题组一 体验真题
Passage
1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)The
teenage
year
from
13
to
19
were
the
most
difficult
time
for
me.They
were
also
the
best
and
worse
years
in
my
life.At
the
first，I
thought
I
knew
everything
and
could
make
decisions
by
yourself.However，my
parents
didn’t
seem
to
think
such.They
always
tell
me
what
to
do
and
how
to
do
it.At
one
time
，I
ever
felt
my
parents
couldn’t
understand
me
so
I
hoped
I
could
be
freely
from
them.I
showed
them
I
was
independent
by
wear
strange
clothes.Now
I
am
leaving
home
to
college.At
last，I
will
be
on
my
own，but
I
still
want
to
have
my
parents
to
turn
to
whenever
need
help.
答案
The
teenage
from
13
to
19
were
the
most
difficult
time
for
me.They
were
also
the
best
and
years
in
my
life.At
first，I
thought
I
knew
everything
and
could
make
decisions
by
.However，my
parents
didn’t
seem
to
think
.They
always
me
what
to
do
and
how
to
do
it.At
one
time
，I
ever
felt
my
parents
couldn’t
understand
me
so
I
hoped
I
could
be
from
them.I
showed
them
I
was
independent
by
strange
clothes.Now
I
am
leaving
home
college.At
last，I
will
be
on
my
own，but
I
still
want
to
have
my
parents
to
turn
to
whenever
need
help.
【语篇解读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。
1.year→years [此处指13～19
岁的年龄，故用复数。]
2.worse→worst [与前面的best并列，此处应用最高级。]
3.去掉the [at
first
固定短语。]
4.yourself→myself [根据句意，此处指“我自己”。]
5.such→so [so
指已经提到的事。]
6.tell→told [此处应用过去时态。]
7.freely→free [此处应用形容词作表语。]
8.wear→wearing [此处用动名词作介词的宾语。]
9.to→for [固定搭配
leave
for
去……。]
10.whenever后加I [whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I。]
Passage
2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·陕西卷)My
soccer
coach
retired
in
last
week.I
wanted
to
do
anything
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.My
mom
makes
the
better
biscuits
in
the
world，so
I
decide
to
ask
her
for
help.Mom
taught
me
some
basic
step
of
baking.I
insisted
on
doing
most
of
the
baking
myself.I
thought
the
biscuits
were
really
well.My
only
mistake
was
that
I
dropped
some
on
the
floor
after
I
was
packing
them
up.
At
a
party，my
coach，with
a
biscuit
in
his
mouth，asked
surprisingly
who
made
them
and
joked，“I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”My
favorite
picture
at
the
party
is
of
my
coach
and
me
enjoy
the
biscuits
with
happy
laughter!
答案
My
soccer
coach
retired
last
week.I
wanted
to
do
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.My
mom
makes
the
biscuits
in
the
world，so
I
to
ask
her
for
help.Mom
taught
me
some
basic
of
baking.I
insisted
on
doing
most
of
the
baking
myself.I
thought
the
biscuits
were
really
.My
only
mistake
was
that
I
dropped
some
on
the
floor
I
was
packing
them
up.
At
party，my
coach，with
a
biscuit
in
his
mouth，asked
surprisingly
who
made
them
and
joked，“I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”My
favorite
picture
at
the
party
is
of
my
coach
and
me
the
biscuits
with
happy
laughter!
题组二 尝试模拟
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage
1
(2016·郑州市高三一模)There
are
too
many
cars
in
our
town
now.For
a
result，there
are
lots
of
traffic
jams，and
the
air
which
we
will
breathe
is
terrible.Our
town
is
very
old
but
all
the
streets
are
quite
narrow，so
there
is
no
room
for
bus
lanes，which
mean
that
buses
always
get
stuck
in
the
traffic
jams，too.However，lots
of
accidents
with
cyclists
often
happen
because
of
crowded
street.But
I
think
there
is
a
simple
solution
of
these
problems.The
government
should
close
city
center
to
all
traffic
except
buses
and
bikes，and
build
very
larger
car
parks
outside
the
town.Car
drivers
can
take
a
bus
into
the
city
center
and
arrive
at
work
or
the
shops
relaxing
and
in
a
good
mood.
