unit1 Friendship writing

课件23张PPT。Unit One Friendship Period 6

Writing Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: What is Xiao Dong’s problem?He’s not good at communicating with people. He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.Reading Can you give Xiao Dong some advice?Your adviceStart talking to them by asking their likes and dislikes
Join in their discussions to show you are friendly
Talk about something with them that you have in common
Find a person you share interest with
Try to help them when they are in trouble
Try to do sports with them together OutliningHow to write a letter of advicePresenting the problemProposing the solutionConclusionStructure(结构）
Topic sentence （开头）：the problem and your point of view
Body（内容） ：your advice and reasons
Conclusion （结尾）：your wishes
Tense（时态）
As it is a letter, Simple Present Tense （一般现在时）will be applied to the writing.Writing tips:Connectors:（链接词）
Illustration (阐述)：
I think, I believe, I suggest, why not…
in my opinion…
Addition（递进）：
secondly, and then, besides, in addition,
what’s more
Contrast（转折）：
but, however, on the other hand…
Summary(总结)：
in short, in a word, therefore, so…Dear Xiaodong,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:
Firstly, why not…?If you do this,…
Secondly, you should/can…
Then/ That way,…
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if…
By doing this, …
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Miss WangOutliningSample Dear Xiaodong,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I am sure you will soon have a new friend.
Secondly, you can start talking by asking about their likes and dislikes. That way you will soon find people with the same interests. I think that is a good way to find new friends.Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you try to join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas. By doing this you are letting people know how friendly you are.
So there should be no problem. It should
certainly provide you with some new friends.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Miss Wang
Homework 1,Please write a letter of advice to Xiao Dong in your exercise-books.
2,Try to conclude（归纳） as many useful expressions using in the letter of advice as possible.? First/Firstly, you should…
In my opinion, you should…/you can…
My advice is…, why not …
I think/ believe that…/I suggest that you should…
I’m afraid that…
I advise you to…
I don’t think that…, I think so./ I don’t think so.
Don’t worry…
I agree that…/ I don’t agree that…
It would be a good idea if you try to…The usual ways to express your advice:Useful sentences1,I’m writing to give some suggestions to…
I will try my best to make some constructive (有帮助的）suggestions.
2,Here I’d like to give my advice on…
I would like suggest that…
3,If I were you, I would …
4,In my opinion…
5,please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.
6,These are my suggestions and I hope they could be useful . V AssessmentContent:
Are your ideas stated clearly?
Do you provide good reasons or supporting details for your ideas?
Organization:
Are your ideas related to the topic?
Is your reasoning logical?
Have you used linking words properly?
Have you used any sentence patterns provided in the text?
Accuracy:
Are there any spelling mistakes?
Are there any grammatical mistakes?
Have you employed high-level words and expressions?
Others:
Is your handwriting neat and easy to read?
实战演练假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Tom写信给你，说他和好朋友Jack因为一次误会影响了他们之间的关系，希望你能给他提一些建议，信的开头已经给出。
Dear Tom,
You have asked me for my advice on your friendship with Jack, and I will try my best
to make some constructive suggestions.参考词汇misunderstanding 误解
interpersonal relationship 人际关系
deal with 对待，处理
make sb uncomfortable 使。。不舒服
weaken one’s friendship 削弱。。的友谊
talk to sb 与。。交谈 find out 找出
make one’s effort to do 尽力去做。。
get rid of … 摆脱 be based on 以。。为基础
mutual understanding 相互理解Writing tipsContents 内容：(The letter may contain the following points)
1. Make an effort to change the situation.
2. Start talking to people about what you both like.
3. Join in people’s discussion.
4. Show your interest in their talk.
5. Try to make friends with one or two classmates.如何写劝说性的建议信基本要求：
1，格式要正确。书信的结构包括信头，信内地址，称呼，信的正文，结束语，签名，附件等部分。若写一封私人书信，没有必要写信头和信内地址，一般在右上方写上发信日期即可。
2，语气和用词要得体。要用协商性、试探性的语气提出建议，避免用生硬说教的口吻。
3，要传达特定的信息。首先要点明写信的目的是提建议，然后简要描述问题，提出建议并具体分析所提出的建议，最后真诚地希望对方能接受自己的建议，并礼貌的结束全文。
4，组织和结构要合理。要合理安排所有内容，使文章有条有理，符合逻辑。Useful expressionshave a quarrel with sb 与某人吵架
get confused 感到困惑
get along well with 与。。相处得好
point out 指出
mutual understanding 相互理解
take advantage of 利用
in a word 总而言之
make one’s effort to do 尽力去做。。Useful sentences1,I’m writing to give some suggestions to…
I will try my best to make some constructive (有帮助的）suggestions.
2,Here I’d like to give my advice on…
I would like suggest that…
3,If I were you, I would …
4,In my opinion…
5,please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.
6,These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of… 实战演练假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Tom写信给你，说他和好朋友Jack因为一次误会影响了他们之间的关系，希望你能给他提一些建议，信的开头已经给出。
Dear Tom,
You have asked me for my advice on your friendship with Jack, and I will try my best
to make some constructive suggestions.To ask people their likes and dislikesTo join in discussionsTo show interest in others’ ideasTo share his feelings with othersII BrainstormingYour advice for Xiao Dong