unit5 Writing(浙江省台州市)
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课件30张PPT。 Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . Others ,however, are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line. In my opinion, students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us.Forming an articleShould students make friends on line ?议论文：关于正反观点 高考英语书面表达--议论文写作Example:
说广告（about advertisement）
提示：有人说广告在现代社会是很重要，有人认为广告的促销成分太多，你认为…… 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1、有一些人认为…… 2、另一些人认为……
3、?我的看法……正反观点题型Read the requirements and make an outlinePart 1. Introduction (Para.1)
Part 2. Body (Para.2---3)
Opinion 1
Opinion 2
Part 3. Conclusion (Para.4) Steps of writing---Step One: Before you write提出问题陈述不同的观点
及其理由说明自己观点江西卷
书面表达（满分25分）
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
注意： 1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。
2．词数为120左右。
3．参考词汇： 网络朋友 on-line friend(s)，
上当受骗 get cheated Introduction
Give a short introduction about the topic.
Recently(Nowadays) many people (students) have had a heated debate /discussion on ….
The topic of … is becoming more and more popular recently.
1.topic sentencethe outline of
Para.2or3
2.Supporting sentences
Examples
Facts
Comparison(对比)There are three reasons for this．
The reasons for this are as follows.Para. 2
1)Opinions are divided on the topic.
2)People differ in their opinions on this matter.
3)There are different opinions among people.
Some people like/prefer/believe/suggest/think…
Para. 3
1) However, others hold a different idea.
2) On the contrary, others hold the opposite opinion.
3) On the other hand, others disagree with them. 每小节开头有过渡句总起:
Different people hold different opinions.
Opinions are divided.
People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …
People have different opinions on this problem.
People take different views on this question.
表达不同观点:
…of them hold the opinion that ….
…of them are in favor of the idea that…
People who are for/against the idea think …
Some people believe that…. Others argue that …表达不同观点的套语不同观点之间的衔接:
However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.
People who are against it don’t think so.
However, each coin has two sides.
Different from those…., …people think ….
On the other hand, … people object that …. In my opinion, … .
Personally, I plan to … .
In my view, I prefer … .
But for me, I would rather … .
As far as I am concerned, … .
In one’s eyes/in the eyes of sb表达个人观点： How to conclude the writing?
Step Two: While you write Making sentencesCombining sentences into paragraphs & forming an articleListing useful phrases构思---要点（Main points）make friends
express one’s ideas
get help witha waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheatedagainst forListing useful phrasesmake friends
express one’s ideas
get help witha waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheated
against forMaking sentences1. Diversify（多样化）your sentence structure
2. Express yourself in a flexible(灵活的) way
3. Avoid wordy （冗长的） sentences
4. Avoid Chinglish mistakesSome sentence-making tips to followmake friends
express one’s ideas
get help withforMaking sentencesThe Internet helps make friends on line.Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas.Students can get help with their foreign language studies . a waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheated
Making friends on line is
a waste of time．Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study . Some students get cheated
on line. Making sentencesagainst 1.The Internet helps make friends on line.2.Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas.3.Students can get help with their foreign language studies . Be for Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies .Combining sentences into a paragraphhow? 1. Making friends on line is a waste of time．2.Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study .
