课件4张PPT。图1图2图3图4AC864课件44张PPT。English Writing
英语书面表达训练写事How to write a good composition?Let’s write a composition to talk about “the Great Changes in our School”. To write a good composition is just like building a good house!First, we need a good blueprint and the materials, or we can also call it design.蓝图材料DesignMake an outline.（列纲要）Beginning: Ending: Great Changes in My SchoolLife in the pastLife todayTitle: _____________ Key point B:
Key point A:
Main part
(正文): Great changes have taken place these years in Xing Jing Middle School In a word, teachers and students in Xing Jing Middle School live much better than before. Next, we need to start to build it . We can also call it managementManagementPut the key points into sentences.（选句型）Develop the sentences into the passage. （妙联句）Don’t forget the link words:
and, but ,or, then, so, because, when, before, after, as soon as .. ,not …until ... ,not only … but also… no matter how / where /when/ who… … … four years ago
old class roomsnow tall buildingsUsed to be/do…It’s easy for tostudents and teachers study here . Old photos and new photos work tired. bad condition
learn difficult be lack of materials Teachers worked hard.
They felt tired.
They tought in a bad condition.
Students learned much more difficulty because of being lack of learing materals Old photos and new photos they worked hard , they felt it tired anddifficult to teach students . AlthoughThey felt tired.
it difficult to teach.Old photos and new photos Now there are many teaching equipment s and learing materila here. teachers can usu different kinds of teaching equipment in class ,they can teach well.Old photos and new photosBecause , not only do teachers use computers to help students to learn . do expiment with students in the lab. students go to school by bus.computer/ lab …Teachers usually tought by one book or one chalk.
Student walked or rode bikes to school.bus / car…Old photos and new photoslibraryAt this time but alsoSometimes Old photos and new photosless –known few visitorsattract more and moreIt was less –known .Few visitors came here .soIt attracts more and more people.the change of our schoolbecause off Great Changes in My schoolThen, we should know how to make our compositions better. We can also call it Decorating .DecoratingCheck your work carefully.(细复查)correct your compositionsCorrect mistakes Great changes have taken place in Xing Jing Middle School these years.
Four years ago ,teachers and students used to live in old classrooms . And teachers worked hard. they do farm work . Although they worked hard,they felt it tired and difficult to teach students. Teachers usually tought by one book or one chalk.Student walked or rode bikes to school. It was a less-known school , so few visitors came here.
But now, you can see serval tall buildings, and many trees a here. It’s easy for Students and teachers to study here. Now there are many teaching equipment s and learing materila. Teachers can teach well because they can usu different kinds of teaching equipment in class .
Not olny do teachers use computers to help students to learn , but also they do expiment with students in the lab. Sometimes students go to school by bus.And now more and more visitors attract by the change of our school.
In a word, teachers and students in Xing Jing Middle School live more better than before. Can we hand it in right now ?Common Problems名词的单复数问题
主谓一致问题
时态和语态问题
Chinglish 现象
词类和连词错用现象Finally, we can move into the house now! we can also call it Residing .Which oneResidingPay attention to your writing.(誊写)书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为
何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节
连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文五个 “W”一个 “H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置书面表达经典示例假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实； ?? 2、词数100左右； ?? 3、结尾已为你写好。
_________________________________________ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua附图1234At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000,
I saw a woman driving a car hit the man
in the street.第二步 抓要点一幅图，一要点时态直达 语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改进吗？为什么？精 彩 范 文 赏 析①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. ③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. ④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to run and the car hit the elderly hard ⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li HuaA letter 请你针对旅游破坏生态问题，给广大的游客写一封公开信，呼吁他们保护大自然，倡导生态旅游(eco-tourism) 。要求：表达清楚、语句通顺达意。词数在80 个左右。
．Dear friends，
To cherish the environment is to love ourselves!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope__________________________
Thanks.
what problems some rules of eco-tourismhopeYours Sincerely, Ma Ling Homework:
1.Finish writing this letter .
2.Exchange your compositions and
make them better.Thanks for listening !
