2009高考英语突破书面表达（三）
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09高考英语突破书面表达基础讲与练(三)
Part A 写作基本理论3 对比类写作要点
对比类写作已成为英语书面表达中一个非常重要的形式。1999年高考题要求学生根据所给图画介绍学校三年间的新变化；2001年高考题要求学生比较减负前后的学习情况；2002年高考题要求学生比较“公园要不要收门票”的两种不同观点；2004年北京春季高考要求学生根据所给图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况。不管在工作学习中还是在日常生活中，对比是人们分析问题和解决问题的重要方法和手段，这就不难理解为什么对比类写作是高考写作中的一个重要形式。
对比类写作一般有两种方式：一是集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）；二是逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）。
对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种：
一、今昔对比
在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用过去时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。
今昔对比的写作格式是：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）→对具体事例作对比→结论。写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
1. 开头常用句型
(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.
(2) Things have begun to improve since… 自从……以来，事情有了好转/改善。
Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.
2. 对比常用句型
(1) …used to…, but now… 过去常……，但是现在……
(2) …in the past, but now… 在过去……，但是现在……
(3) once…, but now… 曾经…….，但是现在……
(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。
(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了。
Where the playground used to be now stands another new building---our library.
I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.
My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.
Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.
When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.
在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：
(1) Another change is… 再有一个变化是……
Another big change is in the housing conditions.
(2) What’s more, … 还有……
What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past.
3. 结尾常用句型
In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.
2004年北京春季高考题范文
Changes In Our Life
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).
在写这类文章时，首先要写好主题句。同学们在审题时要把握全局，把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚。然后根据所给材料，展开今昔对比。对比时不要单调地使用同一句型，要稍有变化，并中间要有恰当的过渡句。最后写好总结句，即你对这种现象作出自己的理解或判断。
二、正反观点对比
对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
正反观点对比常用句型
(1) We have a discussion about… 我们对……进行了一次讨论。
We’ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
(2) We have had a survey on… 我们对……开展了一次调查。
We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools.
(3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上意见有分歧。
(4) Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 有两种不同意见。
(5) Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。
(5) Sixty percent of the students are for the idea, while forty percent of the students think otherwise. 有60%的学生支持这个观点，然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。
(6) Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to…, but forty percent of the students don’t think so. 60%的学生认为……是必须的，而40%的学生则不这样认为。
(7) On the one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面……，另一方面……
在对某一观点作进一步论证时，可用下列句型：
(1) What’s more, … 还有就是……
What’s more, we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study, as well as improve our English.
(2) Besides, … 除此之外……
Some students cannot discipline themselves. Besides, it’s far too expensive to study abroad, which is a load to the family.
当然在提出多个论据时，也可用First, …Second, … Third, …来列举论据。
2002年高考题范文
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题).
Opinions are divided on the question(过渡句). 60％of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge(观点一). People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away(论据一). What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city(论据二).
On the other hand, 40％ think that fees should be charged(观点二) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua
可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。
三、数据分析比较
此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象。在写作时不要对数据进行简单的列举，而是要通过对数据进行分析，得出某一结论。即应该通过对数据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少，而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少。时态常用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较。写作格式一般是：说明现象→数据比较→得出结论。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
常用句型：
1. We can see from the chart that…. 我们可以从图表中看出……
2. We can see from the table that… 我们可以从表格中看出……
We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse.
3. A has increased by X%. A增长了X%。
4. A has doubled in the past five years. A在过去五年里增长了两倍。
范文
北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化。
请根据下表和所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上。
年份\交通工具 自行车 出租车 私人汽车 公共汽车
2001 1,000,000 125,000 250,700 17,600
2002 1,650,000 273,000 390,800 18,900
特点 方便，健身 快捷，便宜 富有 慢，脏，拥挤
Along with the city development, the transport system is also changing(主题句). We did a survey on the different transportations.
According to the result, people more and more prefer convenient transportations, like taxi, which doubled in the past year(比较一). Besides, private cars have been increasing rapidly with the high living standard(比较二). While public bus, which was considered the main transport in the city, now is thought by most people dirty and crowded(比较三). But on the other hand, bicycle, as another traditional transportation, is still widely accepted for its convenience and benefit to people’s health(比较四).
