(共7张PPT)
Do We Need Parental Involvement
概括部分：
全文概括，两层意思
关键词、句
parental involvement
important
lack
problems and performance
Studies tell us about the importance of parental involvement to a child’s success at school and in his learning while lack of it may lead to some problems and bad performance at school. (33 words)
论述部分
1. 大约写10句话，分段写。
2. 利用关键词组织内容。
（1）你对研究的看法: (2 句)
In my opinion, it is important for parents to give children their experience and instructions so that students can study better with less effort. Besides, students will be more confident if they make fewer mistakes at school. (37 words)
（2）家人如何关心你的学习：(4 句)
My parents care much about my studies and they often give me advice, which is of great value for my progress. They encourage me, too, when I have difficulties. And of course, when I make a mistake, they will correct it, and sometimes even criticize me severely. They also teach me how to get on with others. (57 words)
（3）家人的关心对你的影响（4句）
. With their help, I have made great progress in my study. I am also optimistic, confident and never afraid of any difficulty that I come across. What’s more, I am liked by my teachers and classmates. I am grateful to my parents. (42 words)高三英语任务型写作学案 （1）
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材料：双语报第一期：
话题：家长参与
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Studies show that parental involvement in a child’s school and learning is important to a child’s success, and contributes to fewer behavioral problems and better performance in school.
“You can always tell when a parent is taking an interest in a child’s assignments and talking to the child about what is going on at school. Even very shy students like o say ‘My mom said…’. Students use words from their parents in class discussion and conversation,” said Dianna Bartles, a teacher in Ohio.
Parents who are involved with their children’s schools can better monitor classroom activities and share their efforts with teachers. And research suggests that the teachers of students with highly involved parents tend to give greater attention to those students, and to identify learning problems at an earlier age.
“Lack of parental involvement in reading or helping with homework puts children at a disadvantage,” said Dara Feldman, a teacher in Maryland. “Some young parents may not know how important it is to engage in their children’s studies. Their children may come to school without finishing their homework or do not review the lesson in advance.”
[写作内容]
作为一名学生， 你在某报刊看到这则新闻后， 准备就“家长参与”这个话题写一篇文章，题目是 “Do we need parental involvement ” 内容 要点包括：
1. 以约30个词概括上文要点；
2. 以约120个词谈谈你的观点，内容包括：
（1） 你对这个研究结果的看法；
（2） 你的家人是如何关心你的学习的；
（3） 家长的关心对你的影响是什么。
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。
读写任务详解
概括部分
1．审题：全文概括：关键词
parental involvement important lack problems and performance
2．参考范文：
Studies tell us about the importance of parental involvement to a child’s success at school and in his learning while lack of it may lead to some problems and bad performance at school. (33 words)
论述部分：
1． 审题
(1) 你对研究的看法: (2-3 句)
30-40词。关键词：important, experience, instructions, study better, less effort, more confident, build up confidence, fewer mistakes
(2) 家人如何关心你的学习：(3-4 句)
40-50词。关键词：care about, advice/suggestion, value/valuable, progress, encourage, overcome difficulty, correct mistakes, criticize, get on with/communicate with
(3) 家人的关心对你的影响：(3-4句)
40-50词。关键词：make progress, optimistic, confident/confidence, brave, courage, easy-going, be liked/popular, grateful
2．充分利用关键词举例：
1) It is important to give children their experience and instructions.
It is important for parents to give children their experience and instructions so that students can study better with less effort.
In my opinion, it is important for parents to give children their experience and instructions so that students can study better with less effort.
2) My parents care much about my studies.
My parents care much about my studies and they often give me advice.
My parents care much about my studies and they often give me advice, which is of great value for my progress.
3) I am also optimistic, confident.
I am also optimistic, confident and never afraid of any difficulty.
I am also optimistic, confident and never afraid of any difficulty that I come across.
参考范文：
Studies tell us about the importance of parental involvement to a child’s success in his school and learning while lack of it may lead to some problems and bad performance at school. (33 words)
In my opinion, it is important for parents to give children their experience and instructions so that students can study better with less effort. Besides, students will be more confident if they make fewer mistakes at school. (37 words)
My parents care much about my studies and they often give me advice, which is of great value for my progress. They encourage me, too, when I have difficulties. And of course, when I make a mistake, they will correct it, and sometimes even criticize me severely. They also teach me how to get on with others. (57 words)
With their help, I have made great progress in my study. I am also optimistic, confident and never afraid of any difficulty that I come across. What’s more, I am liked by my teachers and classmates. I am grateful to my parents. (42 words)
(论述部分共136 words)
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