课件13张PPT。看 图 作 文 讲 评------Writing是否你也常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
注意:1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增加细节,使日记连贯。2、词数:120以上。
3、日期已给出。
Sunday,October 13,2003 Fine
1、审 题
①审体裁:日记文体。
②审时态:一般过去时,描述 我 一天上午的经历。
③审人称:第一人称
④审要点:记叙描绘文体,抓住四个要点:时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。
⑤审格式。
2、列简句
为迎接高考,“我”常常复习功课到深夜。
I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination.
I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .
I got dressed.
I rushed into the living room .
Mother was preparing breakfast there .I got on my bike .When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed3、衔接
将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。
对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因:如:昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。
Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock.
对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出:(起来后)要洗漱:
I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.
对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点:
图中的母亲有没有讲什么?(因为时间紧张,母亲没有来得及讲什么)
我去上学肯定要拿什么?(书包)
Before she could say anything,I got my school-bag…
对于第三幅图,我们可以相象一下:“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情
害怕迟到受处罚,而拼命地骑车
I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could.
对于第四幅图我们可以推测:因为车骑得快,因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校.
It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.4、成文
加上过渡词语、改变一些句式,整理成文。
Sunday,October 13,2003 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons
or college entrance examination.It was
not until 12 o’clock last night that I went
to bed.When I woke up this morning,I
found it was already 9 o’clock.I got
dressed,brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.Then I rushed into the living-room,where
Mother was preparing breakfast.Before
she could say anything,I got my school-
bag,ran out and got on my bike.I was
afraid that I would be punished by the
teacher because of be late so I rode as fast
as I could.It seemed only a few minutes
before I got to the school .To my
surprise,I found the schoolgate was
closed.I t was then that I realized it was Sunday.
Thank you
2009-03-06