课件18张PPT。英语中考题型九 书面表达 近年来，越来越多的外籍人士融入到深圳社区生活。假设你的小区也居住着这样一个群体，社区委员会为丰富他们的生活，计划在下周六专为外籍人士安排一次采摘荔枝活动，请你帮忙用英文写一份书面通知，传达给他们。
要点：
1)下周六上午8：00在北门集合，乘大巴去“幸福农场”采摘荔枝，下午4：30返回；
2)享受乡村自然美景，感受干农活的乐趣；
3)请在下周四下午6：00前去办公室报名；
4)你可以带上……；另外……。注意：
1)字数：80字左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数)
2)文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
3)条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：荔枝lychee；报名sign one's name；幸福农场Happy Farm
NOTICE
June 25
In order to enrich the life of the residents (居民)，the Community Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you a wonderful time!
The Community Union【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。内容是写一份书面通知，传达给社区的人们计划在下周六专为外籍人士安排的一次采摘荔枝活动。注意通知的格式。时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一、二人称。
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1)下周六上午8：00在北门集合，乘大巴去“幸福农场”采摘荔枝，下午4：30返回；
2)享受乡村自然美景，感受干农活的乐趣；
3)请在下周四下午6：00前去办公室报名；
4)你可以带上……；另外……
常用到的重点短语：
in order to 为了 have fun 玩得开心 so as to 为了…… of course 当然【高分句型】
1．We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners，where we plan to pick lychees.
where作为关系词的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的Happy Farm。
2．Of course，you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt.
so as to “为了……”表目的，作为目的状语。
3．Sign your name in our office before 6 p．m.next Thursday if you are interested.
if引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时。【参考范文】NOTICE
June 25
In order to enrich the life of the residents (居民)，the Community Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday.
We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners，where we plan to pick lychees.【高分句型】
We will gather at the North Gate at 8 a．m.and return at 4：30 p．m.next Saturday.(时间地点和活动内容)
During the trip，we can appreciate natural scenery in the countryside and have fun in farming work.(活动的意义)
Of course，you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt.【高分句型】
Besides，your safety should be taken into consideration.(建议)
Sign your name in our office before 6 p．m.next Thursday if you are interested.【高分句型】(报名时间)
Wish you a wonderful time!【点评】提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型。主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力。为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法。其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。在今年4月23日第20个“世界阅读日”之际，我市进行了以“爱上阅读”为主题的阅读交流活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，分享你们学校的一些做法。
要点：
1．学校举行图书展，一年两次，向同学们介绍优秀文学作品；
2．各个班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍；
3．每天下午通过广播进行15分钟的“听书”活动；
4．每学期每人至少阅读5本好书，并撰写一篇读书心得。注意：
1．词数：80词左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数；
2．内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；
3．参考词汇：literature；set up；exchange(v.交换)；broadcast(n.广播)；reading reportOne possible version：
It's said that reading makes a full man.Here are some ways in our school to make reading more fun.Book shows are held twice a year in our school.They can introduce some great literature works to us students.A book corner is set up in every classroom.It helps us exchange some books with others freely there.And at the same time，we have a 15 minutes' listening to books by broadcast every afternoon.It brings us lots of fun indeed.Our school also has a rule：each student must read at least five good books a term and write a reading report from what he/she has read.
Through these activities，we really love reading now.下面是《小艾，爸爸特别特别想你》这本书的两幅插图。图中描绘了父亲陪伴小艾成长的童年片段。父亲节快到了，请结合自己的经历，以“爸爸，我想对你说……”开头，写一篇英语短文，以表达对父亲的爱与感激之情。
要求：1.语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；
2．词数：80词左右，短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Dad，I want to say to you_____________________________【分析】本题主要是一篇图画作文，是一篇表达对父亲的爱与感激之情的作文。首先要弄清楚图画提供的信息，然后适当发挥自己的想象力和创造力，来完成这篇文章。
1．人称：题目可知，写作时用第一人称。
2．时态：回忆往事，一般过去时态为主；现在想要说的话，以一般现在时态为主。
3．内容要点：回忆往事(根据图画提示，可适当发挥)感恩父爱。
4．主要短语： take care of 关心，爱护；take sb to＋地点，带某人去某地；get good grades 取得好成绩；have a good rest 好好休息。【高分句型】
1．I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.我记得您经常带我到有趣的地方，给我买美味的食物。
这是一个含有宾语从句的复合句。
主句：I remember；宾语从句：you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me。
2．You're getting older and older.您越来年纪越大了。
同一词的比较级，用and连接，表示越来越……。【解答】参考范文：
Dad，I want to say to you.(开篇点题)
In the past few years，you have done a lot for me.We spent much happy time together.With your great care，I grow healthily and happily.I remember when I was ill，you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.
