2009年辽宁高考英语短文改错 2
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2009年辽宁高考英语短文改错 2 丹东一中邢丞
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的高考资源网词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies. The process is more important than the result is. Now there are only 90days being left before the test. I am not sure his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
Gao Fei
1. before→ago 2.friend→friends 3. own’s→own 4. and failed→but
5. of→for 6. so good→well 7. the result is去掉is 8. being left去掉being 9. sure后加whether 10. needed→need
No. 2
Making ropes are one of the oldest trades in the world. We know what people made ropes more than 5000 years ago, because we have founded ropes in very old Egyptian tombs. They make some ropes from the hair of camels. They made another from twisted grass. People used them for tying animal, for getting water from deep wells and for pulling large stones which they used them in building. In the very old days, people made ropes by the hand, but today machines make them. In very poor countries today, people still make ropes as his ancestors did them in the very old days.
1. are→is 2. what→that或去掉 3. founded→found 4. make→made
5. another→others 6. animal→animals 7. used them去掉them
8. by the hand去掉 the 9. his ancestors→their 10. did them去掉them
No. 3
My grandfather was a teacher. He was the head teacher of a school for boys at the ages of thirteen and eighteen. I know that he was a kind man, because when I am young, he gave me presents, and set me on his knees, and told me stories. And the boys at his school were afraid of him. At school, when he walked into a room full of noise boys, there was silence at once. When he looked at a boy with a certain look in his eye, that boy went red in the face, and looked down his shoes. If a boy brought to him careless work, my grandfather picked up a boy’s book and threw it across the room, shouting, “Do it all again, and take it back the first thing in the morning!” If the boy was later, or if he forgot to take the work, he had to do it again.
1. at the age between 2. I am was 3. And But 4. noisenoisy 5. eye eyes 6. looke down后加at 7. brought to去掉to 8. a boy’s the 9. take bring 10. was laterlate
No. 4
I am back in Brighton now after great holiday with Rosie in Dublin. I really enjoyed it. We travel by train and boat. I hated the boat journey, for I tried to sleep, but it was very difficulty. We were all very tired when we arrived. We had stayed with her parents for two weeks and they cooked lovely meals to us. I practised my English all the time. We visited Rosie’s friends and also some of the Dublin’s beautiful buildings. The castle was close so we didn’t get into, we just looked at the outside. I liked the university very much. What great to be a student!
1. after后加a 2. travel→travelled 3. difficulty→difficult 4. allboth
5. had stayed去掉had 6. to→for 7. the Dubi’s去掉the 8. close→dosed
9. into→in 10. What→How
No.5
After a day of work and play, the body needs to have a rest. Sleep is necessary for good healthy. During this time, the body recovers from the activities of the day. The rest what you get while sleeping enable your body to prepare it for the next day. There are four levels of sleep. Each is a little deeper than the one ago. As you sleep, your muscles relax. Your heart jumps more slowly, and your brain slows down. After you reach the fourth level, your body shifts back or forth from one level of sleep to the other. If you have trouble fall asleep, some people suggest breathing slowly and deeply. And other people believe that drink warm milk helps make you sleepy. There is also a old suggestion that counting sheep put you sleep.
1. healthy→health 2. rest what→that或去掉 3. it→itself 4. ago—before
5. jumpsbeats 6. or→and 7. trouble fall→falling
8. drink warm milk—drinking 9. a old—an 10. put you后加to
No. 6
The company that walt Disney started does not just make film. In 1955 Walt Disney opened a first Disneyland in Los Angeles. In 1971 Disney World was opened in Florida. In 1983 Tokyo Disneyland was opened in Japan. It was cost between $500 or 600 million. In 1992 Euro Disney was opened in France. Disney parks are the cleanest parks what you can imagine.The workers working there must dress clean clothes. In Disneyland all the characters from Walt Disney’s films can be founded. Visitors like the Sleeping Beauty Castle best. Many streets in Disneyland were built to look like that in the USA in 1890s. People walk around wearing nineteenth-century clothing.
