How to write a good composition?

课件30张PPT。IntroductionIt’s _________.It has________.Welcome to Wuyi
It’s called_____.Although_______in the past ,_____today.Population: about 330,000How to write a good composition?Let’s write a composition to talk about “the Great Changes in My Hometown”. To write a good composition is just like building a good house!First, we need a good blueprint and the materials, or we can also call it design.蓝图材料DesignMake an outline.（列纲要）Beginning: Ending: Great Changes in My HometownLife in the pastLife todayTitle: _____________ Key point B:
Key point A:
Main part
(正文): Great changes have taken place these years in Wuyi. In a word, people in Wuyi live much better than before. Next, we need to start to build it . We can also call it managementManagementPut the key points into sentences.（选句型）Develop the sentences into the passage.（妙联句）Don’t forget the link words:
and, but ,or, then, so, because, when, before, after, as soon as .. ,not …until ... ,not only … but also… no matter how / where /when/ who… … …20 years ago
old housesnow tall buildingsUsed to be/do…It’s easy for to people do the shopping here . Old photos and new photosfarm work tired moneyPeople did farm work .
They felt tired.
They got little money.factories different jobs Now there are many factories here.
People can find different jobs in the factories.Old photos and new photos they worked hard and felt tired,
they got little money. Although(but)They felt tired.
They got little money.Old photos and new photos Now there are many factories here.
People can find different jobs in the factories.Now there are many factories here,people can find different jobs easily.becauseOld photos and new photosThere are many new buses to different places.bike / foot …People usually went to work by bike or on foot .
walked or rode bikes to work.bus / car…Old photos and new photos
Some people are rich they have their own cars. enoughso thatSome people are very rich .
They have their own cars.richsome peopleSome people are rich to have their own cars.Old photos and new photosless –known few visitorsattract more and moreIt was less –known .Few visitors came here .soIt attracts more and more people.the places of interest in Wuyi. because off Great Changes in My HometownThen, we should know how to make our compositions better. We can also call it Decorating .DecoratingCheck your work carefully.(细复查)correct your compositionsCorrect mistakes Great changes have taken place in Wuyi these years.
20 years ago , most people used to live in old houses. And they do farm work . Although they felt tired, but they got little money . People usually walked or rode bikes to work. It was a less-known town, so few visitor came here.
But now, you can see more and more tall buildings, factories and companies here. Wuyi People work so hard that they make a lot of money. Many people are enough rich to have their own cars. And now more and more visitors attract by the hot spring and other places of interesting in Wuyi.
In a word, people in Wuyi live more better than before. Can we hand it in right now ?Common Problems名词的单复数问题
主谓一致问题
时态和语态问题
Chinglish 现象
词类和连词错用现象Finally, we can move into the house now! we can also call it Residing .Which oneResidingPay attention to your writing.(重书写)How can we write a good composition?（明审题）（选句型）（妙联句）(细复查)
Develop the sentences into the passage.
Check your work.Pay attention to your writing.(重书写)Read the instructions carefully and
make an outline. Put the key points into sentences.（列纲要）Show Time! DiscussWhat advantages does tourism bring us?
What problems can it bring us ?
A letter 请你针对旅游破坏生态问题，给广大的游客写一封公开信，呼吁他们保护大自然，倡导生态旅游(eco-tourism) 。要求：表达清楚、语句通顺达意。词数在80 个左右。
．Dear friends，
To cherish the environment is to love ourselves!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I　hope__________________________
Thanks.
what problems some rules of eco-tourismhopeYours Sincerely, Ma Ling Homework:
1.Finish writing this letter .
2.Exchange your compositions and
make them better.Thanks for listening !