课件27张PPT。短文改错讲与练 一. 考查项目
1. 错词更正
2. 多词删除
3. 缺词补漏
4. 正确行 二. 考查内容
1. 词法(冠词,名词,形容词及
副词,介词,连词,代词等)
2.句法( so…that such..that
too…to and so on )
3.语法(时态及语态,非谓语动词,
主谓一致,定语从句等)三.考查项目分布
1. 正确 1 题
2. 多词删除 1-2 题
3. 缺词补漏 1-2 题
4. 错词更改 5-6 题 四. 常见的错误
1. 冠词 (注意本身及习惯用法)
2. 名词 (单复数及可数和不可数)
3. 形容词及副词(分清所做的句子
成分)
4. 时态 (根据上下文判断)
5. 非谓语动词(用法要清楚,特别
注意to )
6. 介词(注意固定搭配及自身用法)7. 连词(注意行文逻辑,如 and
or but so )
8. 代词(注意各种类型代词的
用法)
9. 定语从句(各类关系词的用
法要明确)
10. 主谓一致(各种类别要记牢)I like the music , sports and art.
He is in a danger of losing his life.
He made a lot of progresses in maths.
She is one of the best student in her
class.
5. It was raining heavy outside.
6. Please keep silently in class.
7. I went to the market and buy lots of
goods.Correction8. I had painted 100 paintings since I
began to learn drawing.
9. I am looking forward to receive your
letter soon.
10. He usually goes to school , ride his
bike.
11. I was born in May 10 , 1976.
12. You should keep an eye at the baby.
13. Would you like tea and coffee ?
14. It was late , but we went home.15. His book is much older than my.
16. I think this necessary to learn
English.
17. This is the best film which I have
ever seen.
18. The book is not the one which he
gave me last week.
19. The students together with the
teacher was moved by the film.
20. The police is searching for the thief. 1. 通读全文,掌握大意
不要见到试题就急着去做,先用2-3分
钟通读全文,了解文章的大概意思。注
意文章中的人称、时态,留意文章中的
功能词及句子之间的关系,以便通篇
考虑,进行改错。要特别主要文章的首
句,以便获得有用的信息。 五. 解题思路及步骤 2. 细读全文,逐一作答
在通读全文的基础上,根据掌握的文
章的信息,发挥判断推理的能力,从语
法、词法和句法的角度对每个句子
进行分析,找出 错误,进行改正。 3. 复读全文,验证答案
复读全文,应充分利用上下文的逻辑
关系,看看文章中的名词的数,代词的
一致性,动词的时态、语态和固定搭
配,以及连词的用法(句子结构)是否有
不一致的地方。这种上下文的逻辑关
系上的错误往往是逐句做题时发现不
了的。 另外注意做题的格式，应严格按照
题目中的要求去做，不能在文中划划
就完了，应写在短文右边的短线上，
同时还要注意大小写。There are many roads in a bad 1____
condition in Bolivia,one of them 2____
is considered the most danger.3______
But accidents are frequent.Thanks4___
for one man,the death toll has 5____
fallen.Every day he climbs up to 6____
the bend and volunteered to direct the
7________
traffic.It was an experience which8___
had a profound effect him.It is 9___
his mission in life to help other.10____ practice____which________dangerous____so____to____________volunteers______thaton______othersThere used to be million of antelopes.1______
By the 1990s the number has fallen to2______
50,000 or so,for the wool is most ex- 3______
pensive.A shawl which made from the4_____
wool can sell for a high price.Often 5_____
the poachers work at night,or shoot 6______
whole herds of antelopes at a time. 7______
Lucky,international co-operation 8______
seems to be worked,and the number 9______
of antelopes is sure grow again. 10______________millions___hadthe___at___and______Luckily________workingtoWe were sailing down the river while 1____
we saw something ahead of us which 2____
looked like a house.In a fact it was a 3____
steamboat.We paddled and climb 4_______
onto it,keeping as quietly as mice. 5______
Then we heard someone to shout 6______
and saw a man lied on the floor. 7______
Two men were threatening the man 8_____
tied up.We decided to find a way save 9___
him.We found the men boat and 10______
took it away.____when____that____climbed_______quiet____lyingto____men’sBritish and American English differs 1____
in 4 ways.One is on the vocabulary. 2____
There are a little differences in 3____
grammar and other 2 differences are 4____
in spelling and pronunciation.Many 5____
factors influenced American pronun 6____
ciation since 4 hundred of years ago. 7____
Which Shaw remarked,the British 8____
and the Americans are two nations dividing
9______
by a commonly language.In the 10_______
future there will be many “Englishes”.______differ__in____fewthehave______As________divided________commonDeng Yaping , was born in 1973, 1________
started playing Pingpong at age 2______
of 7.By 13 she had been become 3______
a world champion.She joins China4______
National Team in 1988.She is the 5______
only player who have got 4 gold 6______
medal in table-tennis.After she 7______
retired at 24,she began study in 8________
Qinghua,then in England for a farther study
9_______
Now she plays a part on IQGC. 10_____whothe____joined____has______medalsto____studying______further__inToday is an excited day for us.The 1______
Chinese woman volleyball team 2______
worked hard and beaten the Japanese3____
team by 3:0.They had won the world 4_____
championship.Their spirit is encou- 5_____
raging.We should learn it.From now 6_____
on ,I will study even hard and try 7_____
their best to win honour for our 8_____
country,either. Wish them to win 9_____
the 5th championship continuously once .