3.Some students get cheated on line. Be against Combining sentences into a paragraph Others ,however, are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line. besides, what’s more, however, otherwise, so , therefore, on the whole, etc.TipsConjunctions and transitional words
连接（过渡）词 2. Advanced sentence structures Inversion, the Attributive clause, Emphatic structure , Noun clause ,etc. 1、表示列举：for example, for instance, such as, take…for example, like, namely, that is (to say)
2、表示顺序: first(ly), second(ly), third(ly)/for one thing, for another/at first, at last
3、表示比较与对比: similarly, compared to(with), while, on one hand…on the other hand
4、表示增补和递进:not only…but also…, as well as, besides, in addition, apart from, what’s more,
5、表示因果:because, as, since, now that, therefore, so, thanks to, owing to, due to
6、表示目的: in order to, so as to, so that, in order that
7、表示让步: though, although, as, while, in spite of, despite, no matter what (how…), even if, even though
8、表示强调: above all, indeed, in fact, as a matter of fact, in other words, in that case, or rather
9、表示转折:but, however, still, yet, while,
10、表示总结: in a(one)word, generally speaking, in short, in brief, on the whole, There is no doubt that, so, thus, as far as I know连接（过渡）词 Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . Others ,however, are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line. In my opinion, students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us. Forming an articleStep Three: After you writeCheck your article:
Try to use the proper words and avoid language mistakes.１．罗列出的要点是否按逻辑顺序；
２．上下文之间是否过渡、衔接得自然；
３．体裁格式是否正确；
４．标点符号是否规范清晰；
５．字数是否符合要求、字迹是否工整、
卷面是否清楚． Checkgo throughReviewingListing useful phrasesMaking sentencesCombining sentences into paragraphs & forming an articleChecking 1.审清题意
2.列出要点3. 造出句子4. 连句成文5.查缺补漏Five steps in writingYour composition should :cover all the required key points.
2. contain no grammatical mistakes.
3. be concise, coherent and to the point.
4. be expressed in a clear and flexible manner.1.要点完整
2.语言无误
3.行文连贯
4.表达清楚SummaryThere are no shortcuts to writing.
Practice makes perfect.Further suggestions 随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的家庭都想把自己的孩子送到讲英语的国家读书。为此，你班开展了“中学生该不该到国外读书”的讨论。请你将下面讨论结果整理成材料，并说明自己的观点和建议，给某英语报社写一封信。
注意：词数100左右ApplicationStep One: 构思---文章结构
提出问题:____________________________________________
不同观点对比:________________________________________
说明自己观点:________________________________________
Step Two: Looking through the given information 审题
1. Style体裁:____________________________________
2.Tense时态:____________________________________
3.Person人称:_____________________________________
4. Main points要点:
One:____________________________________________
Two:____________________________________________
Three:___________________________________________
Four:_____________________________________________
Step Three : 构思---句型/短语/连接词
One:____________________________________________
Two:____________________________________________
Three:___________________________________________
Four:_____________________________________________Homework:
Complete your composition if you haven’t and try to improve it.Thank you!
说广告（about advertisement）
提示：有人说广告在现代社会是很重要，有人认为广告的促销成分太多，你认为…… 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1、有一些人认为…… 2、另一些人认为……
3、?我的看法……正反观点题型Read the requirements and make an outlinePart 1. Introduction (Para.1)
Part 2. Body (Para.2---3)
Opinion 1
Opinion 2
Part 3. Conclusion (Para.4) Steps of writing---Step One: Before you write提出问题陈述不同的观点
及其理由说明自己观点江西卷
书面表达（满分25分）
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
注意： 1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。
2．词数为120左右。
3．参考词汇： 网络朋友 on-line friend(s)，
上当受骗 get cheated Introduction
Give a short introduction about the topic.
Recently(Nowadays) many people (students) have had a heated debate /discussion on ….
The topic of … is becoming more and more popular recently.
1.topic sentencethe outline of
Para.2or3
2.Supporting sentences
Examples
Facts
Comparison(对比)There are three reasons for this．
The reasons for this are as follows.Para. 2
1)Opinions are divided on the topic.
2)People differ in their opinions on this matter.
3)There are different opinions among people.
Some people like/prefer/believe/suggest/think…
Para. 3
1) However, others hold a different idea.
2) On the contrary, others hold the opposite opinion.
3) On the other hand, others disagree with them. 每小节开头有过渡句总起:
Different people hold different opinions.
Opinions are divided.
People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …
People have different opinions on this problem.
People take different views on this question.
表达不同观点:
…of them hold the opinion that ….
…of them are in favor of the idea that…
People who are for/against the idea think …
Some people believe that…. Others argue that …表达不同观点的套语不同观点之间的衔接:
However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.
People who are against it don’t think so.
However, each coin has two sides.
Different from those…., …people think ….
On the other hand, … people object that …. In my opinion, … .
Personally, I plan to … .
In my view, I prefer … .
But for me, I would rather … .
As far as I am concerned, … .
