新型短文改错1
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
I always wanted to be a great scientist. I had dream of discovering a new drug that would save the life of hundreds of people. Unfortunately, I was never very well at chemistry at school and the teacher was used to get angry with me. I decided to becoming an inventor and designed an amazing new product. My parents were encouraging, but told me to be a few more realistic. A few weeks late, I had an idea of designing a pen to write with upside down. In my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out that it was not a new discovery.
1. dream前加a 2. life→lives 3. well→good 4. was used去掉was
5. becoming→become 6.designed→design 7. a few→bit/little 8. late→later
9. In→To 10.me→mine
No. 2
One day, a boy and a girl who were all dressed in fashion clothes sat on a bench eating a watermelon. When they went away they left their peels on the bench instead throwing them into the dustbin beside them. Perhaps they thought there would be anyone to clean up the rubbish. I think that what a shame their behavior is. If everyone behaved as they did, the world will be a big rubbish dump. But we will live in the world of diseases. Beside, dustmen will have too much difficulty clean the world where we live.
1. were all→both 2. left their→his 3. instead后加of
4. anyone→someone 5. think that→去掉that 6. behaved→behaves 7. But→And 8. the world→a 9. Beside→Besides 10. clean →cleaning
No. 3
How nice to hear of you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. On short, things have been improving after the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers keep on explaining the points. We just listened and took note. But now we discuss and solve the problems was raised by teachers or by us. After class, we enjoy all kinds of activity instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in and go to the library or surf lnternet for information.
1. hear of→from 2. On short→In 3. after →since 4. keep→kept
5. note→notes 6. was raised→去掉was 7. by us→ourselves
8. activity→activities 9. that→what 10. surf后加the
No. 4
Never shall I forget the first time English lesson by Miss Liu. On this day, when she entered the classroom, we found out she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced herself said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say a word before the class. She went up to me and said kindly, “Don’t afraid. I believe you can do it.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.
1. first time→去掉time 2. On this→that 3. found out去掉out 4. said→saying 5. Late→Later 6. on turn→in 7. too shy→so 8. went→came 9. Don’t后加be 10. for that→what
No. 5
Everyone loves beauty. And what’s true beauty? You can get the answer to the following story. Today I went to the market with my parents. In the way we noticed a good-dressed young fellow ride by. He rode so fast that he knocked the old lady down. But he pretended not see this. To our surprise, a girl in plain clothes ran forward helping the lady stand up. We all praised by the girl. From this we know we can’t judge a person by their appearance. Only a person whom has a beautiful soul is true beautiful.
1. And→But 2. answer to→from 3. In →On 4. good-dressed→well-dressed 5. the old→an 6. not后加to 7. praised by 去掉by 8. by their→his
9. whom→who 10. true →truly
No. 6
Last summer I went to American to study at a school, where I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held a party, there I was invited to talk about Hangzhou. After which they asked me lots of things about China. But I couldn’t explain it in English clear. I felt sad. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have studied English for 8 years time, but I can’t use it very well. I must work hardly to improve my spoken English so that I will able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and other country in the future.
1. to American→America 2. wonderful experience→experience
3. there I→ where 4. After which →that 5. explain it→them
6. English clear→clearly 7. years time 去掉time 8. work hardly→hard
9. I will 后加be 10. other country →countries
No. 7
In your email, you showed a great interest on the Water Cube. Now I’d like to introduce it. The Water Cube was located in Beijing Olympic Sport Park, and cover an area of 79532 m2. Its construction was started in 2003, and completed in 2008. It’s design plan---H2O3 was produced by the global design competition. It was cost 1.02 billion yuan. Swimming, diving or synchronize swimming can be held there. It was thought high of by officials, experts and athletes. They thought of it an incredible symbol in the history of the global Games. I hope your introduction satisfies you. Welcome to the Water Cube if it’s convenience for you.
