2017年英语中考话题写作课件精选-Nature and travel

课件33张PPT。中考话题写作课: Nature and Travel
九年级上册 Module 1 Wonders of the world
九年级上册 Module 10 Australia
(Introducing a place to others ) a place ??????????country city park beachLearning aims: 学会审题，合理构建地点类文章结构。2. 学会连词成句。3. 学会适当添加连接词，组句成篇。Guessing game
( guess the name of a place )The Giant’s Causeway
It’s huge.
There are about
40,000 rocks.
Most of the rocks have six sides.
It runs for several hundred metres on the coast of Northern Ireland.Victoria Falls
It’s in Africa.
It’s about 1,700 metres
wide and 100 metres high.
You can hear the loud noise
from a few kilometres away.The Three Gorges Dam
It’s in China.
It’s a man-made wonder.
It’s about 2,300 metres long, 185 metres high and 15 metres high.
It produces electricity.AustraliaThey speak English.
It is in the southern part of the world.
The football they like playing is oval (椭圆的）, not round.
It is a country which rides on the sheep’s back.
It is famous for Ayers Rock and the Great Barrier Reef.
It is in the centre of Australia.
The colours of it change during the day.
It is 348 metres high and 3.6 kilos long.
It is a huge rock. Ayers RockYou can watch plays and operas here.
It has water on its three sides.
It is like a sailing boat.
It is a symbol of Sydney.
Sydney Opera House a place ??????location details ??what to see what to do● Famous for:● in the southern part of the worldAyers Rock;
Great Barrier Reef;
Sheep● American football;
● go to the beach to do water sports;
● drink grape wine;
● eat ham and beefPre-writing (10 minutes)Let’s talk!● It is like…● in the north of Sydneya sailing boat
with water on three sides● watch plays and operas
● enjoy its beautiful shape Let’s talk!● in the southeast of Huidong● green trees; lakes● take a walk● take photos● play table tennis; take exerciseLet’s talk!● Famous for:● in the southern part of the worldAyers Rock;
Great Barrier Reef;
Sheep;● American football;
● go to the beach to do water sports;
● drink grape wine;
● eat ham and beef变形记：如何把表格变成小短文？Australia is in the southern part of the world. It is famous for Ayers Rock, the Great Barrier Reef and millions of sheep. beginningWe can play American football, go to the beach to do water sports, drink grape wine and eat ham and beef. bodyendingWelcome to Australia. I believe you will have a good time here.Hello! Everyone! My name is Tony. Today I’d like to introduce my country to you.升级版： Hello! Everyone! My name is Tony. Today I’d like to introduce my country to you. Australia is in the southern part of the world. It is famous for Ayers Rock, the Great Barrier Reef and millions of sheep. We like playing American football very much. We also like going to the beach to do water sports such as surfing, swimming and diving because we live near the sea. Grape wine is good, but the food I like most is ham and beef because they are very delicious. Welcome to Australia. I believe you will have a good time here.
beginningbodyending升级标志：also/ such as/ because/ but● clear sea; blue sky
● many visitors
……

● southwest of Huidong（惠东）● walk on the beach without shoes●go swimming/surfing/fishing● have a BBQ● enjoy fresh air Let’s talk!● clear sea; blue sky
● many visitors
……

● southwest of Huidong（惠东）●go swimming/surfing/fishing● have a BBQ● enjoy fresh air While-writing: Practice 1Hello! My name is Ah Gui. Today I’d like to introduce my hometown Xunliao to you. Xunliao is in the southeast of Huidong. It is very famous for its beautiful beach, clear sea and blue sky. Every year many visitors come here with their family and friends to have a vacation. Every person can find his favourite things to do here. You can go swimming or go surfing, but if you want to stay out of water, it is a good idea to take photos while going for a walk on the white beach without shoes. It feels comfortable. At night, some people like to have a BBQ while others like to set fireworks. It looks really beautiful. Welcome to Xunliao. I believe you will have a good time here.
beginningbodyendingSample
（示例
范文）Locationwhat to seewhat to do假如你是Li,惠东旅行社的一名志愿者，要向三位来惠东旅游的游客推荐合适的旅游地点（a place)。
A: Diana, 平时工作繁忙，只有半天休息时间。
B: Jackie, 初中学生，有一天休息时间。
C: Mike, 在中国工作的美国人，有两天休息时间。
请选择其中一人(A，B 或C), 用英语写一封回信，不少于70词。
内容包括：
1.推荐旅游地点的名称及地理位置。（Name and Location）
2.有什么可看的（what to see), 有什么可做的(what to do)
(每种2-3件事情）。Writing practice______________________________________________________________________________Dear ……,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong. You only have ……day(s) off, so here is my advice.

beginningbodyendingYours,
LiWhile-writing: Practice 2 bodyThird, …Second ,… First ,…What’s more … 连接词 Ending To sum up,…Above all, …In a word, …In short,…Writing TimeWriting Time温馨提示 展示（show your passage）show time 自评（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud, then check it by
yourself.1.要点齐了吗？
2.句子结构对了吗？
3.句子连贯吗？
4.单词都写对了吗？
5.有没错误的语法？
6.书写整洁吗？大声朗读文章并自查是否符合以下要求。Post-writing (10 minutes)第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。
第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。
第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。
（以上为及格线）
第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。
第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。评分档次和要求：统一批改符号，例如：
删除 插入
替代 佳句

句子不通畅记住批改符号Look the book readcorrecting Timecorrecting Time温馨提示 Beginning
开头部分EndingBody
正文 （已给出部分）（1分）（满分13分）其他（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法、过渡词）酌情加减分（3分）1 推荐旅游地点名称及位置 （2分）
2 描述可看的和可做的事
（每项至少2点）（1个点2分，4个点共 8分）小组讨论互评，作文满分15分Beginning
开头部分Body
正文 Beginning
开头部分EndingBody
正文 Beginning
开头部分Post-writing
(10 minutes)EndingBody
正文 Beginning
开头部分3 祝愿旅途愉快 。 （1分）Dear…,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong. You only have one day off, so here is my advice. Xunliao is in the southeast of Huidong. It is very famous for its beautiful beach, clear sea and blue sky. Every year many visitors come here with their family and friends to have a vacation. Every person can find his favourite things to do here. You can go swimming or go surfing, but if you want to stay out of water, it is a good idea to take photos while going for a walk on the white beach without shoes. It feels comfortable. At night, some people like to have a BBQ while others like to set fireworks. It looks really beautiful. Welcome to Xunliao. I believe you will have a good time here.

SampleYours,
Li In the writing lesson:
I have learned______________

请把课堂上所写的介绍巽寮旅游景点的短文修改后上交。
2. 请A层次学生按照游客C的情况，写封回信。
请B层次学生按照游客B的情况，写封回信。
请C层次学生按照游客A的情况，写封回信。
请D层次学生把范文照抄上交。Homework （二选一）