【高分句型一】I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.I remember when I got good grades，you were always smiling….(回忆往事)
【高分句型二】But now，you're getting older and older.So I want to say：Please have a good rest and relax.Thank you for your love.I love you forever.(感恩父爱)【点评】本题主要考查图画作文。写此类题目的作文，首先审题：要读懂画面内容和所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体，以及写作的人称和时态。然后读图列提纲：抓住文章的中心，根据图画信息，列出提纲。然后根据内容，考虑所要选用的单词、短语、句型。最后再修改，润色全文。假设你是李明。上周日你班举行了一次毕业聚会。请根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友 Robert 写一封邮件，向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数 80左右。(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)One possible version：
Hi Robert，
We had a graduation party last Sunday.Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall.Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，too.First，our monitor made a speech.He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely.Next，we gave presents to each other.The most exciting moment was the show time.We sang，danced and played games.Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh.Everyone was so happy.I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind.
Do you have such a party？Please write soon.
Yours，
Li Ming(一)
A(2016，河北)
关于“说英语”问题，小华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的意见，请你仔细阅读下面图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给的要求写一篇短文。
要 求：(1)用“Li Hua” 或“Miss Wang” 补全短文首句；
(2)写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：shy，make a mistake，believe in
I am Miss Wang.Your English is poor because you don't speak English.English，like any other language，is a tool of communication—the more you speak，the better your English will become.So you should try to speak every day as much as possible.And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake.Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you.The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up! Always remember：practice makes perfect.
I am Li Hua.I don't speak English because my English is poor.I find it hard to speak English.I'm a little shy and afraid of making a mistake.I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class.I am afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English.To tell you the truth，I don't believe in myself.The less I speak，the worse my English is.When my English improves，I will enjoy speaking it.
B(2016，重庆)
随着外国游客日益增多，未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务。科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信。假如你叫袁新，你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。
要求：
1．必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由；
2．词数：80～120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考要点：
1．擅长英语(英语水平，沟通能力．.....)；
2．热爱科学(科学知识，创新能力．.....)；
3．.....
Dear sir，
I'm a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School.I'd like to become one of your guides.
I've learned English for 6 years.I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies，so I'm good at English.That is to say，it's not difficult for me to talk with people in English.
I have been interested in science since I was a child.My favorite books are on science.Some new ideas often come out of my mind，which has encouraged me a lot.With these ideas，I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable.
Besides，I feel like making friends with different people，no matter where they come from.I'm sure that I will get along well with them.
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.
Thank you!
Yours，
Yuan Xin
C(2016，毕节)
最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents？”为题写一篇80～100词的短文参加此次征文大赛。
写作要点提示：
1．与父母和谐相处很重要。
2．与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：
(1)理解与尊重父母(如倾听与有礼貌表达想法)；
(2)多与父母交流(如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼)；
(3)为父母做一些力所能及的事。
3．与父母和谐相处的感受。
How to Get on Well with Our Parents?
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents.But how can we get along well with our parents? Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents.Parents talk much because they care about us.We are supposed to listen to them.When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way.We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems.When we are free，we'd better help them do some things.
I get on well with my parents.I enjoy sharing everything with my parents.My parents are like my best friends.They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I am in trouble.We love each other.
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
D(2016，无锡)
假设你是某校九年级(1)班的学生，你校英文俱乐部正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：
1．高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；
2．乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；
3．去年，他……；
4．已筹集一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生；
5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。
注意事项：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第3要点的内容须围绕主题，用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数在90个左右。
My classmate Li Ming is very tall，and he is good at football.He is one of the top students in my class.Li Ming is very helpful，and he often takes an active part in different activities，especially in charities.
Last year，he held a charity programme for children in poor areas.Since last year，he has raised more than 1，000 yuan.Now he gets ready to send the money to the children in poor areas.
His action has won high praise from our school.He is our pride.
(二)
A(2016，郴州)
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jeff向你了解你校的课堂教学形式，请你根据提示内容用英语给他写封电子邮件，并谈谈你的感受。
要点提示：1.我们的课堂是开放自由、生动有趣的。
2．我们在课堂上经常讲故事，做游戏。
3．老师在课堂上经常使用电脑，给我们听音乐、看录像等，使我们学到更多知识。
4．在课堂上老师给我们足够的时间进行自主学习和自由讨论。
5．我们有更多的机会展示自我。
要求：(1)短文须包含要点提示中的信息(不要逐字翻译)，并在此基础上适当发挥；
(2)词数：80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jeff，
I was glad to receive your letter and I'd like to tell you something about how we study in class.Now our classes are open and free.All of our classmates feel the classes are interesting and lively as we often tell stories and play games.Thus，we can not only learn but also have fun.The teachers often use the computer in class.We can learn more by listening to music and watching videos.Our teachers give us enough time to study and think for ourselves to develop our ability of independent study.We also have more chances to discuss in groups freely and so we can learn how to communicate with each other and learn from each other.Sometimes we even express ourselves in front of the whole class.And we can ask questions during or after class freely.
