初三英语复习writing 课件

课件23张PPT。
WRITINGyoung
host/ actress
slim
of average height
long, straight
black hair
mole on her face
active
How to describe a person
job
age
appearance
personality
hobbies Shanghai
International
/modern
be located in
be famous for
go sightseeing

How to describe a place
location
feature
landmarks/ attractions
things to do
A Letter from a Parent
Think about
1. What’s the parent’s opinion?
showing the opinion (P1)
2. What are the reasons he list?
some reasons (P2)
3. What does he suggest I do in the end?
conclusion / suggestion (P3)
basic structure beginning: opinion body:reason 1reason 2ending: conclusion/suggestion Verbs or verbal phrases: (动词或动词词组)
e.g. be worried about
Prepositional phrases: (介词词组)
e.g. because of
Adjectives or adverbs: ( 形容词或副词)
e.g. mentally
Conjunctions: (连接词)
e.g. although
Good words and expressions: Try to make them better
1. I’m very worried about my son’s school work. I almost cannot sleep well.
I’m so worried about my son’s school work that I can hardly sleep well .

2. What will happen then? I can’t imagine it.
I can’t imagine what will happen.
3. If he has more school work to deal with, he will get higher marks.
The more school work he has to deal with, the higher marks he will get.
(状语从句)(宾语从句)(比较级)Fill in the blanks with the transitional words :
Computers can do a lot of things. __________,
they can calculate very fast and rarely give
wrong answers. ___________,they can also
operate railways and fly aeroplanes. _________,
computers are welcomed by human beings.
_________, they can’t take the place of humans,
because humans create them.
For exampleWhat’s moreThereforeHowever
skills of making a passage better
the basic structure of the passage
beautiful expressions
good words and phrases
beautiful sentences
transitional words (过渡连接)A Letter from a Student
Dear Ms. Qin,
I have many feelings, I want tell you . My parents hope
me to do much homework , they want to improve my
school marks. I’m do my homework all the time, I’m tired.
I stay up late every night , I often feel sleepy in the day-
time. However, homework make me have few time to do
things. I like these things . Such as play computer and
so on. There is endless homework is waiting for me.
In a word, how I wish I could get on well with my study
with some homework!
Yours faithfully
One of your students___________________________________________ _________^A Letter from a Student
Dear Ms. Qin,
I have many feelings, I want to tell you . My parents
expect me to do much homework ,they want to improve
my school marks. I don’t think homework is necessa-
ry. I do my homework all the time, I’m tired. I stay up late
every night , I often feel sleepy in the daytime. What’s
more, homework makes me have little time to do things.
I like these things, such as playing the computer and so
on. There is endless homework waiting for me.
In a word, how I wish I could get on well with my study
without any homework!
Yours faithfully
One of your studentsA Letter from a Student
Dear Ms. Qin,
I want to tell you something about my feelings. My
parents expect me to do much homework in order to
improve my school marks. However, I don’t think
homework is necessary to do every day.
First,I’m tired of doing my homework all the time. I
stay up so late every night that I often feel sleepy in the
daytime. What’s more, homework makes me have little
time to do things which I like,such as playing the compu-
ter and so on. It seems that there is endless homework
waiting for me.
In a word, how I wish I could get on well with my study
without any homework!
Yours faithfully
One of your students
A Competition Is Daily Homework
Necessary or Not ?TALK TIMEIs daily homework necessary?
useful expressions
If…, although…, …because …, so that, For
example, without, It is … to do …
learn some bad habits, such as, review old
knowledge, gain new knowledge, enable the
teachers to…, boring, many times, a waste of
time, a saying goes, duty, pass the exam,
achieve greater success,

The basic structure of the passage
Beginning: 1) In my opinion, it is … to do our
homework every day.
2) Nowadays, more students are complaining
about their endless homework, some even
think it unnecessary to do it. But in my
view, …
Body: The reasons to support your idea.
(on one hand, on the other hand, besides , in
addition, more importantly)
Ending: Conclusion (in a word, all in all, a saying
goes, so ) Conclusion
How to make a passage better
the structure of the passage (结构)
beautiful expressions (遣词造句)
good words and phrases
beautiful sentences
transitional words (过渡连接)
no mistakes (检查错误)

Assignment
1. Write a complete passage on “Is Daily
Homework Necessary?”
2. Think about a topic” Is It Good for
Students to Surf online?”Thank youLearning to connected sentences well
状语从句: so that…, if…, although…,
because…, when…
宾语从句: I think that…, I’d suggest
that …
定语从句: which …, who …
动词不定式: It’s ＋adj. ＋to do sth.
好的句型: because of …
正确使用语态: 被动语态Skills of making a passage better Skills of making a passage better1）递进：besides, what’s more , in addition,
then, more importantly, furthermore
2）转折：however, but, after all.
3）总结：finally, at last, in brief, in a word,
therefore.
4）强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely,
5）对比：in the same way, while, on the
other hand.
6) 举例: for exampleLearning to use these transitional words (过渡词) Pay attention
beginning: It is necessary for students to do
daily homework.
ending : So it is necessary for students to do
daily homework.