In one’s eyes/in the eyes of sb表达个人观点： How to conclude the writing?
Step Two: While you write Making sentencesCombining sentences into paragraphs & forming an articleListing useful phrases构思---要点（Main points）make friends
express one’s ideas
get help witha waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheatedagainst forListing useful phrasesmake friends
express one’s ideas
get help witha waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheated
against forMaking sentences1. Diversify（多样化）your sentence structure
2. Express yourself in a flexible(灵活的) way
3. Avoid wordy （冗长的） sentences
4. Avoid Chinglish mistakesSome sentence-making tips to followmake friends
express one’s ideas
get help withforMaking sentencesThe Internet helps make friends on line.Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas.Students can get help with their foreign language studies . a waste of time
have a bad influence on
get cheated
Making friends on line is
a waste of time．Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study . Some students get cheated
on line. Making sentencesagainst 1.The Internet helps make friends on line.2.Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas.3.Students can get help with their foreign language studies . Be for Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies .Combining sentences into a paragraphhow? 1. Making friends on line is a waste of time．2.Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study .
3.Some students get cheated on line. Be against Combining sentences into a paragraph Others ,however, are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line. besides, what’s more, however, otherwise, so , therefore, on the whole, etc.TipsConjunctions and transitional words
连接（过渡）词 2. Advanced sentence structures Inversion, the Attributive clause, Emphatic structure , Noun clause ,etc. 1、表示列举：for example, for instance, such as, take…for example, like, namely, that is (to say)
2、表示顺序: first(ly), second(ly), third(ly)/for one thing, for another/at first, at last
3、表示比较与对比: similarly, compared to(with), while, on one hand…on the other hand
4、表示增补和递进:not only…but also…, as well as, besides, in addition, apart from, what’s more,
5、表示因果:because, as, since, now that, therefore, so, thanks to, owing to, due to
6、表示目的: in order to, so as to, so that, in order that
7、表示让步: though, although, as, while, in spite of, despite, no matter what (how…), even if, even though
8、表示强调: above all, indeed, in fact, as a matter of fact, in other words, in that case, or rather
9、表示转折:but, however, still, yet, while,
10、表示总结: in a(one)word, generally speaking, in short, in brief, on the whole, There is no doubt that, so, thus, as far as I know连接（过渡）词 Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . Others ,however, are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line. In my opinion, students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us. Forming an articleStep Three: After you writeCheck your article:
Try to use the proper words and avoid language mistakes.１．罗列出的要点是否按逻辑顺序；
２．上下文之间是否过渡、衔接得自然；
３．体裁格式是否正确；
４．标点符号是否规范清晰；
５．字数是否符合要求、字迹是否工整、
卷面是否清楚． Checkgo throughReviewingListing useful phrasesMaking sentencesCombining sentences into paragraphs & forming an articleChecking 1.审清题意
2.列出要点3. 造出句子4. 连句成文5.查缺补漏Five steps in writingYour composition should :cover all the required key points.
2. contain no grammatical mistakes.
3. be concise, coherent and to the point.
4. be expressed in a clear and flexible manner.1.要点完整
2.语言无误
3.行文连贯
4.表达清楚SummaryThere are no shortcuts to writing.
Practice makes perfect.Further suggestions 随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的家庭都想把自己的孩子送到讲英语的国家读书。为此，你班开展了“中学生该不该到国外读书”的讨论。请你将下面讨论结果整理成材料，并说明自己的观点和建议，给某英语报社写一封信。
注意：词数100左右ApplicationStep One: 构思---文章结构
提出问题:____________________________________________
不同观点对比:________________________________________
说明自己观点:________________________________________
Step Two: Looking through the given information 审题
1. Style体裁:____________________________________
2.Tense时态:____________________________________
3.Person人称:_____________________________________
4. Main points要点:
One:____________________________________________
Two:____________________________________________
Three:___________________________________________
Four:_____________________________________________
Step Three : 构思---句型/短语/连接词
One:____________________________________________
Two:____________________________________________
Three:___________________________________________
Four:_____________________________________________Homework:
Complete your composition if you haven’t and try to improve it.Thank you!