2017年中考英语专题复习课件 书面表达应对技巧（共32张PPT）

课件32张PPT。 中 考 专 题 复 习 课Writing将过程变得美丽 让结果更加辉煌——中考英语书面表达应对技巧中考英语作文评分标准满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（80-90字），书写规范，涵盖所有要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。
第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。
第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2 要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。
第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整 （只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。
（白卷0分）DiscussionHow to Write English Compositions集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范123456 Writing skills—six steps欣赏范文1.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
??? 2.80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Giving is Receiving
My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?2. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以'Less Pressure, Better Life'为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括：
　　●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
　　●我的压力是什么；
　　●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
　　　　　 Less Pressure, Better Life
　　Hello, boys and girls!
　　 Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
　　I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
　　Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!3. 幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80－90词。
Happiness is important in our life. In fact , happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents. 初中生写作“六大病症”

1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；
2) 单词拼写错误；
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet …

3) 动词缺失；
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking.


4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）
Eg: Everyone have their own dream.
He said he wants to have a good rest.
5）中式英语（Chinglish）
Eg: I very like sports.
6) 综合性错误。
包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词
的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。
本节课的学习任务:
写一篇描述人的外貌 (look)、性格（characters）、爱好 （hobbies）的文章1. What does he / she look like?thin heavy/ fatWhat does he look like?short hairlong hairWhat does he look like?2. Pair-work:
A: What does xxx look like?
B: He/ She is …
A: What is his / her character?
B: He / She is…
A: What does he/ she like?
B: He/ She likes …
描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，of medium height ，strong, good-looking, nice, slim 苗条
描述穿着的短语：wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses
描述性格的单词：lazy, quiet, friendly, shy, kind-hearted 善良的, polite 有礼貌的，strict 严厉的, out-going 外向的
描述爱好的短语：like reading, like to help others, like eating, like playing basketball3. Word collection: 4. Write something about this boy.
(3-5句话)
提示词：
tall，thin，black hair;
wear shorts and a T-shirt;
polite(有礼貌的)，happy
5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。开头：
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He… 6. 考考你的眼力:
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 year old. He is tall or thin. He has black hair and he like wear short and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chickens best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He like little animals. He often play with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I very like him. 7. 正确示例:
Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much.自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些
同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校
园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你
用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。
内容要点包括：
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主第二步：
列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：
根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！Introduction

Main body

ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWrite an outline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
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------------合理安排时间
参加兴趣小组
------List some keywords about problems.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________

3. List some keywords about suggestions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
第三步：抓住要点，列关键词not good for study and health,…Spend ---on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -抓住要点，列关键词Problems
be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1)
watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their
hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend --- on (7A2)
Opinions
not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3)
Pay more attention to (9A1)
Suggestions
plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and
bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2)
join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4)
do some housework(7B5)
Make sentences with the keywords about problems.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________第四步：连词成句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and can’t finish their homework on time.I don’t think it’s good for our study and health.第五步：集句成段，组段成篇There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides these,And alsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！Write your compositions.Later, hand in your compositions to me.Thank you!