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课件38张PPT。英语写作有效教学Company Logo复杂问题简单化夯实基础,拓展知识,发展能力,提升文化。
夯实基础: 以词语为中心,落实核心词语的核心用法。（词块教学）
拓展知识: 课内课外知识一起抓，两手都要硬。
发展能力:以练促思，以用促记。完形中的写作词熟读噢 ^O^1. b_____up knowledge 积累 (build)
2.take a________ of the opportunity 利用
(advantage)
3. ，which c______ for immediate action需要(call)
4. turn a d______ ear to 不听，不理睬 (deaf)
拓展知识：研究高考典型词块和学生典型错误。Company Logo听力中的写作词情景：工作面试
1.简历 As stated in my r______,I work for a bank. (resume)
Here is my brief resume.
2. 合格的 I’m q_________ed for the position . (qualified)
3.My school reports are also a________upon request. (available)
适度拓展,综合训练，以听促写。听力中的写作词A: Extreme sports are only for _______________ people. Several people from my university enjoy them, but most of us just watch. ____________ plays golf. B: I know _________ people who play it regularly. There are plenty of golf courses around the country. In the past, only _________________people played. A: A great number of people follow rugby in my country. B: There are ________rugby fans in my country too. 情景：数量
适度拓展,强化情景联想和多种表达。a small minority ofNo one I knowloads of a tiny number ofplenty of课内以读促写思考是有效的保证。多练精讲，以练促思，也是训练归纳思维。（课内，课外一样）
用确切的语言思考,然后表达。
保证确切的语言的循环再现。Company Logo According to Higginslanguagebehaviorsocial positionupperElizaColonel
PickeringHenry
HigginsmiddlelowerCome over’ere, cap’in, and buy me flowers off a poor girl.How did you do that, may I ask?There, there. Who’s hurting you, you silly girl? Who do you take me for?standard well-educatedstandard well-educatednon-standard poor-educatedComprehendPickering who had been watching the girl, now speaks to Higginscarelessly throws handful of money into her basketlistened quietly when spoken torespectful to people of higher classrude to lower class; polite to same or upper classgenerally confident
and polite;but ignores Eliza? click to see more detailsCompany LogoGroupsreasonsChoose adjectives to describe each character in the play.impatient kind polite confident
anxious eager rude enthusiastic
unsure generous ambitious
superior emotional self-importantagree PygmalionDiscussionCompany Logofrom middle classEliza Henry Higginsfrom upper classTextrude
impatient
confident
superior
self-importantColonel Pickeringkind
polite
eager
confident
generous
enthusiasticanxiousunsureemotionaleagerambitiousDiscussionCompany LogoTip: 得法于课内,得益于课外。（提倡“大英语”概念）
变化语境，再次思考的重要性。以读促写的关键UNIT2
MoviesWhat is Joe’s personality?First of all, she is reliable.She always keeps her word and is eager to offer help to others.Besides, she is faithful.Not only is she responsible for her family but also she sticks to her friends.Finally, she is diligent, driving herself so hard to reach her goal. Travel with Miss WorldWhich tourist attraction interests you most in Paris?Well,I’d prefer ______________to others.It is just __________! Besides,prefer_______is my favorite art museum, where there’s so much to___________. favoriteamazingexplorerecommendI also recommend_____________,which ____________________________.the Eiffel TowerLouvreNotre DameParis is really impressive because of his romantic atmosphere. is famous for Hugo’s great novelSome students think that we can use cellphones in schools .Nevertheless ,others 一致认为弊大于益__________________________________________________.PETS 原文W: ___________________. You see, countless innocent people are killed by drunk drivers each year.我不能太同意了！M: I think it's _____time we turned our attention to the danger
of drunk driving now.I can't agree with youagree that it does more harm than good.书面经典highCompany Logo重视综合性课型回归课本,对句法,特别是词法适度分析,注重中英语言差别(词序,成分,词性)。
当堂练习巩固词法,增加表述成分。
语言运用要“死去活来”,强化诵读和模仿。回归课本 In the opening of the letter,what
made Jo feel wonderful?It is wonderful to hear from Rosemary.收到某人的信 hear of ,hear from & hear about
Have you _____________ Charles recently?
I never _____________ a man with the name Tom.
