课件18张PPT。书面表达专题How to write a good composition? To write a good composition is just like building a good house!First, we need a good blueprint and the materials, or we can also call it design.Design1. 确定文体
书信、日记、便条、通知…
2. 确定时态基调
一般现在时、一般过去时…
3. 分析“破”题
理解提示语、提炼内容要点、明确要点之间的关系、切忌遗漏要点
4. 罗列词组，避重就轻
条条大道通罗马，遇到阻力请绕行Design1. 确定文体
便条
2. 确定时态基调
一般现在时
3. 分析“破”题
内容要点
服用说明全部内容、预防感冒小贴士
要点之间的关系
偶有瞌睡感应属药后正常反应，意为提醒Mike不必担心；预防感冒小贴士应属作者对Mike的关心体贴
切忌遗漏要点
告诉Mike如何预防感冒罗列词组，避重就轻
one or two pills each time;
one or two pieces of them each time
three times a day;
sometimes … feel like sleeping;
sometimes … feel sleepy
have fish, wine or hot food;
have fish, wine or sth. hot / sth. like Sichuan / Hunan food
tips on preventing yourself from getting cold;
ways to take good care of yourself and keep healthy / how to keep healthy, for example… Next, we need to start to build it . We can also call it managementManagement1. 连词成句、覆盖要点
用自己最有把握的表达方式把确定的要点写成句子，不打无把握之战
2. 巧妙组合、顺畅过度、上下连贯、语意畅达
注意搭配、运用恰当的关联词Then, we should know how to make our compositions better. We can also call it DecoratingDecorating1. 推敲检查、查漏补缺
是否有错别字、是否要点不全、是否主谓一致、是否表达得体、是否句型正确、是否有中文式英语表达
2. 运用高级表达、提升文章档次
高级表达法、西方惯用表达、习语谚语等方法修改润色
To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Finally, we can move into the house now! we can also call it Residing-inResiding-in1. 注意书写美观、重视细节标点
书写是否美观、标点是否正确、全篇是否对齐
a-u c-e-l f-t h-k-n i-z
m-vn o-U r-v t-e u-w rr-w
2. 边誊写边检查，注意是否词数合格
留心拼写、注意词性是否正确；是否词数不够 (One Possible Vision)
This medicine is used for curing cough, headache and something like that caused by cold. Take one or two pills each time, and three times a day before meals. Sometimes you might feel like sleeping after you take it. But it doesn't matter. Don't have fish, wine or hot food these days while you're taking this medicine. And you'll be fine in three or five days.
By the way, I think you'd better take good care of yourself and keep healthy. For example, put on more clothes when you go outside on a cold day; keep the air in your room clean; have more water, fruit and vegetables. And the most important of all, do more sports every day to be stronger.
I wish you'll be all right soon. 中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 “The Ways for Students to Relax”的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。注意：1. 开头和结尾已经写好
2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯
3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点
4. 词数：70字左右。Show Time!Mr. Griffin
Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn’t a bad way.
However, I’m not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn’t a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends.
TerrySee you!