1. interest on→in 2. Cube was→is 3. and cover→covers 4. It’s design→Its
5. It was cost去掉was 6. diving or→and 7. thought high→highly
8. think of it 后加as 9. your introduction→my 10. convenience to→convenient
No. 8
Last Sunday, I went to read in your library. I found anything unpleasant. I’d like to voice my opinions, that, I hope, would be of great help for you to create the more comfortable place for readers. First, there are little new books on the shelves, and most books aren’t popular today. Second, books aren’t sorted on proper order, making it is difficult for readers to find what they want. Third, the assistants didn’t offer well service. And they took not notice of the fact a light wasn’t working. I suggest you change all these as soon as possibly.
1. anything unpleasant→something 2. that, I → which 3. the more→a
4. little new books→few 5. on proper order→in 6. it is 去掉is
7. well service→good 8. not notice→no 9. fact后加that
10. as possibly →possible your opinions→my
No. 9
Liu Yaru, the worker, had worked in a weaving mill in Jinan for 14 years. On 1992 when she was 34, Mrs Liu was out of the work and stayed at home. She was worried and wasn’t sure about finding other job. Some time later, she was no longer afraid being looked down upon by other. Finally She found a job as a waitress at a teahouse. She did so good in the job that customers liked to call on this teahouse. As a result, She makes many money through her hard work and has lived a happy life since. She has set up a good example to the laid-off workers.
1. the worker→a 2. on 1992→in 3. the work 去掉the
4. other job→another 5. afraid后加of 6. by other→others
7. good in→well 8. call on →at 9. many money→much
10. set up去掉up
No. 10
One Sunday morning Xiao Li and her father went to the People’s Park. Walk around the park, they found a girl cry by the road. They went up to her asking what her name was and where she lived in. But she knew nothing. So they have to send her to the police station, there she was taken good care. The news that the girl was lost was broadcast at no time. After some time in came the parents of the girl’s. They were excited to see their child and express their thanks to Xiao Li or her father. Then they said good-bye to each other.
1. Walk around→walking 2. girl cry→crying 3. lived in去掉in 4. have to→had
5. there she→where 6. care后加of 7. at no→ in 8. the girl’s→girl
9. and express →expressed 10. or her →and
新型短文改错2
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English
1. on last去掉on 2. America tourists→American 3. greeted him→them
4. students travel →travelling 5. busy with去掉with 6. changes后加that
7. After which→ that 8. email address→addresses 9. on the→in
10. to practising→practise
No. 2
My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.
1. My classmate→classmates 2. some cleanings→cleaning 3. and sing→or
4. being clean去掉being 5. rid后加of 6. their job→my 7. will have→ would 8. must have→be 9. so as→ but 10. do good in→well
No. 3
Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.
1. a disscussing→discussion 2. from persons→person 3. greatly→great
4. that→which 5. much→more 6. believe that→what 7. percents→percent
8. view后加that 9. mean→means 10. 去掉is
No. 4
Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.
1. on→at 2. passes→passing 3. which→that 4. after→since 5. many→much
6. terribly→terrible 7. bad →worse 8. had→has 9.used to后加be 10. 去掉the
No. 5
Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.
1. took 前加that 2. are→were 3. 18-years-old→18-year-old
4. 去掉first前面的the 5. like→as 6.thank→thanks 7. or→and
8. 去掉gave后面的to 9. expressing our→ their 10. wonderfully→wonderful
No. 6
In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.
1. children前加who/that 2. 去掉attend后面的the 3. very→too 4. had→have
5. other→another 6. of→for 7. what→that 8. interesting→interested
9. included→including 10. for→to
No. 7
It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.
1. It is→As 2. in December→on 3. were suffered去掉were 4. But→And 5. million→millions 6. destroyed前加been 7. students here→there
8. they could→can 9. calls for→on 10. pocket’s→pocket
No. 8
The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.
1. west前加the 2. run→running 3. the front去掉the 4. both side→sides
5. teach building→teaching 6. further→farther 7. Behind which→it
8. On it’s→its 9. or the→and 10.school is→are
No. 9
One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!
1.hunger→hungry 2. that read→which 3. Bring→Take 4. ran here→there
5. and did后加so 6. other piece改为another 7. late改为later
8. wandered→wondered 9. found out去掉out 10. What→How
No. 10
Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.
