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课件36张PPT。英语高考专题复习短 文 改 错What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有错。
2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。
3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。How to correct？Any skills？Any rules？How to correct a composition 短文改错Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. Steps of correcting a composition:1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
（检查核对，攻克难点）Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧right wordMissing wordWrong wordUnnecessary word改错命题统计高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
命题特点 1：3：6即: 1行正确；
3行缺词或多词；
6行需要找出错误并改正。Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧动词代词连词副词代词名词介词动词形容词错误类型统计 测试点 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it
to the class. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is
hanging in the library. ＿＿＿＿
readare 二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。NMET2001： …so that I’ll get good marks
in all my subject. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2003: Their word were a great
encouragement to me. _____
subjects words三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。1.But Mr.Brown was doing quite good for a dog. _______
2.He asked angry if we had finished the work. ______
angrilywell四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。1.NMET2001： My parents love me… and will do all they can make sure… ＿＿＿＿
2.I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. ________
3.NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. ________ totalking∧exciting人称代词，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．人称代词的主格和宾格．
４．不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．五、 代词格，细领悟高考链接４：
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English
this term._______
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.
________uswhose 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。 catch a sight of
lose my heart
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
express us
such many people
aon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET 2004 : I don’t know that they don’t
like to talk with me. ________
NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is the
capital of China. _________
whywhich八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。NMET 2003: The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. ___________
NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. __________
everythingtheir常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。NMET2000： She was smiling but nodding at
me． ＿＿＿
NMET2001： It looks as if my parents treat me as a
visitor and a guest. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2001： We may be one family and live under
a same roof. ＿＿＿＿and orthe九、冠词、连词常光顾At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Jim was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3. 4.5.6.7.8.9.10.This passage is about______A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.CAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas
8. ____
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9. ____
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.____＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注短文改错应注意的问题 四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改。
④在纲外生词不改。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。
Don't forget!【解题步骤】1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白短文改错口诀： 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧Homework:
Finish Exercise paperNow here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.1.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.Now here are the weather report for our city.
1. _____
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
2. _____
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
3. ______
will fell down below zero. The temperature
4. _____
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
5. _____isaeveningfallafterwill be the strong wind and the temperature will
6. ____
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
7. ____
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
8. ____
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
9. ____
you are driving because the strong wind.
10. ____a√＼carefulof∧An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High 1. ________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2.________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4._________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5._________
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 6.________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 7.________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 8._________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 9._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 10._______
landed in front of them.An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in1784.High 76.________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 77.__________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 78._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 79.________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 80._________adiscoveredkeeping√ down
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 81._________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 82._________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 83.________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 84._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 85.________
landed in front of them.lighterButtheirfor∧to错误形式与改法1 改词（5—6个）：在文中该词下面划横线
( ___ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。 ?
2 添词（1—2个）：在文中标上添词符号（∧）；在题号后横线上写出要添的词。
?
3 去掉（1—2个）：在文中用斜线( )划掉该词；在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉。
?
4 正确（1个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号(√) 。
2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。
3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。How to correct？Any skills？Any rules？How to correct a composition 短文改错Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. Steps of correcting a composition:1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
（检查核对，攻克难点）Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧right wordMissing wordWrong wordUnnecessary word改错命题统计高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
命题特点 1：3：6即: 1行正确；
3行缺词或多词；
6行需要找出错误并改正。Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧动词代词连词副词代词名词介词动词形容词错误类型统计 测试点 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it
to the class. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is
hanging in the library. ＿＿＿＿
readare 二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。NMET2001： …so that I’ll get good marks
in all my subject. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2003: Their word were a great
encouragement to me. _____
subjects words三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。1.But Mr.Brown was doing quite good for a dog. _______
2.He asked angry if we had finished the work. ______
angrilywell四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。1.NMET2001： My parents love me… and will do all they can make sure… ＿＿＿＿
2.I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. ________
3.NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. ________ totalking∧exciting人称代词，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．人称代词的主格和宾格．
４．不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．五、 代词格，细领悟高考链接４：
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English
this term._______
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.
________uswhose 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。 catch a sight of
lose my heart
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
express us
such many people
aon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET 2004 : I don’t know that they don’t
like to talk with me. ________
NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is the
capital of China. _________
whywhich八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。NMET 2003: The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. ___________
NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. __________
everythingtheir常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。NMET2000： She was smiling but nodding at
me． ＿＿＿
NMET2001： It looks as if my parents treat me as a
visitor and a guest. ＿＿＿＿
NMET2001： We may be one family and live under
a same roof. ＿＿＿＿and orthe九、冠词、连词常光顾At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Jim was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3. 4.5.6.7.8.9.10.This passage is about______A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.CAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas
8. ____
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9. ____
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.____＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注短文改错应注意的问题 四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改。
④在纲外生词不改。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。
Don't forget!【解题步骤】1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白短文改错口诀： 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧Homework:
Finish Exercise paperNow here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.1.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.Now here are the weather report for our city.
1. _____
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
2. _____
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
3. ______
will fell down below zero. The temperature
4. _____
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
5. _____isaeveningfallafterwill be the strong wind and the temperature will
6. ____
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
7. ____
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
8. ____
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
9. ____
you are driving because the strong wind.
10. ____a√＼carefulof∧An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High 1. ________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2.________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4._________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5._________
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 6.________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 7.________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 8._________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 9._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 10._______
landed in front of them.An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in1784.High 76.________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 77.__________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 78._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 79.________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 80._________adiscoveredkeeping√ down
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 81._________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 82._________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 83.________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 84._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 85.________
landed in front of them.lighterButtheirfor∧to错误形式与改法1 改词（5—6个）：在文中该词下面划横线
( ___ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。 ?
2 添词（1—2个）：在文中标上添词符号（∧）；在题号后横线上写出要添的词。
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3 去掉（1—2个）：在文中用斜线( )划掉该词；在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉。
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4 正确（1个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号(√) 。