答案
There
are
too
many
cars
in
our
town
now.
a
result，there
are
lots
of
traffic
jams，and
the
air
which
we
breathe
is
terrible.Our
town
is
very
old
all
the
streets
are
quite
narrow，so
there
is
no
room
for
bus
lanes，which
that
buses
always
get
stuck
in
the
traffic
jams，too.，lots
of
accidents
with
cyclists
often
happen
because
of
crowded
.But
I
think
there
is
a
simple
solution
these
problems.The
government
should
close
city
center
to
all
traffic
except
buses
and
bikes，and
build
very
car
parks
outside
the
town.Car
drivers
can
take
a
bus
into
the
city
center
and
arrive
at
work
or
the
shops
and
in
a
good
mood.
Passage
2
(2016·河南省六校高三联考)Echo，my
favourite
teacher，is
a
pretty
and
slim
lady.When
she
talks
to
us，she
always
has
a
smile
on
his
face.I
think
Echo
is
gifted
teacher
because
she
has
a
lot
of
good
teach
methods.Her
classes
are
so
full
of
funs
that
you
will
never
feel
bored.To
improve
our
grades，she
usually
gave
us
some
advice
about
how
to
learn
English
well.What’s
more，she
spends
much
her
time
helping
her
students
instead
of
staying
with
her
family.Sometimes，she
hardly
has
any
time
to
have
the
lunch.Whenever
I
ask
her
questions，she
will
spare
no
effort
to
make
me
understood，with
patience
or
care.I
have
never
seen
so
a
good
teacher
as
her
before.
答案
Echo，my
favourite
teacher，is
a
pretty
and
slim
lady.When
she
talks
to
us，she
always
has
a
smile
on
face.I
think
Echo
is
gifted
teacher
because
she
has
a
lot
of
good
methods.Her
classes
are
so
full
of
that
you
will
never
feel
bored.To
improve
our
grades，she
usually
us
some
advice
about
how
to
learn
English
well.What’s
more，she
spends
much
time
helping
her
students
instead
of
staying
with
her
family.Sometimes，she
hardly
has
any
time
to
have
lunch.Whenever
I
ask
her
questions，she
will
spare
no
effort
to
make
me
，with
patience
care.I
have
never
seen
a
good
teacher
as
her
before.
Passage
3
(2016·河北石家庄市高三一模)
Dear
Sir/Madam，
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
will
organize
an
adventure
trip.I’m
interested
on
adventure
and
extreme
sports
so
much.When
travelling，we
will
enjoy
ourselves
and
learn
everything
from
the
exploration，which
attract
me
very
much.But
I
wonder
that
if
the
trip
will
be
exciting
and
relaxing.Personally，I
think
it’s
important
that
there
will
an
experienced
guide
in
the
group，whom
will
be
helpful
to
us.Beside，how
can
you
make
extreme
sports
like
bungee
jumping
easy
accepted
and
even
more
attractive
I
hope
that
all
the
adventure
would
be
interesting，fascinating
but
meaningful.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Hua
答案
Dear
Sir/Madam，
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
will
organize
an
adventure
trip.I’m
interested
adventure
and
extreme
sports
so
much.When
travelling，we
will
enjoy
ourselves
and
learn
from
the
exploration，which
me
very
much.But
I
wonder
if
the
trip
will
be
exciting
and
relaxing.Personally，I
think
it’s
important
that
there
will
an
experienced
guide
in
the
group，
will
be
helpful
to
us.，how
can
you
make
extreme
sports
like
bungee
jumping
accepted
and
even
more
attractive
I
hope
that
all
the
adventure
be
interesting，fascinating
meaningful.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Hua
Passage
4
(2016·太原市高三一模)More
and
more
foreigners
like
to
come
to
China.Last
Friday，our
school
was
invited
a
foreign
teacher
in
our
city
give
a
class
to
the
students
of
Senior
Grade
Two.We
found
his
class
interested.I
learned
a
lot
from
him.The
teacher
had
a
free
talk
to
us
with
easy
English.He
spoke
slow
so
that
we
could
understand
him
well.Sometimes
he
repeated
what
we
don’t
understand.My
classmates
were
all
active
in
the
class.To
his
joy，I
understood
everything
the
teacher
said.And
I
was
able
to
ask
question
in
English.This
class
encouraged
me
very
much.I’m
sure
that
until
we
keep
on
practising，it
will
be
easy
for
us
to
learn
speaking
English
well.
