增强书面表达效果的技巧课件(浙江省温州市)

课件15张PPT。2006年全国高考书面表达的评分标准：覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第五档（很好）（21－25分）：增强书面表达效果的技巧词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.

5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.二、怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
8.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）

9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
10．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.三、怎样使用恰当的连接词On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building—our library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before . 书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here.⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. ④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.
⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 请根据下列表格的内容，阐述一下你对减少城市人口的看法。(B)Our modern city is too crowded, and to solve the problem, I have three suggestions. First of all, practise the policy of “ Late Marriage ”and “ One Couple, One child ” so as to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city government must have a tight control of people entering cities to engage in trade or do various physical jobs in order to reduce the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers, school, hospital as well as cinemas and theatres or even satellite towns should be built in the city suburbs or the countries round the cities. In this way city citizens will be encouraged to move there. If these three suggestions are well carried out, the city population will be greatly reduced. THANK YOU ! GOODBYE !