1. drink→drinking 2. His the去掉the 3. them→it 4. meant→meaning 5. bottles后加of 6. late→later 7. paying→pay 8. pleasant→pleased
9. other→another 10. found out去掉out bottle→bottles
新型短文改错3
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can do what I like with what was mine.”
1. beat→beating 2. Why were→are 3. to go去掉to 4. right前加the
5. Certain→Certainly 6.do that→what 7. is my→mine 8. Stopping→Stop
9. yes→no 10. was mine→is
No. 2
An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?
1. seating→sitting/seated 2. sleep→sleeping 3. leaving→leave 4. and he→but
5. fetched→fetch 6. its expectation→his 7. stand后加up 8. complete→completely 9. the front去掉the 10. think a →the
No. 3
Welcome to Holland! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! We have many beautiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.
1. staying→stay 2. on April→in 3. a best→the 4. amazed前加be
5. photograph→photographs 6. boats→boat 7. relaxed→relaxing
8. visit to 去掉to 9. problems there→here 10. pleased→pleasant
No. 4
This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment?” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”
1.This→It 2. he is→was 3. next后加to 4. a biologist→the 5. heard of去掉of 6. conclusion which→that 7. you row→your 8. Yes→No 9. And→But
10. extreme→extremely
No. 5
I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’desk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.
1. am→was 2.such→so 3. but→and 4. a lot of去掉of 5. question→questions 6. Sometime→Sometimes 7. high→highly 8. join them后加in 9. Since→From
10. that→what
No. 6
When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived for many years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countries there much tea and coffee are drunk.
1. was first→were 2. harm→harmful 3. find后加out 4. was happened去掉was
5. whom→who/that 6. others→other 7. All→Both 8. in the age→at
9. long→longer 10. there→where
No. 7
My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.
1. me→I 2. here→there 3. do→did 4. Taxis was→were 5. but my→and
6. by→on 7.to feel去掉to 8.came→went 9. many→much 10. theatre前加the
No. 8
One day I happened to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely.
1. find out去掉out 2. there→where 3. were better→was 4. than me→mine 5.advices→advice 6. But→So/And 7. practise→practising
8. learned from去掉from 9. expression→expressions 10. communicate后加with
No. 9
The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers around the world. Once you’re connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You don’t need know how the Internet works in order to use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge !
1. use→using 2. million →millions 3. and there去掉and 4. difference→different 5. they were→are 6. looking→look 7. know前加to 8. use them→it
9. which may→it 10. by→with
No. 10
Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.
1. had retired→has 2. taught our →us 3. live → lively 4. well →good
5. 去掉when 6. correct it→ them 7. helps →helped 8. progresses→progress 9. As后加an 10. or→and
No. 11
Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesn’t care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and on her bed the doctor found a letter, in which he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.
1. touched→touching 2. sons→son 3. very poor→so 4. him for→to
5. late→later 6. doesn’t→didn’t 7. afford for去掉for 8. quietly→quiet
9. truth前加the 10. and it→but
新型短文改错4
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
My View on Job-Hopping
A lot of people like to do one work in their life. They think those change their jobs mostly end in failure. They believe the only way to success is to sticking to one job, which helps making an expert. But there are many people whom argue for changing their jobs. They think if you are not satisfying with your present job, of course you have the right to replace it by a more challenging and better paid one. Each change means more further success. My view on job hopping is that this is reasonable to change your job if you have the better opportunity.
1. work→job 2. change前加who/that 3. sticking→stick 4. making→make
5. whom→who 6. satisfying→satisfied 7. by→with 8. 去掉more 9. this is→it
10. the better→a
No. 2
This afternoon on my way to home I saw many people standing at the gate of the primary school. I don’t know what they were doing there at first. Then many pupil came out the school. The people outside the gate called out such names as "Lingling" or "Xiaohua". Then I knew they were meeting their children. The children were too happy that they were liked "little emperors", which I think is harmful. Children will be the builders of our country on the future. There are so many things of them to learn. Late, many things will be done by them. This means they shouldn't be "little emperors".