10______________exciting________women______beatfrom____harder____my_____toomore/againCarnival is international festival . 1____
It comes from two Latin words,that 2____
means “no more meat”. At the 3____
beginning,it was lasted for just one 4____
day.With time passed,it was extended.5____
People walk round the streets wore 6____
mask without being recognised. They 7____
can pretend be rich and important.The8____
streets are crowded with wonderfully9_____
costumes.People have lots of funs 10___
during the carnival.__________________________________anwhichpassingwearingmaskstowonderfulfunDear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would1____
describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my
classmates, It seems always 2____
difficult for me to do things well as them . 3____
I’m sure they’ll laugh to me and see me as 4___
a fool.So I feel unhappy every day. Besides ,5___
I have few friends.I don’t know that they do 6___
not like to talk with me.Sometimes ,we talked
to each other very well in class, 7____
but after class we become stranger at once.8_____
I’m trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t
seem to work. 9_____
Can you tell me about what I should do ? 10 _____ as___from_____quietas___at_______________whytalkstrangers___butDear students,
The students Union have decided to 1_____
organize a music week.It will held 2_____
on the first week of May.The acti- 3_____
vities include singing and play 4_____
classical and folk musics.A music 5_____
contest will be included,too.The 6_____
students who’ll take a part in it will 7_____
listen to songs and music,but then 8_____
guess where they come . If you like 9_____
it,signing up for it before April 20 . 10_____
The place will be announced later.___hasbe__in___playing_____music___andfrom_____signI often dream of a teacher.I dream of standing on1_
the platform in the classroom and give lessons to2_
lovely students.I teach them,play with them,but 3_
watch them growing up.I’m always young when
I was staying with them.I know 4_
there is not easy to be a teacher.You have to 5_
learn in order to teach.Without enough
knowledges ,you can never 6_
learn well. What is more,you have to be friends 7_
with your pupils and take good care of him. 8_
Only in this way,can you be a good teacher and 9__
win respect from them.Though I’m a student now,
I’ll work as very hard to realize my dream. 10__Answers:
1. of being/becoming 2.giving
3. but-and 4. was-am
5. there-it 6. knowledge
7. learn-teach 8. him-them
9. 10. as This is s story told by father:“When I was boy the1_
most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring
Festival.My 2__
grandma was the best cooker in the world 3__
but could make the most tasty dishes.one time, 4__
I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner.
as I was 5__
about take s piece from a cooked duck,I saw
Grandma in the kitchen looking 6___
at me.Shake her head,she said,‘ It isn’t a good 7___
time to do that,dear.’At once I apologize and 8___
controlled me at my best till the dinner started.9___
You know,that was a dinner we had waited for
several month.” 10__Answers:
1. was a 2. when
3. cook 4. but-and
6. about to
7. Shaking 8. apologized
9. me-myself 10. months1.We make a fun of him.
2.Slaves were forced watch their festivals.
3.Wearing masks can bring good lucks.
4.In late 1970s,the tradition was revived.
5.If you break the law,you’ll be put into
a prison.
6.If the masks come off,the magic is
losing.
7.I go wildly about music.
8.There are bands from all over the
world play all kinds of music. 课件25张PPT。短文改错
检测学生通过语篇发现、判断、纠正
错误的能力,考查学生综合运用英语知
识的准确性.
短文改错的考查目的2000-2004年短文改错测试点的分布情况近五年短文改错设疑方式短文改错设置的测试点角度灵活
层次多,做题时要把握以下原则:这里指每行最多只能改动一次,即在
一个词上进行改动.可以是增词减词
改词,但无论是何种改动,只能是增加
一词,减少一词或把一个词改成另一
个词.没有错误的一行只需打勾表明
正确而无需改动.错误以改动少为原则历年高考题需要添或删的地方差不多
是3-4处.这些需要添删的词一般都应
该是冠词,介词,关系词以及代词等; 而动
词名词等轻易不添加,否则会改变句子
的原意.虚词以添加或者删除为原则eg: They are afraid of I will feel lonely析]删掉of. 去掉of 之后afraid后面跟了一个宾语从句,这一宾语从句省略了连词that. 有同学把of 改为that,从结构和语法角度看,像是改正了错误,意思也很正确.但是既然宾语从句中 that可以省略,改为that 就完全没有必要
在改错中,实词的处理一般只是改变
它的形式,而不能改变其意义也不能
改换成另一个实词,更不能随便给添删.