I have ________ much ________ Beckham.详细 heard from heard of heardabout相关短语：
be absent _____home/school/office______／
______／_______
from不在家缺课缺勤_________________________________________________________________________.a.He was absent from school due to his illness.b.He was seriously ill, which accounts for
his absence from school.The foreign teacher
was kind enough to offer him private lessons.因病少年没上学。外教补课。Absent Company Logo围绕词汇学习.词不离典型的句,句不离文章话题的篇。
知识纵向联系,形成知识树。通过句型转化，形成横向联系。知识系统化Company Logo以课内作业促写III. 佳句赏析和模仿，
1. The style of Western art has changed many times, while Chinese art has changed less often.
While 用以表示对比或相反的情况。
[仿写] 我爱喝清咖啡而他喜欢加奶油的。
I drink black coffee ___________________________________________.
Company Logo以课内作业促写IV. 完成句子
1. Greece is _________________ （被认为）the cradle of Western civilization.
2. He came to see me ________________ (每隔几天).
3. I wish ___________________ (我是宇航员) now.I. Fill in the blanks. ( 30 points)
Clair didn't want the Robot in her house，______ ______her husband would ______ ______ …
II. Phrase(30 points)
1.??考验 ______ 2.一堆 ______ 3. 认真对待 ______
III. Spelling( 16 points)
1. How I e____________ you getting such a good position in the company…
IV. Translation (24 points)
1. As she turned around, ______________________ ( Gladys Claffern站在那) –倒装句…Unit 2 Review TestCompany Logo文科作业理科化每课必有硬性作业,有作业必及时批改,有批改必重点反馈。
硬性作业有预习提纲,课文背诵,部分翻译,课外经典句背诵,复习巩固练习。
由个别到一般的方式（归纳推理形式）讲清原理，然后再把一般用到个别（演绎推理形式）当中去。
错题集:不打折扣,不留死角。
Company Logo提高能力智慧的劳动(口笔头输出)是浮载思考大船的深水。
输出是加深记忆重要途径,是活的记忆。
书面的成就感属于所有学生。
Together with the modern advances in science and technology, the news that Dolly had been born was announced in 1997.
However, Dolly’s death raised many opinions about cloning. Personally, I would like to agree that cloning may do no good to our human beings.
No cloning of dinosaurs Firstly, seeing Dolly, we may think that cloning animals can easily develop a disease. They can’t live long. Secondly, we can’t clone animals that have been extinct longer than 10000 years, even if the DNA of dinosaurs could survive this long. Thirdly, based on what we know now, human cloning is just a matter of time but the assumption that human clones have already been born hasn’t been proved yet…
1.定语从句 2.现在,过去分词做状语 3. 词块 Company Logo英语不仅是学习对象,而且是学习手段。
语感就是语言的熟悉度。需要学生用英语教学和学生用英语回答,增加重点语言复现率。用英语教英语Company Logo任务型之所以有效,是把学习者
注意力集中在需要表意的语言
形式上。Exercise-Practice-Task
任务型教学Task: work in groups of four and try to design a future vehicle in your mind. Describe it and draw a picture if possible. Show your imaginationappearance:
size:
cost:
speed:
operation(操作):
advantages:
possible problems:
… Useful expressions
We suppose that…
It is likely that…
In my opinion,…Be creative, practical and use
the words and expressions
we’ve learned in this class! Key words in this class
constantly press remind swiftly master
unsettle bend lack previous sight
direction link take up carry up sweep up Work sheetCompany Logo提升文化乱石堆上有雾----这种隐居叫做江湖！《无双》
A hidden place where __________________________ is called the Killers’ World.(prep. 在…上，没接触）
但我建议最好听妈妈我会用功读书.---JAY
You ___________follow mom’s advice and study hard.
看不见你的笑我怎么睡得着， 你的身影这么近我却抱不到-JAY
How am I supposed to fall asleep if I am unable to ____________ you. Close as you are to me, I am unable to ___________you.