In a word, people are enjoying an easier and more conventional life(总结句).
数据比较类文章通常也要求先提出主题句，即通过数据比较要说明的问题。接下来对数据进行比较。在边进行比较时边说明问题，在进行多项比较时，要注意句与句之间的过渡与衔接。最后要写好总结句，即你对这一现象作出自己的理解。
Part B 写作必备素材 助人为乐、 舍己救人
Without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back.
He hurried to school, reaching the schoolyard quite out of breath.
She told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school.
The blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./got injured.
He was praised for what he had done.
She offered us some gifts, but we refused to accept them.
They all thanked him for his help.
Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman.
We hurried to the policeman for help.
With the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag.
A clever idea came to his mind.
Then he put his idea into practice.
I left the hospital without giving my name.
This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
He felt happy because he had done a good deed.
It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb:
“ Helping others is the source of happiness.”
He will always be remembered as a hero.
近年来高考英语书面表达中的难句
第三节：涉及时间状语表达的句型
1. The other day Tom was walking along a river when he heard cries for help.
2. One morning Jack was on the point of getting in the wheat in the field when he caught sight of something strange flying overhead.
3. One afternoon Tom was on his way home when he saw a bird struggling on the grass.
4. One evening the family were watching TV when there was a blackout.
5. One night Peter was burying himself in doing his lessons when he felt the floor shaking
slightly.
6. A few days ago Mary came across an old friend of hers and they greeted each other.
7. The other day Alice was taken to a holiday village where she enjoyed herself very much.
8. One summer night the girl was playing the piano when the phone began ringing.
9. One Saturday afternoon John was walking in the street when a strange car stopped in front of him.
10. One Friday evening the farmer was about to leave his house when he found his car stolen.
11. The next morning the Canadian friends left Hong Kong for Beijing.
12. The next afternoon I received a letter from Johnson.
Part C 09年高考写作基本功训练(词组部分)
101. 摘棉花/苹果/桃/草莓/西瓜/梨 102. 告诉某人真像
103. 打工 104. 往瓶子/壶/杯子/脸盘里倒水
105. 分成4组 106. 中断会谈 107. 切断电源
108. 打长途电话 109. 与某人争吵某事 110. 得第一
111. 为某事责备某人 112. 向某人挥手致意 113. 往前走100米
114. 报名参加竞赛 115. 申请职位 116. 泄密
117. 送某人到门口 118. 呈现高兴的神情 119. 在操场站队
120. 坐在第一排 121. 记下某人的名字/电话号码/姓名/家庭住址
122. 走来走去 123. 动身前往… 124. 哄某人睡觉
125. 熬夜 126. 在小旅馆住宿 127. 严肃对待某事
128. 把…钉在门上 129. 向某人保密 130. 建议不做某事
131. 不鼓励做某事 132. 退学 133. 开除某人/解雇某人
134. 一脚踩空 135. 把某物收捡起来 136. 绊了一跤
137. 摔了好几跤 138. 打中了某人的头 139. 牢记
140. 占太大空间 141. 扑灭火灾 142. 阻挡洪水
143. 识破阴谋 144. 苏醒过来 145. 闲逛
146. 看门 147. 看病 148. 看日出
149. 看书 150. 误拿了某物
09年高考写作基本功训练(句子汉译英部分)
1. 大路的另一边，即在原操场的位置建起了另一座新楼——我们的图书馆。
2. 众所周知，吸烟会导致许多疾病。
3. 首先应明确一点，我们上学不应当迟到或早退。
4. 由于粗心大意，汤姆错过了这个机会。
5. 上个月他父母为他买了一台新型电脑。
6. 我心里很明白父母为我付出的心血，所以我学习很努力。
7. 现在请允许我向各位介绍我们学校的若干规定。
8. 我很惊讶昨天竟在火车上见到一位多年不见的老朋友。
9. 我实在受不了那么大的噪音，弄得我实在不耐烦了，便只好去了解那是怎么回事。
10. 近来我们班就北京动物园是否应当搬出城区进行过一场热烈的讨论。
11. 他可以利用电脑做许多事情。
12. 他妈妈一大早就叫醒他以便他能准时到达机场。
13. 去年十二月我想休假，但是有很多事情等着我去做。
14. 李华现在已经学会了如何操作电脑。
15. 昨晚大约9点，我正在准备功课时，突然听见了很大的喧闹声。
16. 这张照片合我想起了我们在夏令营里度过的日子． （remind）
17. 假如你想从事这项工作，你必须先接受三个月的训练．（take up ）
18. 你一旦养成了坏习惯，改掉它是很难的． （once）
19. 同其他学生相比，那个女孩有更强的英语听、说能力． （compare）
20. 众所周知，成功来自勤奋，不努力则一事无成．
Part D书面表达周周练
EX. 1 : 请以My favorite Newspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。
报纸名称及使用语言 21st Century, 英文报纸
出版地点及出版周期 北京，每周一期
版面内容 每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导
特色 图文并茂
目的 学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息
效果 广为人知，深受喜爱
EX. 2 : 假设你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，给校报用英语写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点
●获得新的知识 ●耗资巨大 ●？
●从太空取得新资源 ●宇航员的安全问题
●扩大人类的生存空间
注意：1. 字数：80－120。