实词以改变形式为原则eg: Would you mind do me a favor ?[析]此处考查mind 后面应该跟动词的v-ing
形式.但有些学生把mind给删除了,使
原句成为Would you do me a favour ?
这样虽然纠正了语法错误,但是句子的
语气却变得很不委婉.故不是正确答案.
一般应遵循保持句子原意的原则(即
不能改变文章或作者所表达的意思,
包括其语气和上下文的逻辑关系),
只对短文中的用词错误,语法错误,行
文关系错误进行改正,且要小改而不
大改.原意以保持不变为原则eg: I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the
pillow.[析] 去掉at. 去掉at之后, the moment 就成了一个连词,意思和作用相当于 as soon as, 引导由that 引导的时间 状语从句, that可以省略,强调“自己 很累,睡得快”.应试小窍门：常见的设错点1、名词错误单复数、所有格、抽象名词具体化、名词作定语、主谓一致2、动词错误时态、主谓一致、非谓语动词的混用3、形容词、副词错误形容词/副词的混用、比较等级4、连词和逻辑关系错误连词的词意及充当成分
逻辑上的并列、转折、因果关系等5、代词错误
各种代词及it one that等指代关系是否正确。 缺词
句中漏了必不可少的单词，致使句子结构和意义
不完整，这些词多为功能词，如：系动词 、冠词、 代词、 介词 及不定式符号“to”等。
Eg.
1.The children are taking active part in the
English speech contest.
2.I found strange that she had not come yet.
3.I want to find a hotel to live.
4.We were made work for ten days by the boss.
5.The book which brought for me by my
brother cost a lot of money. ^an^it^in^to^was 多词
多词错误是指受汉语的干扰和影响，出现汉语式英语，这些词多为介词 、冠词 、连接词
代词或助动词等。
Eg.
1.He promised to come and see us after the supper.
2.Oliver Twist,the hero of the story,he was an
orphan.
3.She married to a man from America.
4.Tell me the best way which to express my thanks.
5.I don’t know if they will come,but if they will
come,please show them the way to my home.
\\ 错词
错词原因很多，归纳起来主要有以下几个方面：
（1）名词错误（单复、有无冠词、格、主谓一致）
（2）动词错误 （ 3）形容词、副词错误
（4）连词和逻辑关系错误
Eg.
1.Physics is one of the most difficult subject for us.
2.I didn’t go to the film because I have seen
it before.
3.The children were exciting at the news that
their parents would return from abroad.subjects___had_____excited
4.I prefer staying at home to play with
him outside.
5.The rest of the money were spent on
books.
6.Many people can quick get help from
a doctor when ill.
___playing___was____quickly※做短文改错的步骤见一行改一行是不科学的，因为每一行并非都是完整的单句。即使偶尔遇到单句，也不能孤立地对待，而应该“瞻前顾后”。因此，应该按下列步骤去做:1.通读全文，了解短文大意，弄清上下文之
间的逻辑关系。
2.逐句逐行分析，根据所学的语言知识和语
法知识判断错误。
3.当一眼看不出错误时，默念口诀：名、动
形、代、副、连、冠，介词数词考虑全。
脑想眼看，迅速扫描。但要注意不错的一
般只有一行。 4.如果发现一行中似乎有两处错，要改最明
显的一处；如果改了一处错，句中又出现
了一个错，这是误改，要及时纠正；如果
改也正确，不改也正确，此处就不要改。
5.要使用正确的改错符号。改正后的词应写
在右边的横线上，要书写清楚。切忌符号
乱用，书写潦草。 6.改完之后要从上到下，仔细推敲。改错中,至少有正确的一行，漏字的一行，多词的一行，若没有就与改错要求不符，就要认真再查。严防漏改，纠正误改，重点查看名词的数，动词的时态、语态及非谓语形式，冠词、介词的多余或遗漏，形容词、副词等级的误用，连词是否使用得当。 practice
(NMET 04)Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would 1____
describe myself as shy and quietly.
Before my classmates， it seems always 2_____
difficult for me to do things well as them 3____
I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.4____
So I feel unhappy every day. 5____
Besides,I have few friends.I don’t know that they 6____
don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes,we talked to each
other 7____
very well in class,but after class we become stranger at
8____
once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t
9____
seem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do?
10 ____ __from____quiet^as__at√___why____talk_____strangers___but＼about＼