1.去掉to 2. don’t→didn’t 3. pupil→pupils 4. came out后加of 5. or→and
6. too→so 7. liked→like 8. on→in 9. of them→for 10. late→later
No. 3
Most of the Chinese people think the family with one child is more better than the one with more than one child. For a thing, they want to build a successful career but have few time to bring up more than one child; for other thing, raise only one child they can afford better education for him. But others think this is better to have a big family. They think more children they raise, the better their life will be when they grow old. In my opinions, it's enough for a family to have one child, or population expansion will contribute to a series of problem.
1. 去掉more 2. For a→One 3. few →little 4. other→another 5. raise→raising
6. this→it 7. more前加the 8. opinions→opinion 9. or→and
10. problem→problems
No. 4
Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinion. With money one can buy that he wants and live a happy life. It’s a common view which money is the root of all evil. The pursuit of money drove many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing cann’t be bought by money, resulting in societies where everybody is miserable. So money doesn’t necessary mean happiness. It all depends on what it is used. If we make proper use of money, it can be a bright path into happiness. Money can’t buy happiness, but it can make happiness be possible if it is employed sensibly.
1. opinion→opinions 2. buy that→what 3. view which→that 4. drove→drives
5. cann’t前加that 6. by money→with 7. necessary→necessarily 8. what→how
9. into→to 10.去掉be
No. 5
Now some people think that money is anything. They say you can do everything if you’ve money. You can live a beautiful house and have all sorts of delicious food. I don't think it. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. And there are many wonderful things in the world can’t be bought with the money. For example, time can’t be bought with the money. There are many other things that can not be bought with money too: health, love, happy, friendship and so on. Just thinking that if a person had not these things, is the money still useful?
1. anything→everything 2. live后加in 3. it→ so 4. And→But 5. can’t前加that
6. 去掉the 7. too→either 8. happy→happiness 9. thinking→think 10. had→have
No. 6
Taiwan Is Part of China About 1500 years ago Chinese settled there, and the Dutch imperialist invaded there in the 17th century. After which, Zheng Chenggong, a hero of nation, drove them out of. Unfortunately, late Taiwan was seized by Japanese after the Sino-Japanese War of 1894-1895. It doesn't come back until the Second World War was ended. Nowadays I realize the seriously situation. Some people are attempting to split China. This actions are wrong and should be punished. I also believe so long as we strengthen exchange in the future with the head of "one country two systems", there will have an agreement.
1. and the→but 2. which→that 3. 去掉of 4. late→later 5. doesn’t→didn’t
6. 去掉was 7. seriously→serious 8. This→These 9. so→as 10. have→be
新型短文改错5
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
Play computer games takes the teenagers too much time those days. Some are even always playing computers all day instead of study. So I think computer games should be got rid of. They’re nothing but waste of time, money and energy. Teenagers who should do some valuable things like reading, studying and go to museums. What’s worse, the games are bad for both physical or mental health of the young. The games rooms are very dark and noise, and the content is unhealthy and violence. Therefore, computer games bars should be banned from our cities and towns.
1. Play→Playing 2. those→these 3. study→studying 4. waste前加a 5. 去掉who
6. go→going 7. or→and 8. noise→noisy 9. violence→violent
10. computer games→game
No. 2
Americans like to go out by cars. Although more and more Chinese own cars, but most Chinese still like to ride bicycles. This is decided by a lot of factors. Like we know, the bike advances slow by manpower but can be placed conveniently. But the car must parked at parking places. Most Americans who live in the suburb far away from urban areas. But they need cars to go shopping and go to work. They either like traveling far. So a car brings them great convenience. While most Chinese lived near their working areas. We don't need a car.
1. cars→car 2. 去掉but 3. Like→As 4. slow→slowly 5. parked前加be
6. 去掉who 7. But→So 8. either→also 9. lived→live 10. We→They
No. 3
Recently, a number of private cars has been increasing rapid in our country. In 1990, there were about a million private cars. With time went on, the number rose to five million in 1999. There were 10 million of private cars in 2004. As we know, it was convenient if we’ve a car. Beside, the increase of the number of private cars can help car industry to developing faster. However, more cars may cause more traffic accidents and air pollutions. What’s more, waste gases from cars can make great harm to our health. It’s time that people paid attention these problems.
