中考作文复习

课件30张PPT。Welcome to My ClassReading makes a full man.读书塑造完整的人格。---培根威坪镇中－－管圣高Beijing 2008年北京要举行奥运会。因此很多外国人会来北京。请根据以下要点向外国人简单介绍北京。(80词左右)1.北京是中国的首都。 2.北京人民非常友好。 3.北京是个非常漂亮的大城市，古色古香，有许多的名胜。（the Great Wall， the Summer Palace ， Tian’anmen Square……)
4.北京的食物非常美味，特别是北京烤鸭世界闻名。
五个 “W”一个 “H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置何 时 何 地 何 人 为
何 如 何 做 了 何 事Beijing duck capitalpeopledeliciousplaces of interestbigoldfriendlyKey Words第二步 抓要点一提示，一要点时态直达 语态到位介/副/连词紧随抓要点，配动词Tense（时态）：The Simple Present Tense
（一般现在时） Key information（要点）Capital, people, big and old city, food, Beijing duck第三步 扩点成句注意使用介/副/连词一个句子, 说清一个要点单句为主, 主从复句慎用句式多样, 同意词句替换时空情节, 主次先后分清Key sentences Beijing is the capital of China. People in Beijing are very friendly. It is a big and old city.It has many places of interest.The food in Beijing is very delicious.Beijing Duck is very famous.第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配介词连词运用Paragraph Beijing is the capital of China. It is a big and old city. It’s very beautiful. It has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, Tian’anmen Square and so on.People in Beijing are very friendly. The food in Beijing is very delicious. And Beijing Duck is very famous in the world.第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？时态正确吗？连词正确吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分！精 彩 范 例 赏 析图1①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析图2③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析图3④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.精 彩 范 文 赏 析图4AC864⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.精 彩 范 文 赏 析About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua精 彩 范 文 赏 析小结审题，抓点
定词, 定态
造句，成文
改错，誉写 假如你是刘云，你的朋友马林下月要到嘉兴参加中学生篮球友谊赛，想抽空到古镇乌镇去看看。你在3月30日去乌镇旅游并拍了一些照片。请你给他写一封信，寄上这些照片和地图，让他了解一些关于乌镇的情况，并告诉他可以乘汽车前往。 注意：1.词数80左右。 2.信的开头和结尾已经写好。中考真题演练WuzhenTense: Key information:The Simple Present Tense (一般现在时)
The Past Tense (一般过去时) what saw in Wuzhen, go by bus, 30km from Jiaxing，send three photos and a mapThank you ！