2009 年中考写作专项训练---问题烦恼篇
-- A reply for advice
预习篇
Part One Read and complete the following question
(A)
Part Two Writing structure
Read the passage again and fill in groups ( discuss in group)
A written reply for advice should be formal and polite. It should have _______parts
Part one: the beginning
Make a friendly remark and then mention your ________ in the first one or few sentences of this letter
Part Two the body
Give the brief details of your ________and the _______ .
Part Three :
make a request for further communication and give best _____
Part Three How to write a reply for advice
Read the passage again and find some useful sentences patterns （在短文中找到有用的句子并模仿造句）
How to make a friendly remark
1)I’m very glad / pleased / happy to do （很高兴做某事）
(1) 我很高兴您是我的读者
(2) 我很高兴读到你的来信
2) I ‘m very glad/ pleased happy（ sorry） that…
我很高兴你即将来中国学汉语
3) It’s great/ wonderful to learn/ know that…. （高兴获悉
真棒得知此书对你有帮助
4) Thank you for your letter about…. （感谢某人有关。。。 来信
(1) 感谢你的有关如何学习汉语的来信
(2) 感谢你写信告知你的烦恼
II. How to mention the topic
It’s true that ….
的确如此阅读是提高理解语言的最佳途径
的确如此学好英语并非易事
的确如此我在你这么大时也有同样的烦恼，觉得很难和父母相处得好。
III. How to begin with the advice
As for how and what to read, the following is my advice. ( here is my advice)
that can/ may help you
The following suggestions that can .may help you
至于解决这个问题，下面是我的一些建议
As for this problem., I would like to share with you some general views on this problem.
至于如何和父母相处得好，我想和你分享一下我的看法
IV． How to give some advice and describe the reason for the advice （（如何提建议）;
A: Find some sentences used for advice and giving the reason for the advice in the passage （Advice on reading 在短文中找到作者的建议）
___________________________________________________________
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想一想作者是怎么提建议的：
提建议的还有那些：
1.___________________________________________________________________2.___________________________________________________________________3.___________________________________________________________________4.___________________________________________________________________
V. How to describe the reasons for advice 如何描述所提建议的原因）
You can also use the following expressions to describe the reason for the advice :
in this way/ as a result/ for this reason / because / so
B: Rewrite the sentences with the given words (根据所给词语改写下列句子
（1）Take notes as you read and they can help you remember what you have read . ( should, because)
(2) Be sure to read some simple books . Otherwise ( can / may..and )
(3) When you meet some new words in reading , don’t look up them in the dictionary . Try to guess their meaning first. ( had better (not ) do )
Share your reading experience with your friends and tell the stories you read to them . It can improve your English. ( why not…. In this way )
VI． Please learn how to use some conjunction words （学会一些关联词）
firstly,… secondly…..finally
besides/ in addition/ what’s more
VI. How to request for further communication and give best wishes
1. request for further communication
If you have any questions or need any more advice， you can call me、 write to me
give best wishes
I hope that sb will do ….
If you do that ， I’m sure /believe that
best wishes / good luck
More practice (实战演练)
Read and fill in the form
To lihua@163.com
From : Mary. @ yahoo.com
Subject ： problem about learning English
Dear Li Hua
I’m very glad to tell you that I will have Chinese training class for the volunteer for the Universaide in China this summer.
I am very excited at the news, but I think it not easy for me to learn Chinese well. I am very worried. As you know, I began to learn English two years ago. Though I can read and write a little Chinese, I’m still very weak in listening and spoken Chinese isn’t improved. I have difficulty in talking to the people around in Chinese. Could you give me some advice ? Thank you very much.
