中考书面表达

课件21张PPT。English Writing
英语书面表达训练Xiaoxian Middle School 写过去的事中考书面表达的主要形式：记叙文(以叙事或描写来叙述人或事物。)
应用文（ 包括：书信、日记、通知、便条(请假条、电话留言、留言条)及贺卡等 。）
说明文（以简洁的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、结构、变化、特征等。）
议论文（通过摆事实、讲道理，直接表达作者的见解和主张。）

　　

记叙文是中考最常见的一种书面表达文体记叙文的主要描述对象：１．写物 ( objects ) ２．写人 (persons) ３．写事 (things)How to write a past thing?主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明能力要求
时间顺序空间顺序逻辑顺序主要问题　　　　原因：要点不全线索不清步骤不对 Writing skills书面表达六步法请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观．
提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车去参观了一家农场．
　　　 ２．在农场里你们野炊，唱歌跳舞，下棋，说笑话，讲故事，玩的非常高兴．
　　　 ３．结尾已给出.
要求：１．可围绕主题适当发挥，但应包含所给要点．
　　　 ２．词数60左右，所给结尾不记入总数．
…The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers.
书面表达经典示例　　一、审题:
确定基本要素:5W1H
何 何 何 为 如 何
时 地 人 何 何 事
　When: _______ Who :_______ Where : _______ What : _______　Why :_______ 　How : _______
　　
　　　　　　　　　　 Today We Farm Visit Play BusTense:The simple past tense.二、抓要点
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　
　
　
met ··· bus 　　visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　　　played chess danced ···sang　　 　told jokes ···stories had a picnic动词确定主要行为 What happened?Key points：关键词：三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位 Who did what?


　　　　　　常用连词:
and、so/because、although/but
however、not only···but alsoWho: met ···bus 　　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　played chess danced···sang　　 　
told jokes ···stories had a picnic第四步 连句成文词与词搭配 　　句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾 顺序: time order 注意: 简单句、复合句 Key points：　
　visited a farm 　 met ···bus 　　　 　　　　　 had a　picnic　 played chess 　　
danced···sang　　told jokes···stories
Time order:
Today···early in the morning ···　then··· at noon ···
After a short rest··· 　　　the time passed quickly···连词成句　连句成文
Five “w” and one“H”： When: Today Who: We Where: Farm What: Visit a farm Why: Ｐlay How: By bus 　　　　　　　　　第五步 查错改错时态是否正确
主谓是否一致
要点是否全面
人称是否正确
语序问题
是否符合语言习惯　
固定短语 We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head of the farm showed we around. We were happy to see the crops and vegetables grew well. At noon we had a picnic lunch. After a short rest, we have great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a well time. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 找错并改正:amet at the school gate andbususgrowinghadgood Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 范文　A Visit to a Farm第六步 誊写书写规范 卷面整洁
卷面潦草一定要扣分!Have a try三月十二日是植树节,你们班全体同学参加了绿色工程活动,全班去秦淮河植树,请根据以下提示描述当天的经历和感受.
提示：１.早上在学校门口集合待发；
　　　 ２.穿旧装，带工具;
　　　 ３.植树:挖、放、浇;
4.中午野餐.　　　
词数80词左右.参考词汇:
　　Green Project (绿色工程)，
　　Tree Planting Day (植树节) ,
　　spade(铁锹) , rope(绳子), barrel (桶)． 审题，抓点
造句，成文
改错，誉写小结：How to write the past things?Homework复习本课要点
背诵精彩范文祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩!