2009广东高考英语阅卷场写作专家评分示例与说明及高考试卷（图片版）
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can cure short-sichtedness. However, the doctor sucess that
Koalas in wildlife parks can't fall
sd the tourists ph
as shouli use their eves for a loeg time and should take part in outdoor activities govemment is thinking to make the tourists' behavior illegal to protet the animals
As for the tourists, they visit the park see the spe
ho the way that students use their pen
when people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs
tourists. the
ses
ne no chance to see in their own
r. What's
Ressons for this a
contrast with taking photos with
as are
ast with taking photos with other persons, Others may think that it will be
一一
专家评分:14分
experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
However, if I were a koala, I would be upsd facing so any people. we
ew for D Wang. an eve doctor about the
aeeg students in Chins. Aooonding to the lates reports. the
If I were an animal in the wildlife park. I would feel annoyed when people keep would get annoyed about the people who keep bothering me at the time l s
graphing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I won't feel happy at all! I
As far as Im
ed. I think it
rae is a tle over 50 while the
er of short- sched student
k I should have some private space and time to relax myself
Is. Not odly will it annoy animals butt also will it hurt people if the aninal gts se
cks the top place throghout the wor. In Dr. Wang
the
ofthis disease
However, I don' agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals, Tourist and scratches people. Besides taking photos with animals, we still ha
many was to sh
advices lke awing over -ae of eves ad taking more oudoor activities. Besides, a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife park can set some special time, during thi
ecting their habita
id tip is that short -sightedness is related to how you bold your pen
ists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the
(5)3+16=19分
(2)5+19=24分
The koalas in southem Australia which are always half asleep beone
专家评分:15分
The koalas in Australia are always awoken frue deep sleep because the tourists want to because the tourists, who want to bug and photograph with them, ahas wake them up fu
The sowing rate df short -sightedness among students inspired me to take an interview hug and photograph the. which akes koalas unhappy. The go
nt is now trying to their deep sleep.
with an ege-dochr Dr. Wang about short -sightedness among primary and idile schoel ben photographing with
When visiting a wildlife park, people always bke taking photos with the lowely animals
Fre the iere I have harmed te the short-sidtedness rate is a little higher
It is reasonable that why people want to take photos with the animals. When they visit because they want to have photos to remember this moment to their fens andi
than so%, rking the frst place in the wodd. Experts explained the causes of short
oos. they are attracted by the animals' lovely characters and behavior, so they want to take are also interested in these
ted and no medicine could cure short -sightedness. It is a photo to belp them
er these funny creatures. In addition, going to a noo is such a
However, the animals will be annoyed by this kind of arties Ff I were o d
ha students shed a use their eyes excessively and it coeld be of great help to
e that people need photos to
because they don have anv
als, I would also be
es pre. Also, i showed that bolding pens correctly heips lo
ces stte
deprive my night of sleep even y freedom to enjoy a
n dwht that
However, if I were the animals, I didnt bke to take photos with people if they dist
nd refuse to eet th
my daily life. I would be angry and tired if I couldnt have enough sleep and keep making
A读写任务A
poses. But as long as I had enough to rest, I was willing to be photogr
读写任务评分说明
I think govemment should not ban pb
Many people go to noo ju
our respect to the
freed in this wa
读写任务是有材料作文:要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文;主 for the
the
place where people can have fun.
(6)2+16=18分
要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力
ead, the govemment can make a law to specify the time people can take photo
Jackie is one of the koalas which are ammowed by being disturbed in
本试题要求考生阅读一则英文短文之后,写一篇英语感想,谈该不该禁止游客
hals. That will belp the have a
thet too
和动物拍照,内容包括(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照:(2)假
(3)3+17=20分
People would lke to take
如考生处在那些动物的处境,会有什么反应;(3)考生认为是否应该禁止游客和动
All the koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in Southen Australia are kept half
ed at how strong the Fors are. bo beal the bids ae, or b fst the seks
物拍
sleep all day so that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists. And an increasing swim. They take photos so that they can
ber these happy
在评分时,应注意以下几方面
,回s
er of Australian parks begin to do so
ss of the go
Were I Jackie, I would try ay best to escape foe the
1.按照评分标准,实行分析综合法评分
Many tourists love to take photo with animals in the park because the photo can call up
to stud others to have a rest and force them to take po
2.短文的内容包括以下要点
their happy memory in the park. Besides, soee animals are really lovely and my tourists Therefore. I dont agree that tourists hug aimaks and tke phoes with tea. Ooce I
sts bke ho take pi
not help but hug them. But that makes the
as observing monkeys in a zoo when a Bttle boy book photos with a fash light Its Echt fee
Were I one of these animals. I would be full of anger and very unhappy. Because the the tree and hurt badly. It's he
let's be a po
He S
ists made me unconfortable when they photograph with me and they interupt my dr
3.写作的内容应该包括
Therefore, from where I stand, photogr
The
人们在参观动物园时喜欢和动物拍照的原因
reason are as follows. To besin with
ae their own daily pace of life and
考生处在那些动物的处境的反应,比如:不高兴,兴奋,攻击游客,逃跑
are changed, they may become out of eontrol. Moreover. when animals can't have a
od rest, they are lkely to hurt tourists. Last but not least
简述是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照及原因。比如:不应该,因为影响了动物
tourists need to live
的生活;或应该,因为可以增加游客人数和动物园的收入等等
So please stop taking photo with
搞考评卷组专家试评给分示例
(4)4+18=22分
(1)5+20=25分,满分作文!