答案
More
and
more
foreigners
like
to
come
to
China.Last
Friday，our
school
invited
a
foreign
teacher
in
our
city
give
a
class
to
the
students
of
Senior
Grade
Two.We
found
his
class
.I
learned
a
lot
from
him.The
teacher
had
a
free
talk
to
us
easy
English.He
spoke
so
that
we
could
understand
him
well.Sometimes
he
repeated
what
we
understand.My
classmates
were
all
active
in
the
class.To
joy，I
understood
everything
the
teacher
said.And
I
was
able
to
ask
in
English.This
class
encouraged
me
very
much.I’m
sure
that
we
keep
on
practising，it
will
be
easy
for
us
to
learn
English
well.
Passage
5
(2016·河北石家庄高三二模)I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
membership
of
the
English
Tutorial.As
a
Senior
3
student，I
think
I’m
doing
good
in
English
because
I
always
get
good
marks
in
the
writing
English
tests.But
I
still
think
I
am
not
a
perfect
learner
because
I’m
not
so
good
in
spoken
English.That
is
why
troubles
me
the
most.And
when
I
listen
to
the
native
speaker，I
find
it
hard
to
catch
what
they
are
talking
about.And
when
I
speak
English，I
often
make
some
mistakes.But
I
want
to
be
a
member
in
the
spoken
tutorial
so
that
I
can
improve
my
spoken
English
and
communicating
better
with
others.I’m
sure
I
will
do
much
well
in
it
with
your
help.Looking
forward
your
reply.
答案
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
membership
of
the
English
Tutorial.As
a
Senior
3
student，I
think
I’m
doing
in
English
because
I
always
get
good
marks
in
the
English
tests.But
I
still
think
I
am
not
a
perfect
learner
because
I’m
not
so
good
spoken
English.That
is
troubles
me
most.And
when
I
listen
to
the
native
，I
find
it
hard
to
catch
what
they
are
talking
about.And
when
I
speak
English，I
often
make
some
mistakes.
I
want
to
be
a
member
in
the
spoken
tutorial
so
that
I
can
improve
my
spoken
English
and
better
with
others.I’m
sure
I
will
do
much
in
it
with
your
help.Looking
forward
your
reply.题组一 体验真题
Passage
1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My
uncle
is
the
owner
of
a
restaurant
close
to
that
I
live.Though
not
very
big，but
the
Restaurant
is
popular
in
our
area
.It
is
always
crowded
with
customers
at
meal
times.Some
People
even
had
to
wait
outside.My
uncle
tells
me
that
the
key
to
his
success
is
honest.Every
day
he
makes
sure
that
fresh
vegetables
or
high
quality
oil
are
using
for
cooking.My
uncle
says
that
he
never
dreams
becoming
rich
in
the
short
period
of
time.Instead，he
hopes
that
our
business
will
grow
steady.
答案
My
uncle
is
the
owner
of
a
restaurant
close
to
I
live.Though
not
very
big，
the
Restaurant
is
popular
in
our
area.It
is
always
crowded
with
customers
at
meal
times.Some
people
even
to
wait
outside.My
uncle
tells
me
that
the
key
to
his
success
is
.Every
day
he
makes
sure
that
fresh
vegetables
high
quality
oil
are
for
cooking.My
uncle
says
that
he
never
dreams
becoming
rich
in
short
period
of
time.Instead，he
hopes
that
business
will
grow
.
1.that→where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]
2.去掉but [考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。]
3.had→
have [考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。]
4.honest→
honesty [考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。]
5.or→and [考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。]
6.using→used [考查固定短语的用法。be
used
for“用来做”，为固定短语。]
7.在dreams之后加上of或about [考查短语动词。固定短语dream
of/about
(doing)
sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。]
8.the→a [考查代词的用法。in
a
short
period
of
time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。]
9.our→his [考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my
uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。]
10.steady→steadily [考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]
Passage
2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·全国卷Ⅰ)When
I
was
a
child，I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.I
think
I
would
be
happy
there.Now
I
am
living
in
a
city，but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.There
the
air
is
clean
or
the
mountains
are
green.Unfortunately，on
the
development
of
industrialization，the
environment
has
been
polluted.Lots
of
studies
have
been
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
seriously
problem.The
airs
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier.Much
rare
animals
are
dying
out.We
must
found
ways
to
protect
your
environment.If
we
fail
to
do
so，we’ll
live
to
regret
it.
