2017年中考英语二轮专题书面表达课件：物品介绍

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【话题解读】
物品介绍类写作应注意以下几点：
1. 抓准特征、说明到位：物品的特征可能有很多，介绍时要注意详略得当。如果有“闪光点”，即这一物品区别于其他物品的地方，应重点介绍。
2. 层次分明、条理清晰：应采用恰当的说明顺序和角度，可以从物品的外观、构造、功能等方面来分层依次描述，内容不宜相互交叉。
3. 选用合适的说明方法：物品介绍类写作可采用下定义、举例子、列数字、作比较等不同的说明方法。要根据所介绍物品的特征，选用恰当的说明方法。
【真题回放】
书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列图表信息，写一篇短文。
内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。
提示：
1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My schoolbag
What it looks like
What is used for
The problems
your schoolbag
may bring
The things you
expect to do in
your free time
1. much schoolwork
2. ...
1. ...
2. ...
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. _________________
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(2016 江西)
【真题分析】
该书面表达要求介绍自己的书包，属于物品介绍。按照提示内容，具体可以分三段来写：
第一段描写书包的外形特征及用途。外形特征可以从颜色、尺寸、材质等方面介绍；
第二段说明自己遇到的课业问题。因为是课业问题且和书包有关，所以内容应围绕“学业负担重”展开；
最后一段表达自己的期望。
图表中的相应信息提到了“in your free time”，结合前段对课业问题的介绍进行分析判断，可知此段应围绕“减负”“享受生活”等内容展开。
标准范文
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is big and blue. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, pens and so on.
My schoolbag is of great help to me. However, it also brings me some problems. I have to do so much homework, so I put lots of things in it.
Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, I am forced to have extra classes with it. My
back hurts a lot because of my heavy schoolbag.
As a middle school student, I hope to have more free time to develop my hobbies. I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
【高分突破】
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It's blue, which is my favorite color. There are some yellow stars on the front that make the schoolbag cool and special. It can carry all my school things, like textbooks, notebooks and a pencil box.
I like my schoolbag and I take good care of it.
However, after using it for only half a year, I found some holes in it. Why I put too many things in it! Every day, I'm busy with my lessons, homework and tests and my schoolbag carries lots of things. I learn too much, and like my poor schoolbag, I can't stand that. Actually, my schoolbag and I are both “tired”.
I hope I can have more time to read, to sing and to play with my friends. I hope I can have a lighter schoolbag and a happier school life.
【高分揭秘】
1. 作者用地道的语言完整地叙述了所有的内容要点，详略得当。在第一段对书包作介绍时，作者运用了一些表达情感色彩的话语，如my favorite color, make the schoolbag cool and special等，增强了文章的可读性。
2. 习作过渡自然，由书包“不堪重负”导致破洞引出课业负担过重的话题，最后巧妙地使用lighter schoolbag 表达了作者希望减负的心声，这些比喻的使用为习作增添了亮点。
3. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有一些定语从句。从句的使用避免了句子过于单调。
【素材积累】
1. 词汇
形状：round, square, heart-shaped, star-shaped
颜色：white, red, green, grey, gold, silver
材质：cotton, leather, silk, wool, glass, metal, wood, stone, plastic, iron, steel
外观：good-looking, fashionable, shiny, sharp
其他：well-known, safe, valuable, healthy
2. 句子
★ It is attractive and it stands about 10 meters high.
★ It's a gift of love from my parents. It means a lot to me.
★ It feels so good to be wearing the long beautiful dress.
★ Although it is expensive, I think it's worth buying. It's helpful for my study.
★The shoes are made of leather. They can make people — especially young people, feel comfortable and confident.
写作任务
下周一上午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告，你打算把爸爸最近网购的音乐机器人(music robot) 介绍给同学们，下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告。请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。
注意：
(1)选择所给信息进行介绍，建议举例说明并适当发挥；
(2)必须谈谈你对音乐机器人的看法；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(4)词数：80—100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：提醒remind ... of
connect ... to the Internet provide services
Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought on line. _____________________________________
_____________________________________
____________________________________
(2016 浙江湖州)
Good morning, everyone! Here, I‘d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. This music robot is small, so you can carry it in your backpack. If you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say,“Ding Dong, I want to listen to TFBoys' songs, ”and it will play their songs immediately.
You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.
I am so amazed at the music robot. It makes my life more enjoyable and
convenient. I really love it!