1.make filmfilms 2. a firstthe 3. or 600 million and 4. was cost去掉was 5.whatthat或去掉 6.dresswear 7.foundedfound 8. look like thatthose
9. in 1890sin the 1890s 10.clothingclothes
No. 7
Mary was a pop star. She bought new house, and hired a man to painting the rooms in new colours. It was difficulty to get tickets for her show, because of everybody wanted to see it. So she decided to give the painter two of the best seat. She hoped that this would make him to work better. He took the tickets without saying something. She listened no more about him until the end of the month, when she got the painter's bill. On it was the words: “Three hour's watching you sing and dance: $6. After 5 pm I get two dollars an hour instead of one dollar.”
1. new house a new house 2. paintingpaint 3. difficultydifficult
4. because ofbecause 5.seatseats 6. to workwork 7. somethinganything
8. listenedheard 9. waswere 10. hour’s hours’
No. 8
We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit of a chemistry factory last. It was the large one with nearly 20,000 workers. We could look colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw the workers working hardly. We talked to them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. In the way home we felt tiring, but we all thought we had a very good day. We really hope we can get more chances of leaving school and learning social experience.
1. a daythe 2. visit ofto 3. the largea 4. could looksee
5. anywhereeverywhere 6. hardlyhard 7. a lot ofa lot 8. In the way On 9. tiringtired 10. leaving schoolleaving the school
No. 9
A few months later returning to the U. S. from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German well in Germany, I thought it might be interested to begin studying another language. In the first class a teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise in it he would say a word or two in French. Then each student would do their best to copy. When it got to mine, he kept having me say more words, and I finally asked him for why. “I find it great fun,” he explained. “In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time that I heard an American speak French by a German accent .”
1. later→after 2. I have→had 3. interested→interesting 4. a teacher→the
5. in it→which 6. their→his 7. mine→me
8. asked him for why→asked him why 9. I heard→I have heard 10. by→with
No. 10
The pool was filled with child. I put on my bathing suit and tried to swim. But after a minute I had to get out of. A hundred very small pair of legs and arms were splashing（溅起水花）all round me. I returned to a bank and looked out the ocean in peace. Ah, now this was really pleasant. Look at a large fish jumping in and out of the waves, I wandered what kind it was. Suddenly, a strange bird fly over my head singing. What a unusual song it had! It sounded as “You there! You there!”
1. child→children 2. get out of→get out 3. pair→pairs 4. a bank→the
5. looked out → looked out at 6. Look→Looking 7. wandered→wondered 8. fly→flew 9. a unusual→an unusual 10. as→like
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文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的高考资源网词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies. The process is more important than the result is. Now there are only 90days being left before the test. I am not sure his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
Gao Fei
1. before→ago 2.friend→friends 3. own’s→own 4. and failed→but
5. of→for 6. so good→well 7. the result is去掉is 8. being left去掉being 9. sure后加whether 10. needed→need
No. 2
Making ropes are one of the oldest trades in the world. We know what people made ropes more than 5000 years ago, because we have founded ropes in very old Egyptian tombs. They make some ropes from the hair of camels. They made another from twisted grass. People used them for tying animal, for getting water from deep wells and for pulling large stones which they used them in building. In the very old days, people made ropes by the hand, but today machines make them. In very poor countries today, people still make ropes as his ancestors did them in the very old days.
1. are→is 2. what→that或去掉 3. founded→found 4. make→made
5. another→others 6. animal→animals 7. used them去掉them
8. by the hand去掉 the 9. his ancestors→their 10. did them去掉them
No. 3
My grandfather was a teacher. He was the head teacher of a school for boys at the ages of thirteen and eighteen. I know that he was a kind man, because when I am young, he gave me presents, and set me on his knees, and told me stories. And the boys at his school were afraid of him. At school, when he walked into a room full of noise boys, there was silence at once. When he looked at a boy with a certain look in his eye, that boy went red in the face, and looked down his shoes. If a boy brought to him careless work, my grandfather picked up a boy’s book and threw it across the room, shouting, “Do it all again, and take it back the first thing in the morning!” If the boy was later, or if he forgot to take the work, he had to do it again.
1. at the age between 2. I am was 3. And But 4. noisenoisy 5. eye eyes 6. looke down后加at 7. brought to去掉to 8. a boy’s the 9. take bring 10. was laterlate
No. 4
I am back in Brighton now after great holiday with Rosie in Dublin. I really enjoyed it. We travel by train and boat. I hated the boat journey, for I tried to sleep, but it was very difficulty. We were all very tired when we arrived. We had stayed with her parents for two weeks and they cooked lovely meals to us. I practised my English all the time. We visited Rosie’s friends and also some of the Dublin’s beautiful buildings. The castle was close so we didn’t get into, we just looked at the outside. I liked the university very much. What great to be a student!