Hope to hear from you soon
Yours
Mary
Please finish the form
Sender
address
receiver
address
subject
problem
Advice for
假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友为了来中国深圳参加大运会志愿者而报名参加了汉语培训班，最近她给你写信向你询问学习汉语的建议，根据你学英语的体会给她写封回信。
必备词语
1．记课上记笔记 2. 课上认真听讲
3．抓住每个机会 4. 练习汉语
5．用汉语 6。多听多读
7．不要害怕 8。犯错误
9．听汉语歌 10. 看中国电影
11. 树立自信 12. 用这种方法
13．口语 14。用汉语同别人交流
二， 按要求完成写作
第一段写作内容：（1. 很高兴得知她将来中国学汉语。并告知学习汉语确实不是一件容易的事，但不必担心，只要她自信，并用正确方法学习汉语，就会学好,
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第二段：针对提出问题，回复至少四条建议比适当阐明原因和目的
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第三段：祝愿和希望以及进一步保持交流的请求
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Exercise Two 假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑，下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信，请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信，针对他的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。
Dear editor,
Normally I am a happy student. I do well in my studies and have a lot of friends. However, I just feel depressed recently because I eat a lot when I stay up late doing my homework.. and when I don’t have much work to do, I usually sit in front of TV with chocolates and potato chips. People say I need exercise and running is good for me.. but I really don’t like running alone. It’s boring. What should I do? I really want to lose weight. Please help me
Yours,
Xiaowei
Dear Xiaowei
Thank you for your letter about your trouble. I’m sorry to hear that you
are in trouble.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Exercise Three
根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内）
假设你叫玛丽，是校刊英语角的主持人，你收到了一位同学迈克的来信。请你根据他的来信内容写一封回信，针对他的烦恼，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议。
Dear Mary,
It seems that some of my classmates are so lucky that they can get everything they want. Some of them have mobile phones and MP4s, and others wear expensive clothes and shoes. But I have nothing good. My parents are both workers and they are not rich. I know I can’t ask for those kinds of things from them. Luckily, my parents agreed to give me some money for breakfast every day. I plan to save the money to buy something I want. What do you think of my idea?
Yours,
Mike
课件21张PPT。Oral practiceOral practice Look and say something about the picture Health is very important to us. How can we keep healthy?
First, we should often open the windows to keep air clean. Then we should often change clothes . Next, we should have a good diet habit. Before you have a meal, you’d better wash your hands. finally you should often do some exercise. Don’t stay up and you should have enough time to sleep.
If you can do these, you will be healthy
Writing practice
A reply for advice Read and answer the questions
Who wrote this e-mail ?
Whom did he want to write to?
Why did he write this e-mail?
How many pieces of advice did he give?
How did he give his advicePart Two Writing structure
Read the passage again and fill in groups ( discuss in group)
A written reply for advice should be formal and polite. It should have _______parts
Part one: the beginning
Make a friendly remark and then mention your ________ in the first one or few sentences of this letter
Part Two the body
Give the brief details of your ________and the _______ for the advice
Part Three :
make a request for further communication and give best _____threetopicadvicereasonswishes Part Three How to write a reply for advice Read the passage again and find some useful sentences patterns （在短文中找到有用的句子并模仿造句）
I. How to make a friendly remark
1)I’m very glad / pleased / happy to do (很高兴
(1) 我很高兴您是我的读者
(2) 我很高兴读到你的来信I I’m very happy / glad to have you as my readerI’m very happy / glad to read your letter2) I ‘m very glad/ pleased happy that…
我很高兴你即将来中国学汉语
3) It’s great/ wonderful to learn/ know that….非常高兴得知
真棒得知此书对你有帮助
4) Thank you for your letter about….(感谢某人来信有关某问题）
(1) 感谢你的有关如何学习汉语的来信
(2) 感谢你写信告知你的烦恼I’m very happy that you will come to china to learn
Chinese soonIt’s great to learn that the books have helped youThank you for your letter about your troubleThank you for your letter about how to learn ChineseIt’s true that …. (的确如此做某事
的确如此阅读是提高理解语言的最佳途
(2)的确如此学好英语并非易事
(3)的确如此我在你这么大时也有同样的烦恼，觉得很难和父母相处得好。How to mention the topic 阐明主题It’s true that reading is the best way to improve your
understanding of a languageIt’s true that it’s not easy to learn English well.It’s true that I had the same trouble as you when
I was as old as you. and I find it hard to get along
with my parents well III. How to begin with the advice
1）As for（至于） how and what to read, the following is my advice. ( here is my advice)
that can/ may help you
2） The following are my suggestions that can/may help you
（1）至于解决这个问题，下面是我的一些建议
As for this problem., I would like to share with you some general views on this problem.