1.a number→the 2. rapid→rapidly 3. With→As或went→going 4.去掉of 5.it was→is
6.Beside→Besides 7. developing→develop 8. pollutions→pollution 9. make→do
10. these前加to
No. 4
High-tech machines have made life more easier. But some people still prefer low-tech ways for doing things. Why is this happening? Make cooking as an example. Some prefer the high-tech cooking tool, for it saved time. Yet others would rather cook his food on the low-tech stove, which, they think, tastes better. Take collecting information as the second example. Some prefer to get news from Internet or other high-tech sources. They think so news is more up to date than from newspapers or magazines, which are still liked by others, because the reason that they can give them more background and details.
1. 去掉more 2. for→of 3. Make→Take 4. saved→saves 5. his→their
6. the→a 7. Internet前加the 8. so→such 9. from前加that 10. because→for
No. 5
One day three men got a bottle of wine. And the wine wasn’t enough for them three. They both agreed that they each would draw a snake and the one whom first finished would be given the wine. It was not long ago one of them finished draw his snake. But he found other two were still busy with their drawings. “I can even add feet to my snake before you finish your.” said he. He began to add feet up to his snake. Before he finished, another man said, “I had finished. Snakes have no feet, so yours is not the snake. ” With these words he drank up the wine.
1. And→But 2. both→all 3. whom→who/that 4. ago→before 5. draw→drawing
6. other前加the 7. your→yours 8. 去掉up 9. had→have 10. the→a
No. 6
My mother was a village woman. She had very few education, but she knows knowledge is important. She often asks me what I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time in my study. Once she was badly ill. When I got home to see her at night, I found out the light was still on and Mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was too deeply moved that tears came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman. I’ll love her to forever.
1. was→is 2. few→little 3. what→how 4. study前加to 5. in→on
6. 去掉out 7. made→making 8. too→so 9. So→Such 10. 去掉to
新型短文改错6
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
Before you do everything, smile at first. If you show your unhappy face, he’ll be unhappy either. So show your smile, you will get his help. But it seems difficult of you to smile when you are sad. Don't be afraid. Make up your mind to trying once and you’ll find you’re very better in heart. Smile is also a kind of language what cannot be heard, but others can know it’s meaning. When you met your friends in the morning smile means “Morning!”. When you fail, the friend’s smile means “Having another try!”.??
1. 去掉at 2. either→too 3. you will前加and 4. of→for 5. trying→try
6. very→much或去掉very 7. what→that/which 8. it’s→its 9. met→meet
10. Having→Have
No. 2
The Value of Reading Books
People often say that gold or silver are the most valuable things in the world. But?I don't think. In my opinion, to read books are more valuable than anything else. The old saying "To open a book is always helpful" clear tells us that how good it is to read a book. Books are our friends. They introduce us different kind of knowledge and lead us down the road to succeed. Books are our teachers. They teach our science, literature and so on.?Books tell us what is good and what is evil. But only books can tell the good from the bad. Therefore, to read more books is the best policy for we young students.
1. or→and 2. think后加so 3. are→is 4. clear→clearly 5. 去掉that 6. kind→kinds
7. succeed→success 8. our→us 9. But→And 10. we→us
No. 3
Use of Free Time
As the working hours becoming shorter and shorter and holidays becoming longer and longer, what to spend the leisure time had become a hot topic. The use of free time discloses many about one's values, interests and so on. Some might be interesting in movies and television. Sme enjoy sports. Others are like parties or traveling. Obvious, the use of free time is a good means of relaxation. It’s benefits go beyond this. What people do in leisure hours enable them satisfy their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well as.