答案
When
I
was
a
child，I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.I
I
would
be
happy
there.Now
I
am
living
in
a
city，but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.There
the
air
is
clean
the
mountains
are
green.Unfortunately，
the
development
of
industrialization，the
environment
has
been
polluted.Lots
of
studies
have
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
problem.The
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier.
rare
animals
are
dying
out.We
must
ways
to
protect
environment.If
we
fail
to
do
so，we’ll
live
to
regret
it.
题组二 尝试模拟
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage
1
(2016·河北唐山模拟)It
was
a
year
ago
when
Joshua
got
a
bike
for
Christmas，but
he
rode
it
every
day.One
morning，he
suddenly
found
the
bike
gone.Ran
to
his
front
yard，he
saw
a
man
loading
it
into
his
car.He
shouted，but
the
man
drive
off.As
a
devoted
Christian，he
told
his
dad
he
real
forgave
the
thief.What’s
more，he
wanted
the
thief
know
he
was
forgiven.So
the
next
day，he
posted
the
message
on
a
poster－board
and
put
it
in
the
front
yard.“To
the
person
who
stole
my
bike：You
hurt
my
feeling.But
I
am
a
Christian
and
I
forgive
him！”
When
he
left
for
home
the
next
morning，at
the
end
of
the
driveway，the
bike
was
back
with
new
brakes.
答案
It
was
a
year
ago
Joshua
got
a
bike
for
Christmas，
he
rode
it
every
day.One
morning，he
suddenly
found
the
bike
gone.
to
his
front
yard，he
saw
a
man
loading
it
into
his
car.He
shouted，but
the
man
off.As
a
devoted
Christian，he
told
his
dad
he
forgave
the
thief.What’s
more，he
wanted
the
thief
know
he
was
forgiven.So
the
next
day，he
posted
message
on
a
poster－board
and
put
it
in
the
front
yard.“To
the
person
who
stole
my
bike：You
hurt
my
.But
I
am
a
Christian
and
I
forgive
！”
When
he
left
home
the
next
morning，at
the
end
of
the
driveway，the
bike
was
back
with
new
brakes.
Passage
2
(2016·黑龙江哈三中测试)
Dear
Li
Hua，
I’m
familiar
to
your
situation.As
computers
become
more
and
more
popular，some
students
cannot
help
play
online
games
and
chatting.It
is
not
only
a
problem
of
wasting
time，but
serious
problem
for
their
future！What
you
should
do
at
first
is
to
find
out
what
make
her
addicted
to
computer
games.Lack
of
love
from
parents？Poor
score？Then
having
a
heart－to－heart
talk
with
her.Secondly，you
should
help
herself
with
her
study
to
build
up
her
confidence
and
make
her
interesting
in
it.Thirdly，find
something
else
for
her
to
do
instead
computer
games.Your
efforts
will
surely
help
change
her
life.
Yours，
Jack
答案
Dear
Li
Hua，
I’m
familiar
your
situation.As
computers
become
more
and
more
popular，some
students
cannot
help
online
games
and
chatting.It
is
not
only
a
problem
of
wasting
time，but
serious
problem
for
their
future！What
you
should
do
first
is
to
find
out
what
her
addicted
to
computer
games.Lack
of
love
from
parents？Poor
？Then
a
heart－to－heart
talk
with
her.Secondly，you
should
help
with
her
study
to
build
up
her
confidence
and
make
her
in
it.Thirdly，find
something
else
for
her
to
do
instead
computer
games.Your
efforts
will
surely
help
change
her
life.
Yours，
Jack
Passage
3
(2016·吉林长春调研)Mr.Zhang
is
sixty
years
old
and
had
retired.He
taught
our
biology
when
we
were
in
Grade
One.He
taught
very
good.He
tried
his
best
to
make
his
classes
lively.He
usually
made
good
preparations
for
the
lessons
and
was
strict
in
us.Each
time
when
we
made
mistakes
in
our
homework，he
would
ask
us
to
correct
it.I
was
poor
in
biology.He
often
helps
me
with
my
study
patiently.With
his
help
I
made
great
progresses.He
was
very
kind
to
his
students.As
experienced
teacher，he
was
respected
or
loved
by
all
the
students.