2. 标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
参考答案
词组汉译英
101. pick off cotton/apples/pears/water melon/ strawberry
102. tell sb the truth 103. do/ take up a part-time job
104. fill the cup/kettle/cup/basin with water 105. be divided into four groups
106. break off the conversation 107. cut off the electricity
108. make a distance telephone call to… 109. quarrel with sb about sth
e out the first 111. scold/criticize sb for sth/doing sth
112. wave one’s head to greet sb 113. walk 100 meters ahead/northward/westward/eastward
114. enter for the competition 115. apply for the position
116. let out/give away the secret 117. see sb to the door/see sb home
118. take on a delightful look 119. line up on the playground
120. sit in the first row 121. take down/put down/write down one’s name/telephone number
122. walk/step up and down 123. go off to…/set out to/for…
124. send/sing sb to sleep 125. stay up/ sit up
126. put sb up in the inn 127. take sth seriously
128. pin / stick a note on the door 129. keep sth back from sb
130. advise against doing sth 131. discourage sb against doing sth
132. drop out of school 133. remove sb/ dismiss sb from school
134. miss one’s footing 135. clear sth away
136. fall over a chair/stone 137. have many falls
138. hit sb on the head 139. keep sth in mind / learn sth by heart
140. take up too much room/space 141. put off the fire
142. hold back the flood 143. see through one’s tricks
e back to life 145. hang about/around
146. guard the door 147. see a doctor
148. watch the sunrise 149. read a book
150. take sth by mistake
句子汉译英
1. On the other side ,where the playground used to be, now stands another new building----our library.
2. It is known that smoking causes various kinds of illnesses.
3. It must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over.
4. Because of his carelessness, Tom missed the opportunity(chance).
5. His parents bought him a computer of a new type last month.
6. I knew very well what my parents had done for me. So I studied exceptionally hard.
7. Now please allow me to introduce you to some of our school rules here.
8. I was very astonished to see an old friend of mine on the train yesterday, whom I hadn’t seen for a long time.
9. I couldn’t stand such loud noises and became so impatient that I had to go and see what was happening.
10. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.
11. With the help of computer, he can do lots of work.
12. His mother waked him up early in the morning so that he could arrive at the airport on time.
13. I wanted to have a holiday last December but there were a lot of jobs for me to do.
14. Li Hua has now learned so well how to operate on computers.
15. About 9 o’clock yesterday evening, I was preparing for my lessons when suddenly loud noises came into my ears.
16. This photo reminds me of the days (that )we spent in the summer camp.
17. If you want to take up this job, you should first be trained for three months.
18. Once you form/get into a bad habit, it’s very difficult to get rid of /get out
pared with other students, the girl has better listening and speaking abilities in English.
20. As we all know, success comes /results from hard work; without efforts nothing can be done/ achieved．
Part D 书面表达周周练答案
21st Century is my favorite newspaper. It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week. It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report. There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it. I enjoy reading the paper. I read it to improve my English. I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions. Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music. 21st Century is very popular with students and English learners. I do love it.
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
Some of us held it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.