1. As→With 2. what→how 3. had→has 4. many→much 5. interesting→interested
6.去掉are 7. obvious→obviously 8. it’s→its 9. them后加to 10.去掉as
No. 4
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and the others think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness led by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is the waste of money. What’s worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
1. had→have 2. student→students 3. do→does 4.去掉that 5. boring→bored
6. the 7. himself→themselves 8. led后加to 9. the→a 10. danger→dangerous
No. 5
It's important of us to keep healthy. But do you know what to keep healthy? Well, Li Ming gives us a good example. He often takes exercise. He likes sports such as swimming, running and plays basketball. He takes care of him very well. He goes to bed at ten in the evening or gets up at six in the morning. He takes a bath every day and washes his hands before meal. When having his meals, he eats all kinds of healthy food such as fish, meat and vegetable. After meals, he also eats a lot fruit. So he is healthy and strong.
1. of→for 2. what→how 3. exercise→exercises 4. plays→playing 5. him→himself
6. or→and 7. meal→meals 8.去掉his 9. vegetable→vegetables 10. fruit前加of
No. 6
Last summer vacation, I worked like a volunteer in a hospital, where I met a little girl, Xiaoxiao, she was only seven years old. She just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time. I was amazed by her courage because she never cried if she was suffering a lot of pain. What’s more, I once noticed her helping a little boy whose parents can not come to see her that day. She was sharing her sweets and toys with a boy and telling stories to calm him down. Soon the boy stopped crying. I wandered how many grownups could be as kind as she was to other!
1.as→like 2. she→who 3. but→and 4.去掉the 5. if前加even
6. can→could 7. see r→him 8. a→the 9. wandered→wondered 10. other→others
新型短文改错7
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
No. 1
“Why do people go out always with umbrellas in England?” Well, in England can one experience the changes of the four seasons on a single day. General speaking, the climate is mild. The winter is warm while in the summer is cool. It is neither too cold or too hot. The Changes in temperature is not great. Sometimes it rains, sometimes it snows heavy, sometimes it has fog, and sometimes it has frost. Such weather has a effect on Englishmen’s character, that makes them careful. This is how Englishmen go out always with umbrellas.
1. in England can前加only 2. on→in 3. General→Generally 4.去掉in 5. or→nor
6. is→are 7. heavy→heavily 8. a→an 9. that→which 10. how→why
No. 2
It’s nice to accept your email. Now I’d like to tell you something about the Palace Museum. It cost 200,000 workers for 14 years to build it. It was finished in 1420. Like the largest museum, the Palace Museum held treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history. It has 9,999 rooms. The Chinese traditionally think 9 as a luck number. To our joy, we Chinese students can now visit it in group freely of charge every Tuesday. I hope that you can come to China or take a look at this museum by your own eyes.
1. accept→receive 2. cost→took 3.去掉for 4. Like→As 5. held→holds
6. think后加of 7. luck→lucky 8. group→groups 9. or→and 10. by→with
No. 4
Every day we produce all kind of wastes, such as used paper, bottles and so on. This is important to make well use of them. There’re many ways to reuse them. For example, used plastic bags can be used to containing rubbish. We can also make used bottles into handiwork, that will make our rooms more beautiful. If only we don't know how to reuse the wastes, we can sell them to the recycle station.There’re much more ways to reuse the wastes. If we try our best recycle the wastes, there will have less waste and pollution in our life.
1. kind→kinds 2. This→It 3. well→good 4. containing→contain 5. that →which
6. 去掉only 7. recycle→recycling 8. much→many 9. recycle前加to 10. have→be
No. 5
It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People’ve found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch with each other whenever or wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
1. It→As 2. millions→million 3. a→the 4. convenience→convenient 5. or→and
6. meeting→meet 7. surf→surfing 8.去掉an 9. our前加to 10. are→is
No. 6
Senior high school students in Zhejiang Province is doing a new course calling General Technology. It aims to teach pupils basic skills and improve his designing abilities. It requires students to use various types of common tools safely. Any basic skills, such as repairing or washing clothing, are also included in the lectures. More importantly they are expected to able to design and make an item that is useful in their lives. They also have to attend a writing test for the course before graduation. As it’s total different from those traditional course, the course is very popular with students. They enjoy it mainly because of the course is closely related to everyday life.
1. is→are 2. calling→called 3. his→their 4. Any→Some
5. clothing→clothes 6. able前加be 7. writing→written 8. total→totally
9. course→courses 10.去掉of