为你弹奏萧邦的夜曲，纪念我死去的爱情，跟夜风一样的声音。--JAY
I’m playing a Chopin’s nocturne in memory of my past love, a sound sharing something ___ with the night breeze.
fog floats above piles of stonesmay as wellcatch sight ofcatch hold ofin common歌曲_______________________, all day just all the time. You're everything to me,brightest star to let me see. You touch me in my dreams.We kiss in every scene. I pray to be with you ________________________. I'll love you till I die,deep as sea, wide as sky. The beauty of our love paints rainbows, ____________________. I need you all my life. You're my hope.You're my pride. In your arms I find my heaven. In your eyes my sea and sky. ___________________________. 歌曲You're always on my mindthrough rainy and shiny dayswherever you goMay life be our love paradiseUpon receiving an inheritance, Pierre is filled __1__the responsibilities of a nobleman. His bad behavior is __2__and he considers __3__ to live a moral life in an imperfect world? He attempts to free his farmers, but achieves__4___. He is married __5__ Elena, __6__his own better choice and is helpless in the face of his wife's affairs.
1,A.with B.of C.for D.by
2, A.missed B.gone C.losing D.going
3, A.where B.why C.what D.how
4, A.nothing B.anything C.everything D.something
5, A.to B.with C.by D./
6, A.with B.against C.for D.onAs Napoleon pushes through Russia, Pierre _1__to watch the Battle of Borodino.There, he realizes _2__ terrible war can be. When Napoleon's occupies Moscow, Pierre _3_,attempting to kill Napoleon and is caught. _4_he is freed by Russian army.___5__, Andrei, wounded seriously, is taken back and reunited with Natasha _6__accident. Having lost all will to live after forgiving Natasha, he dies.
1,A.has B.likes C.thinks D. decides
2, A.so B. how C.what D.why
3, A.is kept B. remains C.is remained D.keeps
4, A. Later B.There C.However D.Even
5, A.So B.Therefore C. Meanwhile D.Though
6, A.by B.for C.with D.asPrince Andrei leaves his pregnant wife _1_ war.His wife Lise dies during childbirth. He shuts himself ,_2_ he is disappointed at the war and himself.Young Natasha gives him pure love, but she is _3__ seduced by Elena’s brother __4_ Andrei is away. Pierre manages to stop it and ___5__he is in love with her.
Natasha __6__ her wedding engagement broken off.
1,A.with B.at C.for D.by
2, A.as B.but C.though D.so
3, A.suddenly B.soon C.quickly D.fast
4, A.while B.during C.with D.for
5, A.recognizes B. realizes C.wonders D.learns
6, A.has B.gives C.lets D.asksCompany Logo提升文化提升文化文化的核心是善的价值观价值观语言美扬长教育的体现是美的语言
夯实基础: 以词语为中心,落实核心词语的核心用法。（词块教学）
拓展知识: 课内课外知识一起抓，两手都要硬。
发展能力:以练促思，以用促记。完形中的写作词熟读噢 ^O^1. b_____up knowledge 积累 (build)
2.take a________ of the opportunity 利用
(advantage)
3. ，which c______ for immediate action需要(call)
4. turn a d______ ear to 不听，不理睬 (deaf)
拓展知识：研究高考典型词块和学生典型错误。Company Logo听力中的写作词情景：工作面试
1.简历 As stated in my r______,I work for a bank. (resume)
Here is my brief resume.
2. 合格的 I’m q_________ed for the position . (qualified)
3.My school reports are also a________upon request. (available)
适度拓展,综合训练，以听促写。听力中的写作词A: Extreme sports are only for _______________ people. Several people from my university enjoy them, but most of us just watch. ____________ plays golf. B: I know _________ people who play it regularly. There are plenty of golf courses around the country. In the past, only _________________people played. A: A great number of people follow rugby in my country. B: There are ________rugby fans in my country too. 情景：数量
适度拓展,强化情景联想和多种表达。a small minority ofNo one I knowloads of a tiny number ofplenty of课内以读促写思考是有效的保证。多练精讲，以练促思，也是训练归纳思维。（课内，课外一样）
用确切的语言思考,然后表达。
保证确切的语言的循环再现。Company Logo According to Higginslanguagebehaviorsocial positionupperElizaColonel
PickeringHenry
HigginsmiddlelowerCome over’ere, cap’in, and buy me flowers off a poor girl.How did you do that, may I ask?There, there. Who’s hurting you, you silly girl? Who do you take me for?standard well-educatedstandard well-educatednon-standard poor-educatedComprehendPickering who had been watching the girl, now speaks to Higginscarelessly throws handful of money into her basketlistened quietly when spoken torespectful to people of higher classrude to lower class; polite to same or upper classgenerally confident