Koalas at the Featbendale wildife Park
ed bw being woken甲
sts can hug and photograph the
Ci
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can cure short-sichtedness. However, the doctor sucess that
Koalas in wildlife parks can't fall
sd the tourists ph
as shouli use their eves for a loeg time and should take part in outdoor activities govemment is thinking to make the tourists' behavior illegal to protet the animals
As for the tourists, they visit the park see the spe
ho the way that students use their pen
when people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs
tourists. the
ses
ne no chance to see in their own
r. What's
Ressons for this a
contrast with taking photos with
as are
ast with taking photos with other persons, Others may think that it will be
一一
专家评分:14分
experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
However, if I were a koala, I would be upsd facing so any people. we
ew for D Wang. an eve doctor about the
aeeg students in Chins. Aooonding to the lates reports. the
If I were an animal in the wildlife park. I would feel annoyed when people keep would get annoyed about the people who keep bothering me at the time l s
graphing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I won't feel happy at all! I
As far as Im
ed. I think it
rae is a tle over 50 while the
er of short- sched student
k I should have some private space and time to relax myself
Is. Not odly will it annoy animals butt also will it hurt people if the aninal gts se
cks the top place throghout the wor. In Dr. Wang
the
ofthis disease
However, I don' agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals, Tourist and scratches people. Besides taking photos with animals, we still ha
many was to sh
advices lke awing over -ae of eves ad taking more oudoor activities. Besides, a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife park can set some special time, during thi
ecting their habita
id tip is that short -sightedness is related to how you bold your pen
ists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the
(5)3+16=19分
(2)5+19=24分
The koalas in southem Australia which are always half asleep beone
专家评分:15分
The koalas in Australia are always awoken frue deep sleep because the tourists want to because the tourists, who want to bug and photograph with them, ahas wake them up fu
The sowing rate df short -sightedness among students inspired me to take an interview hug and photograph the. which akes koalas unhappy. The go
nt is now trying to their deep sleep.
with an ege-dochr Dr. Wang about short -sightedness among primary and idile schoel ben photographing with
When visiting a wildlife park, people always bke taking photos with the lowely animals
Fre the iere I have harmed te the short-sidtedness rate is a little higher
It is reasonable that why people want to take photos with the animals. When they visit because they want to have photos to remember this moment to their fens andi
than so%, rking the frst place in the wodd. Experts explained the causes of short
oos. they are attracted by the animals' lovely characters and behavior, so they want to take are also interested in these
ted and no medicine could cure short -sightedness. It is a photo to belp them
er these funny creatures. In addition, going to a noo is such a
However, the animals will be annoyed by this kind of arties Ff I were o d
ha students shed a use their eyes excessively and it coeld be of great help to
e that people need photos to
because they don have anv
als, I would also be
es pre. Also, i showed that bolding pens correctly heips lo
ces stte
deprive my night of sleep even y freedom to enjoy a
n dwht that
However, if I were the animals, I didnt bke to take photos with people if they dist
nd refuse to eet th
my daily life. I would be angry and tired if I couldnt have enough sleep and keep making
A读写任务A
poses. But as long as I had enough to rest, I was willing to be photogr
读写任务评分说明
I think govemment should not ban pb
Many people go to noo ju
our respect to the
freed in this wa
读写任务是有材料作文:要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文;主 for the
the
place where people can have fun.
(6)2+16=18分
要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力
ead, the govemment can make a law to specify the time people can take photo
Jackie is one of the koalas which are ammowed by being disturbed in
本试题要求考生阅读一则英文短文之后,写一篇英语感想,谈该不该禁止游客
hals. That will belp the have a
thet too
和动物拍照,内容包括(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照:(2)假
(3)3+17=20分
People would lke to take
如考生处在那些动物的处境,会有什么反应;(3)考生认为是否应该禁止游客和动
All the koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in Southen Australia are kept half
ed at how strong the Fors are. bo beal the bids ae, or b fst the seks
物拍
sleep all day so that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists. And an increasing swim. They take photos so that they can
ber these happy
在评分时,应注意以下几方面
,回s
er of Australian parks begin to do so
ss of the go
Were I Jackie, I would try ay best to escape foe the
1.按照评分标准,实行分析综合法评分
Many tourists love to take photo with animals in the park because the photo can call up
to stud others to have a rest and force them to take po
2.短文的内容包括以下要点
their happy memory in the park. Besides, soee animals are really lovely and my tourists Therefore. I dont agree that tourists hug aimaks and tke phoes with tea. Ooce I
sts bke ho take pi
not help but hug them. But that makes the
as observing monkeys in a zoo when a Bttle boy book photos with a fash light Its Echt fee
Were I one of these animals. I would be full of anger and very unhappy. Because the the tree and hurt badly. It's he
let's be a po
He S
ists made me unconfortable when they photograph with me and they interupt my dr
3.写作的内容应该包括
Therefore, from where I stand, photogr
The
人们在参观动物园时喜欢和动物拍照的原因
reason are as follows. To besin with
ae their own daily pace of life and
考生处在那些动物的处境的反应,比如:不高兴,兴奋,攻击游客,逃跑
are changed, they may become out of eontrol. Moreover. when animals can't have a
od rest, they are lkely to hurt tourists. Last but not least
简述是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照及原因。比如:不应该,因为影响了动物
tourists need to live
的生活;或应该,因为可以增加游客人数和动物园的收入等等
So please stop taking photo with
搞考评卷组专家试评给分示例
(4)4+18=22分
(1)5+20=25分,满分作文!
Koalas at the Featbendale wildife Park
ed bw being woken甲
sts can hug and photograph the
Ci
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