课件20张PPT。 实验二中 郭伟English writing ——The ways to improve your writing
likes playing sports healthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a ______ boy.He is a ____ boy who____________.I like music.I like________ music.I like____music that________________.dancedancecan make me excited扩写练习：仿写练习
3、A good student should be good at study do other things well.( 08年潍坊市中考作文）
not onlybut also1、You can buy anything online you want without home.leaving2、 that the website is safe, or someone can steal your money and other things. ( 08年烟台市中考作文）Make sure4.It is exciting____us ___ travel around Liu Gong Island..（08 年威海市中考作文）
5.The sights were beautiful we forgot the time.( 08 年临沂市中考作文）
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so thatIf forto you want to buy an MP4.you can look through the shopping website.I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. A找出用所学句型写的好句。 Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing strategyCompare:B is better than A in 08省考试说明范文AHow glad I am! I can do many things of my own. I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. Isn’t my plan nice?Bbeginningkey sentencelinking words连词ending I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. fluency流畅
consecution条理如何添加过度句、连接词补充说明 for example, besides，In addition(此外）， What’s worse! What’s more! Worst of all.
转折 however, yet, but
原因 thanks to, because of
结果 as a result of , so ，so···that
顺序 first, next, then , finally句式富于变化例如；1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday.
--Jack didn’t come home until 7am yesterday.
2. We are good friends. We should help each other.
--We are good friends and we should help each other.
--As we are good friends , we should help each other. (good )(better)(best) My hobbies
( Beginning ): ___________________________________. ( Key sentence A):______________________. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings.
(Key sentence B ): ______________________. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?Practice:I am a lover of reading(Key sentence C ): _________________.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.
(Ending) _________________________.Title:____________ totogeneral总specific分specific分general总I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.In short, I enjoy my life in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful
to my health and my studies.My hobbiesBeginning: Key sentence B:
Key sentence A:
Ending: Main part
(正文): Key sentence C:
(2008年烟台市书面表达考题) 现在网上购物越来越流行，假如你的朋友想在网上购买一款MP4,但他不知如何操作，请你根据表格中的提示写一篇短文，向他介绍网上购物的益处购买MP4的过程及网上购物的不利因素。Use outline提纲 to improve your writing strategy注意:
1.词数90词左右。
2.文章的开头和题目已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3.文中谈论网上购物的益处和不利因素均不少于两点。
4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Nowadays shopping online is more and more popular . I think shopping online is very convenient . You can buy anything online you want without leaving home. Shopping online will save much time. What’s more . It’s often in a low price. Good Words Expressions and Sentencesshopping online you want to buy an MP4.you can look through the shopping website,type”MP4” on the website, you can find all kinds of MP4s. choose your favorite. What you must do is to fill in a form including your personal information,
IfThen credit card number, name and address. Finally,click “Enter” . You’ll get the MP4 by mail in few days. the website is safe, or someone can steal your money and other things. Be careful that the MP4 you buy is in good quality. I hope you’ll get a good one.Such asMake sureSum upHow to improve your writingTips :
1.Make an outline.
2.Choose good words and sentences.
Homework
今年我省出台了系列推进素质教育的新政，其中对学生的作息时间做了严格规定。学生课外时间增多了，他们都在干些什么？他们的负担减轻了吗？下面是English Online杂志社就这些问题对某市部分初中生进行问卷调查的结果。请根据该调查结果写一份80～100词的调查报告，并简单谈谈你的意见和看法。文章的开头已给出，不计入词数。( 08年山东省中考作文）
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