答案
Mr.Zhang
is
sixty
years
old
and
retired.He
taught
biology
when
we
were
in
Grade
One.He
taught
very
.He
tried
his
best
to
make
his
classes
lively.He
usually
made
good
preparations
for
the
lessons
and
was
strict
us.Each
time
we
made
mistakes
in
our
homework，he
would
ask
us
to
correct
.I
was
poor
in
biology.He
often
me
with
my
study
patiently.With
his
help
I
made
great
.He
was
very
kind
to
his
students.As
experienced
teacher，he
was
respected
loved
by
all
the
students.
Passage
4
(2016·宁夏银川一中月考)
Dear
Peter，
I’m
very
glad
to
receive
your
e－mail
asking
for
information
about
the
host
family
we
have
arranged
you
to
stay
with.
Locating
in
a
beautiful
and
quiet
neighborhood，the
house
was
big
enough
to
enable
you
to
have
a
room
of
your
own.Apart
from
the
convenient
public
transportation，our
private
car
will
make
your
visits
difficult.Because
all
the
family
members
can
speak
fluently
English
and
have
outgoing
personalities，I’m
sure
you
will
have
no
trouble
to
communicating
with
them.Above
all，they
hosted
the
American
student
last
year，through
that
they
gained
lots
of
experience.In
addition，the
hostess
cooking
will
guarantee
you
a
wonderful
chance
of
tasting
delicious
Chinese
food.
Hope
you
enjoy
your
stay
here.
Yours，
Li
Hua
答案
Dear
Peter，
I’m
very
glad
to
receive
your
e－mail
asking
for
information
about
the
host
family
we
have
arranged
you
to
stay
with.
in
a
beautiful
and
quiet
neighborhood，the
house
big
enough
to
enable
you
to
have
a
room
of
your
own.Apart
from
the
convenient
public
transportation，
private
car
will
make
your
visits
.Because
all
the
family
members
can
speak
English
and
have
outgoing
personalities，I’m
sure
you
will
have
no
trouble
communicating
with
them.Above
all，they
hosted
American
student
last
year，through
they
gained
lots
of
experience.In
addition，the
cooking
will
guarantee
you
a
wonderful
chance
of
tasting
delicious
Chinese
food.
Hope
you
enjoy
your
stay
here.
Yours，
Li
Hua
Passage
5
(2016·陕西五校一模)
Dear
Friend，
As
you
got
up
this
morning，I
watched
you
and
hoped
you
would
talk
to
me，asked
my
opinion
or
thanking
me
something
good
that
happened
in
your
life
yesterday.But
I
noticed
you
were
too
busily.I
waited
again.When
you
ran
around
the
house
getting
ready
I
knew
it
would
be
a
few
minutes
for
you
to
stop
and
say
a
hello，but
you
were
too
busy.At
one
point
you
have
to
wait
fifteen
minutes
with
nothing
to
do
except
sitting
in
a
chair.Then
I
saw
you
jump
to
your
foot.I
thought
you
wanted
to
talk
to
me
and
you
ran
to
the
phone
and
calling
a
friend.
Love
always.
Your
Friend，
Jesus
答案
Dear
Friend，
As
you
got
up
this
morning，I
watched
you
and
hoped
you
would
talk
to
me，
my
opinion
or
thanking
me
something
good
that
happened
in
your
life
yesterday.But
I
noticed
you
were
too
.I
waited
again.When
you
ran
around
the
house
getting
ready
I
knew
would
be
a
few
minutes
for
you
to
stop
and
say
hello，but
you
were
too
busy.At
one
point
you
to
wait
fifteen
minutes
with
nothing
to
do
except
in
a
chair.Then
I
saw
you
jump
to
your
.I
thought
you
wanted
to
talk
to
me
you
ran
to
the
phone
and
a
friend.
Love
always.
Your
Friend，
Jesus题组一 体验真题
Passage
1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)The
summer
holiday
is
coming.My
classmates
and
I
are
talking
about
how
to
do
during
the
holiday.We
can
chose
between
staying
at
home
and
take
a
trip.If
we
stay
at
home,
it
is
comfortable
but
there
is
no
need
to
spend
money.But
in
that
case,
we
will
learn
little
about
world.If
we
go
on
a
trip
abroad,
we
can
broaden
your
view
and
gain
knowledges
we
cannot
get
from
books.Some
classmates
suggest
we
can
go
to
places
of
interest
nearby.I
thought
that
it
is
a
good
idea.It
does
not
cost
many,
yet
we
can
still
learn
a
lot.
