.
Yours
Sincerely,
Ma Ling
What problem
Your suggestions
hope
倒入 pour into 乱丢 throw about
政府 government 一次性的 one-off
少/多用use… less/more 再利用 reuse
阻止 stop…from doing…
used to do /be
so that … /too to…
It is … for … to do…
The best way is by doing…
To cherish the environment
is to love ourselves
附作文评分标准（供参考）：
第五档（很好）：13—15分
表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词， 语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。
第四档（好）：10—12分
表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言有少量错误。
第三档（还好）：7—9分
只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。
第二档（较差）：4—6分
能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。
第一档（差）：0—3分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。
Homework:
根据中考评分标准,四人一组互评作文,并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句 .(记录在作文本上）
Green China Station，
I’m from Shuitou，Zhejiang province. I’ve been in Shuitou for five years. I like Shuitou, but there is a great Problem here, do you know That’s the environment pollution. The factories pour the dirty water into the rivers or lakes. A lot of fish have died. People throw about rubbish here. Some rubbish gives out bad smell. Some factories and cars make much noise. We can’t sleep well at night. We know Shuitou is a great town . But I hope it can be more beautiful. Could you do something to improve the environment I hope the government can make some rules to stop the factory polluting our environment. Thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Ma Ling
Correct mistakes
Great changes have taken place these years in Shuitou. 20 years ago most people used to lived in old houses, and now they live in tall buildings. Also there are more and more supermarkets around Shuitou. People are easy to do the shopping. Even though it is a small town ,there are many factories and companies here. People don’t do farm work any longer, they find different jobs in the factories instead. Because of people worked hard , they are getting more and more rich. many people have their own cars. Things were different before, at that time people used to go to work by bike or motorbike. …In a word, people in Shuitou live much better than before . But there is also a great problem here, That’s the environment pollution.
2.it’s very easy for people to do the shopping.
4.richer and richer
1.most people used to live in…
3.Because people worked hard
Great Changes in My Hometown I used to live in a small town with trees all around.
There was no tall building and the only street was narrow.
Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see
different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People
here lived a simple life. Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall
buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere.
Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets.
But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees.
Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We
must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.
Dear Mr Bai，
I’m .... I’ve been in Shuitou for … years. I think Shuitou is a good place. I like it, but there is a great problem here, That’s the environment pollution. The factories pour the dirty water into the rivers or lakes. It makes the water so dirty that we can’t use it. it is also impossible to find any living things People throw about rubbish here. Some rubbish gives out bad smell. Some factories and cars make much noise. We can’t sleep well at night.
Could you do something to improve the environment I hope the government can make some rules to stop the factory polluting our environment. Thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Ma Ling
20 years ago ,people used to live in old houses,
but now most of them live in tall buildings.
There are many clothing stores and supermarkets, too.
People can do the shopping here.
but now live in tall buildings.
Also there are clothing stores and
supermarkets.
people the shopping here.
most of them
more and more
It’s easy for to do
Also
Last week I went to Shuitou ______(看) one of my friends .________(不幸的是), it rained all day. When I got to the bus stop, I saw my friend _______(等)for me ,she looked worried. She_____(带)me to her home as soon as I got off the bus quickly. To my_______(惊讶), when we got home, I found there was so much water everywhere even in the house._______ (因为)of the typhoon it rained all day. Seeing so much water I ___(感到)excited at first, later I _____(发现)it impossible to go downstairs. the best way to spend time is by ________ (观看)the dirty water going by slowly _______(穿过)the window. how I wanted to go home!
Unluckily
waiting
felt
surprise
to see
through
Sunday , August 19 rainy
found
took
Because
watching
Last week I went to Shuitou to see one of my friends . Unluckily , it rained all day. When I got to the bus stop, I saw my friend waiting for me ,she looked worried. She took me to her home as soon as I got off the bus quickly. To my surprise, when we got home, I found there was so much water everywhere even in the house. Because of the typhoon, it rained all day. seeing so much water I felt excited at first, later I found it impossible to go downstairs. The best way to spend time is by watching the dirty water going by slowly through the window. How I wanted to go home!
Sunday , August 19 rainy
Unluckily
When
as soon as
To my surprise
Because of
at first, later
Good Words Expressions and Sentences
改句子
日记
1.格式：在左上角记上当天的日期（年、月、日）、星期，右上角写上当天的天气情况
2.时态：日记记述的时间，通常是在当天的下午或晚上或之后，时态多为过去时态．
A diary
when
what
Where…