1）至于如何和父母相处得好，我想和你分享一下我的看法As for how to deal with this problem, Here is my advice
that may help /(Here are my suggestions)As for how to get along with your parents, Here is my advice
that may help /(Here are my suggestions)1.Think about the writer how to give advice and describe the reasons（想一想作者是怎么提建议的）
2. Do you know some other ways to give advice 提建议的还有那些 方法：
IV． How to give some advice and describe the
Reasons for the advice （如何提建议和阐明原因）You should do
You’d better (not ) do
You can / may do sth
Why not do … Be sure to read simple books at first. Otherwise,
Find some funny books , and you
Do …. Don’t do ….V. How to describe the reasons for advice 如何描述所提建议的原因）
2. Rewrite the sentences with the given words (根据所给词语改写下列句子
（1）Take notes as you read and they can help you remember what you have read . ( should, because)
(2) Be sure to read some simple books . Otherwise ( can / may..and ) in this way/ as a result/ for this reason / because / so You should take notes as you read. because they
can help you remember what you have read .You can/ may read some simple books . and
you won’t lose your interest.
(3) When you meet some new words in reading , don’t look up them in the dictionary . Try to guess their meaning first. ( had better (not ) do )
(4) Share your reading experience with your friends and tell the stories you read to them . You can improve your English. ( why not…. In this way )(3) When you meet some new words in reading ,
you’d better not look up them in the dictionary .
You’d better guess their meaning first. Why not share your reading experience with your
friends and tell the stories you read to them . In this
way, you can improve your English. VI． Please learn how to use some conjunction words （学会一些关联词）
1. firstly,… secondly…..finally
2. besides/ in addition/ what’s more
VII. How to request for further communication and give best wishes
1. request for further communication
2. give best wishesIf you have any questions or need any more advice，
you can call me、 write to meI hope that sb will do ….
If you do that ， I’m sure /believe that
best wishes / good luck
writing practice Pre-writing Read and fill in the form MaryMary@yahoo.
comLi HuaMaryLihua@163
.comProblem about learning ChineseBe weak in listening and spoke ChineseHow to improve listening and
Spoken Chinese 假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友为了来中国深圳参加大运会志愿者而报名参加了汉语培训班，最近她给你写信向你询问学习汉语的建议，根据你学英语的体会给她写封回信。
1.字数 80字左右
2. 至少三至四条建议及理由
Some useful expressions
1．记课上记笔记
2. 课上认真听讲
3．抓住每个机会
4. 练习汉语
5．用汉语
6. 多听多读
7. 不要害怕
8. 犯错误
9．听汉语歌
10. 看中国电影
11. 树立自信
12. 用这种方法
13. 口语
14. 用汉语同别人交流
15. 取得进步
1 take notes in class
2.Listen carefully in class
3. Catch every chance to
4. Practice Chinese
5．in Chinese
6. Read more and listen more
7．Be afraid of
8. Make a mistake
9．Listen to Chinese songs
10. See some Chinese films
11. Be confident in oneself
12. In this way
13. Spoken Chinese
14. Talk with others in Chinese
15. Make progressP1 make a friendly remark and mention the topic（1. 很高兴得知她将来中国学汉语。并告知学习汉语确实不是一件容易的事，但不必担心）P2 ： Give at least four pieces of advice and the
Reason for them（针对提出问题，回复至少四条
建议比适当阐明原因和目的P3：best wishes：Let's begin to write now !参考范文： I’m very glad that you ‘ll come to China to learn Chinese. It’s true that it isn’t easy to learn Chinese. Don’t worry. Here is my advice that may help you.
Firstly, it’s very important to listen carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking . Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Then you can listen to some Chinese songs or Chinese films. In this way, you can only not relax yourself but also improve Chinese. What’s more ,you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up when you meet with difficult
I’m sure that you will make progress through hard work
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China Practice Two Read and answer the questions
What is Xiaowei?
How is she recently? Why
What are her troubles?
What advice does she want to ask for?