and polite;but ignores Eliza? click to see more detailsCompany LogoGroupsreasonsChoose adjectives to describe each character in the play.impatient kind polite confident
anxious eager rude enthusiastic
unsure generous ambitious
superior emotional self-importantagree PygmalionDiscussionCompany Logofrom middle classEliza Henry Higginsfrom upper classTextrude
impatient
confident
superior
self-importantColonel Pickeringkind
polite
eager
confident
generous
enthusiasticanxiousunsureemotionaleagerambitiousDiscussionCompany LogoTip: 得法于课内,得益于课外。（提倡“大英语”概念）
变化语境，再次思考的重要性。以读促写的关键UNIT2
MoviesWhat is Joe’s personality?First of all, she is reliable.She always keeps her word and is eager to offer help to others.Besides, she is faithful.Not only is she responsible for her family but also she sticks to her friends.Finally, she is diligent, driving herself so hard to reach her goal. Travel with Miss WorldWhich tourist attraction interests you most in Paris?Well,I’d prefer ______________to others.It is just __________! Besides,prefer_______is my favorite art museum, where there’s so much to___________. favoriteamazingexplorerecommendI also recommend_____________,which ____________________________.the Eiffel TowerLouvreNotre DameParis is really impressive because of his romantic atmosphere. is famous for Hugo’s great novelSome students think that we can use cellphones in schools .Nevertheless ,others 一致认为弊大于益__________________________________________________.PETS 原文W: ___________________. You see, countless innocent people are killed by drunk drivers each year.我不能太同意了！M: I think it's _____time we turned our attention to the danger
of drunk driving now.I can't agree with youagree that it does more harm than good.书面经典highCompany Logo重视综合性课型回归课本,对句法,特别是词法适度分析,注重中英语言差别(词序,成分,词性)。
当堂练习巩固词法,增加表述成分。
语言运用要“死去活来”,强化诵读和模仿。回归课本 In the opening of the letter,what
made Jo feel wonderful?It is wonderful to hear from Rosemary.收到某人的信 hear of ,hear from & hear about
Have you _____________ Charles recently?
I never _____________ a man with the name Tom.
I have ________ much ________ Beckham.详细 heard from heard of heardabout相关短语：
be absent _____home/school/office______／
______／_______
from不在家缺课缺勤_________________________________________________________________________.a.He was absent from school due to his illness.b.He was seriously ill, which accounts for
his absence from school.The foreign teacher
was kind enough to offer him private lessons.因病少年没上学。外教补课。Absent Company Logo围绕词汇学习.词不离典型的句,句不离文章话题的篇。
知识纵向联系,形成知识树。通过句型转化，形成横向联系。知识系统化Company Logo以课内作业促写III. 佳句赏析和模仿，
1. The style of Western art has changed many times, while Chinese art has changed less often.
While 用以表示对比或相反的情况。
[仿写] 我爱喝清咖啡而他喜欢加奶油的。
I drink black coffee ___________________________________________.
Company Logo以课内作业促写IV. 完成句子
1. Greece is _________________ （被认为）the cradle of Western civilization.
2. He came to see me ________________ (每隔几天).
3. I wish ___________________ (我是宇航员) now.I. Fill in the blanks. ( 30 points)
Clair didn't want the Robot in her house，______ ______her husband would ______ ______ …
II. Phrase(30 points)
1.??考验 ______ 2.一堆 ______ 3. 认真对待 ______
III. Spelling( 16 points)
1. How I e____________ you getting such a good position in the company…
IV. Translation (24 points)
1. As she turned around, ______________________ ( Gladys Claffern站在那) –倒装句…Unit 2 Review TestCompany Logo文科作业理科化每课必有硬性作业,有作业必及时批改,有批改必重点反馈。
硬性作业有预习提纲,课文背诵,部分翻译,课外经典句背诵,复习巩固练习。
由个别到一般的方式（归纳推理形式）讲清原理，然后再把一般用到个别（演绎推理形式）当中去。
错题集:不打折扣,不留死角。
Company Logo提高能力智慧的劳动(口笔头输出)是浮载思考大船的深水。
输出是加深记忆重要途径,是活的记忆。
书面的成就感属于所有学生。
Together with the modern advances in science and technology, the news that Dolly had been born was announced in 1997.
However, Dolly’s death raised many opinions about cloning. Personally, I would like to agree that cloning may do no good to our human beings.