1. after后加a 2. travel→travelled 3. difficulty→difficult 4. allboth
5. had stayed去掉had 6. to→for 7. the Dubi’s去掉the 8. close→dosed
9. into→in 10. What→How
No.5
After a day of work and play, the body needs to have a rest. Sleep is necessary for good healthy. During this time, the body recovers from the activities of the day. The rest what you get while sleeping enable your body to prepare it for the next day. There are four levels of sleep. Each is a little deeper than the one ago. As you sleep, your muscles relax. Your heart jumps more slowly, and your brain slows down. After you reach the fourth level, your body shifts back or forth from one level of sleep to the other. If you have trouble fall asleep, some people suggest breathing slowly and deeply. And other people believe that drink warm milk helps make you sleepy. There is also a old suggestion that counting sheep put you sleep.
1. healthy→health 2. rest what→that或去掉 3. it→itself 4. ago—before
5. jumpsbeats 6. or→and 7. trouble fall→falling
8. drink warm milk—drinking 9. a old—an 10. put you后加to
No. 6
The company that walt Disney started does not just make film. In 1955 Walt Disney opened a first Disneyland in Los Angeles. In 1971 Disney World was opened in Florida. In 1983 Tokyo Disneyland was opened in Japan. It was cost between $500 or 600 million. In 1992 Euro Disney was opened in France. Disney parks are the cleanest parks what you can imagine.The workers working there must dress clean clothes. In Disneyland all the characters from Walt Disney’s films can be founded. Visitors like the Sleeping Beauty Castle best. Many streets in Disneyland were built to look like that in the USA in 1890s. People walk around wearing nineteenth-century clothing.
1.make filmfilms 2. a firstthe 3. or 600 million and 4. was cost去掉was 5.whatthat或去掉 6.dresswear 7.foundedfound 8. look like thatthose
9. in 1890sin the 1890s 10.clothingclothes
No. 7
Mary was a pop star. She bought new house, and hired a man to painting the rooms in new colours. It was difficulty to get tickets for her show, because of everybody wanted to see it. So she decided to give the painter two of the best seat. She hoped that this would make him to work better. He took the tickets without saying something. She listened no more about him until the end of the month, when she got the painter's bill. On it was the words: “Three hour's watching you sing and dance: $6. After 5 pm I get two dollars an hour instead of one dollar.”
1. new house a new house 2. paintingpaint 3. difficultydifficult
4. because ofbecause 5.seatseats 6. to workwork 7. somethinganything
8. listenedheard 9. waswere 10. hour’s hours’
No. 8
We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit of a chemistry factory last. It was the large one with nearly 20,000 workers. We could look colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw the workers working hardly. We talked to them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. In the way home we felt tiring, but we all thought we had a very good day. We really hope we can get more chances of leaving school and learning social experience.
1. a daythe 2. visit ofto 3. the largea 4. could looksee
5. anywhereeverywhere 6. hardlyhard 7. a lot ofa lot 8. In the way On 9. tiringtired 10. leaving schoolleaving the school
No. 9
A few months later returning to the U. S. from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German well in Germany, I thought it might be interested to begin studying another language. In the first class a teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise in it he would say a word or two in French. Then each student would do their best to copy. When it got to mine, he kept having me say more words, and I finally asked him for why. “I find it great fun,” he explained. “In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time that I heard an American speak French by a German accent .”
1. later→after 2. I have→had 3. interested→interesting 4. a teacher→the
5. in it→which 6. their→his 7. mine→me
8. asked him for why→asked him why 9. I heard→I have heard 10. by→with
No. 10
The pool was filled with child. I put on my bathing suit and tried to swim. But after a minute I had to get out of. A hundred very small pair of legs and arms were splashing（溅起水花）all round me. I returned to a bank and looked out the ocean in peace. Ah, now this was really pleasant. Look at a large fish jumping in and out of the waves, I wandered what kind it was. Suddenly, a strange bird fly over my head singing. What a unusual song it had! It sounded as “You there! You there!”
1. child→children 2. get out of→get out 3. pair→pairs 4. a bank→the
5. looked out → looked out at 6. Look→Looking 7. wandered→wondered 8. fly→flew 9. a unusual→an unusual 10. as→like
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