Yours，
Li Hua
B(2016，六盘水)
母爱情深，父爱无价，师恩无限，友情可贵。在生活中，有许多值得感恩的人，请以Love for ____ 为题，写一篇短文。
要求：1.请将题目补充完整。
2．用80～120词写一篇完整的短文。描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列举感恩的事例；你将为他/她做些什么来表达你的感激之情。
提示：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Love for my mother
We need love，we also need to love others.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 38 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is kind and friendly.She is a worker in a shop.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.Mom is the busiest person in my family，but she is always happy to do everything for us.Mum，I love you!
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I'll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time.That's what she wants most，I think.
C(2016，包头)
假设你是Li Hua，请你用英文给你校外教Jim发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
1．今天下午你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课。
2．邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动。
时间：下周五下午4点
地点：初三一班
活动内容：用英文讨论暑假计划，并希望他能给同学们一些如何提高英语的建议。
3．如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2．词数70～110，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
I'm Li Hua，one of the students in your spoken English class.I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to your class tomorrow.The reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the P．E.class this afternoon.
Besides，I'd like to invite you to join in the activity in our English club next Friday.It'll start at 4 p．m.in Class 1，Grade 3.We'll talk about the plan for the coming summer vacation in English.And we'll be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our English.Call me or send me an email if you have any questions.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
D(2016，孝感)
3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。
活动时间：3月5日
活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)
参与人员：志愿者
活动形式：1.送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。
2．帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……
3．陪老人聊天；为老人表演(唱歌、跳舞)，读报……
活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人……
要求：1.要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。
2．词数100字左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Mary，
Thank you for your last e-mail.Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
As a member of volunteers，I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.In the morning，we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit.As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home，we sent them our best wishes too.How happy they were!
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them.After that，some of us performed activities for them，such as singing songs and dancing.Some of us read newspaper for them.Some of us chatted with them.When it was time for us volunteers to leave，they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity，I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.In our daily life，we should offer our seats to them on buses.And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.
If you have the chance in China，I hope you can join us.
Li Hua
(三)
A(2016，丽水)
在英语课上，老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city”的话题讨论，请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你的选择与理由。
Countryside
City
relaxing，fresh air…not easy to take public transportation…
exciting…
crowded，expensive…
注意：1.短文必须包含记录表中的信息，并作适当发挥；
2．词数80～100，所给的文章开头供选择，不计入词数。
In the English class，we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.
Taking a trip to the countryside can relax you by fishing or swimming.And the fresh air might be your favorite.Yet，you might not have many choices in transportation.
Of course，a trip to the city also has its characters.If you like shopping，it's very exciting to travel back and forth in large malls.You can visit museums to broaden your mind.Nevertheless，such a trip might cost much.And the traffic jam might let you down.
If you're from the countryside，a trip to the city is better.There，you'll learn what you've never though of.
(In my opinion，a trip to the countryside is better.There，you can lie under the stars，enjoying the quiet night.)
B(2016，嘉兴)
英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place？”为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。
注意：1.短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法；
2．词数：80～100(短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数)。
In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.We shared different ideas.
Some say it's better to spend more time with family.The more we get together，the better we understand each other.Family members should share happiness and worries.For example，when they have problems，we should try to cheer them up.Others believe it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays.
I think，showing love for family is necessary.If we help with housework，they may feel warmer.Sometimes，even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.Though we're young，we can do much to make a happier home.
C(2016，南京)
假如你是在南京学习的英国交流学生Max，你的英国同学Simon给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Simon回一封电子邮件。
Hey，Max，
I haven't heard from you since you arrived in Nanjing.How are you getting on？Is everything OK with the school you study in？What are your English classes like?
Write soon!
Yours，
Simon
注意：1.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2．词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hi Simon，
Sorry I haven't written till now.I'm really busy with the courses and making new friends these days.I think people here are kind and friendly and I am getting on well with them.
My school is large and beautiful.We have lessons on weekdays.School starts at 8 a．m.and finishes at 4：30 p．m.After school，we can do some sports to relax.
English classes in China are not like ones in Britain.The texts are easy.Sometimes we practise a lot in class.And sometimes we play games after class.
I will send you some photos of my school next time.Take care!
Yours，
Max
D(2016，达州)
中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后，全社会展开了热烈的讨论，某校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查，请你根据此结果写一份调查报告，并适当阐述你的观点，问卷调查结果如图所示：
注意：1.条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确；
2．全文字数90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister.The opinions are different.About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister.They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together.And they won't feel lonely anymore.What's more，they think they'll get more freedom.But others disagree.They think they won't get used to the change.They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before.Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister.But we should respect our parents' choices.After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision.