No cloning of dinosaurs Firstly, seeing Dolly, we may think that cloning animals can easily develop a disease. They can’t live long. Secondly, we can’t clone animals that have been extinct longer than 10000 years, even if the DNA of dinosaurs could survive this long. Thirdly, based on what we know now, human cloning is just a matter of time but the assumption that human clones have already been born hasn’t been proved yet…
1.定语从句 2.现在,过去分词做状语 3. 词块 Company Logo英语不仅是学习对象,而且是学习手段。
语感就是语言的熟悉度。需要学生用英语教学和学生用英语回答,增加重点语言复现率。用英语教英语Company Logo任务型之所以有效,是把学习者
注意力集中在需要表意的语言
形式上。Exercise-Practice-Task
任务型教学Task: work in groups of four and try to design a future vehicle in your mind. Describe it and draw a picture if possible. Show your imaginationappearance:
size:
cost:
speed:
operation(操作):
advantages:
possible problems:
… Useful expressions
We suppose that…
It is likely that…
In my opinion,…Be creative, practical and use
the words and expressions
we’ve learned in this class! Key words in this class
constantly press remind swiftly master
unsettle bend lack previous sight
direction link take up carry up sweep up Work sheetCompany Logo提升文化乱石堆上有雾----这种隐居叫做江湖！《无双》
A hidden place where __________________________ is called the Killers’ World.(prep. 在…上，没接触）
但我建议最好听妈妈我会用功读书.---JAY
You ___________follow mom’s advice and study hard.
看不见你的笑我怎么睡得着， 你的身影这么近我却抱不到-JAY
How am I supposed to fall asleep if I am unable to ____________ you. Close as you are to me, I am unable to ___________you.
为你弹奏萧邦的夜曲，纪念我死去的爱情，跟夜风一样的声音。--JAY
I’m playing a Chopin’s nocturne in memory of my past love, a sound sharing something ___ with the night breeze.
fog floats above piles of stonesmay as wellcatch sight ofcatch hold ofin common歌曲_______________________, all day just all the time. You're everything to me,brightest star to let me see. You touch me in my dreams.We kiss in every scene. I pray to be with you ________________________. I'll love you till I die,deep as sea, wide as sky. The beauty of our love paints rainbows, ____________________. I need you all my life. You're my hope.You're my pride. In your arms I find my heaven. In your eyes my sea and sky. ___________________________. 歌曲You're always on my mindthrough rainy and shiny dayswherever you goMay life be our love paradiseUpon receiving an inheritance, Pierre is filled __1__the responsibilities of a nobleman. His bad behavior is __2__and he considers __3__ to live a moral life in an imperfect world? He attempts to free his farmers, but achieves__4___. He is married __5__ Elena, __6__his own better choice and is helpless in the face of his wife's affairs.
1,A.with B.of C.for D.by
2, A.missed B.gone C.losing D.going
3, A.where B.why C.what D.how
4, A.nothing B.anything C.everything D.something
5, A.to B.with C.by D./
6, A.with B.against C.for D.onAs Napoleon pushes through Russia, Pierre _1__to watch the Battle of Borodino.There, he realizes _2__ terrible war can be. When Napoleon's occupies Moscow, Pierre _3_,attempting to kill Napoleon and is caught. _4_he is freed by Russian army.___5__, Andrei, wounded seriously, is taken back and reunited with Natasha _6__accident. Having lost all will to live after forgiving Natasha, he dies.
1,A.has B.likes C.thinks D. decides
2, A.so B. how C.what D.why
3, A.is kept B. remains C.is remained D.keeps
4, A. Later B.There C.However D.Even
5, A.So B.Therefore C. Meanwhile D.Though
6, A.by B.for C.with D.asPrince Andrei leaves his pregnant wife _1_ war.His wife Lise dies during childbirth. He shuts himself ,_2_ he is disappointed at the war and himself.Young Natasha gives him pure love, but she is _3__ seduced by Elena’s brother __4_ Andrei is away. Pierre manages to stop it and ___5__he is in love with her.
Natasha __6__ her wedding engagement broken off.
1,A.with B.at C.for D.by
2, A.as B.but C.though D.so
3, A.suddenly B.soon C.quickly D.fast
4, A.while B.during C.with D.for
5, A.recognizes B. realizes C.wonders D.learns
6, A.has B.gives C.lets D.asksCompany Logo提升文化提升文化文化的核心是善的价值观价值观语言美扬长教育的体现是美的语言
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