答案
The
summer
holiday
is
coming.My
classmates
and
I
are
talking
about
to
do
during
the
holiday.We
can
between
staying
at
home
and
a
trip.If
we
stay
at
home,
it
is
comfortable
there
is
no
need
to
spend
money.But
in
that
case,
we
will
learn
little
about
world.If
we
go
on
a
trip
abroad,
we
can
broaden
view
and
gain
we
can
not
get
from
books.Some
classmates
suggest
we
go
to
places
of
interest
nearby.I
that
it
is
a
good
idea.It
does
not
cost
，
yet
we
can
still
learn
a
lot.
1.how→what
[考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what
to
do，如果用how结构为how
to
do
sth.]
2.chose→choose [考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。]
3.take→taking [考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying
at
home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。]
4.but→and [考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。]
5.world前加the [考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。]
6.your→our [考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。]
7.knowledges→knowledge [考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。]
8.去掉can或can→should [考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should
do形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。]
9.thought→think [考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。]
10.many→much [考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost
much花费很多。此处也可理解为much
money的省略。]
Passage
2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2016·四川卷)It
is
Mother’s
Day
today.Though
it’s
a
western
festival,
it’s
popular
in
China
now.
Mom
has
a
full－time
job，so
she
has
to
do
most
of
the
houseworks.She
is
a
great
mother.Both
Dad
or
I
planned
to
do
something
on
Mother’s
Day.We
get
up
early
in
the
morning.Dad
cleaned
the
house，and
then
went
on
shopping.When
he
came
back，I
found
a
bunch
of
flowers
in
her
hand.I
asked
Mom
to
stay
in
the
sitting
room
and
I
cooked
in
kitchen.The
dishes
what
I
cooked
were
Mom’s
favoritest.At
dinner，we
said
to
her，“Happy
Mother’s
Day！”Mom
was
grateful
and
moving.
答案
It
is
Mother’s
Day
today.Though
it’s
a
western
festival,
it’s
popular
in
China
now.
Mom
has
a
full－time
job，
she
has
to
do
most
of
the
.She
is
a
great
mother.Both
Dad
I
planned
to
do
something
on
Mother’s
Day.We
up
early
in
the
morning.Dad
cleaned
the
house，and
then
went
shopping.When
he
came
back，I
found
a
bunch
of
flowers
in
hand.I
asked
Mom
to
stay
in
the
sitting
room
and
I
cooked
in
kitchen.The
dishes
I
cooked
were
Mom’s
.At
dinner，we
said
to
her，“Happy
Mother’s
Day！”Mom
was
grateful
and
.
1.so→but [前后句之间为转折关系。]
2.houseworks→housework [housework是不可数名词。]
3.or
→and [both...and是固定搭配。]
4.get→got [这里说的是发生在过去的事情，因此用一般过去时。]
5.去掉on [go
shopping去买东西。]
6.her→his [爸爸去购物，从句主语是he，因此物主代词形式用his。]
7.kitchen前加the [上文虽未提及kitchen，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠词。]
8.what→which/that或去掉what [引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，指物，用关系代词that/which，也可省略。]
9.favoritiest→favorite [favorite
为无等级形容词。]
10.moving→moved [moving多用来修饰事物，moved用来指人。]
题组二 尝试模拟
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage
1
(2016·山东东营市二模)Recently，I
got
package
notice
from
the
post
office.I
was
not
expecting
a
package.I
thought，“Oh
no，it’s
probably
a
package
from
some
companies
that
I
will
not
want.But
I
will
have
to
go
to
the
trouble
of
send
it
back.”
Late
that
day
a
good
friend
mentioned
to
me
that
I
should
be
getting
anything
in
the
mail
from
him.Well，my
attitude
on
the
package
waiting
for
me
at
the
post
office
change
immediately.Because
I
now
knew
who
had
been
sent
it！I
went
to
the
post
office
as
soon
as
I
could.I
was
delightful
to
get
a
set
of
stainless
steel
pots
from
my
friend.