However, others think very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
Yours,
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09高考英语突破书面表达基础讲与练(三)
Part A 写作基本理论3 对比类写作要点
对比类写作已成为英语书面表达中一个非常重要的形式。1999年高考题要求学生根据所给图画介绍学校三年间的新变化；2001年高考题要求学生比较减负前后的学习情况；2002年高考题要求学生比较“公园要不要收门票”的两种不同观点；2004年北京春季高考要求学生根据所给图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况。不管在工作学习中还是在日常生活中，对比是人们分析问题和解决问题的重要方法和手段，这就不难理解为什么对比类写作是高考写作中的一个重要形式。
对比类写作一般有两种方式：一是集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）；二是逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）。
对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种：
一、今昔对比
在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用过去时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。
今昔对比的写作格式是：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）→对具体事例作对比→结论。写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
1. 开头常用句型
(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.
(2) Things have begun to improve since… 自从……以来，事情有了好转/改善。
Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.
2. 对比常用句型
(1) …used to…, but now… 过去常……，但是现在……
(2) …in the past, but now… 在过去……，但是现在……
(3) once…, but now… 曾经…….，但是现在……
(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。
(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了。
Where the playground used to be now stands another new building---our library.
I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.
My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.
Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.
When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.
在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：
(1) Another change is… 再有一个变化是……
Another big change is in the housing conditions.
(2) What’s more, … 还有……
What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past.
3. 结尾常用句型
In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.
2004年北京春季高考题范文
Changes In Our Life
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).
在写这类文章时，首先要写好主题句。同学们在审题时要把握全局，把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚。然后根据所给材料，展开今昔对比。对比时不要单调地使用同一句型，要稍有变化，并中间要有恰当的过渡句。最后写好总结句，即你对这种现象作出自己的理解或判断。
二、正反观点对比
对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
正反观点对比常用句型
(1) We have a discussion about… 我们对……进行了一次讨论。
We’ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
(2) We have had a survey on… 我们对……开展了一次调查。
We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools.
(3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上意见有分歧。
(4) Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 有两种不同意见。
(5) Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。
(5) Sixty percent of the students are for the idea, while forty percent of the students think otherwise. 有60%的学生支持这个观点，然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。
(6) Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to…, but forty percent of the students don’t think so. 60%的学生认为……是必须的，而40%的学生则不这样认为。
(7) On the one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面……，另一方面……
在对某一观点作进一步论证时，可用下列句型：
(1) What’s more, … 还有就是……
What’s more, we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study, as well as improve our English.
(2) Besides, … 除此之外……
Some students cannot discipline themselves. Besides, it’s far too expensive to study abroad, which is a load to the family.
当然在提出多个论据时，也可用First, …Second, … Third, …来列举论据。
2002年高考题范文
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题).
Opinions are divided on the question(过渡句). 60％of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge(观点一). People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away(论据一). What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city(论据二).
On the other hand, 40％ think that fees should be charged(观点二) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua
可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。
三、数据分析比较
此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象。在写作时不要对数据进行简单的列举，而是要通过对数据进行分析，得出某一结论。即应该通过对数据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少，而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少。时态常用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较。写作格式一般是：说明现象→数据比较→得出结论。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
常用句型：
1. We can see from the chart that…. 我们可以从图表中看出……
2. We can see from the table that… 我们可以从表格中看出……
We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse.
3. A has increased by X%. A增长了X%。
4. A has doubled in the past five years. A在过去五年里增长了两倍。
范文
北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化。
请根据下表和所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上。
年份\交通工具 自行车 出租车 私人汽车 公共汽车
2001 1,000,000 125,000 250,700 17,600
2002 1,650,000 273,000 390,800 18,900
特点 方便，健身 快捷，便宜 富有 慢，脏，拥挤
Along with the city development, the transport system is also changing(主题句). We did a survey on the different transportations.
According to the result, people more and more prefer convenient transportations, like taxi, which doubled in the past year(比较一). Besides, private cars have been increasing rapidly with the high living standard(比较二). While public bus, which was considered the main transport in the city, now is thought by most people dirty and crowded(比较三). But on the other hand, bicycle, as another traditional transportation, is still widely accepted for its convenience and benefit to people’s health(比较四).
In a word, people are enjoying an easier and more conventional life(总结句).
数据比较类文章通常也要求先提出主题句，即通过数据比较要说明的问题。接下来对数据进行比较。在边进行比较时边说明问题，在进行多项比较时，要注意句与句之间的过渡与衔接。最后要写好总结句，即你对这一现象作出自己的理解。
Part B 写作必备素材 助人为乐、 舍己救人
Without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back.
He hurried to school, reaching the schoolyard quite out of breath.
She told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school.
The blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./got injured.
He was praised for what he had done.
She offered us some gifts, but we refused to accept them.
They all thanked him for his help.
Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman.
We hurried to the policeman for help.
With the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag.
A clever idea came to his mind.
Then he put his idea into practice.
I left the hospital without giving my name.
This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
He felt happy because he had done a good deed.
It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb:
“ Helping others is the source of happiness.”
He will always be remembered as a hero.
近年来高考英语书面表达中的难句
第三节：涉及时间状语表达的句型
1. The other day Tom was walking along a river when he heard cries for help.
2. One morning Jack was on the point of getting in the wheat in the field when he caught sight of something strange flying overhead.
3. One afternoon Tom was on his way home when he saw a bird struggling on the grass.
4. One evening the family were watching TV when there was a blackout.
5. One night Peter was burying himself in doing his lessons when he felt the floor shaking
slightly.
6. A few days ago Mary came across an old friend of hers and they greeted each other.
7. The other day Alice was taken to a holiday village where she enjoyed herself very much.
8. One summer night the girl was playing the piano when the phone began ringing.
9. One Saturday afternoon John was walking in the street when a strange car stopped in front of him.
10. One Friday evening the farmer was about to leave his house when he found his car stolen.
11. The next morning the Canadian friends left Hong Kong for Beijing.
12. The next afternoon I received a letter from Johnson.
Part C 09年高考写作基本功训练(词组部分)
101. 摘棉花/苹果/桃/草莓/西瓜/梨 102. 告诉某人真像
103. 打工 104. 往瓶子/壶/杯子/脸盘里倒水
105. 分成4组 106. 中断会谈 107. 切断电源
108. 打长途电话 109. 与某人争吵某事 110. 得第一
111. 为某事责备某人 112. 向某人挥手致意 113. 往前走100米
114. 报名参加竞赛 115. 申请职位 116. 泄密
117. 送某人到门口 118. 呈现高兴的神情 119. 在操场站队
120. 坐在第一排 121. 记下某人的名字/电话号码/姓名/家庭住址
122. 走来走去 123. 动身前往… 124. 哄某人睡觉
125. 熬夜 126. 在小旅馆住宿 127. 严肃对待某事
128. 把…钉在门上 129. 向某人保密 130. 建议不做某事
131. 不鼓励做某事 132. 退学 133. 开除某人/解雇某人
134. 一脚踩空 135. 把某物收捡起来 136. 绊了一跤
137. 摔了好几跤 138. 打中了某人的头 139. 牢记
140. 占太大空间 141. 扑灭火灾 142. 阻挡洪水
143. 识破阴谋 144. 苏醒过来 145. 闲逛
146. 看门 147. 看病 148. 看日出
149. 看书 150. 误拿了某物
09年高考写作基本功训练(句子汉译英部分)
1. 大路的另一边，即在原操场的位置建起了另一座新楼——我们的图书馆。
2. 众所周知，吸烟会导致许多疾病。
3. 首先应明确一点，我们上学不应当迟到或早退。
4. 由于粗心大意，汤姆错过了这个机会。
5. 上个月他父母为他买了一台新型电脑。
6. 我心里很明白父母为我付出的心血，所以我学习很努力。
7. 现在请允许我向各位介绍我们学校的若干规定。
8. 我很惊讶昨天竟在火车上见到一位多年不见的老朋友。
9. 我实在受不了那么大的噪音，弄得我实在不耐烦了，便只好去了解那是怎么回事。
10. 近来我们班就北京动物园是否应当搬出城区进行过一场热烈的讨论。
11. 他可以利用电脑做许多事情。
12. 他妈妈一大早就叫醒他以便他能准时到达机场。
13. 去年十二月我想休假，但是有很多事情等着我去做。
14. 李华现在已经学会了如何操作电脑。
15. 昨晚大约9点，我正在准备功课时，突然听见了很大的喧闹声。
16. 这张照片合我想起了我们在夏令营里度过的日子． （remind）
17. 假如你想从事这项工作，你必须先接受三个月的训练．（take up ）
18. 你一旦养成了坏习惯，改掉它是很难的． （once）
19. 同其他学生相比，那个女孩有更强的英语听、说能力． （compare）
20. 众所周知，成功来自勤奋，不努力则一事无成．
Part D书面表达周周练
EX. 1 : 请以My favorite Newspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。
报纸名称及使用语言 21st Century, 英文报纸
出版地点及出版周期 北京，每周一期
版面内容 每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导
特色 图文并茂
目的 学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息
效果 广为人知，深受喜爱
EX. 2 : 假设你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，给校报用英语写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点
●获得新的知识 ●耗资巨大 ●？
●从太空取得新资源 ●宇航员的安全问题
●扩大人类的生存空间
注意：1. 字数：80－120。
2. 标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
参考答案
词组汉译英