答案
Recently，I
got
package
notice
from
the
post
office.I
was
not
expecting
a
package.I
thought，“Oh
no，it’s
probably
a
package
from
some
that
I
will
not
want.
I
will
have
to
go
to
the
trouble
of
it
back.”
that
day
a
good
friend
mentioned
to
me
that
I
should
be
getting
in
the
mail
from
him.Well，my
attitude
the
package
waiting
for
me
at
the
post
office
immediately.Because
I
now
knew
who
had
sent
it！I
went
to
the
post
office
as
soon
as
I
could.I
was
to
get
a
set
of
stainless
steel
pots
from
my
friend.
Passage
2
(2016·哈尔滨市高三一模)It
was
an
unusual
cold
day.Spring
had
arrived
and
everything
was
alive
with
color.So
a
cold
front
had
brought
winter’s
cold
back.I
sit
with
two
friends
by
the
window
of
restaurant
just
off
the
corner
of
the
town
square.The
food
were
especially
good
that
day.As
we
talked，my
attention
was
drawn
outside，across
the
street.There，walking
into
town，was
a
man
which
appeared
to
be
carrying
all
his
goods
on
his
back.She
was
carrying
a
wellworn
sign，reads
“I
will
work
for
food.”
My
heart
was
sank.We
continued
with
our
meals，but
his
image
lasted
in
my
mind.
答案
It
was
an
cold
day.Spring
had
arrived
and
everything
was
alive
with
color.
a
cold
front
had
brought
winter’s
cold
back.I
with
two
friends
by
the
window
of
restaurant
just
off
the
corner
of
the
town
square.The
food
especially
good
that
day.As
we
talked，my
attention
was
drawn
outside，across
the
street.There，walking
into
town，was
a
man
appeared
to
be
carrying
all
his
goods
on
his
back.
was
carrying
a
wellworn
sign，
“I
will
work
for
food.”
My
heart
sank.We
continued
with
our
，but
his
image
lasted
in
my
mind.
Passage
3
(2016·安徽六校联考)When
I
was
seven
years
old
and
my
sister
were
only
four，our
father
was
killed
in
an
automobile
accident
just
two
week
after
his
twenty－seventh
birthday.Mom
was
disappointing.Although
we
were
really
so
young
to
understand
what
was
going
on，but
I
knew
life
would
never
be
quite
the
same.We
had
a
nice
home，plenty
of
that
we
needed，but
we
miss
our
father.About
every
evening
we
would
go
to
our
grandparent’s
house
for
visit.My
grandmother
had
begun
working
part
time
at
Kentucky
Fried
Chicken.His
boss
was
a
nice
young
man
named
Charles
which
got
to
know
my
mother
and
fell
in
love
with
her
later.
答案
When
I
was
seven
years
old
and
my
sister
only
four，our
father
was
killed
in
an
automobile
accident
just
two
after
his
twenty－seventh
birthday.Mom
was
.Although
we
were
really
young
to
understand
what
was
going
on，
I
knew
life
would
never
be
quite
the
same.We
had
a
nice
home，plenty
of
we
needed，but
we
our
father.About
every
evening
we
would
go
to
our
grandparent’s
house
for
visit.My
grandmother
had
begun
working
part
time
at
Kentucky
Fried
Chicken.
boss
was
a
nice
young
man
named
Charles
got
to
know
my
mother
and
fell
in
love
with
her
later.
Passage
4
(2016·江西九江高三一模)One
day，I
saw
a
poster
which
reads
that
a
speech
contest
with
the
topic
“honesty”
would
be
held
at
the
lecture
hall
the
next
Saturday
morning.
With
my
parents’
encourage，I
joined
in
the
contest.At
first
I
felt
at
loss
about
my
speech
draft.After
referred
to
some
magazines，I
got
down
to
my
draft.Having
tailored
it
for
several
time，I
practiced
my
speech
at
home
every
day.My
parents
were
more
than
pleased
to
see
us
so
devoted.
Then
came
the
day
for
my
speech.A
few
bit
nervous
as
I
was，I
managed
to
deliver
my
speech
fluently.I’ve
learned
a
lot
of
from
the
contest.Confidence
comes
hand
to
hand
with
adequate
preparations.Well
prepared，I
can
do
everything
successful.
答案
One
day，I
saw
a
poster
which
that
a
speech
contest
with
the
topic
“honesty”
would
be
held
at
the
lecture
hall
the
next
Saturday
morning.