101. pick off cotton/apples/pears/water melon/ strawberry
102. tell sb the truth 103. do/ take up a part-time job
104. fill the cup/kettle/cup/basin with water 105. be divided into four groups
106. break off the conversation 107. cut off the electricity
108. make a distance telephone call to… 109. quarrel with sb about sth
e out the first 111. scold/criticize sb for sth/doing sth
112. wave one’s head to greet sb 113. walk 100 meters ahead/northward/westward/eastward
114. enter for the competition 115. apply for the position
116. let out/give away the secret 117. see sb to the door/see sb home
118. take on a delightful look 119. line up on the playground
120. sit in the first row 121. take down/put down/write down one’s name/telephone number
122. walk/step up and down 123. go off to…/set out to/for…
124. send/sing sb to sleep 125. stay up/ sit up
126. put sb up in the inn 127. take sth seriously
128. pin / stick a note on the door 129. keep sth back from sb
130. advise against doing sth 131. discourage sb against doing sth
132. drop out of school 133. remove sb/ dismiss sb from school
134. miss one’s footing 135. clear sth away
136. fall over a chair/stone 137. have many falls
138. hit sb on the head 139. keep sth in mind / learn sth by heart
140. take up too much room/space 141. put off the fire
142. hold back the flood 143. see through one’s tricks
e back to life 145. hang about/around
146. guard the door 147. see a doctor
148. watch the sunrise 149. read a book
150. take sth by mistake
句子汉译英
1. On the other side ,where the playground used to be, now stands another new building----our library.
2. It is known that smoking causes various kinds of illnesses.
3. It must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over.
4. Because of his carelessness, Tom missed the opportunity(chance).
5. His parents bought him a computer of a new type last month.
6. I knew very well what my parents had done for me. So I studied exceptionally hard.
7. Now please allow me to introduce you to some of our school rules here.
8. I was very astonished to see an old friend of mine on the train yesterday, whom I hadn’t seen for a long time.
9. I couldn’t stand such loud noises and became so impatient that I had to go and see what was happening.
10. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.
11. With the help of computer, he can do lots of work.
12. His mother waked him up early in the morning so that he could arrive at the airport on time.
13. I wanted to have a holiday last December but there were a lot of jobs for me to do.
14. Li Hua has now learned so well how to operate on computers.
15. About 9 o’clock yesterday evening, I was preparing for my lessons when suddenly loud noises came into my ears.
16. This photo reminds me of the days (that )we spent in the summer camp.
17. If you want to take up this job, you should first be trained for three months.
18. Once you form/get into a bad habit, it’s very difficult to get rid of /get out
pared with other students, the girl has better listening and speaking abilities in English.
20. As we all know, success comes /results from hard work; without efforts nothing can be done/ achieved．
Part D 书面表达周周练答案
21st Century is my favorite newspaper. It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week. It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report. There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it. I enjoy reading the paper. I read it to improve my English. I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions. Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music. 21st Century is very popular with students and English learners. I do love it.
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
Some of us held it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.
However, others think very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
Yours,
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