With
my
parents’
，I
joined
in
the
contest.At
first
I
felt
at
loss
about
my
speech
draft.After
to
some
magazines，I
got
down
to
my
draft.Having
tailored
it
for
several
，I
practiced
my
speech
at
home
every
day.My
parents
were
more
than
pleased
to
see
so
devoted.
Then
came
the
day
for
my
speech.A
bit
nervous
as
I
was，I
managed
to
deliver
my
speech
fluently.I’ve
learned
a
lot
from
the
contest.Confidence
comes
hand
hand
with
adequate
preparations.Well
prepared，I
can
do
everything
.
Passage
5
(2016·青岛市高三一模)It
is
reported
that
thirty
cellphones
taken
away
by
teachers
during
the
examination
and
were
smashed(粉碎)
in
front
of
students
and
parents
at
a
high
school.As
to
this，we
hold
a
heated
discussion.There
are
two
different
viewpoints
about
them.
Some
think
it
necessarily.Firstly，with
cellphones，students
would
have
focused
their
attention
on
studying
instead
of
wasting
their
precious
time
reading
junk
message.Secondly
the
examination
will
be
fair
if
no
one
cheats
by
using
cellphones.However，the
others
think
it
otherwise.For
one
thing，at
the
age
of
information，cellphones
have
become
a
necessity.For
another，students
can
use
cellphones
for
study.
Personally
spoken，even
if
some
students
use
cellphones
for
no
good
reason，we
should
educate
them
more
than
destroy
cellphones
in
such
an
extreme
way.
答案
It
is
reported
that
thirty
cellphones
taken
away
by
teachers
during
the
examination
and
were
smashed(粉碎)
in
front
of
students
and
parents
at
a
high
school.As
to
this，we
a
heated
discussion.There
are
two
different
viewpoints
about
.
Some
think
it
.Firstly，
cellphones，students
would
have
focused
their
attention
on
studying
instead
of
wasting
their
precious
time
reading
junk
.Secondly
the
examination
will
be
fair
if
no
one
cheats
by
using
cellphones.However，
others
think
it
otherwise.For
one
thing，
the
age
of
information，cellphones
have
become
a
necessity.For
another，students
can
use
cellphones
for
study.
Personally
，even
if
some
students
use
cellphones
for
no
good
reason，we
should
educate
them
than
destroy
cellphones
in
such
an
extreme
way.
Passage
6
(2016·云南八校高三联考)Alibaba’s
founder
Jack
Ma，his
company
has
been
valued
at
more
than
$221
billion
of
which
Ma
owned
6%，is
put
in
the
top
position
among
China’s
wealthiest.But
he
stays
outside
the
list
of
the
world’s
10
rich
people.
Fought
against
a
hard
life，young
Ma
still
managed
to
learn
English
well
enough
to
gain
a
degree
and
became
a
teacher.Afterwards
he
started
a
translation
agency
in
which
took
him
to
the
US，where
he
introduced
to
the
Internet.His
fate
was
bound
to
change
before
he
was
accidentally
appointed
to
take
an
American
visitor
Jerry
Yang，a
co－founder
of
Yahoo，in
a
tour
of
the
Great
Wall.The
meeting
obvious
proved
to
be
a
turning
point
for
all
of
them，promoting
the
birth
of
Alibaba
and
the
later
cooperation
with
Jerry
Yang.
答案
Alibaba’s
founder
Jack
Ma，
company
has
been
valued
at
more
than
$221
billion
of
which
Ma
6%，is
put
in
the
top
position
among
China’s
wealthiest.But
he
stays
outside
the
list
of
the
world’s
10
people.
against
a
hard
life，young
Ma
still
managed
to
learn
English
well
enough
to
gain
a
degree
and
became
a
teacher.Afterwards
he
started
a
translation
agency
which
took
him
to
the
US，where
he
introduced
to
the
Internet.His
fate
was
bound
to
change
he
was
accidentally
appointed
to
take
an
American
visitor
Jerry
Yang，a
co－founder
of
Yahoo，
a
tour
of
the
Great
Wall.The
meeting
proved
to
be
a
turning
point
for
of
them，promoting
the
birth
of
Alibaba
and
the
later
cooperation
with
Jerry
Yang.
